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編者小注：本專輯專為2022年上海新高考英語(yǔ)二輪總復(fù)習(xí)及1月春考準(zhǔn)備。說(shuō)說(shuō)編寫(xiě)思路：版塊一：沖刺講義10講，注重方法性學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)于知識(shí)的拆解全面到位，選題主要根據(jù)上海官方公布的近五年級(jí)春秋考真題試題為主，近兩年一二模測(cè)試及今年最新期中試題為輔。版塊二：專練8講，注重?？碱}型，高頻考點(diǎn)的訓(xùn)練，數(shù)十篇選材均選于近兩年上海高三四校、八金剛及十三名校之真題版塊三：模擬滿分卷4套，供大家在完成以上講練后進(jìn)行整體測(cè)試，滿分140分。希望助上海的莘莘學(xué)子在求學(xué)路上一臂之力。我們是贏未來(lái)學(xué)科培優(yōu)工作室，專注上海地區(qū)資料研發(fā)，煩請(qǐng)廣大一線教師提出寶貴意見(jiàn)，謝謝。20212022學(xué)年上海市高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)講義10話題討論類寫(xiě)作學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)1，掌握討論類作文的寫(xiě)作步驟2，掌握討論類作文的句式3，掌握作文詞匯教學(xué)內(nèi)容進(jìn)門小練筆上海名媛拼單事件引發(fā)熱議，請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)此事的看法精講精練討論類作文寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu):第一段：一句話寫(xiě)清背景+一句話表明立場(chǎng)。第二段：論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，論證方法有正反對(duì)比論證，舉例論證等。第三段：用總結(jié)或提醒的方式回歸話題?！纠}精講】19年秋考題VI.GuideWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游雜志上，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了這樣一條信息：某古城景區(qū)對(duì)當(dāng)?shù)厝耸召M(fèi)5美元，對(duì)外國(guó)人收費(fèi)15美元，針對(duì)這一情況，請(qǐng)你以李敏的口吻給該雜志編輯寫(xiě)一封信，具體要求如下：1.介紹一下你在雜志上看到的內(nèi)容；2.針對(duì)此事自己的態(tài)度以及理由。第一步：列提綱第一段：背景：__________________________________________________________________________觀點(diǎn)：_________________________________________________________________________參考思路：背景：chargedomestictourists5dollarswhileforeigners15dollars觀點(diǎn)：unfair，thepriceforticketsshouldbefair第二段：理由：1，_______________________________________________________________________2,________________________________________________________________________3,________________________________________________________________________參考思路：1，itattractsmoretourists，maketravelingthrive;2，bringjobsandconsumption,improveeconomy;2，protecttheoldhistoryanddisplaytheancientcity;第三段：總結(jié)（對(duì)觀點(diǎn)的升華）總結(jié)：___________________________________________________________________________參考思路：notonlyimprovetourismbutalsoprotecttheancientcity第二步：思考主體段落的思路拓展：第一式：________________________________________________________________________第二式：__________________________________________________________________________第一式：分析原因：overseatouristswillbemorewillingtotravelhere第二式：分析結(jié)果：theimproveconsumptionandincreasedjobswillbenefiteconomy第三步：組織成句子第一段：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考思路：背景句：theticketpricesoftheancientcityfordomestictouristsisat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.觀點(diǎn)句：Istronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.第二段：First：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What’smore：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lastbutnotleast:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考思路：Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeingchargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.What’smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeplyexploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.第三段：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BasedonwhatIstatedabove,thefairpricewillbenefitmoretouristsandtourisms.Notonlyitattractsmoretouristsbutalsodisplaysitsbeautifulscenery.Whatmattersmostisthatithasaprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdaysandconstructsnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.第四步：成文DearEditor,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine,itisapitytoreadthenewsthattheticketpricesofanancientcityfordomestictouristsareat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeingchargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.What’smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeplyexploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveaprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdayseverlastingdevelopmentoflocaleconomyandtourism,constructingnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifyoucanreplytomeassoonaspossible!Yourfaithfully,LiMin句式總結(jié)：1,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine2,Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.3,fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingpetitivetravelingmarket.4,which，withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.5,BasedonwhatIstatedabove,…6,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveaprehensiveinfluenceon…【鞏固練習(xí)】【教學(xué)建議】鞏固練習(xí)部分在理科對(duì)應(yīng)變式練習(xí)，文科對(duì)應(yīng)同類篇章。