Unit5MusicReadingforWriting課件高中英語人教版

Unit5

MUSIC

ReadingforWritingSarahWilliams1.WheremightbeSarah?2.Whatmightshelistento?3.Whydoseshedothevictorygesture?Pre-readingListeningtomusicchangedherlifeduringdarktimesbymakingherfeelhappyandgivingherhope.The______ofmusiconSarahimpactThetopicofthe______:speechWhatisspeechwriting?Goodspeechwriting…speechwritingsendsamessagetoreaders.Thegoalofaspeechistoinfluencethemtothinkoractinyourfavor.Attractaudience.Haveaclearstructure.Focusononetopic.

YouaregoingtoattendtheEnglishpublicSpeechCompetition,whosetopicis“MusicandMe”

Pleasewriteaspeech!

ANNOUNCEMENT:Paragraph.1

opening:introducethetopicParagraph.2 closing:callingtoactionParagraph.3 thankstotheaudienceParagraph.4 musichelpedmerecoverParagraph.5 musicgavemegoodfeelingsReadforthemainideasFocusononetopic.TheimpactofmusiconSarahParagraph.1

Paragraph.2Paragraph.3 Paragraph.4 Paragraph.5 ReadforthestructureHaveaclearstructurebeginningbodyending“SpeechSandwich”

ReadfordetailsinthebeginningGoodmorning!MynameisSarah.It’sanhonortobehereandtosharewithyouthestoryofhowmusichashadanimpactonmylife.beginningGreettheaudienceIntroduceyourselfIntroducethetopicBeginning（para.1）ReadfordetailsinthebodypartbodytwoyearsagothenonedayfromthenoneventAttractaudiencehada_________feltso_________beganto_________musichelpedme______wasvery________felt_____and____________________amedicaltreatment________________torelaxseriousdiseasealonesomuchbetterlistentomusicallthetimerecoverafraiddiscouragedwentthroughlistentosomemusictimeline+feelingsbrainstorming頭腦風(fēng)暴Focusononetopic.Attractaudiencee.g.storyofmusichelpingmemakefriendsstoryofmusicimprovingmylearningstoryofmusicrelievingmypressurestoryofmusichelpingmegetthroughhardtimesPersonalstoryofmusicPersonalstoryofmusicStoryofmusic(1)Musichelpsusovercomeourstressandanxietyandbecomeoptimistictowardslife.(2)Musichelpsusfigureoutourcareerpathtobeasinger/musicproducerandmakealiving.(3)Musichelpsusfindoutouridentitysothatwecanliveamoremeaningfullife.(4)helpusconnecttoothersandhaveasenseofbelonging.(5)Musichelpsusrecoverfromourillnessandkeepsushealthy.[C]Music

gavemehappiness...Musicgavemestrengthandbroughtmerelief...Musicgavemehopeandasenseofsatisfaction.[D]...itmademyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewind.[E]ItwastherockIleantontobecomestrongandtogetthroughthosehardtimes.[F]Itbecamemybestfriend.Itspokewordsofencouragementtothedeepestpartofmybeing.metaphor(暗喻)_______personification(擬人)

_______repetition(排比)_______simile(明喻)_______ECFDUsingrhetoricaldevices修辭手法ReadforlanguageWritethebodypart

“MusicandMe”Personalstoryrhetoricaldevices修辭手法body

ReadfordetailsintheendningOfcourse,IhopenoneofyouhavetogothroughthesamekindofsufferingthatIdid.Atthesametime,weallgothroughvariousperiodswhenwefeelsadoralone.Duringthosetimes,musiccanhelpyouinthesamewaythatithelpedme.Ihopeallofyouwillsomehowbegintotreasuremusicandmakeitapartofyourlife.Thankyou!beginningSummaryofmainpointCalltoactionThanktheaudienceEnding(para.4-5)RevisingRevisethespeechusingthischecklist:1.Didyouincludeaconcrete(具體的)experiencetosharehowmusichelpedyou/someoneyouknow?2.Didyourwritingfollowthestructureofaspeech?3.Didyouusesomerhetoricaldevicestomakethelanguageofyourspeechmorepowerful?Attractaudience.Haveaclearstructure.Focusononetopic.短語積累haveanimpactonhaveaseriousdiseasefeelaloneanddiscouragedgothroughamedicaltreatmentMusicisthemedicineofthemindmakemyspiritsflylikeakiteinthewindgivemestrengthbringmereliefgetthroughhardtimesasenseofsatisfactionMusicspokewordsofencouragementtothedeepestpartofmybeing.gothroughthesufferinggothroughvariousperiodstreasuremusic對產(chǎn)生影響患有一種嚴(yán)重的疾病感到孤獨和沮喪經(jīng)歷藥物治療音樂是心靈的良藥音樂讓我的心情放飛，像風(fēng)中的風(fēng)箏給我力量讓我得到解脫度過艱難的的日子一種成就感音樂使我的內(nèi)心深受鼓舞經(jīng)歷痛苦經(jīng)歷各種時期珍惜音樂ThevirtualchoirThemusicfestivalMusicandSarahMusicorigin由來influenceDefinition定義Author’sattitudeSarah’ssuffering苦難Music’simpactonSarahhaveatalentformusicformabandhaveone’sownstudioreleasethealbumssetupequipmenttryoutasmusicalperformersrunfoodstandsMindmap:Thevirtualchoirorigin由來influenceDefinition定義beuploadedontotheinternetaninternetconnectionhaveanopportunitytosingconnectordinarypeopletogetherenablepeopletoaddvoicestootherindividuals’becomepartoftheglobalcommunityprovetobeapositiveinfluenceonlivesanaward-winningcomposerandconductorcomeupwiththeideafallinlovewithclassicalmusicgraduatefromuniversityreceiveamaster’sdegreeinmusicalcompositionoriginalcompositionsgetinspiredbyagirl’sperformanceleadtothecreationofthevirtualchoirbecomeaworldwidephenomenonawonderfulwaythusmaketheworldabetterplaceAuthor’sattitudeMusicandSarahSarah’ssufferingMusic’simpactonSarahhaveaseriousdiseasegothroughamedicaltreatmentfeelaloneanddiscouragedgothroughsufferingandvariousperiodsprovetobeapositiveinfluenceonliveshaveanimpactonherlifeMusicisthemedicineofthemind.MusicspeakswordsofencouragementstothedeepestpartofherbeingmakeherspiritsflylikeakiteinthewindgiveherstrengthandenergybringherreliefrelivehermentaldiseasegetthroughhardtimesgiveherasenseofsatisfactiontreasuremusicPlanthemusicfestivalhaveatalentformusicformabandhaveone’sownstudioreleasethealbumssetupequipmenttryoutasmusicalperformersrunfoodstandsHomework圖片來源于網(wǎng)絡(luò)Deliveryourspeechinyourclass.Sharethepowerofmusictoothers!SamplewritingGoodmorning!MynameisKateandIamheretotalkabouthowmusicchangedmylife.Haveyoueverbeenatatotallossastowhattodowithyourlife?TwoyearsagowhenIenteredseniorhigh,wewererequiredtothinkaboutourfutureplanssothatwecouldmakeseriouschoicesofoursubjects.Ihadneverthoughtaboutwhattodowithmylife.Ifeltlikemyfutureisapieceofshapelesscloudfloatingintheairandswayinginthewind.Thenoneday,inamusiclesson,whenIplayedoneofmycompositionsinfrontofthewholeclass,thesatisfiedlookofmyteacherandclassmatesstruckmelikeaflashoflightening.Whynotturnmyloveofmusicintomycareer?IdecidedtobeamusicproducerandIwasnolongerataloss.Thatwashowmusichelpedme.SamplewritingMusicgavemerelief.WhenIwasfrustratedwithmystudy,musicwasadearoldfriendtowhomIcouldalwaysturntoforcomfort.ItspokewordsofencouragementwhenIwasataloss.Musicgavemestrengthandasenseofdirection.Itwaslikealighthousethatguidedmypathinthedarkandhelpedmeregainconfidence.Moreover,musicgavememyidentity.WhenIlistenedtoandplayedmusic,itmademesureofwhoIwasandwhoIwouldbe.Someofyoumayalsobestrugglingaboutwhatyouwanttodowithyourlife.Don'tpanic.Tryputtingontheearbudsandlisteningtomusic.Itmighthelpyouinthesamewaythatithelpedme.Ihopeallofuswillbeblessedbythepowerofmusicinourfuturelife.Thankyou!1ContentHaveyoueverbeenatatotallossastowhattodowithyourlife?TwoyearsagowhenIenteredseniorhigh,wewererequiredtothinkaboutourfutureplanssothatwecouldmakeseriouschoicesofoursubjects.Ihadneverthoughtaboutwhattodowithmylife.Ifeltlikemyfutureisapieceofshapelesscloudfloatingintheairandswayinginthewind.