Unit 4 《Writing-Write a Summary of a News Report》課件2023-2024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)人教版（2019）必修第一冊(cè)

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寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)技法點(diǎn)撥文體分析把握寫(xiě)作動(dòng)脈本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)新聞報(bào)道的摘要。寫(xiě)此類(lèi)文章時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.快速把握新聞報(bào)道的主要內(nèi)容，找出新聞的六要素。2.以自然段為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行概括會(huì)防止遺漏信息并判斷主要信息。3.要注意包含關(guān)鍵的支撐性信息，過(guò)于細(xì)節(jié)的信息要略過(guò)。4.新聞報(bào)道中會(huì)有一些核心詞，這些詞是報(bào)道的核心，寫(xiě)概要時(shí)不必替換。5.新聞報(bào)道的時(shí)態(tài)一般為過(guò)去時(shí)，寫(xiě)概要時(shí)，要以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；表達(dá)對(duì)事件的預(yù)測(cè)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)。新聞報(bào)道一般使用第三人稱，所以概要也用第三人稱。常用表達(dá)1.Thisarticle/passagemainlytells(astory)about...2.Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...3.Thisarticlefocusesonthetopicsof...4.Thisessaypresentsknowledgethat...5.Thispaperprovides/givesanoverviewof...6.Inthispassage(about...)，theauthor...7.Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/presenting...8.First/Firstly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart，theauthorargues/explains/mentions/states/pointsout(that)...返回9.Secondly/Next/Furtheron/Then/Inthenextpart/Inthemainpart，theauthorgoesonwith...10.Finally，theauthorstressesthat...寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練弄清文路寫(xiě)作妙筆生花閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChilelateonTuesday，cuttingpowerandleadingtosmalllandslidesandatsunami.Fourmenandonewomandied—twowhosufferedheartattacksandthreewhowerecrushed(壓死).About300prisonersescapedfromthenorthernportcityofIquiqueintheimmediateaftershock.Thequakestruckatabout8：46p.m.localtime，some60milesnorthwestofIquique.Ithadadepthof12.5miles.Chile’sNationalEmergencyOfficeaskedcoastalresidentstoleaveforsafeplaces.“Thefactis，wewillknowtheextentofthedamageastimegoesbyandwhenweinspecttheareasinthelightofday，”Chile’sPresidentMichelleBacheletsaidearlyonWednesday.“Thecountryhasfacedthesefirstemergencyhoursverywell.”ResidentsintheportcityofAntofagastawalkedcalmlythroughthestreetstohighergroundastrafficbecameheavyinsomeplaces.“Manypeoplearefearfulafterexperiencingthepowerfulearthquakein2010，sotheyimmediatelyrushedtohighergroundwhentheyheardthetsunamiwarning，”saidagovernmentofficial.“Therehavebeenlotsofaftershocksandcommunicationshavebeencutoffinmanyoftheaffectedareas.Sopeoplearewaitinginthedarkhills，notknowingwhatistocome，andhopingtheywillbeabletoreturntotheirhomessafely.”ThePacificTsunamiWarningCentersentoutseveraltsunamiwarnings，butcalledoffallofthembyearlyWednesday.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.Iquique，withapopulationofmorethan200,000，sawseven-footwaves.審題謀篇審題本文的要求是寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于智利地震的新聞報(bào)道的摘要。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：1.確定文體：新聞報(bào)道的摘要。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。3.主體人稱：以第三人稱為主。謀篇要點(diǎn)1：地震發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；要點(diǎn)2：地震導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果：電力中斷、人員傷亡等；要點(diǎn)3：余震導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果；要點(diǎn)4：地震導(dǎo)致了海嘯。遣詞造句核心詞匯1.襲擊2.電力中斷3.余震4.切斷5.超過(guò)_____________________________________________strikepowercutaftershockcutoffover/morethan連詞成句1.一場(chǎng)8.2級(jí)的地震在當(dāng)?shù)貢r(shí)間晚上8：46襲擊了智利北部海岸。(strike)___________________________________________________________________________________2.這場(chǎng)地震導(dǎo)致了電力中斷、五人死亡。(cause)_____________________________________________3.在很多地震災(zāi)區(qū)通信中斷。(cutoff)__________________________________________________________4.地震導(dǎo)致了六英尺多高的海嘯波浪。(cause)____________________________________________________________An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime.Theearthquakecausedpowercutsandfivedeaths.Communicationswerecutoffinmanyoftheearthquake-hitareas.Tsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetwerecausedbytheearthquake.5.這些海浪席卷了皮薩瓜沿岸。(wash)_____________________________________________ThesewaveswashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.句式升級(jí)1.用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞連接句1和句2。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞連接句4和句5。__________________________________________________________________________________________An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime，causingpowercutsandfivedeaths.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，組成一篇60詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文An8.2-magnitudeearthquakestruckoffthecoastofnorthernChileat8：46p.m.localtime，causingpowercutsandfivedeaths.Therewerelotsofaftershocksandcommunicationswerecutoffinmanyoftheearthquake-hitareas.TsunamiwavesofmorethansixfeetcausedbytheearthquakewashedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.返回Thebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的課堂在老人的腳下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.讓一個(gè)孩子在你的臂彎入睡,你會(huì)體會(huì)到世間最安寧的感覺(jué).Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldnevers