新高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專練30 讀后續(xù)寫故事拓展策略(原卷版)

高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專練（新高考）30讀后續(xù)寫故事拓展策略【策略1：烘托情節(jié)特征】在讀后續(xù)寫中，運(yùn)用側(cè)面描寫，可以對(duì)人物進(jìn)行多角度映照和多層次烘托，人物的描寫就會(huì)達(dá)到“橫看成嶺側(cè)成峰”的豐富境界。

側(cè)面描寫有“以旁面寫正面”、“以對(duì)面寫正面”、“以反面寫正面”三種方法。如果從一個(gè)側(cè)面去描寫，人物形象往往單薄。如果從多個(gè)側(cè)面去描寫，人物形象就容易豐滿。在寫作中，我們可以嘗試以下幾種側(cè)面烘托法：景物烘托法——通過對(duì)自然景物的描繪，來烘托人物心情；他人反映法——聽聽他人的反映，去了解主人公的個(gè)性特征；借人寫人法——通過對(duì)受影響者的刻畫，間接地表現(xiàn)主人公的思想品質(zhì)。一、場(chǎng)景拓展思維1：選擇關(guān)鍵詞1.關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)blow吹howl咆哮crash碰撞stir攪動(dòng)darken使變黑envelope信封，包裹gloomy陰郁的dip蘸pour潑sunshine/sunlight陽(yáng)光breeze微風(fēng)dim昏暗的faint微弱的winding蜿蜒的frighten是某人害怕chilling寒冷的thunder雷，打雷lightening閃電frosty寒冷的melt融化2.常用短語(yǔ)bebathedin沐浴在amber-likesunshine琥珀色的陽(yáng)光stretchoff延伸涼爽清新的風(fēng)coolandrefreshingbreeze落日thesettingsunstrolldownthestreet在街上漫步thefirstrayofsunlight第一縷陽(yáng)光floodinto涌入gentlebreeze微風(fēng)多雨的季節(jié)arainyseason暴風(fēng)雨之夜astormynight在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain在春天溫暖的陽(yáng)光里inthewarmspringsunshine難以忍受的熱unbearablehot放晴了clearup木日光浴batheinthesunshine一個(gè)偏僻的小村莊asmallvillageoffthemap離海濱僅咫尺之遙bedottedwith點(diǎn)綴著二.場(chǎng)景拓展思維2：景色特征烘托人物心情（一）陽(yáng)光明媚的景色烘托生命美好與心情的愉悅【典例賞析】Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingtonothingness（虛無）,onlytore-emerge（重新出現(xiàn)）againonyourleft.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽(yáng)下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.陽(yáng)光傾斜而入Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩起舞。Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛藍(lán)色的天空和成群飄動(dòng)的金色云朵所吸引了。Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一陣風(fēng)吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像那卷起的窗簾。Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、點(diǎn)綴）theslope.風(fēng)，輕柔而清冷，輕點(diǎn)這樹枝，攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的零星灌木叢。Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.（二）暴風(fēng)驟雨的場(chǎng)景烘托心情的抑郁【典例賞析】Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(烏云密布、黑云壓頂)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整個(gè)世界仿佛都被一塊巨大的灰色棉被籠罩。Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(蒼白昏暗的月亮).Thefrostyair（寒冷的空氣）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一陣陣寒風(fēng)刺痛他們的臉頰。Stung的原形為sting“叮咬”Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.嘆息的聲音Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(陰郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧殘),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白晝的延長(zhǎng)可以讓人多瞧一瞧這凄冷的景象）（三）煩悶焦躁的景色烘托心理的急躁等【典例賞析】It’shotenoughtomelthell.天熱得能融化地獄。Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日悶熱的空氣變得格外呆滯。它籠罩著樹木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也壓得我的肩頭沉甸甸的。（四）凄風(fēng)苦雨與狂風(fēng)暴雨烘托恐懼、陰冷與害怕【典例賞析】Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，洪流暴漲，狂風(fēng)肆意沖擊房屋。Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky(閃電在空中持續(xù)亂舞).Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的細(xì)雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）puffs（一陣陣小風(fēng)）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活動(dòng)的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉悶地）andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）.三.場(chǎng)景拓展思維3：精細(xì)化用語(yǔ)再現(xiàn)場(chǎng)景與心理的交織（一）細(xì)節(jié)描述之“describeapeacefulscene”【典例賞析】WhenI

wasbathedin

thesunlight,itfeltlike

theamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.(沐浴在陽(yáng)光下；琥珀色的陽(yáng)光親吻著全身的肌膚)Mist-coveredmountains

weredottedwith

smallfarmsandvillages.(點(diǎn)綴著)Thesoundofmyfootstepswasaccompaniedonlyby

thegracefullywavingreeds.

