高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+小鎮(zhèn)少年的舞臺(tái)逐夢之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)小鎮(zhèn)少年的舞臺(tái)逐夢之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AteenageboynamedJoellivedinasmallfarawaytown.Joelwasanambitiousrapperwhospentcountlesshoursinhisbedroomwritinglyrics(歌詞)andperfectinghisflow.Butheneverperformedonstage.Hisdreamwastomakeitbiginthemusicindustryandsharehispassionforrapwiththeworld.Hehopedthatonedayhisdreamwouldbecomeareality.Littledidheknowthisdreamwasabouttocometrueinthemostunexpectedway.Onesunnyafternoon,Joelwaswalkingthroughhisneighborhoodwhenheheardboomingmusiccomingfromanearbypark.Interested,hefollowedthesoundanddiscoveredacrowdofpeoplegatheredaroundastage.Tohissurprise,thefamousrapperLattowasintownandperforminghershowforthecommunity.JoelhadalwaysbeenLatto’sfaithfulfan.He’dliketobecomearapperlikeher.Pushinghiswaythroughthecrowd,Lattocametofrontofthestage.4續(xù)寫原文Joel’sheartracedwithexcitementashewatchedLattoappealtotheaudiencewithhercharminglyricsandundeniabletalent.Hewavedhisarmsandcheeredloudlytogetherwithallthepeoplepresent.Allofasudden,afearlessideasuddenlyoccurredtohim.Inspiredbyherperformance,Joeldecidedtoseizetheopportunityandshowhisskillsbeforehisidol(偶像).Joelwentuptotheeventorganizerandexplainedhispassionforrap,hopingtobegivenachancetoperform.ImpressedbyJoel’senthusiasmanddetermination,theeventorganizeragreedtolethimperformashortsetafterLattofinishedherperformance.Joelwasoverjoyedandspenttheremainingtimepractising,makingsurehewasreadytodeliveranunforgettableperformance.Heprayed(祈禱)atthebottomofhisheartthathewouldsucceedlikeLatto.Lattoendedhershowandthecrowdbrokeup.5段首句Para1:Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.Para2:WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以人物為線索展開，講述了一個(gè)名叫喬爾的十幾歲男孩住在一個(gè)遙遠(yuǎn)的小鎮(zhèn)上。喬爾是一個(gè)雄心勃勃的說唱歌手，他花了無數(shù)的時(shí)間在臥室里寫歌詞，完善自己的流暢度。但他從未在舞臺(tái)上表演過。他的夢想是在音樂行業(yè)取得成功，并與世界分享他對說唱的熱情。他希望有一天他的夢想能成為現(xiàn)實(shí)。直到某天他遇到了自己的偶像歌手拉托，在拉托的鼓勵(lì)下，喬爾參加了表演，得到了觀眾的認(rèn)可。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“喬爾走上舞臺(tái)，他心狂跳”可知，第一段可描寫喬爾表演的經(jīng)過以及觀眾的反應(yīng)。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“看到喬爾令人難以置信的表演，拉托走近他”可知，第二段可描寫拉托給喬爾建議，兩人成為朋友。11續(xù)寫思路分析故事的發(fā)展方向人物與夢想Joel，居住在偏遠(yuǎn)小鎮(zhèn)，熱愛說唱，夢想在音樂界大放異彩。意外機(jī)遇偶遇Latto演出，受其感染，大膽向組織者自薦。積極籌備獲表演機(jī)會(huì)后，抓緊練習(xí)，期待出色發(fā)揮。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.Closinghiseyesbriefly,hevisualizedhimselfperformingflawlessly.Whenheopenedhiseyes,helaunchedintohisrapwithconfidence.Hislyrics,filledwithstoriesofhishometownandhisjourney,flowedsmoothly.Hemovedwithrhythm,engagingtheaudiencewithhisenergy.Thepeopleintheparkwereamazedbythisyoungtalentwhohademergedfromtheirmidst.Hisperformancewaslikeaboltoflightning,electrifyingtheatmosphere.14范文呈現(xiàn)WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.ShewasclearlyimpressedandtoldJoelthathehadanaturalgift.Lattoofferedtocollaboratewithhimonafutureproject,whichsentshockwavesthroughthecrowd.ThisopportunitywasbeyondJoel’swildestdreams.WithLatto’ssupport,Joelknewhehadarealchancetomakeitinthemusicindustry.Fromthatdayon,heworkedtirelessly,knowingthathisencounterwithLattohadsethimonapathtoachievinghisultimategoalofsharinghispassionforrapwiththeworld.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Joelsteppedontothestage,hisheartbeatingwildly.Closinghiseyesbriefly,hevisualizedhimselfperformingflawlessly.Whenheopenedhiseyes,helaunchedintohisrapwithconfidence.Hislyrics,filledwithstoriesofhishometownandhisjourney,flowedsmoothly.Hemovedwithrhythm,engagingtheaudiencewithhisenergy.Thepeopleintheparkwereamazedbythisyoungtalentwhohademergedfromtheirmidst.Hisperformancewaslikeaboltoflightning,electrifyingtheatmosphere.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WitnessingJoel’sincredibleperformance,Lattoapproachedhim.ShewasclearlyimpressedandtoldJoelthathehadanaturalgift.Lattoofferedtocollaboratewithhimonafutureproject,whichsentshockwavesthroughthecrowd.ThisopportunitywasbeyondJoel’swildestdreams.WithLatto’ssupport,Joelknewhehadarealchancetomakeitinthemusicindustry.Fromthatdayon,heworkedtirelessly,kn