專題26 讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)寬慰背誦與測試（詞-句-文）講義高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典 解析版

《2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典》專題26讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)寬慰背誦與測試（詞-句-文）講義解析版背誦積累區(qū)：背誦遷移舉一反三一、必背單詞1.寬慰類形容詞：relievedadj.感到放心的，感到寬慰的safeadj.安全的secureadj.安全的，穩(wěn)妥的regretfuladj.后悔的，遺憾的2.寬慰類名詞：reliefn.寬慰，輕松safetyn.安全；安全性tensionn.焦慮；緊張關(guān)系anxietyn.焦慮，憂慮sadnessn.悲痛；使人悲傷的事regretn.懊悔，惋惜shamen.羞愧；羞恥心pityn.同情，憐憫；可惜的事3.寬慰類動詞：relievevt.緩解；減輕sighvi.嘆氣，嘆息breathev.呼吸二、高頻語塊1.feelasurgeofrelief如釋重負(fù)2.toone’srelief使某人寬慰的是3.amixtureofwarmthandrelief既溫暖又寬慰4.with/inrelief如釋重負(fù)地；松了口氣；欣慰地5.breathe/sighasighofrelief/gaspwithrelief松了口氣三、佳句賞析1.Afeelingofreliefwashedoverher.她頓時如釋重負(fù)。2.Ifeltahugesurgeofreliefandhappiness.我如釋重負(fù)，感到一陣欣慰。3.Knowinghewassafewasaloadoffmymind.得知他平安以后，我心里如釋重負(fù)。4.Finallytellingthetruthwasagreatweightoffmyshoulders.最后講了實話使我如釋重負(fù)。5.Shesighedwithreliefthatitwasallover.事情總算全都過去了，她輕松地舒了一口氣。6.Weallbreathedasighofreliefwhenheleft.他走了以后，我們大家都如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣。7.Inoticedareleaseoftensionwhenhelefttheroom.我注意到，他一走出房間大家都如釋重負(fù)。8.Knowingthattheyhadarrivedsafelytookaloadoffmymind.得知他們平安到達(dá)后我如釋重負(fù)。9."Ah,you'rehere,"shesaidandletout/gaveasighofrelief.“啊,你在這里,”她說道,如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣。10.ItwassucharelieftohearthatMartawasfoundsafeandwell.聽到瑪爾塔安然無恙被找到，真是如釋重負(fù)。11.Whenheleft,Karenfoundherselfheavingahugesighofrelief.他離去后，卡倫發(fā)現(xiàn)自己如釋重負(fù)，長舒了一口氣。12.It'sagreatweightoffmymindtoknowthatthebuildingisfinallyfinished.得知那座建筑終于完工，令我如釋重負(fù)。13.HewasrelievedtoseeJeanniereachtheothersideoftheriversafely.看到珍妮安全到達(dá)河對岸，他心頭一塊石頭落了地。14.Itwasaweightoffmymindknowingthatourfinancesweretakencareof.得知我們的資金問題已經(jīng)解決，我心里頓時輕松了許多。15.AhugeburdenwasliftedfrommyshoulderswhenItoldmyparentsaboutmyproblem.我把自己的問題告訴父母后，感到如釋重負(fù)。16.I'msorelievedthatIdon'thavetodotheafter-dinnerspeech-it'ssuchaweightoffmymind!飯后不必作演講使我舒了一口長氣——我終于放下了心頭大石！測試鞏固區(qū)：分級測試步步為贏一、高頻語塊漢譯英1.如釋重負(fù)2.使某人寬慰的是3.既溫暖又寬慰4.如釋重負(fù)地；松了口氣；欣慰地5.松了口氣【參考答案】1.feelasurgeofrelief如釋重負(fù)2.toone’srelief使某人寬慰的是3.amixtureofwarmthandrelief既溫暖又寬慰4.with/inrelief如釋重負(fù)地；松了口氣；欣慰地5.breathe/sighasighofrelief/gaspwithrelief松了口氣二、佳句賞析漢譯英1.她頓時如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________2.我如釋重負(fù)，感到一陣欣慰。____________________________________________________________________________3.得知他平安以后，我心里如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________4.最后講了實話使我如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________5.