(優(yōu)雅地隨風(fēng)飄揚(yáng)的蘆葦)（二）細(xì)節(jié)描述之“describestormyweather”【典例賞析】Theskyis

overcast,

darkenedwithgloomyclouds.(烏云密布；黑云壓頂)Onthatdarkandstormynight,

thewaves

were

crashingandthewindswerehowling.

(海浪肆意拍打；勁風(fēng)咆哮)Therain

came

pouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewand

beatagainst

thehouse.(暴風(fēng)驟雨)

（三）Goodsettingdescriptionforappreciation(佳“景”賞析)【典例賞析】Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,asifitwerehauntedbytheghostsoflong-deadcookies.

Thesunkeptdippingdownintotheoceanandthelightscameonattheharbor,castingsuddenshadowsontheground,illuminatingthefacesthatwerejustasecondagosilhouettes.Theskywasgoldenandpurple,theoceanadarkershadeofviolet.

Thesunhadset,butafaintpastelhazelingeredinthemid-summersky.Theyrolledupthepath,treebranchesrakingthewindshieldlikeangrywardens.

Outside,theairfilledwithcricketnoise,asthesunreddenedinitsdescent.ArestaurantoverlookingastarlitnightsprangtomyimaginationlikesomethingoutofanilluminatedmanuscriptfromthelateMiddleAges.Themoonwentslowlydowninloveliness;shedepartedintothedepthofthehorizon,andlongveil-likeshadowscreptuptheskythroughwhichthestarsappeared.

Allbrightnesswasgone,leavingnothing.Westeppedoutofthetentontonothing.Sledgeandtentwerethere,Estravenstoodbesideme,butneitherhenorIcastanyshadow.Therewasdulllightallaround,everywhere.Whenwewalkedonthecrispsnownoshadowshowedthefootprint.Weleftnotrack.Sledge,tent,himself,myself:nothingelseatall.Nosun,nosky,nohorizon,noworld.Nighthadfallenfastupontheland.Nomorethananhouragotheskywaspaintedwithhuesofred,orangeandpink,butallcolorhadfadedleavingonlyamattblackcanvaswithnostarstobelookedupon.

Itwouldbeacoldmoonlessnight.Theskywasdarkandlow,theairsochilledithurttobreathe.Alreadythegroundwaslaidwhitewithfrostandanywaterthathadbeenliquidunderthewintersunhadbecomeice.四、四季與自然景觀的描寫的精細(xì)化

【典例賞析】weusedtoliveinabeautifulvillage,andthereweretreesandflowersandgreengrass,andtheairwassosweet.我們以前住在一個(gè)漂亮的村舍里，那里樹很多，還有花花草草，連空氣都是甜的。

Thesightofalargecornfieldinthelatterpartofsummer,withallitsgreenbannerswavinganditstasseledplumesnodding,isonetoadmire,andnottobeforgotten.盛夏時(shí)節(jié)，一望無際的玉米地，綠色的葉子像旗幟一樣迎風(fēng)飛舞，抽穗的包谷隨風(fēng)點(diǎn)頭，這是多么賞心悅目而又令人難忘的景色啊！Inthespringitsbranchesarecoveredwithbunchesofcreamyflowers,春天里，栗子樹的枝干上開滿了一簇簇奶油般的花朵，

Beforethis,hehadlivedinawarmcountry,wherethesunshinesdownonbeautifulorangegroves,andfieldsalwayssweetwithflowers.在這之前，他一直住在一個(gè)天氣暖和的鄉(xiāng)村。那里，陽(yáng)光灑滿美麗的滿是橘子的山坡，田野里到處是芳香撲鼻的鮮花。Lastnight,thecoldnorthwindblewgreatsnowcloudsoverthesky.Notastar,notabitofblueskycouldbeseen.昨天夜里，北風(fēng)呼嘯，烏云密布。看不見一顆星星，整個(gè)天空也不見一絲藍(lán)色。Itiswinter.Thecoldwindwhistlesthroughthebranchesofthetrees.正值冬季，寒風(fēng)呼嘯著吹過樹枝。Johnnylookedthroughtheglass.Therelaythepure,featherysnowflakelikealovelylittlestar.喬尼透過玻璃看著雪花，那片純潔輕柔的雪花就像一顆可愛的小星星。

