新高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型歸納與變式演練專題24 書信類03（申請信、咨詢信、投訴信）（解析版）

專題24書信類03（申請信、咨詢信、投訴信）（解析版） 書信類寫作包括邀請信、感謝信、推薦信、求職信、祝賀信、告知信、求助信、建議信、道歉信、咨詢信以及慰問信等類別。 以下對申請信、咨詢信、投訴信類別提供對應(yīng)的模板和基本寫作技巧。七、申請信 1.布局思維導(dǎo)圖段落要點(diǎn)首段簡要介紹自己，說明信息來源，并提出申請正文突出自己特點(diǎn)，具體說明勝任理由結(jié)尾請求給予機(jī)會，期望盡快回復(fù) 2.寫作模板模板①DearSirorMadam,Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin________________________(報(bào)紙站名稱)of________________________(廣告發(fā)布時間).NotonlydoIhavethequalificationsforthisjob,butalsoIhavetherightpersonalityfora______________(工作名稱).Ononehand,_____________________(第一個原因).Ontheotherhand,______________________(另一個原因).Shouldyougrantmeapersonalinterview,Iwouldbemostgrateful.Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme，pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytimeat________________________(電話號碼).Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication,andIamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②DearSirorMadam,I’m_________(簡單自我介紹).WhenIwasreadingtheadvertisement,_________(表達(dá)看到相關(guān)廣告后的感受).Ithinkit’sagoodopportunityformeto_____________(應(yīng)聘的原因).ThereforeIrecommendmyselftowithouthesitation.I___________(陳述本人的性格優(yōu)勢).Foronething,Ican___________(陳述本人特長一).Foranotherthing,Ican___________(陳述本人特長二).Pleasecontactmeat___________(你的聯(lián)系方式一：電話號碼).Ore-mailmeat___________(你的聯(lián)系方式二：電子郵箱地址).Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua模板③DearSirorMadam,I’m_________(簡單自我介紹).I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition_____________(說明寫信的目的)。Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause______________________________(說明為什么想得到這次寶貴的機(jī)會).___________.Besides,__________________.(分層次說明自己的優(yōu)勢)IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【寫作方法】1.首段：a.自我介紹；b.申請?jiān)?；c.說明寫信目的。2.主體：a.詳述有關(guān)背景資料：資歷、教育經(jīng)歷、工作經(jīng)歷、興趣愛好；b.詢問有關(guān)學(xué)校、課程等具體內(nèi)容。3.尾段：a.強(qiáng)調(diào)上述材料的重要性；b.希望盡快得到答復(fù)；c.要求手冊及申請表；d.表示感謝?！緦懽髁鞒虉D】說明寫信目的介紹自我(包括：學(xué)歷、工作簡歷、在學(xué)?；蚬ぷ鲉挝坏谋憩F(xiàn))說明申請?jiān)撀毼换驅(qū)W校的原因懇請招聘單位或所申請的學(xué)?？紤]自己的申請，并表示謝意，期望回復(fù)第一部分：說明寫信的目的套語：(1)茲申請刊登在……上的……工作。Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostof…advertisedin…(2)見……上刊登的貴公司廣告，我謹(jǐn)申請應(yīng)聘貴公司的……職務(wù)。Inreplytoyouradvertisementin…,Ibegtoapplyforthepostof…inyourcompany.(3)看到貴公司在報(bào)上招聘……的廣告，我馬上感到這正是我這段時間所要尋找的工作，并且我能勝任。ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementinthepaperfor…IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationsandforwhichIhavebeenlookingforsometime.(4)我想申請入貴校學(xué)習(xí)。Iwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollege.(5)我想在貴?！道^續(xù)深造。Iwouldliketofurthermystudiesin…Departmentofyouruniversity.第二部分：介紹詳情套語：(1)我的專業(yè)是……，我了解貴校在上述領(lǐng)域有極好的項(xiàng)目。Mymajoris…,andIunderstandyouruniversityhasagoodprograminthisfield.(2)……年，我出生于……，畢業(yè)于……大專業(yè)。畢業(yè)后一直在……工作，因此積累了該領(lǐng)域豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。Bornin…in…,Igraduatedfrom…Universitymajoringin…Ihavebeenworkingin…sincemygraduation,andIhavethereforeattainedrichexperienceinthisfield.(3)畢業(yè)后，我先擔(dān)任……，隨后擔(dān)任……，現(xiàn)任職于……Upongraduation,Ifirstworkedas…Thefollowingjobwas…andcurrentlyIamworkingfor/in…(4)我現(xiàn)在就讀于北京第二外國語學(xué)院英語專業(yè)，即將畢業(yè)。IamnowstudyingatBeijingSecondForeignLanguageInstituteandwillsoonbegraduatedasanEnglishmajor.第三部分：說明申請?jiān)撀毼换驅(qū)W校的原因套語：(1)貴公司目前做的這種工作特別使我感興趣。Thekindofworkinwhichyourcompanyisengagedparticularlyinterestsme.(2)我認(rèn)為我具備了報(bào)上刊登的貴公司……一職所要求的必要條件和經(jīng)驗(yàn)。IfeelIhavethenecessaryqualificationsandexperienceneededforthepositionof…advertisedinthenewspaper.(3)受我所學(xué)課程的影響，我對飯店、酒店管理產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣。UndertheinfluenceofthecoursesIhavetaken,IhavedevelopedaspecialinterestinRestaurantandHotelManagement.第四部分：懇請招聘單位或所申請的學(xué)?？紤]自己的申請，并表示謝意，期望回復(fù)套語：(1)如能盡快回復(fù)，我將不勝感激。Yourearlyresponsewillbemuchappreciated.(2)希望貴校能給我寄來空白申請表。Ihopeyouwillkindlysendmeanapplicationform.(3)如能收到所需的申請表和有關(guān)入學(xué)的指南我將十分感激。Iwouldgreatlyappreciatereceivingcopiesoftherequiredapplicationformsandanyinstructionsyoumaybesokindastogivemeregardingmypossibleadmission.(4)希望同意面試，屆時我可以更詳細(xì)地說明我的技能。IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationsmorefully.(5)我將樂意在您方便時接受面試，屆時我將進(jìn)一步介紹自己。Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyoufurtherdetailsconcerningmyself. 3.必備詞句Iwishtoapplyforapositionofwhichyouadvertisedintoday'snewspaper.

