專(zhuān)題06讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（原卷版）【查漏補(bǔ)缺】

專(zhuān)題06讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)目錄01挑戰(zhàn)真題·查知識(shí)漏洞02回顧教材·補(bǔ)知識(shí)漏洞回顧知識(shí)體系回顧核心考點(diǎn)易混易錯(cuò)歸納03知識(shí)通關(guān)演練回顧知識(shí)體系回顧核心考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)一如何寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)?厘清原文的伏筆閱讀文章，找5W1H，故事線和情感線

對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)在于讀懂原文,能有效獲取原文的重要信息，也就是伏筆。實(shí)際上，很多學(xué)生只是了解原文的大概情節(jié)，沒(méi)有獲取足夠多的有效伏筆信息，在續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)時(shí)往往會(huì)邏輯混亂天馬行空，出現(xiàn)與原文協(xié)同度不高的邏輯問(wèn)題。因此，要落實(shí)好讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題型，就要通過(guò)精讀獲取準(zhǔn)確的原文信息伏筆點(diǎn)和合理、流暢的構(gòu)思,然后串聯(lián)情節(jié),實(shí)現(xiàn)情節(jié)構(gòu)建的合理性。以2022年高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)I.II卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)為例進(jìn)行分析:

(1)Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltown...(越野跑，對(duì)正常人來(lái)說(shuō)都很難，對(duì)身體有殘疾的大衛(wèi)來(lái)說(shuō)更難;來(lái)參加的人很多，為后文大衛(wèi)害怕被嘲笑埋下伏筆。)

(2)Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.(他比同齡人小,并且有殘疾，參加比賽雖然不易，但仍要參加，突出其勇敢。比賽結(jié)束時(shí)，受到在場(chǎng)師生的鼓勵(lì)、欽佩，甚至尊敬,因此大衛(wèi)的微笑表情不能缺失。)

(3)AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,...hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.(續(xù)寫(xiě)中可以用來(lái)描述大衛(wèi)賽跑時(shí)的樣子，是有效的動(dòng)作描述，更是原文協(xié)同。)(4)Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.(這是大衛(wèi)最令人敬佩的品質(zhì)。竭盡全力練習(xí),平時(shí)積極參加各種比賽，應(yīng)是“我”說(shuō)服他參賽的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)。兩個(gè)always的部分可以用來(lái)描述大衛(wèi)在比賽時(shí)的結(jié)果:他雖然不可能跑贏別人，但堅(jiān)持跑完全程。這可能是學(xué)生容易忽視的地方。有的學(xué)生寫(xiě)成大衛(wèi)獲得第一名，不符合常理。)(5）...wasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.(此處是“我”能夠成功鼓勵(lì)大衛(wèi)參加越野跑的基礎(chǔ)?！拔摇笔翘厥饨逃蠋?有經(jīng)驗(yàn),因此續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段時(shí)可以參照此句。)2.掌握原文的語(yǔ)言特色讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的實(shí)質(zhì)是根據(jù)所提供的原文內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)出主旨一致、邏輯順暢、語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格一致的故事結(jié)尾。因此，續(xù)寫(xiě)時(shí)除了考慮故事的主題思想、關(guān)注邏輯之外，還要高度關(guān)注續(xù)寫(xiě)部分和原文語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格的一致性。主要從主要人物、時(shí)態(tài)、原文中的高級(jí)句式三個(gè)方面考慮。3.定“兩條”設(shè)“四點(diǎn)”主題升華“兩條”指情節(jié)線(Plotline)、情感線(Emotionline)。在讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題型中，續(xù)寫(xiě)部分往往是故事的高潮。在寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中第一條情節(jié)線是出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題之后先嘗試，嘗試未果失敗之后會(huì)出現(xiàn)第二條情節(jié)線是在失敗有沖突矛盾的基礎(chǔ)之上會(huì)繼續(xù)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題在構(gòu)思過(guò)程中,合理、有效的方法是結(jié)合段首語(yǔ)推理情節(jié)，以及在這些情節(jié)發(fā)生的過(guò)程中伴隨怎樣的情感。在這個(gè)過(guò)程中我們會(huì)涉及到三種沖突（與環(huán)境的沖突與自己的沖突與第二主人公的沖突）在這這個(gè)過(guò)程中會(huì)有一些心理環(huán)境情緒動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)，這樣一添加整個(gè)過(guò)程就完整了在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中尤其要關(guān)注“四點(diǎn)”:第一點(diǎn):位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);第二點(diǎn):位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);第三點(diǎn):位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首,續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);第四點(diǎn):文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)劇情的寓意。這“四點(diǎn)”決定了續(xù)寫(xiě)故事的發(fā)展方向。按照寫(xiě)作要求的不同側(cè)重方向,將這四點(diǎn)劃分為段首三點(diǎn)和結(jié)尾一點(diǎn)。段首三點(diǎn)指與段首句相關(guān)的三個(gè)點(diǎn)，即緊接兩段段首句之后的兩個(gè)點(diǎn)和第一段結(jié)尾的一個(gè)點(diǎn)。通過(guò)分析這三點(diǎn)可以保證整體故事的連貫性。