Soonthetinyflakesfloatedsoftlydown,likeflocksoflittlewhitebirds.不久，小小的雪花靜悄悄地飄落下來，就像一群白色的小鳥。

Thesunmusthavebeenpleasedwithwhathesaw,forhesmiledsuchabright,sweetsmile,thatthewholewhiteworldsparkledasifitweremadeoflittlestars.太陽(yáng)一定對(duì)雪花們的作品非常滿意，因?yàn)樗Φ萌绱藸N爛和甜蜜。整個(gè)潔白的世界閃閃發(fā)光，就像一顆顆小星星在眨眼睛。（五）早中晚場(chǎng)景舉例【典例賞析1】早上：（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofold

trees.雪覆蓋了每一個(gè)屋頂，壓在老樹枝上。Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI'mthere.潮濕的地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。鳥兒們?cè)谖抑車β抵?，不關(guān)心我在那兒。Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.陽(yáng)光傾斜而入.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate（纖弱的,精致的）airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.黃昏：（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越來越黑，光線越來越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.秋天的樹葉在涼爽的中秋空氣中飄落，告別甜美夏天，召喚秋天的到來。It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,thesidewalkmushyunderfoot.現(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在落下，一團(tuán)團(tuán)的雪花隨風(fēng)飄落，空氣潮濕，走在人行道上，腳底粘糊糊的。Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨敲打在窗戶上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天際的最后一縷陽(yáng)光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天空被一層漆黑幕布覆蓋。TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步時(shí)，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我身邊掉下來，輕輕地?fù)u晃，因?yàn)榭諝廨p輕地把它吹到地上。Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueandshimmering.湖面映照著上方的天空，它們都是無比湛藍(lán)，并且閃閃發(fā)光。Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙色顏料.ThestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutesifIcouldn’tfindshelter.如果我找不到庇護(hù)所，我黑發(fā)上強(qiáng)烈的陽(yáng)光幾分鐘后就會(huì)把我燒焦Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽(yáng)下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。晚上：（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的燈光)inthevillage.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.天空，午夜藍(lán)，給了這一場(chǎng)景一個(gè)童話般的質(zhì)量，星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的天空照亮了夜晚。Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩起舞。Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintherpower.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(陰郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧殘),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白晝的延長(zhǎng)可以讓人多瞧一瞧這凄冷的景象）Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(烏云密布、黑云壓頂)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整個(gè)世界仿佛都被一塊巨大的灰色棉被籠罩。Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(蒼白昏暗的月亮).Thefrostyair（寒冷的空氣）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.【典例賞析2】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Thegentlebreeze(微風(fēng))strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittleguyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepattedherontheface,warmandcomfortable.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywindsslapping(拍;摑)myface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtearsandfreezingrain.Spring,likeanamazingartist,paintsourcampuswithricheranddeepercolors.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纖弱的,精致的airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.Oh,I’mlost…inthemasterpieceofSpring!【策略2：構(gòu)筑故事高潮】文學(xué)故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要場(chǎng)景（keyscene）也通常是故事的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)（turningpoint），是指故事達(dá)到最緊張或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有時(shí)候是劇情中的"危機(jī)"點(diǎn)。有時(shí)候,它只是達(dá)到關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻或者轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),發(fā)生了一些事情,或者主角必須做出決定,從而導(dǎo)致一個(gè)結(jié)果或其他。我們?cè)诜治鰯⑹骂惞适禄蛘咝≌f故事的時(shí)候常常用下面的圖表來表示故事情節(jié)。【典例賞析】1.常見故事高潮Alittlegirlhasbeensearchingforherlostdog.Allofasudden,shehearsabarkcomingfromaroundthecorner,andshelooksaroundtosee...Kevinhasworkedveryhardtotryoutforthesoccerteamatschool.Thecoachhaspostedalistofthisyear'steammembersonhisofficedoor.Kevinwalksforwardtolookatthelist....Mary'sparentshavebeendiscussingwhetherornottomovetoanotherstate.TheycallMaryandhersisterdowntotalkwiththemabouttheirdecision...Loishasperformedinthestategymnasticsfinals.Shewaitsanxiouslytohearthenamesofthewinners.Theannouncersays,"Andfirstplacegoesto..."2.