事情總算全都過去了，她輕松地舒了一口氣。____________________________________________________________________________6.他走了以后，我們大家都如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣。____________________________________________________________________________7.我注意到，他一走出房間大家都如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________8.得知他們平安到達(dá)后我如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________9.“啊,你在這里,”她說道,如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣。____________________________________________________________________________10.聽到瑪爾塔安然無恙被找到，真是如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________11.他離去后，卡倫發(fā)現(xiàn)自己如釋重負(fù)，長舒了一口氣。____________________________________________________________________________12.得知那座建筑終于完工，令我如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________13.看到珍妮安全到達(dá)河對岸，他心頭一塊石頭落了地。____________________________________________________________________________14.得知我們的資金問題已經(jīng)解決，我心里頓時輕松了許多。____________________________________________________________________________15.我把自己的問題告訴父母后，感到如釋重負(fù)。____________________________________________________________________________16.飯后不必作演講使我舒了一口長氣——我終于放下了心頭大石！____________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】1.Afeelingofreliefwashedoverher.她頓時如釋重負(fù)。2.Ifeltahugesurgeofreliefandhappiness.我如釋重負(fù)，感到一陣欣慰。3.Knowinghewassafewasaloadoffmymind.得知他平安以后，我心里如釋重負(fù)。4.Finallytellingthetruthwasagreatweightoffmyshoulders.最后講了實話使我如釋重負(fù)。5.Shesighedwithreliefthatitwasallover.事情總算全都過去了，她輕松地舒了一口氣。6.Weallbreathedasighofreliefwhenheleft.他走了以后，我們大家都如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣。7.Inoticedareleaseoftensionwhenhelefttheroom.我注意到，他一走出房間大家都如釋重負(fù)。8.Knowingthattheyhadarrivedsafelytookaloadoffmymind.得知他們平安到達(dá)后我如釋重負(fù)。9."Ah,you'rehere,"shesaidandletout/gaveasighofrelief.“啊,你在這里,”她說道,如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣。10.ItwassucharelieftohearthatMartawasfoundsafeandwell.聽到瑪爾塔安然無恙被找到，真是如釋重負(fù)。11.Whenheleft,Karenfoundherselfheavingahugesighofrelief.他離去后，卡倫發(fā)現(xiàn)自己如釋重負(fù)，長舒了一口氣。12.It'sagreatweightoffmymindtoknowthatthebuildingisfinallyfinished.得知那座建筑終于完工，令我如釋重負(fù)。13.HewasrelievedtoseeJeanniereachtheothersideoftheriversafely.看到珍妮安全到達(dá)河對岸，他心頭一塊石頭落了地。14.Itwasaweightoffmymindknowingthatourfinancesweretakencareof.得知我們的資金問題已經(jīng)解決，我心里頓時輕松了許多。15.AhugeburdenwasliftedfrommyshoulderswhenItoldmyparentsaboutmyproblem.我把自己的問題告訴父母后，感到如釋重負(fù)。16.I'msorelievedthatIdon'thavetodotheafter-dinnerspeech-it'ssuchaweightoffmymind!飯后不必作演講使我舒了一口長氣——我終于放下了心頭大石！三、情感表達(dá)片段運用Alicefelt