第一點(diǎn)要限定劇情走向，同時(shí)為下文的展開(kāi)留出足夠的寫(xiě)作空間;第二點(diǎn)要達(dá)成兩段之間的銜接,過(guò)渡不能突兀;第三點(diǎn)不僅要銜接第二段開(kāi)頭語(yǔ),還要收束劇情，為結(jié)尾作鋪墊。在創(chuàng)作過(guò)程中，學(xué)生要培養(yǎng)銜接意識(shí)，關(guān)注原文的隱含信息?？键c(diǎn)二情景好詞佳句+高級(jí)句式分析+解題發(fā)揮【高級(jí)詞匯】一、表示人物開(kāi)心快樂(lè)1．難以形容地開(kāi)心：indescribablywildjoy2．極為感動(dòng)：beoverwhelminglymoved3．幾乎無(wú)法掩飾他的興奮：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement4．既興奮又開(kāi)心：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness5．激發(fā)某人的激情：kindlesb.with/topassion6．顯示出極大的意愿：showagreatreadiness7．被強(qiáng)烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto8．心情愉快：incheerfulspirits9．振作精神：keepupone’sspirits10．滿意的表情：asatisfiedlook11．對(duì)……感到滿意：becontentwith12．對(duì)……很高興：bedelightedat13．為成功而欣喜：beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess14．被……場(chǎng)面所吸引：befascinatedbythespectacleof15．被她的美貌所吸引：befascinatedwithherbeauty16．因……而高興：bejoyfulover/about17．喜愛(ài)，對(duì)……著迷：bekeenon18．快樂(lè)至極：beoverwhelmedwith19．高興地跳起來(lái)：dance/jumpforjoy20．欣喜若狂：bewildwithdelight21．一個(gè)令人鼓舞的表情：anencouragingexpression22．過(guò)一個(gè)愉快的假日：haveapleasantholiday23．心滿意足，非常幸福：onthetopoftheworld24．對(duì)(做)……感到非常高興：overjoyedat/todo25．流下幸福的淚水：tearsofhappinessflowdown26．樂(lè)得大叫：yellwithdelight27．使某人心情愉快：brightensb.’sheart28．使某人安心：setone’sheartatrest29．感到鼓舞的：feelinspired/encouraged30．精神高漲：beinhighspirits二、表示人物傷心抑郁1．強(qiáng)烈的失落感：astrongsenseofloss2．陷入絕望：fallintodespair3．讓他很傷感：puthimintoasentimentalmood4．避免陷入消極的漩渦：avoidgettingsuckedintoawhirlpoolofnegativity5．哭泣釋放苦悶情緒：cryinggivessomeemotionalrelease6．減輕某人的痛苦/煩惱：easesb.ofhispain/trouble7．因某人的死亡而痛心：breakone’sheartoverone’sdeath8．使某人悲痛：makeone’sheartbleed9．傷心而死：dieofabrokenheart10．悲痛欲絕：cryone’sheartout11．懷著沉重的心情：withaheavyheart12．沮喪的：withasinkingheart13．憂郁的：withasorrowfulheart14．驚慌失措：beseizedwithpanic15．有點(diǎn)驚訝：comeassomethingofasurprise16．感到疲憊不堪：feelexhaustedandoverwhelmed17．很可能引發(fā)一陣挫敗感：beextremelylikelytoraiseastormoffrustration18．某人突然感到一陣悲傷：aflashofgriefcomesuponsb.19．情緒低落：bedowninspirits20．垂頭喪氣：loseone’sspirit21．心里悲傷：besadatheart22．意志消沉：abrokenspirit三、表示人物憤怒怨恨1．引起某人的不快：arouseone’sdispleasure2．對(duì)某人的行為感到不滿：bedispleasedatone’sconduct3．易為瑣事而惱火：beeasilyannoyedattrifles4．氣得說(shuō)不出話：bespeechlesswithindignation5．不斷地抱怨：complainconstantly6．對(duì)……大發(fā)脾氣：rageatsb.7．怒火萬(wàn)丈：flamehigh8．氣得滿臉通紅：flamewithanger9．勃然大怒：flyintoarage10．對(duì)某人生氣：getirritatedat11．對(duì)某人勃然大怒：getmad/crossatsb.12．愁眉苦臉：haveaworriedlook13．對(duì)抱怨不予理會(huì)：ignore/disregardacomplaint14．對(duì)……表示不滿：express/voiceacomplaintabout15．怒氣沖沖地跑出房間：runoutoftheroominaburstofanger16．憤怒地跺腳：stampone’sfootinanger17．感到尷尬的：feelembarrassed18．感到困惑的：feelpuzzled/confused19．感到沮喪的：feelfrustrated/depressed20．感到惡心的：feeldisgusted/sickened21．感到惱怒的：feelannoyed22．感到憤怒的：feelirritated23．感到泄氣的：feeldiscouraged24．充滿怨恨的眼神：aresentfullook四、表示人物其他情緒1．激發(fā)興趣：find...highlystimulating2．寬容的精神：aforgivingspirit3．以和藹可親的態(tài)度：withakindlyandgood-humoredspirit4．某人對(duì)……一點(diǎn)也不感興趣：notintheleastbesb.interestedin...5．混合著焦慮與希望的情緒：mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope6．引起強(qiáng)烈的情感：setoffstrongfeelingsintheheartsof...7．對(duì)……徹底上癮：behopelesslyaddictedto8．在這些情緒的控制下：underthedominationoftheseemotions五、表示人物的外貌特征1．優(yōu)美的身材：agracefulfigure2．勻稱(chēng)的形體：ashapelyfigure3．瘦削的身材：askinnyfigure4．細(xì)長(zhǎng)的身體：aslimfigure5．發(fā)育良好的身體：awell-developedfigure6．儀表堂堂：animposing/adashing/ahandsome/astrikingfigure7．(人)形體很好：haveagoodfigure8．改善形體：improveone’sfigure9．看到月光下有一個(gè)模糊的人影：seeadimfigureinthemoonlight10．炫耀某人優(yōu)美的身段：showoffsb.’slovelyfigure11．中等身材：anaveragebuild12．身材魁梧的人：awell-builtman六、表示人物個(gè)性品質(zhì)1．務(wù)實(shí)的：bedown-to-earth2．保守的性格：conservativepersonality3．缺乏責(zé)任感：lackofresponsibility4．具有……的美德：withthevirtueof5．責(zé)任感：asenseofresponsibility6．