1.4讀后續(xù)寫-備考2020年山東新高考英語(yǔ)題型變化解讀

1.4讀后續(xù)寫備考2020年山東新高考英語(yǔ)題型變化解讀2019年11月30日—12月3日，山東省組織了全省統(tǒng)一的新高考模擬考試。這是山東省進(jìn)入新課改后，首次舉行的全省考生參加的大型考試。在這次考試中，題型發(fā)生了巨大的變化，據(jù)說(shuō)，這次考試的命題是在教育部考試中心的指導(dǎo)下命制的，這對(duì)于2020年高考的變化或透露著某種程度的暗示也未可知?！绢}型解讀

讀后續(xù)寫】1.題型介紹◆選材特點(diǎn)（1）所需閱讀的短文詞數(shù)在350以內(nèi)；（2）多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主，故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。◆評(píng)分參考閱卷時(shí)主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：（1）與所給短文及段落開頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度；（2）內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所給關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的覆蓋情況；（3）應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；（4）上下文的連貫性。注意：（1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右（詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分）；（2）應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；（3）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；（4）續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。2.考查能力讀后續(xù)寫是一種將閱讀與寫作緊密結(jié)合的考查形式，旨在考查學(xué)生的綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。與應(yīng)用文不同，故事續(xù)寫除了要求學(xué)生掌握豐富的詞匯和句式外，還注重學(xué)生的內(nèi)容構(gòu)思和情節(jié)銜接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四個(gè)方面：一是把握短文關(guān)鍵信息和語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)的能力。學(xué)生需要了解給定短文的主要內(nèi)容，清楚其關(guān)鍵詞和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的使用情況，并通過(guò)續(xù)寫短文表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。二是語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確性和豐富性。期望學(xué)生在詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的使用方面準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)，能夠根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要使用較為高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，閱卷老師會(huì)感覺這個(gè)學(xué)生很有水平。三是對(duì)語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)的把控能力?？疾閷W(xué)生對(duì)上下文邏輯關(guān)系的掌握情況，希望學(xué)生續(xù)寫的短文語(yǔ)句連貫、有序。四是創(chuàng)造性思維能力。這是對(duì)學(xué)生續(xù)寫短文內(nèi)容得要求，期望學(xué)生續(xù)寫的短文具有較豐富的內(nèi)容。該試題具有一定的開放性，要求學(xué)生詳細(xì)和生動(dòng)地描述情景、態(tài)度和感情，符合課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的要求和學(xué)生的能力水平3．續(xù)寫特點(diǎn)讀后續(xù)寫，簡(jiǎn)言之，就是閱讀完一篇還未寫完的文章之后，根據(jù)要求和提示把這篇文章未寫完部分補(bǔ)充完整，使之渾然一體。它一方面很好地考查考生對(duì)所學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)的實(shí)際運(yùn)用能力，而另一方面，它也培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的發(fā)散思維能力。根據(jù)《考試說(shuō)明》該部分的規(guī)定，考生在續(xù)寫文章時(shí)，要注意續(xù)寫部分＂與所給短文及段落開頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度＂，＂內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所標(biāo)出關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用情況＂，＂應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性＂以及＂上下文的連貫性＂。根據(jù)這些規(guī)定，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)讀后續(xù)寫有如下特點(diǎn)：（1）讀后續(xù)寫不是隨心所欲，是要在引導(dǎo)語(yǔ)（開頭語(yǔ)）和提示詞的幫助下完成續(xù)寫部分。如《考試說(shuō)明》樣題中規(guī)定＂應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)（10處）＂。這些關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)類似于傳統(tǒng)寫作中的要點(diǎn)提示，如人物、地點(diǎn)、事件，但是不同點(diǎn)在于這些關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)并不是全用。這樣考生可根據(jù)自己的理解有很大的自主權(quán)。另外，所續(xù)寫部分不能脫離各自段落的首句開頭語(yǔ)，即：不能另起爐灶。這些開頭語(yǔ)與傳統(tǒng)寫作中的開頭語(yǔ)類似，在某種程度上引導(dǎo)你的思路向哪方面發(fā)展。（2）續(xù)寫短文多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主，故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。這樣考生能夠根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)，順著原來(lái)文章的思路續(xù)寫文章，并適當(dāng)發(fā)散。（3）讀后續(xù)寫要求讀寫并重。