1

(松了一口氣)

toseeacarapproaching.Whenthedriverwithasmileofferedaridetoher,

2

(她松了一口氣).Alicethankfullygotinthecar,and3

(一種溫暖和解脫交織的感覺涌上心頭).Reachingherdestination,

4

(Alice

松了一口氣).Tearsofappreciationwelledupinhereyesasshethankedthedriverforhishelp,buthejustsmiledwarmly.5

(她在寒冷的天氣里感到了溫暖,相信處處都有好心人).【參考答案】Alicefelt

relieved

toseeacarapproaching.Whenthedriverwithasmileofferedaridetoher,

shegaspedwithrelief.

Alicethankfullygotinthecar,

andamixtureofwarmthandrelieffloodedoverher.

Reachingherdestination,Alice

breathedasighofrelief.

Tearsofappreciationwelledupinhereyesasshethankedthedriverforhishelp,buthejustsmiledwarmly.

Shefeltwarminthecoldday,believingtherewaskindnessineverycorner.四、情感表達(dá)語篇運用1.（2023上·廣東·高二校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ChasingaDreamIwillneverforgetthatNovemberday.Itwashotterthannormal—toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Thiswasthedaywehadwaitedsolongfor.Ilookedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesflashedacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,withworryandexcitementonhisface.Adrenaline(腎上腺素)pumpedthroughmybody,andtheracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandahalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithstrictlycontrolledpracticesandastrictdiet.Myfriendshadn’tseenmeinweeks,buttheyunderstoodthesacrificerequiredtomakemydreamareality.MydadandIhadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwasexcitedbymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice—tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.Wespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanals.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossoms(花簇)oftheorangetrees,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Butwithoutwarning,whenIwas200yardsawayfromthefinishline,mylegsstoppedworking.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocement(水泥)bricks.Istilldon’tknowwhathappenedinthoselastfewmoments.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryweredestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,”IwhisperedtoDad.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryweredestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawledwithoutstopforamoment.Voices,bothforeignandfamiliar,cheeredmeon.Theygavemethecouragetokeepgoinguntiltheveryend.Althoughmyfriendsrushedtome,helpingmegetbackonmyfeetandinthemeantimecontinuouslyofferingcomfortingwordsofencouragement,therewasonlyonepersonIwantedtotalktoatthatmoment—mydeardad.Myeyessearchedthecrowdforhim.However,fearpulsedthroughallmyveinsashepushedhiswaytomyside.Nosoonerhadhegotclosetomethantearsspilledallovermycheeks.“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,”IwhisperedtoDad.Hereachedoutandgentlywipedawaymytears,hisvoicefilledwithloveandunderstanding.“Mydearchild,youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest.Don’tyouknowthatyouaremydreamcometrue?”Hiswordsbroughtasenseofcomfort,andIrealizedthatmydad’ssupportandlovewereunwavering,regardlessoftheoutcome.Ihadthoughtmydadwasrunningafteraprize.WhatIrealized,though,wasthathewasrunningafterme.Tohim,Iwasthegreatestprizehehadeverwon.Itwasn’tlongbeforeIputonmyrunningshoesagaintomarkanewpathformyjourney.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和父親很期待自己能在高中最后一年的越野賽跑上獲得好成績，不料在比賽過程中，作者突然體力耗盡，雖然作者最后盡力越過終點，但是卻沒獲得好成績，作者覺得讓父親和大家失望了，父親卻說只要盡力了，不會失望?