一個(gè)專(zhuān)心致志進(jìn)行探索的科學(xué)家：ascientistbentonmakingadiscovery7．高素質(zhì)、有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的老師：highlyqualified，well-experiencedteachingstaff8．脾氣好的人：agood-humored/good-naturedperson9．一個(gè)完美的人：afaultless/perfectperson10．一個(gè)有自制力的人：aself-possessedperson11．一個(gè)疑心重的人：asuspiciousperson12．有抱負(fù)的人：anambitiousperson13．聰明人：anintellectualperson14．個(gè)性強(qiáng)的人：amanoffinepersonality15．容易相處的人：aneasypersontodealwith16．冷酷無(wú)情的人：acold-bloodedman17．性情和善的男子：agood-naturedman18．嚴(yán)肅的年輕人：aseriousyoungman19．頭腦簡(jiǎn)單的人：asimple-mindedman20．能說(shuō)會(huì)道的人：asmooth-spokenman21．消息靈通/見(jiàn)多識(shí)廣的人：awell-informedman22．?huà)轨o有禮的淑女：aquiet，graciouslady23．說(shuō)話直率的人：anoutspokenman24．有教養(yǎng)的女子：aculturedwoman七、表示人物心理活動(dòng)1．鼓起勇氣：masterupcourage2．期待：intheexpectationof3．不顧對(duì)……的憂慮：regardlessofconcernover4．感覺(jué)不適：feeloutofplace5．毫無(wú)倦意：shownosignsoftiredness6．走神：keepdriftingaway7．好奇地向某人看：throwacuriousglanceatsb.8．對(duì)某事不存幻想：beundernoillusionaboutsth.9．不耐煩地聽(tīng)：listenimpatiently10．贊賞的目光：anadmiringgaze八、表示人物的動(dòng)作1．步態(tài)優(yōu)美地走：walkgracefully2．拖著疲憊的雙腿回家：gohomeontiredlegs3．朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼：castahastyglanceatsb.4．聽(tīng)到遠(yuǎn)處隆隆的雷聲：hearthethunderrollinginthedistance5．穿過(guò)田野的散步：awalkacrossthefields6．爆發(fā)出陣陣喝彩聲：breakintoshoutsofapplause7．自吹自擂：singone’sownpraise8．嚴(yán)厲訓(xùn)斥某人：givesb.asharpscolding9．一躍而起：jumptoone’sfeet10．漫步向山里走去：wanderintothemountain11．散步；閑逛：have/takeastroll12．來(lái)回踱步：pacebackandforth13．毫無(wú)目的地在街上游蕩：wanderaimlesslythroughthestreets14．臂挽著臂走：walkarminarm15．故意說(shuō)：saysth.deliberately九、表示天氣1．涼爽清新的風(fēng)：cool，refreshingbreeze2．落日：thesetting/decliningsun3．多雨的季節(jié)：arainyseason4．暴風(fēng)雨之夜：astormynight5．四面受風(fēng)：exposetothefourwindsofheaven6．連綿不斷的雨：continuous/constantrains7．在茫茫大雨中：intheblindingrain8．深埋在雪中：beburiedinsnow9．難以忍受的酷熱：unbearablyhot10．在春天溫暖的陽(yáng)光里：inthewarmspringsunshine11．放晴：clearup12．狂風(fēng)暴雨：fierce/heavy/violentstorms13．及時(shí)雨：atimely/seasonablerain14．沐日光?。篵athe/baskin(the)sunshine15．在盛夏灼熱的陽(yáng)光下：undertheblazing/scorching/burningsunofmidsummer十、表示地理位置1．位置優(yōu)越的城市：afavorablysituatedcity2．水下面的暗礁：ahiddenrockbeneaththesurfaceofthewater3．一個(gè)偏僻的小村子：asmallvillageoffthemap4．離海濱僅咫尺之遙：withinastone’sthrowofthebeach5．位于……最北端：besituatedatthenorthernextremeof...6．在群山環(huán)抱的村莊里：inavillageamongthehills7．朝南的房間：roomfacingsouth8．人煙稀少的農(nóng)村地區(qū)：thethinlypopulatedruralarea9．位于太平洋沿岸某處：belocatedsomewhereonthePacificcoast【常用句式】一、表示心理描寫(xiě)1．Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我心跳開(kāi)始加速，腦子里一片空白。2．Somanythoughtscrowdedintohermind，allatonce.那么多的想法突然涌入她的腦海。3．Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她是如此的羞愧以至于臉如充血般發(fā)燙。4．Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize，awideexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她的激動(dòng)之情溢于言表。5．Hisheartsankwhenheheardthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize.聽(tīng)到他沒(méi)獲獎(jiǎng)的消息，他的心情沉重。6．Onbluedaysyoufeellikeyou’refloatinginanoceanofsadness.在憂郁的日子里，你會(huì)覺(jué)得自己在悲傷的海洋里沉沉浮浮。7．Asaresultofanaccident，Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.因?yàn)橐粓?chǎng)事故，托尼的世界突然陷入一片黑暗與絕望之中。8．Terroranddeathstruck，andherheartwasbeatingpainfullyfast，bangingagainstherribs.恐怖和死亡襲來(lái)，她的心臟跳動(dòng)得非?？?，撞擊著她的肋骨。9．Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled/frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到這可怕的景象，我感覺(jué)我的血液都凝固起來(lái)。10．Hewassickwithfear，butthethoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon.他因害怕而感到惡心，但一想到結(jié)果，他還是要繼續(xù)下去。11．Iwonderifit’sbecauseIhaven’tbeenabletobeoutdoorsforsolongthatI’vegrownsocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.