文學(xué)名著中的一些故事高潮ThedeathsofRomeo(whokillshimselfbecausehethinksJulietisdead)andJuliet(whokillsherselfwhensheawakesandseesRomeodead).RomeoandJuliet,Shakespeare（《羅密歐和朱麗葉》）WhenGastonandthetownspeoplecometoattackthebeast,andBelleadmitsherloveforthebeast.BeautyandtheBeast,Disney（《美女與野獸》）In"TheThreeLittlePigs,"suspensebuildsupuntiltheconfrontationbetweenthethirdpigandthewolf.Thisconfrontationistheclimax.（三只小豬）Howtocreateaclimaxofastory?一、高潮沖突思維1：.增加外部沖突增加外部沖突是一種明顯有效的可以達(dá)到故事高潮的方式。沖突帶來緊迫感,將故事推向必要的解決或崩潰。1.角色之間的沖突(人物觀點(diǎn)差異,競(jìng)爭(zhēng)需要等)【真題再現(xiàn)】（2017年11月浙江英語(yǔ)高考）Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.開車找旅館---徒勞無功---母親建議搭帳篷在他人后院---David和我倍感緊張，心有不悅（母子的觀點(diǎn)不一）2.角色與環(huán)境之間的沖突【真題再現(xiàn)】（2017年6月浙江英語(yǔ)高考）ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.……h(huán)esawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf:quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheartjumped.……,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,…….Thenit……,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellback……Mac騎車獨(dú)自行，路遇餓狼，與之搏斗，險(xiǎn)象環(huán)生。（人（角色）----狼（環(huán)境）大戰(zhàn)）3.時(shí)間依賴的發(fā)展：決策變得緊急【真題再現(xiàn)】（2017年6月浙江英語(yǔ)高考）Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim."Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.MacjumpedoffthebikeandslidintothecarwithoutdelayasthewolfwasjusttwostepsawayandwasabouttotearMacintopieces.Whatanarrowescape!騎車突停面前---急喊上車---Max上車避險(xiǎn)---餓狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容緩）4.增加的障礙：人物角色必須克服挑戰(zhàn),以達(dá)到他們的目標(biāo)【真題再現(xiàn)】（2018年6月浙江英語(yǔ)高考）Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgotlost.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.小兔突現(xiàn)---馬兒受驚---草原迷路（障礙1）----天色漸黑（障礙2）----又累又餓（障礙3）----心理恐慌（障礙4）二、高潮沖突思維2：放大內(nèi)心沖突放大內(nèi)心沖突（你的角色的內(nèi)心斗爭(zhēng)）也有助于建立一個(gè)高度緊張和不確定的時(shí)刻。【真題再現(xiàn)】（2016年10月浙江英語(yǔ)高考）Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,"Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.夫婦爭(zhēng)吵---獨(dú)自行走---荒野走散---夜色漸黑---獨(dú)處森林---陰森恐怖---后悔莫及（內(nèi)心沖突的刻畫）內(nèi)心獨(dú)白（往昔對(duì)比+虛擬語(yǔ)氣使用+旁邊描寫是常見技巧之一）三、高潮沖突思維3：使用環(huán)境描寫增加不確定性充分利用環(huán)境描寫可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用，具體方法可以看上期讀后續(xù)寫微技能。當(dāng)故事角色在碰到困難時(shí)候，我們往往要加大筆墨來描寫故事環(huán)境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。強(qiáng)化環(huán)境描寫增強(qiáng)了高潮元素。我們感受到了緊張的倍增?！镜淅p析】Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest(黑暗).Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenlydroppeddramatically.(寒冷）Itdidn’ttakelongfortheforesttobeenvelopedindarkness（黑暗）.Herraspingbreathsteamed（寒冷）inthemoonlightandherthroatwasparchedfromthirst.【真題再現(xiàn)】【2020年1月·浙江卷】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事?！癐'mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,"saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情緒)getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.”Iguessthisisit,“hesaid.”I'llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay？"Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy'smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn'tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit.Poppydidn't.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn'therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried."WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup？"askedDad.“We'vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,“smiledMom.”Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let'sgetalittledogforPoppy."Itdidn'ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(擺動(dòng))eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Para1.Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dadputtheboxonthegroundandopenedthetop.Ashinylittlewetnosepoppedup.Thentwofluffypaws.Nexttheboxtippedoversideways,andouttumbledamassofwigglygoldensilliness.