與閱讀理解題一樣，讀后續(xù)寫同樣需要對(duì)本篇文章精確理解，這樣所續(xù)寫部分才不至于偏離主題，就這方面而言有點(diǎn)類似閱讀理解題中對(duì)文章后續(xù)發(fā)展的推斷，如＂Whatwouldhappennext?＂。（4）所給文章的未完部分的思路和內(nèi)容并不一定是唯一的，考生可以根據(jù)自己對(duì)文章的理解，從而對(duì)文章的結(jié)尾有不同的詮釋。如《考試說(shuō)明》中讀后續(xù)寫的樣題的結(jié)尾，考生可以理解為這個(gè)年輕人是銀行搶劫者，而Arthur因此成為一個(gè)大英雄；考生也可以理解為這個(gè)年輕人不是一個(gè)銀行搶劫者，結(jié)果產(chǎn)生了誤會(huì)?！緲宇}展示】【山東省2020年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試(模擬卷)】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray(流浪)dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseetheliteone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.1wentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest“Shallwekeephimwithus?"Iquestionedmymom.Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Para.1：Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.【范文】DayspassedonandoneeveningwhenSpottyreturnedfromhislongwalk,heappearedveryexhausted.Hecametomyroomandsatnearme.ItwasthenthatIsawhishindlegwasinjuredandwasbleeding.Icalledoutmymotherandshequicklytiedabandagearoundhislegandgavehimfoodtoeat.Iwasveryupset.Butthenextday,Spottywasuptohisusualpranksthoughhelimpedabit.AfterthisincidentmyrelationwithSpottybecamemoreintense.Ireallyadmiredhimalotforhiscourage.Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Wecameoutandsawthathewasbarkingcontinuouslyheadingsomewhere.AftersometimeSpottybecamequiet.Ipattedhimonhisbackandcameinside.Thenextdaymorning,myheartskippedabeatwhenIdidn’tseeSpotty.Isearchedforhimineachandeverycornerbuthewasnowhere.Andthistimehehadgoneandwouldnevercomeback.Icriedandwaitedforhim.Wewaitedforonelongweek.Buttherewerenosignsofhim.ThenonedaymyDadgottransferredtoMumbai.WeshiftedbacktoMumbai.WhatwouldhavehappenedtoSpotty?Wouldhehavedied?Theseweretheonlyquestionsinmymind,buttheyallremainedunansweredforever.【解題技巧】續(xù)寫步驟（1）精讀文章，確定文章線索。每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫作思路，通過(guò)精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫作線索，如是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索等，這樣有利于考生＂順藤摸瓜（結(jié)尾）＂。（2）仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫要求。一般短文后面的＂注意＂都有對(duì)此次短文續(xù)寫的具體要求，如詞數(shù)限制、使用幾處下劃線關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)、續(xù)寫段落的首句提示，這樣考生做到＂心中有數(shù)＂。（3）回扣原文，揣摩續(xù)寫思路。根據(jù)文章后面的要求，再次快速回讀短文，抓住文章的思路，結(jié)合段首的提示語(yǔ)，最終確定續(xù)寫段落的思路，同時(shí)結(jié)合文章劃線詞語(yǔ)提示，確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。（4）擬寫草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句。在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后，最關(guān)鍵的就是結(jié)合提示語(yǔ)或者文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞擬寫草稿。擬寫時(shí)，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語(yǔ)言的豐富性，并通過(guò)句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。（5）標(biāo)出續(xù)寫部分中使用到的原材料中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。這一點(diǎn)可以幫助考生自己檢查關(guān)鍵詞的使用情況并根據(jù)情況做出修改。最后在謄寫文字時(shí)，務(wù)必做到＂字跡工整、清晰＂。備考建議面對(duì)讀后續(xù)寫這一新寫作題型，在了解了其特點(diǎn)和寫作技巧之后，考生只要加以適度練習(xí)，對(duì)此新題型可以做到得心應(yīng)手。1.充分利用記敘文故事類的閱讀理解或者完形填空。考生在做此類文章的試題時(shí)，讀到適當(dāng)?shù)奈恢?，可以短暫停止，根?jù)已讀部分文章的脈絡(luò)，對(duì)文章進(jìn)行發(fā)散思維，設(shè)想可能的幾種結(jié)尾，最后對(duì)照原文的結(jié)尾，看自己的設(shè)想是否與原文一致。2.經(jīng)常實(shí)施微型化訓(xùn)練，也就是對(duì)所讀文章的某一段落進(jìn)行設(shè)想。根據(jù)某一段落的首句提示，結(jié)合文章的上文對(duì)該段進(jìn)行合理設(shè)想，具體推斷該段可能要講述的內(nèi)容。3.與傳統(tǒng)寫作類似，續(xù)寫文章更加要注意句與句之間的連接詞，甚至是冠詞的暗示作用。如《考試說(shuō)明》的樣題中續(xù)寫部分的第二段＂thePoliceStation＂中的＂the＂表明在上一段中已經(jīng)提到，同時(shí)后面的and表明前后之間是并列關(guān)系。4.進(jìn)行適度專題化練習(xí)。俗話說(shuō)，熟能生巧。對(duì)于讀后續(xù)寫這一新題型也是如此。通過(guò)適度地練習(xí)，可以進(jìn)一步熟知該種題型的特色，更好地掌握該種題型的寫作技巧，更有效地調(diào)動(dòng)傳統(tǒng)寫作的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從而寫出一篇優(yōu)美的續(xù)寫短文。需要注意的是，后續(xù)寫補(bǔ)全的是語(yǔ)篇，而非單詞或短語(yǔ)。5.在平時(shí)的教學(xué)中，老師要幫助學(xué)生釋放創(chuàng)造力和想象力，激發(fā)表達(dá)動(dòng)機(jī)。【通關(guān)演練】1閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；3.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。LastSundayafternoon,SandraandIwereeagertomeetupwithamanonDetroit’seastsidetohelphimgetreadyforajobinterviewthisweek.Butontheway,wespottedadoglyingneartheroadnexttohisowner.Wethoughthe’dbeenhitbyacar.Myfriend,SandraAbrahamian,andIhadassistedanimalrescuegroupsbeforeandwethoughttheremightbesomethingwecoulddo,sowequicklypulledovertohelp.Hisowner,awomantoldusthedog’snameisBosco,andshewaswalkinghimoveramileintheheattohernewhome.ShesaidBoscowasanoutsidedogandnoonewouldgivehimaridetohernewplace.That’swhensheandafrienddecidedtowalktheentireway.Hewasgoingfromalifeonachaininonebackyardtoanother.ShesaidBoscowashavingtroublebreathingalongtheway,buttheythoughthecouldmakeit.Butjustablockawayfromtheirdestination,Boscofelldown.Wecouldtellhewassufferingfromheatstroke(中暑).Shetoldushehadthrownupandcouldnolongerstand.Boscowasoutofbreathquickly;hisdrool(口水)wasalsothick.Bosco’sownersaidshewantedtogivehimawaybecauseshedidn’thavetimeforhim.Shesaidhewouldneverbeallowedintohernew"home"becauseherchildrenhaveallergies(過(guò)敏癥)andsheworriedhewoulddirtythecarpet.ImadeacalltoKristinaRinaldiofDetroitDogRescuetoaskiftheycouldhelpBoscobecauseitwasclearthathewasgoingtodiewithoutemergencycare.Toourhappiness,Rinaldisaidtheycouldhelp.AtonceshetoldthepeopleatOaklandVeterinaryReferralServicesthatadogwhichneededcriticalcarewasbeingrushedinandtheymustbereadytotrytheirbesttosavehim.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；3.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1：SandradrovewhileIstayedinthebackseattryingtocomfortBosco.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：SoBoscoisnowbeingcalledRoscoe,whosecriticalcareandrecoverywereestimatedtobeseveralthousanddollars.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。WhenIsawhertonightshesmiledandrecognizedme.Ismiledbackather.Shewaslookingmorerelaxedeventhoughshewasstillbusydoingherjob.Ihavenoticedherseveraltimesthislastfewmonthsandshealwayslookssomuchhappiernow.TonightwhenItalkedwithherInoticedhernametag.HernameisPamela.Pamelaworksattheexpresscheckoutsinabusysupermarket.Shedealswithproblemswhentheself-servicecheckoutexperiencesaproblem(nopriceonproduct,machineproblems,etc.).Shemonitorsthesecheckoutsandusuallyhashardlydealtwithonecomplaintbeforeanotheriscreated.WhenIfirsttalkedtoPamela,IhadcalledhertothecheckoutIwasusing.Therewasn’tanyproblemwiththecheckoutthough.MyproblemorshouldIsayconcernwasaboutPamela.Shelookedtiredandwasunderalotofstressasshequicklymovedfromonecheckouttothenext.It’sabitofafire-fightingjob.ItoldPamelathatsheneededtoslowdown.Itoldhershewasn’tgettingpaidenoughtobeworkingashardasshewasworking.Itoldherthatwe,thecustomers,couldwaitanditwasverybadforherhealthtobeputtingherselfundersuchpressure.Itoldherthatourexpectationswerenotashardastheonesshesetforherself.Pamelatoldmeshewouldslowdown.IcouldtellshewastouchedthatnotonlydidInoticeherstressbutIchosetotalktoheraboutitandwasconcernedforherhealth.Igentlytoldherthingshadtochange.ItoldherIwouldbelookingoutforherinfuturetoseeifshehadtakenmyadviceonboard.Shesmiledandsaid,"IpromisethatIwillnexttime."注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；3.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1：WhenIsawhershewasstilldoingherjobbuttherewassuchadifference.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Iamproudofmyself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。