我不知道這是不是因?yàn)槲姨脽o(wú)法出門(mén)的緣故，我變得對(duì)一切與大自然有關(guān)的事物都無(wú)比狂熱。12．Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky，thesongofthebirds，moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.我仍然清楚地記得曾經(jīng)有一段時(shí)間，湛藍(lán)的天空，鳥(niǎo)兒清脆的歌聲，月光明亮，花香彌漫，從未令我心迷神往過(guò)。13．Iwasalittlenervousatfirst，buteveryonewassoniceandfriendlythatIsoonstoppedworrying.起初我有點(diǎn)緊張，但是大家都那么友好，我很快便不再擔(dān)心了。14．TheEagleswenthomeangryandbitterbecausetheydidnotwinthetournament.Meanwhile，theKangarooswenthomeandtrainedharderthanbefore.老鷹隊(duì)隊(duì)員們回到了家，內(nèi)心既憤怒又苦澀，因?yàn)樗麄儧](méi)有贏得錦標(biāo)賽。與此同時(shí)，袋鼠隊(duì)隊(duì)員們回家后，訓(xùn)練得比以前更刻苦了。15．Ifeltsoashamed.Imustbereallystupidtofailasimplemathquiz!我感到很丟臉。我一定是蠢到家了才會(huì)連一次簡(jiǎn)單的數(shù)學(xué)測(cè)試都沒(méi)通過(guò)！16．Afterwards，Ipretendedtobecheerful，butHannahsensedsomethingwaswrong.后來(lái)，我假裝很開(kāi)心，但是漢娜覺(jué)察到了異樣。17．Afteracoupleofweeks，theexcitementstartedtofade，andhomesicknessstartedtosetin.幾個(gè)星期后，那股興奮勁開(kāi)始減退，想家的情緒開(kāi)始蔓延。二、表示環(huán)境描寫(xiě)1．Thesunbegantoriseinthesky，bathingthemountainingoldenlight.太陽(yáng)開(kāi)始緩緩升起，給山披上了一層金紗。2．Thesunroseoveraquietworldandlookedwarmlydownuponthepeacefulvillage.太陽(yáng)在一個(gè)寧?kù)o的世界里升起，溫暖地俯視著這個(gè)寧?kù)o的村莊。3．Theskyisclearbluenowandthesunhasflungdiamondsdownonmeadows，riverbanksandwoods.此時(shí)已是萬(wàn)里藍(lán)天，太陽(yáng)將鉆石般燦爛奪目的陽(yáng)光灑向草原，灑向河岸，灑向樹(shù)林。4．Theroselookslikeanangel，swayinginthewind，dancinginthesun.這朵玫瑰就像是在風(fēng)中搖擺、在陽(yáng)光下跳舞的天使。5．Thegroundswerecoveredwithdarkgreengrassthroughwhichstretchedastraightwhitestonepath.庭院里處處是碧綠的芳草，綠草中鋪著潔白筆直的石路。6．Thebeautifulsceneryisafeastforyoureyes.美麗的景色令人大飽眼福。7．Thesesublimeandmagnificentscenesofferedmethegreatestconsolation.這些令人贊嘆的壯美景色給了我極大的安慰。8．Nanjing，anoldcitywitharichandcelebratedpast，yetvigorousinhernewyouth—howlovelysheis!南京，這座古老而又年輕的歷史文化名城，是多么的可愛(ài)！9．Itwassoquietintheclassroomthatthesoundofaneedleinthegroundcouldbeheard.教室里很安靜，連一根針掉在地上的聲音都聽(tīng)得見(jiàn)。10．Whenwereachedthetopofthehill，amagnificentviewoftheseagreetedus.當(dāng)我們到達(dá)山頂時(shí)，我們看到了一片壯麗的海景。11．Thedark，rainyevening，thewind，thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.那漆黑的雨夜，刮著大風(fēng)，電閃雷鳴，烏云滾滾，我完全被這種景象鎮(zhèn)住了。12．However，thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.然而，湖水在落日的余暉下閃亮如鏡，景色迷人。13．Thehutwasdarkinsidesoittooktimeforoureyestoadjust.小屋內(nèi)很黑，所以我們的眼睛需要點(diǎn)時(shí)間才能適應(yīng)。14．Theroomisinamess，withpizzaboxesontheflooranddirtydishesinthesink.Inthecorner，thereisagarbagecanaroundwhicharepiecesofgarbageandwastepaper.房間里一片混亂，地上扔了些比薩盒子，水槽里堆著臟盤(pán)子。角落里有一個(gè)垃圾箱，周?chē)⒙渲鴱U紙屑和垃圾。15．Uponthearrivalofspring，beautifulbirdswillsinghappilyinthepark.春天一到，美麗的鳥(niǎo)兒們就會(huì)在公園里歡快地歌唱。16．Thenarrowwindowsadmitlittlelightintotheroom.窗戶(hù)很窄，只有少量的光能照進(jìn)這個(gè)房間。17．Atthecloseoftheafternoonservice，wereturnedbyanexposedandhillyroad，wherethebitterwinterwind，blowingoverarangeofsnowysummitstothenorth，almostgrayedtheskinfromourface.下午的禱告結(jié)束以后，我們沿著一條光禿崎嶇的山路返回。冬日刺骨的寒風(fēng)吹過(guò)大雪覆蓋的山峰，吹向北邊，吹得我們一臉蒼白蕭索。18．Thebrightlyburningmeteordarkenedthelight.熊熊燃燒的流星使光線都變暗了。三、表示動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)1．ItwasobviousthatthemanagerofthecoffeeshopwaswaitingforLiFangtoleave—hewipedthetables，thensatdownandturnedontheTV.很明顯，咖啡館的經(jīng)理在等李方離開(kāi)——他擦好桌子，然后坐下來(lái)，打開(kāi)電視。2．Hiseyesstareatwhatisleftofthebrother’sdinnerontable.他的眼睛盯著兄弟倆留在餐桌上的殘羹剩菜。3．OlivergetsitfromadeskandgivesittoHenrylikeagift.奧利弗從桌上取過(guò)信，像送禮物一樣遞給亨利。4．Thehostessscreams，theothercustomerslookatherandsheputsahandtohermouth.老板娘尖叫起來(lái)，其他顧客都望著她，于是她用手捂住了嘴巴。5．Theowner，hostessandwaiterallbowasHenryleaves.當(dāng)亨利離開(kāi)的時(shí)候，店主、老板娘和服務(wù)員都向他鞠躬致敬。6．Charliefirstpicksoutthelacesandeatsthemasiftheywerespaghetti.Thenhecutsofftheleathertopoftheshoeasifitwerethefineststeak.