新高考英語｜讀后續(xù)寫素材積累之對話描寫課件-2025屆高三英語作文專項復(fù)習(xí)

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對話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個故事中對彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f的話。它可以用來揭示人物的性格和個性，它也可以用來推動情節(jié)向前發(fā)展，并展示情節(jié)發(fā)展的過程。What’sthefunctionofdialoguesinastory？

對話描寫的原則：1)對話描寫必須為推動故事情節(jié)服務(wù)。是情節(jié)發(fā)展的一個

環(huán)節(jié)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可；2)對話描寫必須反映人物的心理與情感，刻畫人物的性格；3)對話描寫不宜過長，側(cè)重口語化詞匯，避開生僻詞匯；4)對話描寫要盡可能結(jié)合動作描寫，具有畫面感；5)對話描寫中學(xué)會使用感嘆詞，表示說話人的喜、怒、哀、

樂等情緒。What’sthefunctionofdialogueinastory？Readthetwoessays.Findouthowmanydialoguestheyhaveandtheverbsusedtostartthedialogues.

對話描寫常見“四大錯誤”1.

廢話連篇，對情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫人物沒有幫助?！癏ey,howareyou?”“I’mfine,howareyou?”“Howistheweather?”“Terrific!Nicedayforawalk,isn’tit?”Withablanketonhishands,Abeaskedmumwhereshehadbeen.Mumtoldhimshehadbeentothetown.“Wheredidyougo?It’stoolateandyouseemfrozen.”Abeaskedwithablanketonhishands.“Well,Iwenttothetown…”Mumanswered.把對話轉(zhuǎn)為間接賓語，刪除多余對話“Thatisfantasticnews,”hesaidhappily.“Thatisfantasticnews！”hesaid/screamed/exclaimed.一個感嘆號和一個fantastic已經(jīng)足以讓讀者想象當(dāng)時的情景。適當(dāng)?shù)摹八囆g(shù)留白”也是需要的，這樣會留給讀者想象的空間。2.追求花哨，隨意使用修飾成分"Ican'tbelieveit,"Emmagasped.(gasp意思為“喘氣”)"That'sfunny,"Henrychuckled.(chuckled.意思為“輕笑”)3

用詞不當(dāng)，錯誤使用對話標(biāo)簽"Ican'tbelieveit,"Emmasighed."That'sfunny,"Henrysaidwithasmile.“Itoldyoualready,”Isaid,glaring.4.

多此一舉：對話對象十分明確，仍使用對話標(biāo)簽Iglaredathim.

“Itoldyoualready.”PartIIKnowwaystoexpress“say”morevividly對話描寫的三種表現(xiàn)形式：對話提示語在前“…”對話提示語在后對話提示語在中間1.Atthesightofthemeal,themotherasked:“Wheredidyougetthisbreakfast?”(21新高考1)2.“ThisisthebestgiftIhaveeverreceived!Thankyou”saidthemotherexcitedlywithtearsparklinginhereyes.(21新高考1)3.Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy.“Wedidn’t”,repliedMom,“Thispuppyisforpoppy.”(20浙江高考)Tip1表達“說”的那些詞howtosaynod(點頭);whisper(輕聲細語);sigh(嘆息);

repeat(重復(fù)地說)；rant(咆哮);yell(大叫);shout（高聲喊道);scream（尖叫）

fume(氣得冒煙);

growl

(低吼);warn（警告）;howl（怒吼）mumble

(咕噥);murmur

（低聲說);

mutter(低聲嘀咕)；sniff(嗤之以鼻);grin(咧嘴笑);beam

(眉開眼笑)；smiled（微笑）;laugh(笑);cheer(歡呼)；

stammer(結(jié)巴);continue（繼續(xù)說）;emphasize(強調(diào));remembere(記得);conclude(結(jié)論);swear(發(fā)誓);persuade(勸說);praise（贊揚）Tip1表達“說”的那些詞whytosaypromise（承諾);

apologise/apologize(道歉);beg(乞求);

agree(同意);reply(回復(fù)),add(補充道)

decide(決定);

demand(強烈要求);declare(宣稱

)

announce(鄭重地說)1.“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.2.“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.3.Charlesracedtomeandcriedinexcitement,“Youdidgreat!Iamsoproudofyou!”4“Howcanyoudothis！”shesaidangrily.5.“David,runningisyourfavoritesports,right?”Isaidtohimwithasmile.6.“Absolutely!”repliedJohn,excitementshininginhiseyes.加語氣加嗓音加情感名詞加副詞加獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)加介詞短語Tip2:在對話中加入語氣，嗓音，情感，副詞，神態(tài)等，讓對話描寫更生動傳神。ina/an+形容詞+toneina

pleasant愉悅的/firm堅定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad悲傷的

toneinatoneof+名詞inatoneof

surprise用一種驚訝的語氣inatoneofcuriosity用一種好奇的語氣inatoneofimpatience用一種不耐煩的語氣inatoneofcommand用一種命令的語氣第一種：加語氣“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmily

inapleasanttone.