我想申請你們今天報(bào)紙上刊登的廣告中的一個職位。Ihavelearnedfromafriendthat...

我從一個朋友那得知……Ishallbegladtoprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationconcerningmyeducationandpersonalexperience.

我很樂意提供關(guān)于我的教育及個人經(jīng)驗(yàn)方面的更多信息。Mynameis...Igraduatedfrom...universityin...，majoringin...我的名字是……。我畢業(yè)于……大學(xué)，專業(yè)是……Iamconfidentmyprofessionalknowledgehaspreparedmetohandlethejob.

我相信我的專業(yè)知識能讓我勝任這份工作。Iamskilledin/goodat...我擅長……Ihadgoodperformanceineverycourse，especiallyin...

我每門課成績都很好，特別是……ItrustthatIamcapableofdoingtheworkwell.

我相信我能干好這份工作。IbelievethatIamwellqualifiedforthepositionas...

我相信我定能勝任作為……的工作?！酒拙洹拷榻B自己，簡要說明信息來源，并提出申請。1.I’mLiHua,fromClassOne,SeniorTwo.我是李華，來自高二一班。2.Ihavereadinthenewspaperthatasecretaryiswantedinyourcompany.我在報(bào)紙上看到你們公司在招聘一名秘書。3.IreadtheannouncementoftheExperienceLifethatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.我在網(wǎng)上看到你們發(fā)布的體驗(yàn)生活的消息，我對此很感興趣。4.IamextremelypleasedtoseeyouradvertisementforanEnglishtutor（家庭教師/助教）inthenewspaper.我很高興在報(bào)紙上看到你們招聘家庭教師/助教的廣告。5.Iamwritingtoapplyforthesummercampinyourschool.我寫信是想申請加入你們學(xué)校的夏令營。6.IamwritingtotellyouthatI’msuitableforthejobyouareadvertising.我寫信是想告訴你，我適合做你們在廣告上刊登的這份工作。7.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutthepossibilityofthejob.我寫信是詢問（我得到）這份工作的可能性。8.