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“盡管我知道我的勝利夢想破滅了，但我必須完成比賽?！币约暗诙问拙鋬?nèi)容“‘對不起，讓你失望了?！业吐晫Π职终f?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫雖然不可能勝利，作者還是拼盡全力完成了比賽，及到達(dá)終點后大家的行動和作者找尋爸爸的行為。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“‘對不起，讓你失望了。’我低聲對爸爸說?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫爸爸給作者的鼓勵和作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：作者期待已久的比賽開始了——作者和自己的父親已經(jīng)為了這場比賽努力了三年——比賽一開始，作者感覺良好——作者不斷努力，即將實現(xiàn)自己的夢想——在距離終點200碼的時候，作者突然失去了所有的力量——作者明白自己勝利無望，但還是拼盡全力完成了比賽——作者覺得自己讓父親失望了，非常難過——可是，父親卻給了作者鼓勵，作者決定繼續(xù)努力3.詞匯激活行為類①想要做某事：wanttodosth./wouldliketodosth.②提供：offer/provide③意識到：realizethat/beawarethat情緒類①害怕：fear/fright②安慰：comfort/consolation【點睛】【高分句型1】Althoughmyfriendsrushedtome,helpingmegetbackonmyfeetandinthemeantimecontinuouslyofferingcomfortingwordsofencouragement,therewasonlyonepersonIwantedtotalktoatthatmoment—mydeardad.(運用了although引導(dǎo)的狀語從句和省略關(guān)系代詞的定語從句)【高分句型2】However,fearpulsedthroughallmyveinsashepushedhiswaytomyside.(運用了as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句)2.（2023上·河南駐馬店·高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Sometimes,akindwordfromastrangerduringastressfulmomentcanmeantheworldtosomeone.MydaughterRachelhadsevereADHD(多動癥)asachildandthemostembarrassingandtryingmomentswerewhenwewereoutinpublic.Iwouldtrytoquicklygetmyshoppingdonewhiletryingmylevelbesttoavoidameltdownwhenshewasbeggingmeforatoyorcandybar.Mydaughterhasgrownintoawonderfulyoungwomannow.Mostpeoplewhohearmystoriesofherstrugglesgrowingupdon’tbelievemewhentheymeether.Thisisaproofofthesaying,“Itgetsbetter,”becauseitreallydoes.Thoseoldmemoriesofherextremeangerfeelnot-so-distantwhenIencounterachild’smirror-imagebehaviorinastore.Moreoftenthannot,Icontinueshopping,neverstoppingtoofferanykindofassistanceorwordsofencouragementtotheparent.Untilrecently.Lastweek,Iwasshoppinginourlocalmarket.Mydaughterhappenedtobewithme.Aswewerechoosingwhatsheneeded,weheardthestartofachild’smeltdownthatwouldlastmorethanfifteenminutes.Idecidedtowalkovertoinvestigatethesituation,alreadypicturingthesceneinmymind.Nodoubt,thecriesoftheyoungboycouldbeheardclearacrossthestore.Mydaughtercameuptomeandsaid,“Mom!IsthatwhatIsoundedlikewhenIwaslittle?”“Yes,Rachel,yousoundedjustlikethat,”Ireplied.Severalmoreminuteswentby,andtheboyjustwouldn’tstop.Iarrivedattheaisle(過道)tofindatwenty-somethingmotherstandinginthemiddleoftheaislecalmlytellingtheboy,“No.”Shewasnotgoingtogetwhatevertheboysodesperatelywanted.Iknewshewasdoinganexcellentjobofignoringhisbehaviorwhiletryingtoremaincalmduringthistryingsituation.HereyessaideverythingthatIhadeverfeltinthosemoments.I’msureshewouldalsopassthistoughtimeintheendbecause“Itgetsbetter.”SheneededsomeencouragementatthismomentandIhappenedtohavethesameexperience,soIdecidedtosharemystory.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwalkedovertothemom.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iknewshewasgratefulforthekindwordsofastranger.