2023年新高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫提分技能10 讀后續(xù)寫：作步創(chuàng)意 模板法

讀后續(xù)寫：八步創(chuàng)意模板寫作TOC\o"1-3"\h\uPart1:八步法詳解 1Part2:高考真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練 5實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷 5實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷 9Part3：高考真題再現(xiàn) 11真題1：2022.6新高考1卷（身殘志堅(jiān)的男孩） 11Part1:八步法詳解（1）情緒：消極情緒（2）細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫（3）轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人的努力或借助外界（4）轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題（6）新法：突然有了一個(gè)想法（一句話說(shuō)明這個(gè)想法）（7）結(jié)局：過(guò)了一段時(shí)間；事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折（8）總結(jié)：點(diǎn)題，呼應(yīng)前文詳述：（1）消極情緒典型表達(dá)是：感到（這個(gè)可以有很多表達(dá)方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式和介詞短語(yǔ)）1.aflushof(表情緒的名詞)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一陣...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情緒的名詞)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

因...顫抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)

（2）進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫典型是：流淚；心里想……流淚：1.淚水模糊了眼睛Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.眼睛模糊了One'seyesgotmisty.

3.淚眼模糊One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.4.幾乎要哭了...beclosetotears5.淚水落下tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)

心里想1.

從句，內(nèi)心的聲音告訴某人...

Aninnervoicetoldsbthat

2....thought/saidtooneself

（3）轉(zhuǎn)折（個(gè)人努力或借助外界）典型是：鼓起勇氣或另外一方的鼓勵(lì)；毫不猶豫pluckup/take/gather/one'scourage(todo...)

毫不猶豫：1.某人迫不及待地想做某事sbcouldhardlywaittodosth

2.不假思索，毫不猶豫withoutasecondthought3.連想都沒(méi)想withouteventhinking

4.毫不遲疑地withoutdelay5.毫不猶豫withouthesitation

（4）事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表達(dá)是：似乎：好像...Itwaslikedoingsth好像...Itseemedasif/that...希望：1.hopingthat

從句抱著一絲希望

2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一絲希望3.tryinghardtodosth

欣慰：1....breathedasighofrelief松了一口氣

2....sighedwithrelief松了一口氣3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb

4.toone'srelief,..

使人欣慰的/放心的是

（5）但是還是問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么不幸的是：但是某人真不走運(yùn)Butbadluckforsb,...但白費(fèi)力氣/徒勞butinvain

3.

但沒(méi)有成功butwithoutsuccess

4.但沒(méi)有用butnouse

不知道做什么1.某人做了某事，不知道下一步該怎么辦。Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.2.某人做了某事，不知道接下來(lái)該怎么辦Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.3.某人做了某事，不確定下一步該怎么辦。Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.

4.某人不知所措。Sbwasatalosswhattodo.5.感到難以決定...Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.（6）突然有了一個(gè)想法：一句話表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

從句=Ithitsbthat

從句=Itstruckmethat

從句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

從句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace（7）皆大歡喜：過(guò)了一段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)了一段時(shí)間1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

從句=Ittooksometimebefore從句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬間

有了結(jié)果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

從句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下來(lái)發(fā)生的非常奇妙

皆大歡喜：參考（1）

（8）最后總結(jié)，點(diǎn)題典型是：直到...才意識(shí)到...1.

倒裝句：Notuntil

時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)

didsbrealize/noticethat

從句2.

強(qiáng)調(diào)句：Itwasonly時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)

thatsbrealizedthat

從句

還記得某人的話；還在某人的腦海中1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.2.One'swords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.

3.One'sheadwasstillfullof...

經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn)1.Whata/an...lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!

(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an...experiencesbhad!3.

(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)4.Downdeepinone'sheart,...在某人的內(nèi)心深處Part2:高考真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷（2016森林遇險(xiǎn)）夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子獨(dú)自離開(kāi)，述路在樹(shù)林里，直升飛機(jī)來(lái)了幾次授救但沒(méi)有看見(jiàn)她。她感到很失望，OneweekendinJuly,

Jane

andherhusband,

Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya

lake

intheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and

walked

away.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbed

toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhere

atadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundto

astream.

Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda

helicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffher

yellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1：

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一段：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(但是沒(méi)有直升機(jī)來(lái)了，天又黑了。)讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫1.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.一陣恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情緒2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.她的心劇烈地跳動(dòng)著，手心冒汗，一個(gè)內(nèi)在的聲音告訴她，她必須找到一個(gè)安全的地方。2.細(xì)節(jié)：詳述情緒3.Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janepluckedhercouragetofeeltheway.雖然她很累，也很害怕，但簡(jiǎn)鼓起勇氣去感受這條路。3.轉(zhuǎn)折∶個(gè)人努力4.Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.5.Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaglimmerofhope,sayingtoherself."Tomorrowisanotherday."4.幸運(yùn)的是，沒(méi)過(guò)多久她就找到了一個(gè)洞穴。5.松了一口氣，她感到了一絲希望。對(duì)自己說(shuō)?！懊魈煊质切碌囊惶臁！鞭D(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功、希望來(lái)了。Withthat,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamherhusbandkepthercompany.說(shuō)完，她就去睡覺(jué)了，她丈夫在夢(mèng)里陪伴著她。銜接句第二段：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.簡(jiǎn)醒來(lái)的時(shí)候天已經(jīng)亮了。讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫1.Hungryanddisappointed,shefoundnotanyhelicopteroverhead,atalosswhattodo.1.饑餓和失望，她發(fā)現(xiàn)頭頂上沒(méi)有任何直升機(jī)，不知所措。再度失望（出現(xiàn)新問(wèn)題）2.Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.3.Havinggobblingdownsomeblackberries,shecan'twaittosetoff.4.Afterwhatseemedacentury,suchanareadidcomeintosight.Herfacebrightenedup.2.她突然明白，她應(yīng)該先找一個(gè)大的空地。她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出發(fā)了。4.好像過(guò)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，這樣的地區(qū)確實(shí)出現(xiàn)了。5.她的臉變亮了。突然有了辦法Whatacoincidencethatmeanwhile,ahelicopterwasflyingtowardsher.Uponitslanding,outdashedherhusbandwhohuggedJanetightly,tearswellingupintheirheart.6.與此同時(shí)，一架直升機(jī)正朝她飛來(lái)，真是巧合。7.她的丈夫緊緊地?fù)肀е?jiǎn)，眼淚涌上心頭。結(jié)果解決問(wèn)題，巧不成書，皆大歡喜Itwasatthemomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.8.就在這時(shí)，他們決定不再爭(zhēng)吵了，而是學(xué)會(huì)了妥協(xié)（總結(jié)）實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2：讀后續(xù)寫浙江卷（2018年6月）父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個(gè)朋友家體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場(chǎng)生活，見(jiàn)父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗(yàn)。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，讓人陶醉。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.注意：（1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；（2）至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)：（3）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；（4）續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.讀后續(xù)寫八股文思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情緒）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（細(xì)節(jié)詳述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功，希望來(lái)了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gasping

forair.（銜接句：新問(wèn)題來(lái)了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失敗)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了辦法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（開(kāi)始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,Uncle

Paulcouldn’twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubeen?Iamjustcalling

911.”（幽默對(duì)話）7.“ToAlice’sWonderland”myfatheranswered,winkingatmewitha

biggrin.8.Whatanunforgettable

experiencewehad!(總結(jié))

Part3：高考真題再現(xiàn)真題1：2022.6新高考1卷（身殘志堅(jiān)的男孩）Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhe