童年的記憶大學(xué)英語作文

童年的記憶大學(xué)英語作文

導(dǎo)讀：我根據(jù)大家的需要整理了一份關(guān)于《童年的記憶大學(xué)英語作文》的

內(nèi)容，具體內(nèi)容：孩童時(shí)期是我們大學(xué)回憶中的一部分，這樣美好的記憶,

你有用英語記下來嗎？下面是我給大家整理的，供大家參閱?。篊hildhoodIs

theMostWonderfulPar...

孩童時(shí)期是我們大學(xué)回憶中的一部分，這樣美好的記憶，你有用英語記

下來嗎？下面是我給大家整理的，供大家參閱！

:Chi1dhoodIstheMostWonderfulPartofLife

ThedaybeforeyesterdaywasChildrensDay.WhenIwaswandering

inthestreet,IsawmanyLovelychildrenplayingwiththeirparents.

Thepleasantsceneremindedmeofmyownchildhood.WhenIwasa

littlegirl,IwasfreefromworriesanddidwhateverIliked.I

wasfullofvigorandlearnedalotofthingsfromtheworld.Idid

manyexercisesandwasmuchhealthierthanIamtoday.Inmyopinion,

childhoodisthemostwonderfulpartoflife.

Firstofall,childrenwasdeeplylovedandprotectedbytheir

parents.Theydonotneedtoworryaboutanythingandcandowhatever

theywantto.Ithinkthisisthemostwonderfuladvantageof

childhood.Whenapersongrowsup,heorshewillneverhavethis

kindofadvantageagain,foranadultissupposedtohavereceived

enougheducationandknowwhathe/sheshoulddoandwhatnot.Thus,

adultscanonlydoeverythingtheyshoulddowhethertheylikeit

ornot.Moreover,themoretheylearnabouttheworld,themore

worriestheywillget.Thus,manyadultswishtheywouldbechildren

oncemore.

Secondly,childrencanlearnmuchmorethanadults.Whenbabies

cometothisworld,theyknownothingandhaveagreatthirstfor

knowledge.Itismucheasiertoeducatethemthantoteachadults

justlikeapieceofblankpaperismucheasiertobepaintedon.

Furthermore,childrenlearnbyobservinghowpeoplearoundthemact

andimitatethem.Whileadultsemphasizetoomuchonthewaysof

learning,theydonotlearninbestwaysinmostcases.Obviously,

childrenhavebettermemoriesthanadults.Thiscanalsoexplain

whychildrenlearnmorethings.

Thirdly,childrenarebroughtupunderthegreatcareoftheir

parents.Theyeatallkindsofnutritiousfood,andtheyaretaken

outtodophysicalexercisesregularly.Thus,theyareveryhealthy.

However,adultshavetheirownopinionsonfoodandonlyeattheir

favoritefood.Theydonottakeinallkindsofnutrients.Also,

adultsarebusywiththeirwork.Whentheygobackhome,theyalways

feelverytiredandareunwillingtodoanythingelseexceptsleeping.

Thus,theyhavelittletimetodoexercises.Nowonderadultsare

notsohealthyaschildren.

Iwillalwaysrememberthedaysofmychildhood.HowIwishIcould

beascarefreeandcuriousasachildonceagain,andrelivethose

happydays!

簡評(píng)

童年的生活沒有過多的束縛，無憂無慮;童年的世界多么新奇，點(diǎn)燃了

無限的好奇心和求知欲;孩子們生氣勃勃，健康快樂。作者列舉了童年的

種種好處，并歸納道：童年是一生中最美好的時(shí)光。

文章主題明確，結(jié)構(gòu)整齊，分析有條理。但論證過程中缺少事實(shí)論據(jù)支

撐，作者如果能夠融入一些自己的親身經(jīng)歷和真情實(shí)感，將更容易引起讀

者的共鳴，增添文章的可讀性。文章語言平實(shí)，但語句不夠精煉，表達(dá)也

欠生動(dòng)。

（點(diǎn)評(píng)教師：辛紅葉）

：Childhood

Walkinginthecharmingsunsetglow,hearingthefreshlaughter

waftingfromthefrolicchildrenindistance,Icannothelp

recallingmypastlife.Therosycloudsalluredmymemory;whata

wonderfulchildhoodIhavegot.Childhoodisthemostcolorfultime

inmylifeforitisamemory,amysteryandagift.

Childhoodisapreciousmemory.IstillrememberthatIdinged

tomymotherlisteningtohersingingtherhymesforme;Istill

rememberthatIfoughtwithmyoldfrienddesperatelyjustfora

redcheery;IstillrememberIburstintotearsthefirsttimeIwent

toschoohIstillremember...Mychildhoodisamemorywithout

pressure,competitionandhypocrisy.Itisthemostnaireand

innocentperiodwhichIcannotfindwhenIgrowup.Thevaluable

memoryofmychildhoodoftenglittersinmylifeandmoistensit

withgreatjoys.Childhoodissowonderfulbecauseitcreatesan

unforgettablememory.

Childhoodisalsoacharmingmystery.Ttislikeapaperplane

flyinginthesky.Itis1ikethelonelyboatsailinginthesea,

thoughtheydonotknowwheretheyshouldgo,pleasantsurprises

awaitthemhereandthereontheway.Comparedwiththerigidroutine

lifeofadults,childhoodwasfullofmagic,fulloffantasy.Ihad

thegreatcuriosityaboutallthethingsarounduschildren,which

hasbeenworngraduallybytheadultsociety.Childhoodofferedme

infiniteroomofimagination.Itislikeapieceofwhitepaperwhich

Icanputanycolorontopaintmyownbeautifulpicture.Thispicture

isthemostwonderfuloneIcaneverimaginebecausethechildhood

isfullofmystery.

Childhoodisavaluablegifttoo.Thegiftbroughtmetheability

towalkonthestreet,tospeakwithothers.Thegiftendowedme

withtheinitialknowledgeabouttheworld.ItwasinchildhoodI

wasfascinatedbythestoryofafallingappleandNewtonsdiscovery

ofgravitation.Atthattime,Imademydecisiontodevotemyself

tostudyingsciencewell,sonowIcanwritethiscompositionin

FudanUniversity.

Childhoodisagiftwhichshowsmehowtobecomeagoodperson

andenablesmetoacquirevariousability.Thescenethatmyparents

toldmestorieslike〃KongRongRangLi〃”XuanLiangCiGuoften

emergesinmymind.Theteachingsofchildhood

wi11influenceal1mylife.WhenTamtemptedtodosomethingbad,

whatIlearntinmychildhoodwillpreventmefromventuringsothat

Icouldkeepaclearconscience.Childhoodwaslikeabenignant

teacherinstructingmewhatIdidnotknowandforgivingallmyfault.

Iwillcherishthegiftchildhoodgivesmebecauseiristheguidance

ofmylife.

Asamemory,childhoodremindedmeofthegreatjoysintheold

days.Asamystery,childhoodcreatedmeacolorfulthought.Asa

gift,childhoodflourishedmywholelife.Inmyview,childhoodis

themostwonderfulpartofmylife.

簡評(píng)

有一首臺(tái)灣民謠〃童年〃，不知打動(dòng)過多少人的心扉。一年又一年，不見

了快樂的童年，逝去了快樂的時(shí)光.....引起孫越同學(xué)深深的追憶。作者

立意新穎，把童年比作快樂的回憶，神秘的經(jīng)歷和天賦的禮物，抒發(fā)了對(duì)

童年的熱愛留戀之情。

可以看出，作者嘗試用大量的比喻和描寫來表達(dá)真情實(shí)感，如

“childhoodislikeapaper-planeflyinginthesky,likeapiece

ofwhitepaper〃等描寫就包含詩情。但是用外語寫好散文談何容易，本

文不乏詞不達(dá)意之處，語言也不夠精煉，有些描寫也許是依據(jù)中文思維，

令人費(fèi)解，如Therosycloudsalluredmymemory和Asamystery,

childhoodcreatedmeacolorfulthought.Asagift,childhood

flourishedmywholelife。另外,正文部分若能增加一些具體的事實(shí)和

細(xì)節(jié)，將更能打動(dòng)人心。

（點(diǎn)評(píng)教師：辛紅葉）

：兒童時(shí)代

Ialwaysdreamaboutreturningtothepast.Asnanypeoplesay,

childhoodisthehappiestandeasiesttimeinoneslife.Children