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Iwalkedovertothemom.Ismiledatherandcalmlysaidtoher,“Youdidtherightthing.Itgetsbetter.”Shelookedatme,withaslightlyrelaxedexpression.Strangely,theboy’sattentionimmediatelyshiftedtomeandstoppedcryingforwhathesodesperatelywanted.ThenIchangedthetopicwiththemother,andIquicklypraisedherboyforbeinghandsome.Theboyquietlylookedatusandlistenedtoourconversation.Iknewshewasgratefulforthekindwordsofastranger.Ialsofeltrelievedbytheharmonioussceneinfrontofme.Mydaughteralsowalkedoverwithasmileonherface.Ipointedtomydaughterandsaidtothemother,“Thisismyexcellentdaughter.Ha-ha!Sheusedtobelikeyourboywhenshewasyoung!Shealwayslikedtocreateawkwardanduncomfortablescenesformewhenwewereoutinpublic.”Mywordsmadethemotherlaugh.Althoughtheboydidn’tseemtounderstandourconversation,healsolaughedhappilywithusall!【導(dǎo)語】本文以一句友善的話為線索展開，講述了作者在商店遇到一個對著媽媽哭鬧很久的小男孩，想起自己女兒小時候也曾因為嚴(yán)重的注意力缺陷多動癥，讓自己在公共場合造成尷尬的場景，所以去向那個處于困境的媽媽表達(dá)友善的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我走到那位媽媽身邊?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡邔δ俏粙寢尡磉_(dá)友善，緩解尷尬場面。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我知道她很感激陌生人的友好話語?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡呃^續(xù)和那位媽媽及男孩互動讓氣氛歡樂起來。2.續(xù)寫線索：表達(dá)說——停止哭鬧——安靜——感謝——和諧快樂——大笑3.詞匯激活行為類①給她說：saytoher/tellher②停止：stop/quit③制造：create/make情緒類①放松的：relaxed/eased②快樂地：happily/merrily【點睛】[高分句型1]Strangely,theboy’sattentionimmediatelyshiftedtomeandstoppedcryingforwhathesodesperatelywanted.(運用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Althoughtheboydidn’tseemtounderstandourconversation,healsolaughedhappilywithusall(應(yīng)用了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)3.（2023上·廣東廣州·高三華南師大附中?？茧A段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成篇完整的短文。I’lladmitit.Icanbeacomplainer.Afterall,there’ssomuchinthislifetocomplainabout:thedirtyclothesthatdon’tmakeitintothebasket,thatannoyingneighbor’sloudmusic,myhusband’sshoesspreadoutatthefrontdoor,rainydays,traffic...ComplainingisahabitIcultivatedsincechildhood,askillIdevelopedthroughtheyears.Myparentsdidn’tseemtomind—theyweregreatcomplainers,too—thoughIdorecallsomeeye-rollingandlong-drawnsighsfromfriendsandschoolmateswhenIwouldvoicemynegativeopinions.Infact,IcandistinctlyrecalltheexactmomentwhenIfirstrealizedmycomplaininghabitreacheditsexpertlevel.Oneday,asIremindedrayhusbandonceagaintoremovehisbillsfromthedining-roomtable,puthisshoesaway,andlowerthatbothersomeradio,heputuphishand.“Stop!You’reyourcomplaining.It’sdrivingmecrazy.”Ilookedathimblank-eyed.Hetookadeepbreath.“Youneverhearmecomplaining,doyou?”“Well,”Ianswered,“you’recomplainingaboutmycomplaining,soactually,yes,Iamhearingyoucomplainrightnow.”Hiseyeswidened.Adropofsweatformedhisupperlip.Thenhegrabbedhiscarkeysandranoutofthedoor.PerhapsI’dgonetoofar,Ithought.MaybeIreallydidcomplaintoomuch.But,whattodoaboutit?Afterall,ithadbeenalifetimehabit.Andhabitsarehardtobreak.Itookabreakandsatdowntothinkaboutsolution.WhenIfeltannoyed,Icouldlockmyselfinthebathroomandscream.No.Theneighborswouldprobablyhearme.Phoneafriend?Sheprobablywouldn’tbeafriendforverylong.Thenithitme.I’dbeeninthehabitofkeepingajournalformostofmylife.Itprovidedasortoftimelineforme，andIlikedtoreviewpastentriesoccasionallytoreviewthepathIhadbeenonatthatpoint.Journalingkeptmehonestwithmyself,andIlikeditforthatreason.Perhaps,Ithough,acomplaintjournalmightbetheanswerIwasseeking.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答；Thatday,Idecidedtogiveitatry.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Besidestheimprovedrelationshipwithmyhusband,Isawothereffectssoon.