Iamwritingtojointheprogram.我寫信是想加入這個項(xiàng)目。9.Iwouldliketoapplyforitduringthesummervacation.我想要暑假申請它?！酒芯洹客怀鲎约禾攸c(diǎn)，具體說明勝任理由。1.IthinkI’mqualifiedfortheposition.

我認(rèn)為對于這個職位我是有資格的。2.Inthefirstplace,Ihavestrongwrittenandspokencommunicationskills.首先，我有很好的寫作和交流技巧。3.What’smore,Iamwellacquaintedwiththewesternculture.（beacquaintedwith熟悉）而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。4.Lastbutnottheleast,Ihavegoodpersonality,andIamindependentinlife.最后但也是很重要的一點(diǎn)是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很獨(dú)立。5.Ithinkit’sofgreatusetome.Foronething,Icangainsomeexperienceformyfuturejob;foranother,Icanmakemorefriends.我認(rèn)為它對我是有好處的。一則，我能夠?yàn)槲磥淼墓ぷ鳙@得經(jīng)驗(yàn)；二則，我可以交到更多的朋友。6.IamsureIcandomybestinthejob.我保證在工作中會盡最大努力。7.That’swhyIamapplyingfortheposition.那就是我申請這個職位的原因。8.IhopeIcanjoinyou.

我希望我能夠加入你們?！酒簿洹空埱蠼o予機(jī)會，期望盡快回復(fù)。Iwillbemuchgratefulifyoucangivemetheopportunity.如果你能給我這個機(jī)會，我會非常感激。Ihopeyoucanoffermetheopportunity.我希望你能提供給我這個機(jī)會。IhopeIcanbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.我希望我能夠成為你們夏令營的一員。Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme,pleasecontactmeat189.如果你需要了解我更多，請給我打電話189.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.期待你的早日恢復(fù)。

Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.期待早日收到你的來信。Iwishtoapplyforapositionofwhichyouadvertisedintoday'snewspaper.

我想申請你們今天報(bào)紙上刊登的廣告中的一個職位。Ihavelearnedfromafriendthat...

我從一個朋友那得知……Ishallbegladtoprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationconcerningmyeducationandpersonalexperience.

我很樂意提供關(guān)于我的教育及個人經(jīng)驗(yàn)方面的更多信息。Mynameis...Igraduatedfrom...universityin...，majoringin...我的名字是……。我畢業(yè)于……大學(xué)，專業(yè)是……Iamconfidentmyprofessionalknowledgehaspreparedmetohandlethejob.

我相信我的專業(yè)知識能讓我勝任這份工作。Iamskilledin/goodat...我擅長……Ihadgoodperformanceineverycourse，especiallyin...

我每門課成績都很好，特別是……ItrustthatIamcapableofdoingtheworkwell.

我相信我能干好這份工作。IbelievethatIamwellqualifiedforthepositionas...

我相信我定能勝任作為……的工作。 4.寫作實(shí)操技巧 假設(shè)你是李華，你作為交換生正在英國學(xué)習(xí)，你所在城市博物館正在展出來自中國的文物(relics)因而需要招聘懂一定中國文化的自愿者作為講解員，需要寫一封信給博物館申請做一名講解員。要點(diǎn)如下: 1.寫信目的。 2.個人能力優(yōu)勢。 3.能做的事情。注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dearsir/madam(稱謂)IamreallydelightedtolearnthataguideforyourChineseculturalrelicexhibition(職位)isrequired,andIfeelthisposition(職位或機(jī)會)