查理先把鞋帶挑出來(lái)，像吃意大利面一樣把它們吃了。然后他把皮制的鞋頭切下來(lái)，就好像那是最美味的牛排。7．Shesteppedbackappearingsurprisedandputupherhands，asifindefence.她退了幾步，顯得很吃驚，舉起了手，想要自衛(wèi)。8．Heheldherfirmlyinhisarmsandshefeltthewarmthofhisbody.Shescreamed，pushedhimawayandrantoherroomfortherestoftheday.他把她緊緊地?fù)г趹牙铮杏X(jué)到他身體的溫?zé)?，尖叫了起?lái)，推開(kāi)他，跑進(jìn)她的房間，之后一整天都未出來(lái)。9．Theboyswhohadnevercomeacrossanythinglikethisbeforestartedjumpingoutofthewindows.以前從來(lái)沒(méi)有見(jiàn)過(guò)這種情況的男孩們嚇得從窗戶(hù)跳了出去。10．ProfessorHigginscarelesslythrowsahandfulofmoneyintoherbasket.希金斯教授漫不經(jīng)心地朝她的籃子里扔了一把錢(qián)。11．ElizaDoolittle：(lookingatthecollectedmoneyinamazement)Well,Inever.Awholepound!伊萊扎·杜利特爾：(驚奇地看著收集起來(lái)的錢(qián))啊，我還從來(lái)沒(méi)有見(jiàn)過(guò)！整整一英鎊呢！12．MrsPearce：(onlyhalfresignedtoit)Verywell，sir.(goesdownstairs)皮爾斯夫人：(似聽(tīng)非聽(tīng)地)好吧，先生。(隨即向樓下走去)13．Danielrunsintohisbedroomandshutsthedoorangrily.丹尼爾跑進(jìn)臥室，生氣地關(guān)上了門(mén)。14．Duringtheexperiment，volunteerswereaskedtosniffvariouspleasantsmellsandunpleasantsmells.實(shí)驗(yàn)期間，志愿者要去聞各種好聞的、不好聞的氣味。15．TheEagle’scaptainknockedtheballtothegroundwithhishand，andthenkickeditandscored.Therefereeblewthewhistle；thematchwasoverandtheEagleshadwon.老鷹隊(duì)的隊(duì)長(zhǎng)用手將球擊倒在地，踢了一腳，進(jìn)球得分了，裁判吹響了哨子。比賽結(jié)束，老鷹隊(duì)贏了。16．Shesaidthatsomeonemusthavebeenspyingonusinthewashroom，butIdidn’tbelieveherexplanation.她說(shuō)肯定有人在洗手間一直監(jiān)視我們，但是我不相信她的解釋。17．AsIdroppedmydadoff，Iwatchedhim，dressedinhisworkclothes，gettinghistoolsfromthetrunkofmycar.我讓父親下車(chē)，看著他穿著工作服，從車(chē)后備箱里拿工具。18．Hebrokedownintearsandwasnevergoingtoletheroutofhissightagain.他痛哭流涕，再也不會(huì)讓她離開(kāi)自己的視線。19．Herfatherturnedawayasatearofjoyrolleddownhischeek.她的父親別過(guò)臉，喜悅的淚水從臉頰上滾落下來(lái)。四、人物外貌描寫(xiě)1．Hehadawidemouthandhumorousgreyeyes.他有一張大嘴和幽默的灰色眼睛。2．Twospotsofcolorbrightened/lituphercheeks.兩朵紅霞暈染了她的臉頰。3．Hehastwobigdarkeyesunderapairofthickeyebrows.在一對(duì)濃密的眉毛下是他大而黑的雙眼。4．Inoticedthathiseyeswereblack—coalblack.我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的——炭黑色的。5．Shearrivedlateforclass，herhairwetandmessy.她上課遲到了，頭發(fā)又濕又臟。6．Shewasfair-skinned，havingreddishhairandlongfingers.她皮膚白皙，有著紅發(fā)和修長(zhǎng)的手指。7．Hisstrongly-builtbodyandsun-tannedskinmakehimlooklikeasportsman.他強(qiáng)壯的身體和曬黑的皮膚使他看起來(lái)像一個(gè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員。8．Everythingabouthimwasoldexcepthiseyesandtheywerethesamecolorastheseaandwerecheerfulandundefeated.他身上的一切都顯得古老，除了那雙眼睛，它們像海水一般藍(lán)，是樂(lè)觀而不肯認(rèn)輸?shù)摹?．Hehassparkingbluegreeneyes，thinningsilverhairthatspillsontohisforehead，bigears，atriangularnose，andtuftsofgrayingeyebrow.他的眼睛閃爍著藍(lán)綠色光芒，稀疏的銀發(fā)散落在前額，大耳朵，三角形的鼻子和灰白的眉毛。10．Theyoungwomanwastall，withgraceandelegance.Shehadagreatamountofdarkhairthatwasshowninthesunlight，andafacemorebeautifulthananyother，withdark，mysteriouseyes.Shewaspoliteandwell-mannered，withatenderlook.這個(gè)年輕的女人很高，且很優(yōu)雅。她有一頭烏黑的頭發(fā)，在陽(yáng)光下顯得十分美麗，她的臉比任何其他人都漂亮，她有一雙神秘的黑眼睛。她彬彬有禮，舉止文雅，目光溫柔。五、人物神態(tài)描寫(xiě)1．Adreaminglookcameoverherface.她臉上浮現(xiàn)出夢(mèng)幻般的神情。2．Herfacewasfullofgloomandcruelty.她面色陰沉，表情冷酷。3．Hesmiled，hiseyesfulloflaughter.他露出了笑容，雙眼充滿笑意。4．Hereyesgleamedandherfragilefacebrokeintoasmile.她的眼睛閃爍著光芒，精致的臉龐展現(xiàn)出微笑。5．Colorglowedinhisfaceandhisstrangeeyeswidenedwithjoyfulness.他的臉熠熠閃光，奇怪的眼睛因歡樂(lè)而大大睜開(kāi)。6．Aleybecamehappynowandagentlesmilespreadoverherface.阿利變得很開(kāi)心，整張臉洋溢著溫和的微笑。7．SherodetherestofthewayhomewearingaMonaLisasmileofpeaceandgrace.她帶著蒙娜麗莎式的平靜而優(yōu)雅的微笑，騎完了剩下的回家路。8．Hewasglaringdownatmeagain，hisblackeyesfullofdisgust.他又低頭瞪著我，黑色眼瞳里充滿了厭惡。9．Hiseyeslitupwhenshewalkedintotheroom.Asmilelitupherface.Thesmilespreadacrossherface，whichlituphisgloomyafternoon.看見(jiàn)她走進(jìn)房間，他兩眼一亮。她笑了，臉上露出了喜色。她滿臉的微笑，點(diǎn)亮了他陰郁的下午。10．