._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Thatday,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Withouthesitation,Igotapeninmyhandandunloadedallmydissatisfactionanddisappointmentaboutmyhusbandontothepaper.Itfeltsogoodandrelaxingtosayexactlywhatwasonmymindwithoutanyonejudgingmeormythoughts.Withthelastwordputdown,Ifeltrelievedasifaheavyweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulder.Later,eachtimeIfoundmyselffeelingtheurgetovoiceapettyirritation,Ipromisedmyselftowriteitinmycomplaintjournalthatevening.Gradually,withoutfearoftriggeringaquarrel,myreservedhusbandopeneduptomemoreandourrelationshipgotbetter.Besidestheimprovedrelationshipwithmyhusband,Isawothereffectssoon.Oldfriendshipsbecamedeeper,andnewfriendshipsappeared.Neighborsbecamemoreneighborly.Overall,Istartedtojustfeelhappierandlessstressed.WhenIlookedbackonsomeofmyinitialentries,Ihadtolaughoutloud.SomeofmycomplaintsappearedtrulyridiculouswhenreadinhindsightThosefewmoments’whenIcouldsitdownandfreemyselfofwhateverisbotheringmemadeabigdifferenceforthebetterinmylife.Reflectingonthisexperience,Ifirmlybelievedthatwithdeterminationandsmartapproaches,Icouldnotonlybreakabadhabitbutalsoachieveanything.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，文章主要講述了作者本人是一個慣性抱怨者，并且這一習(xí)慣是小時候就培養(yǎng)起來的。但是，通過寫“抱怨日記”，她成功改變了這一習(xí)慣，變得更加積極和幸福。抱怨日記讓她有了發(fā)泄的方式，也讓她意識到她的一些抱怨是多余的，因此她開始更加快樂和不那么緊張。該經(jīng)驗讓作者相信，只要有決心和巧妙地方法，就能改變壞習(xí)慣，并實現(xiàn)任何目標(biāo)?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“那天，我決定試一試?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者嘗試拿起筆把自己對丈夫的不滿和失望都寫在了紙上，同時描寫作者寫完之后的感受和變化。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“除了改善與丈夫的關(guān)系，我很快就看到了其他效果。”可知，第二段可描寫除了改善與丈夫之間的關(guān)系外，還可以描寫用筆寫出抱怨給作者在其他方面帶來的變化如朋友關(guān)系，個人情緒以及個人生活等。同時還可以描述作者的最終感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：嘗試寫下抱怨——如釋重負(fù)——改善關(guān)系——敞開心扉——對生活的其他方面帶來積極影響——最終感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①發(fā)現(xiàn)：find/discover②.移除：liftoff/remove③.困擾，打擾：bother/disturb情緒類①.惱怒：irritation/anger/rage②.感到開心：feelhappier/feelmoredelighted【點睛】[高分句型1].Withthelastwordputdown,Ifeltrelievedasifaheavyweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulder.（運用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)以及asif從句中的虛擬語氣）[高分句型2].Thosefewmoments’whenIcouldsitdownandfreemyselfofwhateverisbotheringmemadeabigdifferenceforthebetterinmylife.（運用when引導(dǎo)定語從句以及whatever引導(dǎo)賓語從句）4.（2023上·山東德州·高三統(tǒng)考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使其構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasabeautifulsunnymorninginearlysummerwhentheworldseemedfullofsunlightandnewgreenleaves.Iwasinagoodmoodasmyparentshadjustgivenme$300formydailyexpensesduringtheweekthattheywouldbeawayinMexicotovisitmymother’ssickgrandfather.Iwasextremelyoverjoyed,thinkinghardaboutthethingsIcoulddowiththemoney.IfIsurvivedonbreadandbutterthewholeweek,Iwouldhaveanunexpectedwindfallof200tobuythelatestKobeBryantbasketballshoes!Whataterrificidea!Asusual,thephysicaleducationclasswasthrilling.Ifeltmostateaseonthebasketballcourt.Afterplayingseveralfiercegames,IcouldhardlycatchmybreathasIheadedbacktowardstheclassroom,sweatyandexhausted.WhenIentered,IfoundmyclassmatesgatheredaroundSteven’sdeskashesearchedthroughhisbooksandsomeotherpersonalitemsanxiously.Stevenhadalwaysbeenpopular.Notonlywasheintelligentandwell-mannered,buthealsocamefromawell-offfamily.Andhesharedeverythinghehadwithus.Rightaway,IlearnedStevenhadlostthemoneyhewoulddonatetoachildren’swelfareinstitutethatafternoon.ThenIinformedMissJones,theclassteacher.Sherushedoverimmediatelyandorganizedasearcharoundtheclassroom.Westoodbyourdesksandemptiedthecontentsofourschoolbagsontothedeskforinspection.Itwasmyturn.AsMissJonestookoutthe300frommywallet,theclassfellintoashock.Ididn’tknowtheamountlostwasexactly$300untilthen.Ikeptprovingmyinno