鞏固練習(xí)必須和例題保持同一知識(shí)點(diǎn)，建議鞏固練習(xí)題目設(shè)計(jì)不要超過(guò)3題，題目建議是中高考?？季淅}，從精品題庫(kù)中選取，題型不限。VI.WritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學(xué)的李華，你的朋友李楠給你寫(xiě)了一封信，告訴你他要開(kāi)發(fā)一個(gè)新的APP，用這個(gè)軟件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，給出理由（信的格式已給）。第一步：列提綱第一段：背景：__________________________________________________________________________觀點(diǎn)：_________________________________________________________________________參考思路：背景：friendLinandevelopaAppofsharingclothes觀點(diǎn)：willingtoshareclothesontheApp第二段：理由：1,_______________________________________________________________________2,________________________________________________________________________3,________________________________________________________________________參考思路：1，buildtherelationshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmates;2，peoplecanweardifferentclothes;3，makefulluseofclothes;第三段：總結(jié)（對(duì)觀點(diǎn)的升華）總結(jié)：___________________________________________________________________________參考思路：notonlybenefitothersandmebutalsorealizeclothes’value.第二步：思考主體段落的思路拓展：第一式：________________________________________________________________________第二式：__________________________________________________________________________第三式：__________________________________________________________________________第一式：分析原因：sharethesamehappinessofwearingthesameclothes,emotionallyconnectedwithsomeone,probablydeepentherelationship;第二式：分析結(jié)果：spendinglessmoneyonclothes;第三式：舉例說(shuō)明：peoplebuydifferentclothesfordifferentoccasions.第三步：組織成句子第一段：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考思路：背景句：Hearingthatyouplantodevelopanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeeltrulyproudofyournovelidea.觀點(diǎn)句：Personallyspeaking,Iamwillingtosharemyclothesonyourapp.Thereasonsareasfollows.第二段：First：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What’smore：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lastbutnotleast:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考思路：Tobeginwith,itwillbewonderfulformeifIlearnthatsomeonethatIbarelyknowofcansharemyhappinessofwearingmyclothes.Feelinglikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes,Imaynaturallywishtoknowmoreaboutthatparticular“someone”andprobablyfurtherdeepenourrelationship.Intheend,agoodfriendshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmatemightbebuiltbasedonourmonclothes.What’smore,ifotherstudentscantrymyclothesthroughtheapp.Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes.Therefore,studentscanweardifferenttypesofclotheswithoutactuallyspendinganymoney.What’smoreimportantisthatsharingmyclotheswilltakefulluseofthem.Intoday’smaterialsociety,therearesomanyparentswhopreparelotsofclothesfortheirbelovedchildrenfordifferentoccasions,suchasadressfortheparty,gymsuitforindoorsports.Moreover,theclothescanonlyrealizetheirtruevalueaftertheyareputonaperson’sbody.第三段：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlydoessharingmyclothesonyourappbenefitothersandmebutalsorealizethevalueofclothes.第四步：成文DearLiNan,Hearingthatyouplantodevelopanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeeltrulyproudofyournovelidea.Personallyspeaking,Iamwillingtosharemyclothesonyourapp.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,itwillbewonderfulformeifIlearnthatsomeonethatIbarelyknowofcansharemyhappinessofwearingmyclothes.Feelinglikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes,Imaynaturallywishtoknowmoreaboutthatparticular“someone”andprobablyfurtherdeepenourrelationship.Intheend,agoodfriendshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmatemightbebuiltbasedonourmonclothes.What’smore,ifotherstudentscantrymyclothesthroughtheapp.Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes.Therefore,studentscanweardifferenttypesofclotheswithoutactuallyspendinganymoney.What’smoreimportantisthatsharingmyclotheswilltakefulluseofthem.Intoday’smaterialsociety,therearesomanyparentswhopreparelotsofclothesfortheirbelovedchildrenfordifferentoccasions,suchasadressfortheparty,gymsuitforindoorsports.Moreover,theclothescanonlyrealizetheirtruevalueaftertheyareputonaperson’sbody.BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlydoessharingmyclothesonyourappbenefitothersandmebutalsorealizethevalueofclothes.Yours,LiHua句式總結(jié)：1,Hearingthatyouplantodevelopanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeel…2,itwillbewonderfulformeifI…3,Feelinglikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes,Imaynaturally…4,What’smoreimportantisthat….5,Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes…討論類作文的句式總結(jié)：引出背景Wearediscussing/havediscussedwhether…ornot….Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionon".inourclass/inthenewspaper.Nowthereisamonphenomenonthat(同位語(yǔ)從句)Withthedevelopment/improvement/increase/popularityof…,alotofpeople…Althoughsomemanypeoplethink…，Iprefer…(轉(zhuǎn)于從句，轉(zhuǎn)折)Thereisatendencythat….Asarecentinvestigation/surveypointedout,….Thereisagrowingconcernabout….Theabovepicturereveals/indicatesthat.,anditisamonphenomenon….Asweknow,itiswellknownthat…,whatisknowntousallisthatAsiswellknown,itiswidelyacknowledgedthat…Thereisnodoubt…Thereisnodenyingthat…Itisobviousthat….表示不同人的觀點(diǎn)Everycoinhastwosides.isnoexception.Foronething,….foranother.…..Justlike.....hasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.引入他人的觀點(diǎn)為自己的觀點(diǎn)作鋪墊Somepeoplethink",othersholdtheview.Somearefor.therestareagainsttheopinionthatitiswidely/monlyacceptedthat…/Anideawidely/monlyacceptedby...isthat….Themajorityseemstogetusedtotheviewthat…Ifitwereleftmetodecidewhether...,Iwould,withouthesitation,choseto/Iwouldprefertheformerto…Itisdifficultfortomakeachoicewithoutcarefulconsideration/discussion.However,Iwillchosebecause,atleast,itis…總結(jié)Itcanbeconcludedthat.,accordingto.…above…Fromwhathasbeenstatedabove,wecaninfer/concludedrawaconclusionthatInmyopinion,IaminfavorofPersonally,Iprefer.lamfullyconvincedthat…當(dāng)堂檢測(cè)2017年春考題VI.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑期將赴英國(guó)參加為期兩個(gè)月的海外交流活動(dòng)。如果選擇主辦方安排的住宿，他需要額外支付較高的費(fèi)用。但他也可以通過(guò)為當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)養(yǎng)老院提供每月三十小時(shí)的義工服務(wù)，獲得在養(yǎng)老院免費(fèi)住宿的機(jī)會(huì)。李宏通過(guò)郵件向你征求意見(jiàn)。你要寫(xiě)一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)此事的明確態(tài)度；2.你的理由。參考答案：Possibleversion1DearLiHongIhaveheardthatyouhavegotachancetoattendanoverseasexchangeprograminBritainfortwomonthsthissummerandIamhappyforyou.However,youarefacedwithadilemmaofwhetheryoushouldpayaheavypriceforacmodationofferedbythehostordovoluntaryworkinanursinghomefortheagedinexchangeforfreeacmodation.Personally,Iremendyoustayinanursinghousenotonlybecauseofitsfreechargebutalsofortwootherreasons.First,volunteeringinanursinghousefortwomonths,youcanimproveyourabilitytolookafteryourselfandothers.Beingtheonlychildinyourfamily,youarealwayssparedthetroubleofdoingallthoseboringandtiringchores,sodoingvoluntaryworkservesasagoodopportunityforyoutobeemoreindependent.Notonlywillyouneedtotakegoodcareofyourself,butyouwillalsohavetocatertotheneedsoftheelderlyaroundyou.Throughthisuniqueexperience,Iamsureyouwillbeeamatureadult.AnotherequallyimportantreasonisthatyoucangetclosetothelocalBritisholdpeopleandthuscanhavearoughpictureofthecultureandsocialconditionsthere.Ithinkthepurposeoftheexchangeprogramshouldnotbelimitedtoacademicissues.Instead,intakingcareofandmunicatingwiththeseseniorpeoplewithrichlifeexperience,youcanexpandyourhorizonsandgaininsightintoBritishcustomsandculture,whichyoucannotreadfrombooksAllinall,Ifavorthefreeacmodationinanursinghousebydoingvoluntarywork.Anyway,itstillfallsonyoutodecidewhichplantochoose.WishyouasuccessfulandmeaningfultripYours,WangreiPossibleversion2ItissaidthatyouwillgoabroadtoEnglandforatwomonthoverseasmunicationactivityinthissummervocation.Ihearthatyouarehesitatingwhethertospendhigherpricechoosingarrangeddormitoryortospend30hourseverymonthservingtheoldtogetafreeliving.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldchoosethefirstone.Ifyouchoosethesecondoption,youwillusetoomuchtimetodoserviceinsteadofstudyingthelocalculture.Althoughmunicationwiththeoldcangetalotoflivelyexperienceandavoidmaymistakesinlife,yourmostimportantresponsibilityistolearnhowoverseasstudentsstudyandwhattheywilllearn.Arrangedroomcansaveyoutimeandhavemorechancestolivewithpeerswhomayhavethesameinterestwithyou.Bythis,youcanmakealotofyoungfriendsandifyouareintroubleinfuture,theymaygiveyousomesuggestionsandahelpinghand.IwishthatyouwouldtakemyadviceandI’mwaitingtohearfromyou.Yours,WangreiVI.GuidedWriting:Directions:WriteanEnglishpositioni