高考英語(yǔ)二輪專(zhuān)項(xiàng)之應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作增加細(xì)節(jié)指導(dǎo)課件

高考書(shū)面表達(dá)備考策略

--寫(xiě)作提分技巧

如何增加細(xì)節(jié)--waysofaddingdetails

普寧英才華僑中學(xué)Cody

作文要提分需要學(xué)點(diǎn)啥

基本要求

1好卷面

2內(nèi)容全

3分段落

好卷面:

最低要求：干凈整潔，不許涂改.

字體寧大勿小.

卷面理想狀態(tài)：書(shū)寫(xiě)優(yōu)美，一氣呵成。

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內(nèi)容全

(1)全面：Coverallthepointsgiven.

(2)簡(jiǎn)單：“相關(guān)人事物法”

人：親人，朋友關(guān)系

事：學(xué)習(xí)，工作

物：錢(qián)，時(shí)間，精力

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增加結(jié)果：增加目的：

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1.球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；

2.報(bào)名方式及截止日期。

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