Hercheekswereglowing.Hertearsmingledwiththebloodonherface，droppinghergaze.她雙頰緋紅，淚水和臉上的血混在了一起，同時(shí)目光低垂，不再凝視。【高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)】1．ItwasthefirsttimeinayearandahalfthatI’dseenthenightfacetoface.這是我一年半以來(lái)第一次目睹夜晚。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：Itis/wasthefirst(second...)timethatsb.＋現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)/過(guò)去完成時(shí)：這是某人第幾次做某事。]2．ItwasmysisterwhofirsthadtheideatocyclealongtheentireMekongRiverfromwhereitbeginstowhereitends.首先想到要沿著湄公河從源頭騎車(chē)到終點(diǎn)的是我的姐姐。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：強(qiáng)調(diào)句Itis/was＋被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分＋that/who...；from...to...連接where引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。)3．Allhopewasnotlost.不是所有的希望都破滅了。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：部分否定)4．Onlythendidwedecidetoanswerviolencewithviolence.直到那時(shí)我們才決定以暴制暴。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：Only＋狀語(yǔ)＋部分倒裝。)5．NeverwillZhouYangforgethisfirstjobattheofficeofChinaDaily.周洋永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記他在《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》辦公室獲得的第一份工作。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：never等表示否定意義的詞位于句首，句子用部分倒裝。)6．AmongthepainterswhobrokeawayfromthetraditionalstyleofpaintingweretheImpressionists，wholivedandworkedinParis.在那些突破傳統(tǒng)畫(huà)法的畫(huà)家中有生活和工作在巴黎的印象派畫(huà)家。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：among(介詞)位于句首的倒裝句，who引導(dǎo)非限制定語(yǔ)從句。]7．FrederickWilliamⅠ，theKingofPrussia，couldneverhaveimaginedthathisgreatestgifttotheRussianpeoplewouldhavesuchanamazinghistory.普魯士國(guó)王腓特烈·威廉一世絕不可能想到他送給俄羅斯人民的厚禮會(huì)有這樣一段令人驚訝的歷史。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)＋同位語(yǔ)＋謂語(yǔ)＋賓語(yǔ)從句。)8．ThereisnodoubtthattheboxeswerethenputonatrainforKonigsberg，whichwasatthattimeaGermancityontheBalticSea.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這些箱子后來(lái)被裝上火車(chē)運(yùn)往哥尼斯堡，當(dāng)時(shí)德國(guó)在波羅的海海邊的一個(gè)城市。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：Thereisnodoubt＋that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句＋which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。)9．IndiahasanationalfestivalonOctober2tohonourMohandasGandhi，theleaderwhohelpedgainIndia’sindependencefromBritain.印度在10月2日有一個(gè)全國(guó)性的節(jié)日，以紀(jì)念莫罕達(dá)斯·甘地，這位幫助印度獨(dú)立于英國(guó)的領(lǐng)袖。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：名詞＋同位語(yǔ)＋定語(yǔ)從句。)10．Perhapsweoughttocombineourideasandprovideabalancedmenuwithfoodfullofenergyandfiber.或許我們應(yīng)該結(jié)合彼此的想法，然后提供一個(gè)營(yíng)養(yǎng)充足且富含纖維的健康均衡的菜單。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：介詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)，相當(dāng)于一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句which/thatisfullof...。)11．Earlierthatday，whentheycrossedtheRockyMountains，theymanagedtocatchsightofsomemountaingoatsandevenagrizzlybearandaneagle.那天清晨，當(dāng)她們穿越落基山山脈時(shí)，她們看到了野山羊，甚至還看到了一只大灰熊和一只鷹。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)＋when引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句＋主句)12．Goingeastward，you’llpassmountainsandthousandsoflakesandforests，aswellaswideriversandlargecities.一路向東，你會(huì)經(jīng)過(guò)重重青山，路過(guò)千千萬(wàn)萬(wàn)的湖泊、山林，還有寬闊的河流和大都市。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)；并列表達(dá)“AandB，aswellasCandD”。)13．AsVictorHugooncesaid，“Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface”，anduptonownobodyhasbeenabletodothisbetterthanCharlieChaplin.正如維克多·雨果所說(shuō)：“笑是陽(yáng)光，能驅(qū)散人們臉上的寒冬”，目前為止，在這點(diǎn)上沒(méi)有人做得比查理·卓別林更好。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；否定意義的詞與比較級(jí)連用表示最高級(jí)含義。)14．