2022-2024北京初三一模英語匯編：話題作文

第1頁/共1頁2022-2024北京初三一模英語匯編話題作文一、書面表達(dá)1．（2024北京通州初三一模）某英文網(wǎng)站青少年板塊正在開展以“學(xué)會和父母相處”為主題的征文活動。假設(shè)你是李華。請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，分享你和父母之間發(fā)生的一個沖突，你是如何恰當(dāng)?shù)靥幚淼?，以及你從中得到的啟示。提示詞語：disagreement,spend,cellphone,shout,communicate提示問題：·Whatwastheproblembetweenyourparentsandyou?·Howdidyoudealwithit?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?Problemsareoftenaroundus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024北京海淀初三一模）學(xué)而致知，行而致遠(yuǎn)。假設(shè)你是李華。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“學(xué)以致用”為主題的征文活動。請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，分享一次你運(yùn)用所學(xué)解決實際問題的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@。提示詞語：skill,makeuseof,connect,improve,meaningful提示問題：●Whatexperiencecanyoushareaboutputtingwhatyou'velearnedintopractice?●Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2023北京平谷初三一模）假如你是李華，你校英語社團(tuán)公眾號正在收集關(guān)于“讀書伴我成長”的主題材料。請你用英語給該公眾號留言，就“GrowingupwithReading”分享你的讀書經(jīng)歷和收獲。提示詞語:history,share,broaden,improve提示問題:?Whatdoyouoftenread??Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromit?Readingisveryimportantinourlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2023北京海淀初三一模）積極求助是一種生活智慧。它能幫我們找到方向，帶我們走出迷茫。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“積極求助”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你向他人求助的一次經(jīng)歷，以及你的收獲。提示詞語：problem,encourage,explain,improve,confidence提示問題：·Whatisyourstoryofaskingforhelp?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?Askingforhelpplaysanimportantroleinourlife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2023北京延慶初三一模）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“夢想”為主題的征文活動。假定你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愕膲粝胧鞘裁匆约澳愦蛩闳绾螌崿F(xiàn)自己的夢想。要求：根據(jù)所給提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的英語文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語：goal,inthefuture,difficulty,giveup,cometrue提示問題：What’syourdream?Howareyougoingtoachieveyourdream?Dreamisveryimportanttoeveryone.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2023北京順義初三一模）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“計劃的重要性”為主題的征文活動，假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)或生活中做過什么計劃，有什么收獲。提示詞語：change,stickto,improve,confident提示問題:

●Whatplandidyoumakeinyourstudyorlife?●Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?Makingaplanisimportant.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2023北京門頭溝初三一模）每個人都有自己珍貴的財富，也許是父母無私的愛，老師的諄諄教誨，同學(xué)之間的友誼……；也許是自己一直以來的愛好，不斷堅持的意志品質(zhì)，受益頗多的良好習(xí)慣……某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“我最珍貴的財富(MyMostPreciousTreasure)”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阕钫滟F的財富是什么，并說明理由。提示詞語：makeprogress,introuble,encourage,growup,lucky提示問題：●Whatisyourmostprecioustreasure?●Whydoyouthinkso?MyMostPrecious(珍貴的)TreasureEveryonehashisorherprecioustreasure._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2022北京東城初三一模）設(shè)定目標(biāo)對每個人都很重要。有了明確的目標(biāo)，才有努力的方向，并產(chǎn)生前進(jìn)的動力。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“明確目標(biāo)，全力以赴”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀憬诘囊粋€目標(biāo)是什么，你為什么確定這個目標(biāo)，以及為實現(xiàn)這個目標(biāo)做出的努力。要求：不少于50詞。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語：makeprogress,practice,keep,effort提示問題：·Whatisyourgoal?Whydoyousetthisgoal?Whatdoyoudotoachievethisgoal?Settinggoalsisveryimportantforeveryone.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2022北京東城初三一模）中國有一些傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，如春節(jié)、中秋節(jié)和端午節(jié)（theDragonBoatFestival）。