“我很樂意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語氣說。ina/an+形容詞+voiceina

high/low/sweet/loud/soft/weak

voice用一個高/低/甜/響亮/軟/弱的聲音第二種：加嗓音“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmured

inalowvoice.

“我不是故意的，”她低聲說。介詞短語in/withexcitement/ease/surprise/astonishement...witha...smile/sigh/look/expression第三種：加介詞短語“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Ireplied

withembarrassment.“我...我..認為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。

1)saidMr.Wilson______________________一臉嚴(yán)肅地2)hesaid______________________用一種堅定地語調(diào)3)Hesaid__________他慌慌張張地說4)shesaid______________________用一種堅定地表情5)Jennylaughed________________興奮地笑了起來

inaflurrywithaseriouslookonhisfaceinadetermined/firmvoicewithadeterminedlookwithexcitement

Giveitatry!Firmly，Ianswered，“Iwillneverdothatagain.”第四種：加副詞“我再也不會那樣做了，”我回答?！癐willneverdothatagain,”Ianswered

firmly.loudly/proudly/gently/softly/abruptly/unexpectedly/angrily/bitterly/seriously/firmly/cheerfully大聲/自豪/溫柔地/柔和地/突然地/意想不到地/生氣地/悲痛地/嚴(yán)肅地/堅定地/高興地說……

1)_____________

激動地說

2)said

_______

輕柔地說

3)____________冷靜地說

4)said_______________________不冷不熱地說5)said________膽怯地說

timidly

saidexcitedlysaidcalmlyhalfcoldly,halfkindlysoftly

Giveitatry!第五種：獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)“Thankyouforhelpingme,”shesaidandhereyesbrimmedwithtears.

“Thankyouforhelpingme,”shesaidwithemotion,

hereyesbrimmedwithtears.

獨立主格是一個名詞或代詞（作為邏輯主語),加上一個形容詞、副詞、介詞短語、分詞、不定式等在句中作狀語。它有以下三個特點：1.獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的邏輯主語與句子的主語不同，它獨立存在。2.名詞或代詞與后面的形容詞、副詞、介詞短語、分詞、不定式等存

在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系。3.獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)一般用逗號與主句分開，但與主句之間不能使用任何

連接詞。1)shebeggedhim,_____________________眼睛充滿恐懼

2)shesaid,_____________________眼睛在跳躍著/閃閃hereyesdancing/shininghereyesfilledwithfear

花式句型，為人物對話添“色彩”1)Shenoddedwithasmile,

encouragedthe

children(andsaid)“Let’sgetstarted!”1Sb.did,+did+said

(增加與“說”的并列謂語，有效增強畫面感)2)Thefatherpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaid

inasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”

1)Pointingtosomeskillfulskiers,Lindsaysaid:“Look,theyareskiingsoeasily,Comeon,I

believewe

can

makeit,too”2)“Iwantthatone,”theboysaid,pointing

tothelittledog.2Doing...,sb.said,“......”“...”sb.said,Doing...(現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語)1)“Mom,Idon’twanttobeoutthere.”

Meimei

whispered,asifbegginghermothernotto

letherfacetheawkwardsituation.

3“...”Sb.said+asif/when/as(狀語從句)2)“Well,letmethink,”saidthefarmer,as

he

rubbedthesweatofthebackofhisneck.用“說”的表達和其他細節(jié)描寫補全下面句子。1.“Ihavetoquit”________________.

(我失望地說“我不得不放棄?！?2.“Surely,Iwill!”_____________________(John用堅定的聲音回答).3.“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”

______________________(爸爸有些擔(dān)心地問道).“We'vetriedeverything.”4.“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”

__________(媽媽笑著說道).“Let'sgetalittle

dogforPoppy.”Isaid,hopelesslysmiledMomJohnrepliedinafirmvoice.askedDadabitanxiously5._____________________(James耐心地

安慰她說道),“Don'tworryaboutyourson.”6.“Youperformedsowell,myson!”MrSmith

_______________________.(大聲表揚兒子).7.“Ihavecheatedmygrandmother.”_______,

_________________________________.

(“我欺騙了我的祖母?！彼f，眼淚順著臉頰流下來。)Jamescomfortedpatientlypraisedhissoninaloudvoicetearsstreaming/flowingdownhercheeksShesaid8.“Tommusthavecalledforthoseheli-copters,”

Janeremindedherself

constantly,

_______________________________________________

______________________.(心想著Tom會很努力找到她的).9.“Idon'thavetobelonelyanymore!”

thoughtPoppytoherselfwithsatisfaction,

_______________________________________________

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(當(dāng)她意識到那小東西很喜歡與她在一起).thinkingthatTomwoulddoeverythinghecouldtofindher.whensherealizedthatthelittlethingwasextremelypleasedtobewithhercontinuedsaidwithagentlevoicerepliedinalowvoicepraisedhim