YoumayfinditastonishingthatCharliewastaughttosingassoonashecouldspeakanddanceassoonashecouldwalk.你會(huì)吃驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)，查理一會(huì)說(shuō)話就有人教他去唱歌，一會(huì)走路就有人教他跳舞。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：findit(形式賓語(yǔ))＋adj.＋that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句中包含著assoonas引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。]15．Theyaresohungrythattheytryboilingapairofleathershoesfortheirdinner.他們太餓了，于是嘗試著煮一雙皮鞋當(dāng)作晚餐。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：so...that...句型。)16．Withalltheseattractions，nowondertourismisincreasingwhereverthereisaDisneyland.有這么多引人入勝之處，難怪有迪士尼樂(lè)園的地方，其旅游業(yè)就會(huì)增長(zhǎng)。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：with＋n.作原因狀語(yǔ)；(itis)nowonder＋...＋wherever/whenever/whatever...引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。]17．JohnSnowwasawell-knowndoctorinLondon—(andhewas)sofamous，indeed，thatheattendedQueenVictoriatoeasethebirthofherbabies.約翰·斯諾曾經(jīng)是倫敦一位著名的醫(yī)生——他的確太負(fù)盛名了，所以能照看維多利亞女王，并幫助她順利分娩。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句和一個(gè)復(fù)合句合并成一句，很好地運(yùn)用了插入語(yǔ)和符號(hào)來(lái)連接句子。)18．Theseatswerecomfortableandafteracalmingdrink，whichmadeussleepy，oureyesclosed.座位非常舒適，喝了點(diǎn)鎮(zhèn)靜劑后，我們很快閉上了眼睛，感到昏昏欲睡。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：非限制性定語(yǔ)從句插在主句和狀語(yǔ)之間。)19．Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique，wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreatmasterpiecesforwhichthisperiodisfamous.沒(méi)有新的顏料和新的(繪畫(huà))手法，我們就不能看到這一時(shí)代很多著名的杰作。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：“介詞without＋n.”作條件狀語(yǔ)，主句(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)＋介詞(for)＋which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。]20．Itiseasytowriteand，likethecinquain，cangiveaclearpictureandcreateaspecialfeelingusingtheminimumofwords.它容易寫(xiě)，而且像五行詩(shī)一樣，它可以用最少的詞語(yǔ)呈現(xiàn)一幅清晰的畫(huà)面，表達(dá)出一種特殊的感情。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：Itis＋adj.＋todosth.，like＋n.作插入語(yǔ)，現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作方式狀語(yǔ)。)21．ItseemsamazingthatatmyageIamstillfitenoughtocycle20kilometersinanafternoon.感到不可思議吧，像我這樣的年紀(jì)，身體健康而且能在一個(gè)下午騎車(chē)20公里。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：It(形式主語(yǔ))＋seems＋adj.＋that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。]22．Thereisnodoubtthattheearthisbecomingwarmerandthatitishumanactivitythathascausedthisglobalwarmingratherthanarandombutnaturalphenomenon.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，地球正在變暖，而地球變暖正是人類(lèi)活動(dòng)所致，而非一種無(wú)規(guī)律的自然現(xiàn)象。[句子結(jié)構(gòu)：Thereisnodoubtthat...andthat...句式(兩個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句并列)；在第二個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句中，又用了itis...that強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。]23．Iwasabouttogobacktosleepwhensuddenlymybedroombecameasbrightasday.我剛要繼續(xù)睡覺(jué)，突然我的臥室亮如白晝。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：beabouttodo...when...。)24．Theothertwoclimbeddownintothecratertocollectsomelavaforlaterstudy，butthisbeingmyfirstexperience，Istayedatthetopandwatchedthem.另外兩人向下爬進(jìn)火山口去收集供日后研究用的巖漿，我是第一次經(jīng)歷這樣的事，所以留在山頂上觀察他們。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)thisbeingmyfirstexperience作原因狀語(yǔ)。)25．Justacceptthemforwhotheyare，andgivethemencouragementtoliveasrichandfullalifeasyoudo.要接受他們，給他們以鼓勵(lì)，讓他們能像你一樣過(guò)得豐富多彩，充實(shí)美滿。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：as＋形容詞＋a/an＋名詞＋as的用法。)26．Pressedbymyfriendsandrelations，Idecidedtosendmyinventiontothepatentofficetogetrecognitionformysuccessfulidea.由于朋友和親戚的敦促，我決定把我的發(fā)明送到專(zhuān)利局，請(qǐng)他們對(duì)我這次成功的思路給予認(rèn)可。