每個節(jié)日都有不同的習(xí)俗和意義。假如你是李華，你校英語社團(tuán)正在開展線上國際交流活動，其公眾號計劃推送有關(guān)中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的系列內(nèi)容。請你用英語給公眾號寫一篇文稿，介紹一個中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，包括時間，慶祝方式，以及這個節(jié)日的意義。要求：不少于50詞。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語：gettogether,dinner,enjoy,wish提示問題：·Whenisthefestival?Howdopeopleusuallycelebratethefestival?Whyisthefestivalimportant?TherearesometraditionalfestivalsinChina.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2022北京房山初三一模）從下面兩個題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。題目①假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友Tom暑假要來北京體驗中國傳統(tǒng)文化，請根據(jù)問題回復(fù)郵件，設(shè)計北京一日游活動。請告知你們要去哪里以及原因和具體的活動安排。提示詞語:traditionalChineseculture,teahouse,Pekingopera,papercutting,hutong提示問題:●Whereareyougoing?●Whyareyougoingthere?●Whatactivitiesareyougoingtodothere?DearTom,I’mverygladthatyouwillcometoBeijingthissummervacation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua題目②最近多地新冠疫情出現(xiàn)反彈，全國人民眾志成城，攜手抗疫。作為中學(xué)生，在做好個人防護(hù)的同時，也應(yīng)積極參與抗疫活動。某英文網(wǎng)站在開展以”全民抗疫，人人有責(zé)”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龊脗€人防護(hù)的，并說說你打算為抗擊疫情做些什么。提示詞語:COVID-19virus(新冠病毒),vaccinate(接種疫苗),mask(口罩),fightagainst提示問題:●Howdoyouprotectyourselffromthevirus?●Whatwillyoudotofightagainsttheepidemic(疫情)?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2022北京延慶初三一模）北京2022年冬奧會成功舉辦，我們見證了賽場上運(yùn)動員的奮力拼搏，也見證了場外無數(shù)工作人員的辛勤付出。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“拼搏、付出”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闵钪信ζ床囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括你努力拼搏的事情和經(jīng)過，以及你的感受。提示詞語：decide,keep,succeed,proud提示問題：●Whatdidyoudo?●Howdidyoufeel?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2022北京順義初三一模）閱讀是成長的基石，閱讀讓人生精彩。為助力打造“書香校園”，你校英語社團(tuán)正在舉辦以“熱愛閱讀”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阃ǔＷx什么書，以及閱讀給你帶來的好處。提示詞語：knowledge,improve,meaningful提示問題：?Whatdoyouusuallyread??Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromreading?Thereisnodoubtthatreadingplaysanimportantroleinourlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2022北京海淀初三一模）“凡事預(yù)則立，不預(yù)則廢?！蹦秤⑽木W(wǎng)站正在開展主題為“做一個有準(zhǔn)備的人”的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勈鞘裁唇?jīng)歷讓你意識到準(zhǔn)備的重要性，以及你從中獲得的益處。提示詞語：competition,worried,improve,confidence,proud提示問題：Whatexperiencetaughtyoutheimportanceofpreparation?Pleasedescribeit.Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromtheexperience?Beingpreparedisimportant.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2022北京海淀初三一模）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校英語角留言板本月的主題為“致我最想感謝的人”，請你用英語寫一則留言，談?wù)勀阕钕敫兄x誰，以及你感謝他/她的理由。提示詞語：support,encourage,advice,helpful,patience提示問題：Whodoyouwanttothank?Whydoyouwanttothankhim/her?Thisisathank-younoteto____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．（2022北京房山初三一模）在蘇翊鳴北京冬奧奪冠后，記者得知他收到最好的生日禮物是父母在他四歲時送他的雪板?？梢娮詈玫亩Y物并不在于它的價格是否昂貴，而在于它的特殊意義。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“TheBestGift”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語給該網(wǎng)站寫一篇征文，談?wù)勀闶盏降淖詈枚Y物是什么，誰送給你這件禮物及你為什么認(rèn)為這是最好的禮物。提示詞語：book,father,love,clever,happy...提示問題：?Whatisthebestgiftyouhavereceived??Whogaveittoyou??Whydoyouthinkitisthebestgift?Sofar,Ihavereceivedalotofgifts.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

