新高考英語(yǔ)｜讀后續(xù)寫素材積累之對(duì)話描寫課件-2025屆高三英語(yǔ)作文專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)

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對(duì)話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個(gè)故事中對(duì)彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f(shuō)的話。它可以用來(lái)揭示人物的性格和個(gè)性，它也可以用來(lái)推動(dòng)情節(jié)向前發(fā)展，并展示情節(jié)發(fā)展的過(guò)程。What’sthefunctionofdialoguesinastory？

對(duì)話描寫的原則：1)對(duì)話描寫必須為推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)服務(wù)。是情節(jié)發(fā)展的一個(gè)

環(huán)節(jié)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可；2)對(duì)話描寫必須反映人物的心理與情感，刻畫人物的性格；3)對(duì)話描寫不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，側(cè)重口語(yǔ)化詞匯，避開(kāi)生僻詞匯；4)對(duì)話描寫要盡可能結(jié)合動(dòng)作描寫，具有畫面感；5)對(duì)話描寫中學(xué)會(huì)使用感嘆詞，表示說(shuō)話人的喜、怒、哀、

樂(lè)等情緒。What’sthefunctionofdialogueinastory？Readthetwoessays.Findouthowmanydialoguestheyhaveandtheverbsusedtostartthedialogues.

對(duì)話描寫常見(jiàn)“四大錯(cuò)誤”1.

廢話連篇，對(duì)情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫人物沒(méi)有幫助?！癏ey,howareyou?”“I’mfine,howareyou?”“Howistheweather?”“Terrific!Nicedayforawalk,isn’tit?”Withablanketonhishands,Abeaskedmumwhereshehadbeen.Mumtoldhimshehadbeentothetown.“Wheredidyougo?It’stoolateandyouseemfrozen.”Abeaskedwithablanketonhishands.“Well,Iwenttothetown…”Mumanswered.把對(duì)話轉(zhuǎn)為間接賓語(yǔ)，刪除多余對(duì)話“Thatisfantasticnews,”hesaidhappily.“Thatisfantasticnews！”hesaid/screamed/exclaimed.一個(gè)感嘆號(hào)和一個(gè)fantastic已經(jīng)足以讓讀者想象當(dāng)時(shí)的情景。適當(dāng)?shù)摹八囆g(shù)留白”也是需要的，這樣會(huì)留給讀者想象的空間。2.追求花哨，隨意使用修飾成分"Ican'tbelieveit,"Emmagasped.(gasp意思為“喘氣”)"That'sfunny,"Henrychuckled.(chuckled.意思為“輕笑”)3

用詞不當(dāng)，錯(cuò)誤使用對(duì)話標(biāo)簽"Ican'tbelieveit,"Emmasighed."That'sfunny,"Henrysaidwithasmile.“Itoldyoualready,”Isaid,glaring.4.

多此一舉：對(duì)話對(duì)象十分明確，仍使用對(duì)話標(biāo)簽Iglaredathim.

“Itoldyoualready.”PartIIKnowwaystoexpress“say”morevividly對(duì)話描寫的三種表現(xiàn)形式：對(duì)話提示語(yǔ)在前“…”對(duì)話提示語(yǔ)在后對(duì)話提示語(yǔ)在中間1.Atthesightofthemeal,themotherasked:“Wheredidyougetthisbreakfast?”(21新高考1)2.“ThisisthebestgiftIhaveeverreceived!Thankyou”saidthemotherexcitedlywithtearsparklinginhereyes.(21新高考1)3.Ican’tbelieveyougotyourselvesapuppy.“Wedidn’t”,repliedMom,“Thispuppyisforpoppy.”(20浙江高考)Tip1表達(dá)“說(shuō)”的那些詞howtosaynod(點(diǎn)頭);whisper(輕聲細(xì)語(yǔ));sigh(嘆息);

repeat(重復(fù)地說(shuō))；rant(咆哮);yell(大叫);shout（高聲喊道);scream（尖叫）

fume(氣得冒煙);

growl

(低吼);warn（警告）;howl（怒吼）mumble

(咕噥);murmur

（低聲說(shuō));

mutter(低聲嘀咕)；sniff(嗤之以鼻);grin(咧嘴笑);beam

(眉開(kāi)眼笑)；smiled（微笑）;laugh(笑);cheer(歡呼)；

stammer(結(jié)巴);continue（繼續(xù)說(shuō)）;emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào));remembere(記得);conclude(結(jié)論);swear(發(fā)誓);persuade(勸說(shuō));praise（贊揚(yáng)）Tip1表達(dá)“說(shuō)”的那些詞whytosaypromise（承諾);

apologise/apologize(道歉);beg(乞求);

agree(同意);reply(回復(fù)),add(補(bǔ)充道)

decide(決定);

demand(強(qiáng)烈要求);declare(宣稱

)

announce(鄭重地說(shuō))1.“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.2.“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.3.Charlesracedtomeandcriedinexcitement,“Youdidgreat!Iamsoproudofyou!”4“Howcanyoudothis！”shesaidangrily.5.“David,runningisyourfavoritesports,right?”Isaidtohimwithasmile.6.“Absolutely!”repliedJohn,excitementshininginhiseyes.加語(yǔ)氣加嗓音加情感名詞加副詞加獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)加介詞短語(yǔ)Tip2:在對(duì)話中加入語(yǔ)氣，嗓音，情感，副詞，神態(tài)等，讓對(duì)話描寫更生動(dòng)傳神。ina/an+形容詞+toneina

pleasant愉悅的/firm堅(jiān)定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad悲傷的

toneinatoneof+名詞inatoneof

surprise用一種驚訝的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofcuriosity用一種好奇的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofimpatience用一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofcommand用一種命令的語(yǔ)氣第一種：加語(yǔ)氣“Iwouldloveto,”saidEmily

inapleasanttone.