(句子結(jié)構(gòu)：過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ)。)1．（2024·浙江·二模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Jay,24,gothomefromworkshortlyaftermidnight.Then,suddenly,ahorror-filledscreamrippedthroughthestillnight.Herushedoutsideandsawflameslightingtheskyhalfamileaway.Hurriedly,hecalledthefiredepartmentandrushedouttocheckthesituation.Secondslater,Jaywasfishtailinghiscaronthemainroad.Thefireragedatasmallhillsidecomplexofmobilehomes.Jayslidthecartoastopandsprintedupasteeplanetowardthereddeningglow.Reachingthehilltop,hesawthata70-foot-longtrailer(房車(chē))wasonfire.Ayoungwomanintornnightclotheswasrunningwildlybackandforth,jumpingtosmashatthe6-foot-highwindowswithherhands.“DearGod!”shescreamed.“Myfamilyisdying!”Jayfeltamomentofpanic.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontheretohelp.Neverhadheseensuchafire!Flameswereleapingoutofbrokenwindowsatthefarendofthetrailerandwindingalongtheroof;theroaring,cracklingnoisesgrewlouderbythesecond.Hegrabbedthewomanbytheshoulders.“Whathappened?”heshouted.Barelycoherent,Cindytoldhimshehadescapedthroughoneofthemasterbedroomwindows.Herhusband,Leonard,hadgonefortheirtwochildren:22-month-oldRyanand6-week-oldAngela.Hewassupposedtohandthemouttoherfromthebedroom.But,secondslater,flameshadburstfromthekitchenandlivingroomwindows.Cindybegancryingmiserably.“Wherearethey?”Jayyelled.Cindypointedtotheendsectionofthetrailer,wherethick,blacksmokepouredfromthewindows.Fromthetimehewasoldenoughtoplaysports,Jayhadlearnedtobattletheodds.AsaLittleLeaguer,heledhisunderdogteamtothestatechampionship.AndintinySt.Maries,hiscouragehadearnedhimtownspeople’srespect.Always,Jayrecalledthewordsofhisfather:“Thewordcan’tneverdidanythingforanybody.Youcandoit!Neverstoptrying,son!”注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1Jay’sfather’swordsechoedinhismind.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2Asherhusbandwasplacedintheambulancetobedriventothehospital,CindywalkedovertoJay.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024·遼寧·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mychildhoodismagicalandfullofadventure.Ihavesomanychildhoodmemories,andIwouldliketoshareonethatstillstimulatesme.ThisunforgettablechildhoodeventwasaboutthefirstdaywhenIlearnedhowtoswim.IthappenedsounexpectedlyandquicklythatnotonlyIbutmyparentsweresurprised.Ofcourse,wewereproudaswell.Iwasbarelysevenyearsoldbackthen,andmyparentsthoughtthatitwastimeformetolearnhowtoswim.Onesummermorning,theytookmetoaswimmingpoolintheCitySwimmingComplexwhichwasjusta35-minutedrivefromourhouse.Itwasaweekendandbothmyparentsaccompaniedme.AfterwereachedtheSwimmingComplex,wefoundmanypeoplewerelearninghowtoswim.Mymothersaidshewouldwatchmelearnthisimportantskillwiththehelpofmyfather.Thenshecheeredmeonandtookaseat.IhadnoideahowtoswimbutIwasexcitedtotrythisnewadventure.However,whenmyfathergotintotheswimmingpoolwithme,Ibecameabitnervous.Itseemedthatthingswerenotquiteaseasyforme.Lookingaround,Inoticedthatmanyotherchildrenofallageswerealsotryingtograspthisskillandsomeofthemhadprettymuchlearnedtheartandscienceofthisskill.Influencedbyothers,Iwasdeterminedtofocusonmytrainingandswimaswellasthem.Undertheguidanceofmyfather,Ilearnedwithallmyeffortanddevotion,andImaderapidprogress.Afterteachingmefor30minutesorso,myfatherwenttobuysomesnacksforusandmymothercametotalktomeforawhilenearthepool.SheaskedmeifIhadlearnedanythingatall.Toprovemyprogress,Ijumpedintothewaterandstartedswimming.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mymotherwasfrightenedbymyactionatfirst.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Eatingthesnacksboughtbymyfather,wewereallthrilledandexcited.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________