參考答案1．Onepossibleversion:Problemsareoftenaroundus.Ilovemyparentsandtheylovemeaswell,butwealsohavedisagreementsandsometimeswemakeeachotherunhappy.Oneday,Ispenttoomuchtimeonmycellphonebecauseoftalkingabouttheschoolprojectwithmyclassmates.MymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.IknewsheworriedaboutmesoIdidn’tclosemydoorthistime.IexplainedthereasonandtoldherthatIunderstoodherworries.Shesaidsorrytomebecauseofhermisunderstanding.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofcommunicatingandunderstanding.Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.Inaddition,takingresponsibilityformyactionsandshowingtrustworthinesscanhelpmebuildabetterrelationshipwithmyparents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：一般過去時、一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示信息，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹自己與父母之間發(fā)生的一個沖突及自己的處理方式；第三步，闡述自己從這次沖突中懂得的道理。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkingabout...with...與……談?wù)摗趙orriedabout擔(dān)心③saidsorryto向……道歉④takingresponsibilityfor對……負(fù)責(zé)⑤buildabetterrelationshipwith建立更好的關(guān)系[高分句型]①M(fèi)ymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）②Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.（that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，動詞ing作主語）2．例文：It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.Lastsummerholiday,IlearnedsomefirstaidknowledgesuchasCPRandHeimlichManeuver.Oneday,mylittersisterwaschokedbyacandyandcouldn’tbreathe.Seeingthis,IthoughtofwhatIlearntlastsummerholidayshortly.Then,Istoodbehindmysisterandappliedpressuretoherabdomen.Fortunately,thecandyinherthroatwasspitout.Atlast,Icalled120forfurthercheck.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示問題完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹自己學(xué)以致用的一次經(jīng)歷；第三步，闡述自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①suchas比如②applysthtosth將……運(yùn)用……③thinkof想起[高分句型]Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.(定語從句)3．例文Readingisveryimportantinourlife.Ilikereadingverymuch,especiallyabouthistory,andbenefitalotfromit.Firstly,Igainplentyofknowledgeabouthistorywhichbroadensmyhorizon.Besides,throughreading,Iknowalotoffamouspeopleinourhistory.Theirstoriesencouragemetofacedifficultiesbravely.Inaword,it’smeaningfulformetoreadbooks.Readingcannotonlyincreasemyknowledgeandexperience,butalsohelpbuildmycharacter.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文要求從讀物和收獲等方面介紹閱讀的好處，注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，先介紹自己經(jīng)常閱讀的書；第二步，介紹從閱讀中獲得的收獲；第三步，總結(jié)閱讀的好處。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①benefit...from獲益②Inaword總之③notonly...butalso不但……而且……[高分句型]①Inaword,it’smeaningfulformetoreadbooks.（it固定句型）②Firstly,Igainplentyofknowledgeabouthistorywhichbroadensmyhorizon.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）4．范文Askingforhelpplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Recently,IfacedaproblematschoolthatIcouldn’tsolveonmyown.Ifeltstuckandunsureofhowtoproceed.That’swhenIdecidedtoreachouttoaclassmateforassistance.Iexplainedmysituationtomyclassmate,andtheylistenedpatientlyandofferedadvice.Theyencouragedmetobreakdowntheproblemintosmallerpartsandtacklethemonebyone.Withtheirguidance,Iwasabletomakeprogressandimprovemywork.NotonlydidIsolvetheproblem,butIalsogainedconfidenceinmyabilities.Ilearnedthataskingforhelpisnotasignofweaknessbutratherasignofstrength.Byseekinghelp,weopenourselvesuptonewperspectivesandopportunitiesforgrowth.Inconclusion,askingforhelpisavaluablelifeskillthatcanleadtopersonalandprofessionaldevelopment.Itisimportanttorememberthatweallfacechallenges,andthereisnoshameinseekingassistance.Letusembracethepowerofpositivecollaborationandstriveforsuccesstogether.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇議論文，為短文投稿。②時態(tài)：一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意在描述自己經(jīng)歷的時候需使用一般過去時，在表達(dá)個人觀點(diǎn)的時候可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖?？