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第三部分寫作專題突破類型二讀后續(xù)寫第3講續(xù)寫熱門話題歷險脫困閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2024·湖北省七市聯(lián)考)EzriandOliverweresokeentoclimbthemountainthattheybeggedtojointheirdadBrandonforanotherhike.Justafter8a.m.onabeautifulSundaymorning,theysetoff.Brandon'sbackpackheldhisphone,Clifbars(能量棒),packetsofapplesauce,apples,waterbottlesandfishinggear.Brandonhadplannedavariedrouteupthemountain.Thewindingupwardslopewasfunanduneventful.Nearthetop,thicksnowblanketedthepath.Excitedly,thekidsracedacrossthehardsurface.Theysharedthesecond-lastClifbarandrestedforanhour.Brandonlookedaround.Hisphoneshowed1:30p.m.a(chǎn)ndnosignals.Whenthekidsstarteddownthefarsideoftheslope,Brandonsaid,“Youguysreallywanttofindthosefishinglakes,don'tyou?”“Oh,yes!”Ezrisaid.Sotheytookanunfamiliarroutedowntheothersideofthemountain.BythetimeBrandonrealizedthepathhadbecomeananimaltrailalongsideastream,itmadesensetokeepfollowingit.Thestreamsangtothem,andtheykeptfollowingitdown.Midafternoon,whenthesundisappearedbehindheavygrayclouds,theysuddenlyfeltlost,coldandhungry.Forhalfanhourtheycautiouslymoveddownwarduntiltheyreachedasteepcliff(懸崖)edge.Thestreambecameanoisy,six-metrewaterfall.Mistenvelopedthemasthewaterracedoverahugerock.Brandoncursed(咒罵)himselffortakinganunknownroutedown.TheyheldhandsandincheddownuntilOliverslidonalooserockandallthreewentflying.Brandonwipedbloodfromhisforeheadandgatheredhissenses.Wasanyonehurt?Oliver,cryingandshivering,seemedokay.Ezriwasweeping,butshetooappeareduninjured.Brandonhimselfdidn'tfeelanythingworsethanthewoundonhisforehead.Thebackpackwasstuckintherockssixmetresaway.Hesawnousetryingtofinditback.Theairwascoldandgettingcolder.Theywerewetandtired.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式作答。Tosavethekids,Brandonrealizedhehadtolookforawayoutalone.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ahelicopterwiththefatherandmanyvolunteerssetoffimmediately.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導(dǎo):Ⅰ.梳理原文細節(jié),理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ.依據(jù)首句提示,構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段:由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知,第一段可描寫B(tài)randon獨自離開去尋找出路,最終聯(lián)系上911。第二段:由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知,第二段可寫B(tài)randon和志愿者成功找到孩子們,Brandon非常感動。范文佳作:To
save
the
kids,Brandon
realized
he
had
to
look
for
a
way
out
alone.Afterhemadethedecision,hewrappedhiscoataroundthemandkissedeachofthemontheforehead.“Stayhere,nomatterwhat.I'llgoforhelp,”herepeatedseveraltimesinatremblingvoice.Inthefollowinghours,Brandonwalkedthroughthebushandevensufferedanotherbadfallontheway.Exhaustedandbloodied,heemergedfromtheforestandbumpedintoafamilyofhikers,whocalled911.A
helicopter
with
the
father
and
many
volunteers
set
off
immediately.Onthereturntrip,Brandonanxiouslydescribedthegenerallocationofthechildrentotherescuers.Finally,afteralongsearch,theysuccessfullylocatedthepoorchildren.Uponthehelicopter'sarrival,Brandonjumpedoffandrantoembracehischildren,movedtoseesomanystrangersinbrightredjackets.Everytimehethinksofbrightredjackets,hewouldfeelhewasnotalone.There'salwayssomeoneouttherewhoiswillingtohelp.話題佳句:1.Whenwereacheddeepintotheforest,suddenlythesmogspreadeverywhereandwewerenotabletoseeeachotherclearlyandlostourway.當(dāng)我們到達森林深處時,煙霧突然彌漫,我們無法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。2.Theybothspentaminutecatchingtheirbreathandcalmedthemselvesdown.他們兩人都花了一分鐘時間喘了口氣,讓自己冷靜下來。3.Theicywaterpiercedmyskinlikeneedles.Iwasanxioustoclimboutbymyself,butcountlesspreviousfailuresstoppedmefromstrugglingagain.冰冷的水像針一樣刺痛我的皮膚。我渴望自己爬出去,但之前無數(shù)次的失敗阻止了我再次掙扎。4.Hebegantoshakeoffthesnow,movedsnowawaywithbarehands,andmanagedtopullhimselfout.他開始抖落積雪,徒手把雪移開,并設(shè)法把自己拉了出來。5.Tomwasshockedtofindthatthewaterkeptrising.Hewastrappedinhishouseandhisheartsuddenlyjumpedintohisthroat.湯姆震驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)水一直上漲。他被困在他的房子里,他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。6.Gatheringallhisstrength,carefully,bitbybit,Simpsonclimbedoutofthesnowhole.辛普森用盡全身力氣,一點一點地,小心翼翼地從雪洞里爬了出來。7.Thefrontdoorwasonlyafeetaway,butthewindwassostrongthatJessicahadtofightherwayoutofthecarandstruggledintothehouse.離前門只有一英尺遠,但風(fēng)太大了,杰西卡不得不奮力從車里出來,艱難地進了房子。8.Hefeltweakbutotherwisefine.Hewasgladtobeoutofdangerandreunitedwithhisfamily.他感到虛弱,但其他方面還好。他很高興脫離了危險,與家人團聚了。9.MomremindedmeofhowfortunateIwasfromthejawsofthealligator.Itwasanarrowescape.媽媽提醒我,我能從短吻鱷的口中逃脫是多么幸運。這是一次死里逃生。10.Finally,wewentoutoftheforestthattrappedus.Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.最后,我們走出了困住我們的森林。多么難忘的經(jīng)歷?。∈聦嵶C明,只要我們保持冷靜,就總有辦法擺脫困境。11.Ourbeinglostadded
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