isspeciallytailoredto

me.Tostartwith,myadvantagefirstliesinthefactthatIamfromChinaandusedtobeavolunteerinShanghaiMuseumandquitefamiliarwithChineserelics(優(yōu)勢一).Furthermore,beinganoutgoingandoptimisticboy,IamgoodcommunicatingwithothersandintroducingChineseculturetotheworldisalwaysmyhonorandmypleasure(優(yōu)勢二).Finally,thereisnoproblemwithmyspokenEnglish,asIhavelivedhereforalmostayearandIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothersinEnglish(優(yōu)勢三).Idohopemyenthusiasmandqualification(資質(zhì)或能力)will

winmeafavorableconsideration

fromyourside.Shouldyouneedanydetailsrelatedtomyapplication,feelfreetocontactmeat123456@(聯(lián)系方式).Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua 5.仿寫演練 假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)現(xiàn)正在招聘編輯，負(fù)責(zé)撰寫中國傳統(tǒng)文化板塊的文章。請你寫封信，申請?jiān)撀毼?。?nèi)容包括： 1.寫信目的； 2.優(yōu)勢、特長。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dearsir/madam(稱謂)IamreallydelightedtolearnthataneweditorinchargeofarticlesbasedontraditionalChineseculture(職位)isrequired,andIfeelthisposition(職位或機(jī)會)

isspeciallytailoredto

me.Tostartwith,myadvantagefirstliesinthefactthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichIbelieveisabasicrequirementforthisjob(優(yōu)勢一).Furthermore,inmysparetime,IprefertoreadEnglishnewspapers,whichcontributestomyprogressinwriting(優(yōu)勢二).Finally,thereisnoproblemwithmyknowledgeaboutChineseculture,asIamcrazyabouteverythingtodowithChineseculture.IoftentalkwithmyforeignfriendsandintroduceChineseculturetothem(優(yōu)勢三).Idohopemyenthusiasmandqualification(資質(zhì)或能力)will

winmeafavorableconsideration

fromyourside.Shouldyouneedanydetailsrelatedtomyapplication,feelfreetocontactmeat123456@(聯(lián)系方式).Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua 6.高考真題（2019全國I）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的：2．個人優(yōu)勢：3．能做的事情。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChinaduringthissummervacation.I’mdelightedtolearnthatvolunteerstudentsarewantedforaChinesepaintingexhibitiontobeheldinthelocalartgallery.NowI’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Thereasonsformyapplicationareasfollows.Firstofall,havingbeenexposedtoforeignteacherssinceayoungage,IcancommunicatefreelywithothersinEnglish.What’smore,yearsofbeingmonitormakesmeabrilliantorganizer,whichwillhelpalottokeeptheexhibitioninorder.ThemostimportantfactoristhatmyrelatedknowledgewillundoubtedlyhelptheaudiencelearnmoreabouttheuniqueChineseartform.Allinall,mysenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifiedvolunteer.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua（2018·浙江卷）假定你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括：1.口語能力：2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；3.應(yīng)聘目的。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.AndIamwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerofourschoolEnglishassociation.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandhavebeentotheUSAtwice.SoIcancommunicatewellwithnativespeakersofEnglish.What’smore,Iamkindandfriendlytootherpeople.SoIcaneasilygetalongwithforeignstudents.I’mparticularlyinterestedinthisjobbecauseIwanttofurtherimprovemyoralEnglishcapabilitiesandinterpersonalcommunicationskills.HopefullyIcanreceiveyouracceptance.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua（2015·重慶卷）Bookcrossing.Com是一個面向全球的圖書分享網(wǎng)站。該網(wǎng)站組織的分享活動有兩種參與方式：一是自由分享（wildrelease），即把書放在指定地點(diǎn)，由其他參與者自由獲??；二是定向分享（controlledrelease），即直接傳遞給另一位參與者。假設(shè)你是李華，請用英文寫信申請參加。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1·表明寫信目的2·選擇一種分享方式3·簡述作出該選擇的理由4·希望了解更多信息注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于80；（2）在答題卡上做答（3）書信格式及開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【思路點(diǎn)撥】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能造漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earSirorMadam,Learningthatyouareorganizingthisactivitytosharebooksworldwide,IamwritingtoapplyforitforthesimplereasonthatIlovereadingandIownalargenumberofbooks.You’veintroducedtwowaystosharebooks:wildreleaseandcontrolledrelease.Ofthetwo,thelatterwinsmyfavor.Bythemeansofcontrolledrelease,Ionlyneedtodeliverbookstootherparticipants,notonlyarebookssharedbutitcanbuildupabridgeconnectingreadersfromdifferentpartsoftheworldaswell.Ifyoucouldprovidemorespecificinformation,Iwouldbewellgrateful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡潔，不拖拉，使用短語：applyfor申請；Lookingforwardto盼望著；Learningthatyouareorganizingthisactivitytosharebooksworldwide,IamwritingtoapplyforitforthesimplereasonthatIlovereadingandIownalargenumberofbooks.這句話運(yùn)用learning做伴隨狀語，reason后面跟著一個同位語從句；notonlyarebookssharedbutitcanbuildupabridgeconnectingreadersfromdifferentpartsoftheworldaswell.這個句子notonlybutalso連接兩個句子，第一個句子需要用部分倒裝。（2012·全國新課標(biāo)卷）假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（theInternet）上得知一個國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。

內(nèi)容主要包括：1.自我介紹(包括英語能力);2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）；3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。DearSirorMadam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,LiHua【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Ireadtheannouncementofthesummer

campthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.Iknowthatyouwelcome

studentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor

10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I'llbeabletotellstudentsfromother

countriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasa

memberofyoursummercamp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHua必背范文Writting1 假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，打算報(bào)考一所外語學(xué)校。你在網(wǎng)上看到上海外國語學(xué)院的招生信息(admissioninformation)，并對此非常感興趣。根據(jù)招生要求，你需要用英語寫一份個人申請報(bào)告，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.自己的個性、特長及取得的成果；2.進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoapplytostudyinyouruniversity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封申請信，結(jié)合題目要求可知，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你的個性、特長及取得的成果；進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向和設(shè)想。寫作時，注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)合理安排段落，使文章條理清晰：第一段簡單介紹招生信息的來源；第二段一寫自己的個性、特長及取得的成果；第三段一談自己的努力方向和設(shè)想；(2)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，巧妙使用過渡性詞語,使得語意連貫；(3)盡量使句式富于變化?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earSirorMadam,

I’mwritingtoapplytostudyinyouruniversity.

IreadabouttheadmissioninformationwhilesurfingtheInternettheotherday.I’mreallyinterestedinit.I’manoutgoinggirlandcangetonwellwithallmyclassmates.Idowellinmostofmysubjects,especiallyinEnglish.IoncewonfirstprizeinanEnglishSpeechContestheldinourcity.Asweallknow,Englishisauniversallanguage,soIwanttomajorinEnglishifIamadmittedintoyouruniversity.IhopetohaveajobrelatedwithlanguagesinthefutureandIbelieveIcanhelppromoteculturalcommunicationbetweenChinaandtheworld.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,LiHua

【名師點(diǎn)評】文章要點(diǎn)齊全,思路清晰，語言精練，過渡自然，并且恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧舜罅康母呒壴~匯和復(fù)雜句式,不失為一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。具體表現(xiàn)在：(1)高級詞匯:getonwellwith,dowellin,promoteculturalcommunication等;(2)高級句式：as引導(dǎo)的定語從句Asweallknow,狀語從句的省略whilesurfingtheInternet,非謂語動詞短語heldinourcity和relatedwithlanguages等。Writting2假設(shè)你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到一個國際中學(xué)生家教組織將面向中國招聘兼職中文家教(tutor)的廣告，歡迎中國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。內(nèi)容主要包括：1.自我介紹（包括中英文能力）；2.參加意圖（幫助別人學(xué)習(xí)中文和推介中國文化）；3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearsirorMadam,I’mLiHua,aseniormiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IhappenedtoreadtheadvertisementthatyouhavepostedontheInternet,employingChinesestudentsaspart-timetutoroftheChineselanguage.Iaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromChinaandI’dliketogetthisjob.Forme,ChineseismynativetongueandI’mexcellentatit.Besides,I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor9yearswithagoodcommandofspokenandwrittenEnglish.I’mwillingtohelpforeignerslearnChinesewellandintroduceChineseculturetotheworldaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyours.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHuaWriting3假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的高三畢業(yè)生李華，剛剛參加完高考，最近聽說美籍華人李響將出資幫助貧困大學(xué)生。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一封貧困資助申請信。1.個人情況介紹；2.申請資助原因(家庭困難等情況)；3.資助款的使用及今后打算。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.LiXiang,I’mgladtohearthatyouwillhelpthosewholackmoneyingoingtocollege.I’mwritingtoapplyforit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearMr.LiXiang,

I’mgladtohearthatyouwillhelpthosewholackmoneyingoingtocollege.I’mwritingtoapplyforit.MynameisLiHua,aseniorthreestudentofXinhuaMiddleSchool.Ihavemuchfinancialdifficultyincontinuingmycollegeeducation,butI’meagertogoonwithmyfurtherstudy.Inmyfamilymyfatheristheonlybreadwinnerwhilemymotherwaslaidofftwoyearsago.Mygrandmotherhasbeensufferingalungillnessformorethanfiveyears.Myyoungerbrotherisnowstudyinginajuniorschool.Itookpart-timejobsduringthesummervacation,butwhatIhaveearnedisfarfromenoughformetopaytherequiredtuitionfees.Inordertocontinuemystudy,Ihavetoapplyforyourhelp.Ifmyrequestisaccepted,Iwillmakegooduseofthemoneyandputmyheartintostudyandmakemyselfausefulmantothesociety.Ihopethatyouwillconsidermyapplication.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【解析】作文要求寫一封貧困資助申請信。第一步先作個人情況介紹;第二步講述申請資助原因(家庭困難等情況)，可以著重介紹自己家庭收入微薄，負(fù)擔(dān)很重的情況；最后說一說如果自己得到資助將如何使用資助款。本篇范文行文流暢，要點(diǎn)明確，語言地道，詞句豐富。文章運(yùn)用了多種句式：并列句，主語從句，條件狀語從句，賓語從句。長短句交叉使用，增強(qiáng)了文章的層次感。內(nèi)容言辭懇切，增強(qiáng)了可讀性。Writing4假如你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，在網(wǎng)上看到一則面對所有國家征集北京冬奧會志愿者的消息，你喜愛冰雪活動，想去擔(dān)任志愿者。申請信要求統(tǒng)一用英文書寫。請根據(jù)提示寫一封申請信。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的基本情況；2.你的申請理由；3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意：1.100詞左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mmorethanpleasedtolearnthatvolunteersarewantedfortheWinterOlympicGames,whichistobeheldinBeijing.I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.I’mLiHua,presentlystudyinginHongxingHighSchoolandI’mconvincedthatI’mqualifiedtobetherequiredvolunteer.Firstofall,I’moutgoing,whichmakesitpossibleformetogetalongwellwithothers.Besides,Iregularlygoskiingwithfriends,equippingmewithenoughknowledgetobeaqualifiedvolunteer.Inaddition,Inormallyparticipateinavarietyofbeneficialvoluntaryactivities,whichmakesmemoreexperiencedthanothers.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaWriting5假如你是李華，為了配合學(xué)校開展的"GreenActionfortheEarth"的活動，你校英語俱樂部張貼了一則海報(bào)招聘志愿者。請根據(jù)提示寫一封申請信。內(nèi)容包括:1.個人信息；2.應(yīng)聘資格；3.希望被錄用。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,I’