梢杂梦易罱鎸Φ囊粋€問題開頭，闡述自己的疑惑和困擾。第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。詳述自己經(jīng)歷的一件事，即在同學(xué)的指導(dǎo)和幫助下，問題被很好地解決。第三步，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。在經(jīng)歷了“積極求助”這件事兒以后，我認(rèn)識到了“積極求助”的價值。第四步，總結(jié)并發(fā)起倡議。倡導(dǎo)讀者“擁抱積極合作的力量，共同爭取成功”。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①askforhelp尋求幫助②breakdown分解③makeprogress取得進(jìn)展④inconclusion總之⑤positivecollaboration積極合作[高分句型]①NotonlydidIsolvetheproblem,butIalsogainedconfidenceinmyabilities.（notonly...butalso用于連接兩個表示并列關(guān)系的成分，著重強(qiáng)調(diào)后者。）②Itisimportanttorememberthatweallfacechallenges,andthereisnoshameinseekingassistance.（it作形式主語引導(dǎo)的句型，后面跟形容詞加不定式，Itis+形容詞+todo）5．例文Dreamisveryimportanttoeveryone.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ishouldhaveareasonableaimandstudyhard.Mygoalnowistoenterthebestuniversityandbecomeadoctorinthefuture.Iknowit’shardworkandIwillcomeacrossmanydifficulties.Butnomatterwhattheyare,I’llkeepworkingonitandnevergiveup.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“夢想”展開；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充和發(fā)揮，注意語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，以“夢想對大家都很重要”引出下文對自己夢想的介紹；第二步，表明自己的夢想是什么，以及自己想如何實現(xiàn)夢想，可從學(xué)習(xí)和努力方面展開，注意語法的正確；第三步，結(jié)尾總結(jié)，希望自己能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)夢想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inthefuture未來②comeacross遇到③keepdoingsth一直做某事④cometrue實現(xiàn)[高分句型]①M(fèi)ygoalnowistoenterthebestuniversityandbecomeadoctorinthefuture.（連詞and連接并列的短語，作句子表語）②Nomatterwhattheyare,I’llkeepworkingonitandnevergiveup.（nomatterwhat引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）6．例文Makingaplanisimportant.Itcanchangeourhabitsandhelpusdothingsbetter.Lastsummerholiday,Imadeaplaninmystudy.Everyday,Ifollowedittodomyhomeworkinthemorningandreadbooksatnight.Thoughitwashardatthebeginning,Iencouragedmyselftosticktotheplan.Finally,Inotonlyfinishedallthetasksontimebutalsofeltthesenseofsuccess.Bydoingso,Ihaveimprovedmyselfandbecomemoreconfident.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“計劃的重要性”展開；②時態(tài)：一般過去時為主；③提示：要點(diǎn)提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充發(fā)揮，注意語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，以“定計劃能改變我們的習(xí)慣和幫助我們做事情更好”引出下文；第二步，介紹自己定制過的學(xué)習(xí)或生活方面的計劃，凸顯定計劃給自己帶來的好處，注意時態(tài)應(yīng)以過去式為主，保持語法正確；第三步，結(jié)尾表達(dá)自己從中學(xué)到的好處。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事②atthebeginning開始③encouragesbtodosth鼓勵某人做某事④ontime準(zhǔn)時[高分句型]①Inotonlyfinishedallthetasksontimebutalsofeltthesenseofsuccess.（連詞notonly...butalso連接的并列謂語）②Thoughitwashardatthebeginning,Iencouragedmyselftosticktotheplan.（though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）7．例文：MyMostPrecious(珍貴的)TreasureEveryonehashisorherprecioustreasure.Ithinkmymostprecioustreasureistheselflesslovemyparentshavegivenme.WheneverImakealittleprogress,theyfeelhappyandproudofme.WhenIamill,theytakegoodcareofmedayandnight.WhenIamintrouble,theytalkwithmeandencouragemenottogiveup.WhenIdosomethingwrong,theypatientlyguidemetorealizewhatisrightandwhatiswrong.Inaword,myparentstrytheirbesttogivemethebest.It’stheselflessloveofmyparentsthatmakesmegrowuphealthily.AndIbecomemoreandmoreconfident.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：方向已給出，寫作時注意表述清晰，做到無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，詳細(xì)描述自己最珍貴的財富，并給出例子；第二步，給出原因；第三步，總結(jié)全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dayandnight日以繼夜②inaword總而言之③beproudof為……感到驕傲[高分句型]①Ithinkmymostprecioustreasureistheselflesslovemyparentshavegivenme.