“我很樂(lè)意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。ina/an+形容詞+voiceina

high/low/sweet/loud/soft/weak

voice用一個(gè)高/低/甜/響亮/軟/弱的聲音第二種：加嗓音“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmured

inalowvoice.

“我不是故意的，”她低聲說(shuō)。介詞短語(yǔ)in/withexcitement/ease/surprise/astonishement...witha...smile/sigh/look/expression第三種：加介詞短語(yǔ)“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Ireplied

withembarrassment.“我...我..認(rèn)為我不適合這個(gè)角色，”我尷尬地回答。

1)saidMr.Wilson______________________一臉嚴(yán)肅地2)hesaid______________________用一種堅(jiān)定地語(yǔ)調(diào)3)Hesaid__________他慌慌張張地說(shuō)4)shesaid______________________用一種堅(jiān)定地表情5)Jennylaughed________________興奮地笑了起來(lái)

inaflurrywithaseriouslookonhisfaceinadetermined/firmvoicewithadeterminedlookwithexcitement

Giveitatry!Firmly，Ianswered，“Iwillneverdothatagain.”第四種：加副詞“我再也不會(huì)那樣做了，”我回答?！癐willneverdothatagain,”Ianswered

firmly.loudly/proudly/gently/softly/abruptly/unexpectedly/angrily/bitterly/seriously/firmly/cheerfully大聲/自豪/溫柔地/柔和地/突然地/意想不到地/生氣地/悲痛地/嚴(yán)肅地/堅(jiān)定地/高興地說(shuō)……

1)_____________

激動(dòng)地說(shuō)

2)said

_______

輕柔地說(shuō)

3)____________冷靜地說(shuō)

4)said_______________________不冷不熱地說(shuō)5)said________膽怯地說(shuō)

timidly

saidexcitedlysaidcalmlyhalfcoldly,halfkindlysoftly

Giveitatry!第五種：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)“Thankyouforhelpingme,”shesaidandhereyesbrimmedwithtears.

“Thankyouforhelpingme,”shesaidwithemotion,

hereyesbrimmedwithtears.

獨(dú)立主格是一個(gè)名詞或代詞（作為邏輯主語(yǔ)),加上一個(gè)形容詞、副詞、介詞短語(yǔ)、分詞、不定式等在句中作狀語(yǔ)。它有以下三個(gè)特點(diǎn)：1.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的邏輯主語(yǔ)與句子的主語(yǔ)不同，它獨(dú)立存在。2.名詞或代詞與后面的形容詞、副詞、介詞短語(yǔ)、分詞、不定式等存

在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系。3.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)一般用逗號(hào)與主句分開(kāi)，但與主句之間不能使用任何

連接詞。1)shebeggedhim,_____________________眼睛充滿恐懼

2)shesaid,_____________________眼睛在跳躍著/閃閃hereyesdancing/shininghereyesfilledwithfear

花式句型，為人物對(duì)話添“色彩”1)Shenoddedwithasmile,

encouragedthe

children(andsaid)“Let’sgetstarted!”1Sb.did,+did+said

(增加與“說(shuō)”的并列謂語(yǔ)，有效增強(qiáng)畫面感)2)Thefatherpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaid

inasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”

1)Pointingtosomeskillfulskiers,Lindsaysaid:“Look,theyareskiingsoeasily,Comeon,I

believewe

can

makeit,too”2)“Iwantthatone,”theboysaid,pointing

tothelittledog.2Doing...,sb.said,“......”“...”sb.said,Doing...(現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ))1)“Mom,Idon’twanttobeoutthere.”

Meimei

whispered,asifbegginghermothernotto

letherfacetheawkwardsituation.

3“...”Sb.said+asif/when/as(狀語(yǔ)從句)2)“Well,letmethink,”saidthefarmer,as

he

rubbedthesweatofthebackofhisneck.用“說(shuō)”的表達(dá)和其他細(xì)節(jié)描寫補(bǔ)全下面句子。1.“Ihavetoquit”________________.

(我失望地說(shuō)“我不得不放棄?！?2.“Surely,Iwill!”_____________________(John用堅(jiān)定的聲音回答).3.“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”

______________________(爸爸有些擔(dān)心地問(wèn)道).“We'vetriedeverything.”4.“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”

__________(媽媽笑著說(shuō)道).“Let'sgetalittle

dogforPoppy.”Isaid,hopelesslysmiledMomJohnrepliedinafirmvoice.askedDadabitanxiously5._____________________(James耐心地

安慰她說(shuō)道),“Don'tworryaboutyourson.”6.“Youperformedsowell,myson!”MrSmith

_______________________.(大聲表?yè)P(yáng)兒子).7.“Ihavecheatedmygrandmother.”_______,

_________________________________.

(“我欺騙了我的祖母?！彼f(shuō)，眼淚順著臉頰流下來(lái)。)Jamescomfortedpatientlypraisedhissoninaloudvoicetearsstreaming/flowingdownhercheeksShesaid8.“Tommusthavecalledforthoseheli-copters,”

Janeremindedherself

constantly,

_______________________________________________

______________________.(心想著Tom會(huì)很努力找到她的).9.“Idon'thavetobelonelyanymore!”

thoughtPoppytoherselfwithsatisfaction,

_______________________________________________

________________________________________________

(當(dāng)她意識(shí)到那小東西很喜歡與她在一起).thinkingthatTomwoulddoeverythinghecouldtofindher.whensherealizedthatthelittlethingwasextremelypleasedtobewithhercontinuedsaidwithagentlevoicerepliedinalowvoicepraisedhim