山西省2024八年級英語上冊Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation寫作能力提升練課件新版人教新目標版

UNIT1Wheredidyougoonvacation？UNIT1寫作能力提升練目

錄CONTENTS01寫作任務(wù)02思路點撥03寫作實踐旅游能開闊我們的視野，增長我們的見識，放松我們的

心情。同學們，在這個悠閑的暑假，你是游歷了祖國的名山

大川，還是參觀了歷史名城？請以“MySummerVacation”

為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文介紹你自己是如何度過暑假

的，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋W會分段描寫，本文要求介紹兩部分內(nèi)容：1.介紹你自

己是如何度過暑假的；2.談你的感受。因此，本文至少要分

兩段。為了能更好地導入正題，建議在敘事前加開篇的

beginning。[謀篇布局][遣詞造句]

beginning＜基礎(chǔ)句式＞

Iliketravellingbecauseitcanmakemerelax.＜提升句式＞

Asthesayinggoes，

“Readtenthousand

books，traveltenthousandmiles.”SoIalwaystravelalot

duringmyvacation.(引用諺語“讀萬卷書，行萬里路”)＜升華句式＞

Travellingis

agoodwaytoopenupoureyesand

relaxourmind.(整合信息，用不定式從精神層面說明旅游的

好處)

body1.

＜基礎(chǔ)句式＞

Thissummervacation，IwenttoBeijing.My

parentswenttherewithme.Wewenttherebytrain.＜提升句式＞

Thissummervacation，IwenttoBeijingwith

myparents.Wetookthetrainthere.＜升華句式＞

MywholefamilywenttoBeijingby

trainduringthissummervacation.(盡量整合信息，用

長句代替短句)2.

＜基礎(chǔ)句式＞

Weatesomedeliciousfoodthere.＜提升句式＞

Weatesomespecialfoodthere.Itwas

delicious.(special指出是特色，強調(diào)其味美)＜升華句式＞

Wedidn’tmissthespecialfoodthere，

especiallyBeijingDuck.Howdeliciousitwas！(使用miss和感嘆句，表達情感更加強烈)

ending＜基礎(chǔ)句式＞

Thetripwasveryexciting.Ican’tforgetit.＜提升句式＞

ThetripwassoexcitingthatIcan’tforgetit.

(so…that充分表達了旅行令人難以忘記)＜升華句式＞

Ifeltsoexcitedafterenjoyingitslonghistoryaswellasitsbeautifulnaturalsights.Iwillvisititagainin

thefuture.(aswellas強調(diào)讓作者興奮的不僅有美景還有其歷

史文化，升華了文章的中心思想)MySummerVacationTravellingisagoodwaytoopenupoureyesandrelaxour

mind.MywholefamilywenttoBeijingbytrainduringthissummer

vacation.Itisnotonlythecapitalofourcountrybutalsoacity

withalonghistory.So，therearequiteafewoldplacesof

interest.Wecouldn’twaittovisitthePalaceMuseumfirsttosee

whatlifewaslikeinthepast.Onthesecondday，wewenttothe[連句成篇]GreatWall.Whenweclimbedonit，wecouldenjoythebeautifulviewbelow.Asfordinner，

wedidn’tmissthespecialfoodthere，especiallyBeijingDuck.

Howdeliciousitwas！ThemostspecialpartwasthatwevisitedPekingUniversitybecauseitismydreamtostudythere.Ifeltsoexcitedafterenjoyingitslonghistoryaswellasits

beautifulnaturalsights.Iwillvisititagaininthefuture.[太原期中]每個人的記憶深處都有一份屬于家鄉(xiāng)(hometown)的回憶?，F(xiàn)代的高樓大廈，古香古色的老街老巷，難以忘懷的特色美食……每當別人問起我們的家鄉(xiāng)時，我們總會面帶微笑，侃侃而談。在我們的家鄉(xiāng)山西，你最喜歡的地方是哪里？為什么？請講述你在那里的一次美好經(jīng)歷。要求：

不少于80詞。

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MyfavoriteplaceinmyhometownisMountTai.Itis

thebestplacetogoonweekends.Itisbeautifulandtheairis

clear.

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LastSunday，myfriendsandItookthebustoMount

Tai.Wegotthereatabout8：00a.m.Wegottothetopof

themountainexcitedly.Weenjoyedthemostbeautiful

sceneryandwedrewpicturestogether.Atnoon，wewentto

TaishanRestaurant.Ithadthemostdeliciousfood.After

lunch，wewenttotheguestcenterandtookpartinsome

interestingactivities，suchastouhu，andtryingonHanfu.

Wereallyhadawonderfulandhappyday.

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