（賓語從句：由that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，其中that已省略；定語從句：由that引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾先行詞selflesslove，其中that已省略）②WheneverImakealittleprogress,theyfeelhappyandproudofme.（狀語從句：由whenever引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）③WhenIamill,theytakegoodcareofmedayandnight.（狀語從句：由when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）④WhenIdosomethingwrong,theypatientlyguidemetorealizewhatisrightandwhatiswrong.（狀語從句：由when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；賓語從句：由what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）⑤It’stheselflessloveofmyparentsthatmakesmegrowuphealthily.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句：itis+強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that...）8．范文：Settinggoalsisveryimportantforeveryone.Mygoalistoloseweightforthesakeofhealth.AsIenterthemiddlehighschool,Iofteneatsnacksorjunkfoodwhichleadstotheincreaseofmyweight.What’smore,Ioftenbreatheheavilyafterrunningforashortwhile.Toachievethegoal,Iwillgorunningforhalfanhourinthemorning.Andrefusetoeatanyjunkfood.Beforegoingtobed,Iwillonlyeatvegetablesorfruit.Now,Ihavemademuchprogressinlosingweight.IamsureIcanachievemygoal.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求寫一篇與“明確目標(biāo)，全力以赴”相關(guān)的英語短文；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時；采用第一人稱口吻；可直接采用1段落格式，闡述清楚自己的目標(biāo)、為什么設(shè)置這個目標(biāo)已經(jīng)如何去實現(xiàn)它，注意無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。9．范文：TherearesometraditionalfestivalsinChina.MyfavoriteistheMid-autumnFestival,becauseit’sthemostbeautifulfestivalinmyeyes.Nowletmeintroducethefestivaltoyou.TheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thofAugustinthelunarcalendar.DuringtheMid-autumnFestival,weusuallygettogetherwithfamilyandfriendsintheevening,enjoyingthebrightfullmoonandeatingmooncakes.Thefestivalisveryimportant.Itnotonlyshowsakindofemphasisonfamilybutalsoshowstherespectfornature.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求寫一篇與傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日相關(guān)的英語短文；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時；采用第一人稱口吻和第三人稱口吻；可采用2段落格式；第一段：闡述節(jié)日的時間和如何慶祝這個節(jié)日；第二段：闡述這個節(jié)日為什么重要。10．例文：TheCOVID-19virusisverydangerous,weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselves.IwearamaskwhenIgotoacrowdedplace.Iwashmyhandsfrequentlyandproperly.Iamvaccinatedontime.Tofightagainsttheepidemic,Imustkeepupsomegoodhabits,suchasplayingsportsandgettingenoughsleep.Imuststayathometoavoidclosecontactwithpeople.Overcometheshort-termdifficultiesandlong-termsafetywillcome.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求以李華身份寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勔咔槠陂g，作為中學(xué)生，如何做好個人防護(hù)，并談?wù)勛约耗転榭箵粢咔樽鍪裁础?.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時寫作。書寫時應(yīng)圍繞主題，分層講述——如何做好個人防護(hù)，能為戰(zhàn)勝疫情做什么；要分點(diǎn)闡述，使上下文之間邏輯清楚；注意短語、語法的正確使用和單詞拼寫。適當(dāng)使用連詞提高文章的檔次。11．例文：Iusedtobeveryshyandafraidtogiveaspeechinpublic.SoIdecidedtostartfromtalkingtomyselfinfrontofamirroreverydaywhenIcamebackfromschool.Besides,Itookeverychancetotalkinpublicatschool,suchassharingmyopinionsandanswerquestionsinclass.Sometimes,Imademistakes,butitdidn’tmatter.Istillkepttrying.What’smore,Itriedtoincreasemyconfidenceindifferentdailysituations,suchasbuyingticket,orderingfoodandaskingfordirections.Gradually,Iwasn’tshyanymore,andIbecamemoreconfident.Nowgivingaspeechinpublicisapieceofcakeforme.I’mreallyproudofmyself.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述自己拼搏，讓自己改變的經(jīng)歷以及自己的感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)以一般過去時為主