It’snoteasytodiewhenyouareonlyfifteen.ThosewerethewordsthatbeganthestoryIheardfromRobertWhite,aNorthCarolinafactoryworker.HeandhiswifewerevisitingtheirdaughterLeeinthehospitalastheydideveryevening.Sheknewshehadanillnessthatwouldnotspareher.Shesufferedalotbutnevercomplained.Shehadalreadyacceptedhergreatjourneyintotheunknown.Thisparticularevening,shesuddenlysaid,"Ialwaysdreamedofworkinginabigoceanparkwithdolphins.I’velovedthemsinceIwaslittle.Istilldreamofswimmingwiththem,freeandhappyintheopensea."She’dneveraskedforanything,butshesaidwithallthestrengthshehad,"Daddy,Iwanttoswimintheopenseaamongthedolphinsjustonce.MaybethenIwouldn’tbesoscaredofdying."Itseemedlikeanimpossibledream,butshehungontoit.Robertandhisfamilytalkeditoveranddecidedtodoeverythingtheycould.TheyphonedaresearchcenterintheFloridaKeys."Comeatonce,"theysaid.WhentheyarrivedinGrassyKey,Leedidn’twanttorestforaminuteandbeggedherparentstotakehertothedolphins.Roberttookherouttowardthedolphins,NatandTursi,whowereplayingaboutthirtyfeetawayfromthem.Atfirsttheyseemeddistractedanduninterested,butwhenLeecalledthemsoftlybyname,theyrespondedwithouthesitation.Natcameoverfirst,raisedhisheadandgaveherakissontheendofhernose.ThenTursicameoverhappily.Asecondlatertheypickedherupwiththeirmightyfins(鰭)andcarriedherouttoseawiththem."ItfeelslikeI’mflying!"criedLee,laughingwithdelight.Lee’sfamilyhadn’theardherlaughlikethatsinceshebecameill.ThedolphinsstayedwithLeeformorethananhour,alwaystender,alwaysattentive,andalwaysresponsivetoherwishes.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；3.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1：Maybeit’struethattheyaremoreintelligentandsensitivecreaturesthanman.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：Thenextdayshewastooweaktogetoutofbed,butshewhisperedtoherfather.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.【范文】Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.MyhorseturnedtothelefttoavoidthelittlerabbitasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.Thenmydadturnedaroundandshouted,“Holdon!”Allofasuddenthehorsebegantorun.Mydadtriedtokeepupbehindus.Forafewminutesmyhorsesloweddowntoatrotandthenstoppedbesideariver.Ilookedaroundandrealizedthatwewerewayoffthetrack.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Luckilythestarscameoutandgaveusalittlelightwhenwewerelookingforthewaytothefarmhouse.Afterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhours,wesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepinthedistance.MydadandIbothrodeourhorsestowardsthesoundofthesheep.AswegotcloserwesawUnclePaulwithaflashlightwavingusover.Whatanight!2【范文】Paragraph1：SandradrovewhileIstayedinthebackseattryingtocomfortBosco.Ithoughtwelosthimacoupleoftimeswhenhewasseeminglyoutofbreathandhiseyesseemedtoclose.Bythetimewearrived,Boscowaswheeledintotheanimalcarecentertoreceiveemergencycare.Boscowasputonoxygenandwastakengoodcareofbystaffthereandwewaitedanxiouslyforthedogtogetoutofdanger.RinaldisaidanotherdoginDetroitDogRescuehadalreadybeennamedBosco,andshewantedthisnewmembertohaveanewnameforhisnewlife.Paragraph2：SoBoscoisnowbeingcalledRoscoe,whosecriticalcareandrecoverywereestimatedtobeseveralthousanddollars.ItwouldbedifficultforRoscoe’snewhometocoverthecostsasanon-profitorganization.Thankfully,manypeoplewhoknewRoscoe’sstoryonDetroitDogRescue’sFacebookpagedonatedmoneytohiscare.Withthehelpofsupporters,DetroitDogRescuemanagedtomakeit.OnceRoscoewasinastablestate,SandraandIreturnedtoouroriginalmission,knowingwehadalreadybeengiventhechancetohelponedesperatesoul.3【范文】Paragraph1：WhenIs