Poppywasamazed.Shewaggedfuriously.Shebarkedwithjoy.Shesmiled,hertonguelollingoutassheinvestigatedthesurprise.Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartingyippingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.

“Thatdidn’ttakelong,”remarkedMom,asbothdogswentroaringaroundthehouseinanimpromptugameofchase.Dadlaughed.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.HehadmissedPoppyandwaslookingforwardtoseeingher.Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.

“Ohmygosh,whoisthis?”heexclaimed.Hisparentslaughedatthelookofshockonhisface.

“That’sPee-wee,”saidDad.

“Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy!”

“Wedidn’t,”repliedMom.“ThispuppyisforPoppy!”【寫作分析】這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章講述了男孩要去上大學(xué)，和自己的狗Poppy道別。而沒有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母決定給Poppy買一條小狗作伴。續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：爸爸打開盒子，一條可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)了。所以后文應(yīng)該是描寫買來的小狗的樣子以及這兩只狗的相處情況；第二段開頭是：幾個(gè)星期后，男孩從大學(xué)回到家里。本段應(yīng)該寫男孩回到家以后看到兩條狗的反應(yīng)，以及父母告訴男孩這條狗是買給Poppy的。續(xù)寫時(shí)要求使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語(yǔ)，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文描寫詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。如：amassof，withjoy，lookforwardto等高級(jí)詞匯；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用Thelittlepupwasnotshyandimmediatelystartingyippingandjumpingaroundtheolderdog.；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句Whenhebentdowntogiveherabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasasmallgoldencloudcameracinguptolickhisfacetoo.等高級(jí)句式。【題型演練】1閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OvercomewithangerIknewifIdidn’tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.Istruggledintomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishessillonthetable.“Don’tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself.”Istormedout,notevenkissinghimgood-bye.Joeshoutedaftermenottotaketheshortcut.JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforcedhimtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.AsthemedicalbillsmountedwerealizedIwouldhavetocontinueworkingfull-timewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthehousework.Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothome-cookedmealandagoodnight’ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal（燕麥）forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.Hepattedhisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecret.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoeswarning,Iturnedoffthemainroute.Ithoughtithadn’trainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecornerwaterrushedacrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn’triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed.Thecarbegantoshake.IgotfrightenedtodeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks（喇叭聲）.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IscreamedatJoethatIcouldn’tmakeit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Jennystaredatthestorewindowlongingly.TherewasnothinginthisworldthatshewantedmorethanaHappyHannahdollandallthatcurrentlyseparatedherfromthehottestdolloftheholidayseasonwasathinpieceofglassandS29.95plustax.Unfortunately,Jennydidn'tevenhavethe95cents,sosheletoutadeepsighandcontinuedwalkinghome.Suddenly,apinkrectangle(矩形)inthesnowcaughthereye.Jennywalkedoverandrealizeditwasaleatherwallet.Sheremoveditfromthesnow,andopenedthewallettofindathickpileoffoldedgreenbillsandtwoplasticcards.OnewasacreditcardandtheotheranID.JennystaredattheoldwomaninherIDphoto.ThewomanhadabeautifulsmilethatremindedJennyofhergrandma.Jennysighedandthensheputthewalletintoherpurse.Sheturnedaroundandwalkedinthedirectionfromwhichshecame.Jenny'sheartbeatquicklyassheenteredthestore.Shehadlongdreamedaboutthismoment,butsomethingdidn'tfeelrightaboutitAssheapproachedaneatpileofHappyHannahdolls,shepushedawayherfeelings.ShegraspedoneHappyHannahdolly.AsJennyapproachedtheregister,theHappyHannahShowthemesongbeganplaying.Itwashermobilepone.ItwashergrandmaInonehandsheheldtheHappyHannahdollandintheothersheheldthephoneonwhichhergrandmawascalling.Jenny’sheartwasfiledwithloveandappreciationasshethoughtofhersweetoldgrandmaSheputthedolldownandpickedupthephonecall.“HiGrandma?I'mgoingtobealittlebitlatetonight.I'vegottodropsomethingoff...Yeah,itwasgood...OK...Alright...Iloveyoutoo.”.Jennyleftthestoreandwalkedthroughthemeltingsnowallthewaytotheothersideofthetown.Shethoughofhergrandmaassherangthebellat301WestStreet.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Thewomanwhoansweredthedoorhadbeencryingrecentlyandlookedupsetandanxious.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thewomantookthewalletsmilingly._____________