讀后續(xù)寫講解-車?yán)热?課件-高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)_第1頁(yè)
讀后續(xù)寫講解-車?yán)热?課件-高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)_第2頁(yè)
讀后續(xù)寫講解-車?yán)热?課件-高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)_第3頁(yè)
讀后續(xù)寫講解-車?yán)热?課件-高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)_第4頁(yè)
讀后續(xù)寫講解-車?yán)热?課件-高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)_第5頁(yè)
已閱讀5頁(yè),還剩19頁(yè)未讀, 繼續(xù)免費(fèi)閱讀

下載本文檔

版權(quán)說(shuō)明:本文檔由用戶提供并上傳,收益歸屬內(nèi)容提供方,若內(nèi)容存在侵權(quán),請(qǐng)進(jìn)行舉報(bào)或認(rèn)領(lǐng)

文檔簡(jiǎn)介

continuationwritingLastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解讀故事readforcharacters

readforplot

readforconflict/problem

readforcharacteristics

readfortheme

Margarito,Steve,MikeLastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解讀故事readforcharacters

readforplot

readforconflict/problem

readforcharacteristics

readfortheme

LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.Step15R解讀故事readforcharacters

readforplot

readforconflict/problem

readforcharacteristics

readfortheme

LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.

Worriedaboutherson’ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother’swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek(小溪).Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn’trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:

Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.

Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito’struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.EnvironmentEmotionActionweatherStep2

四句確定框架1.主題句(文章最后一句)

Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.

雨雖然很冷,但他的心里卻充滿了前所未有的溫暖。

Outsidethecar,thewindstillhowlingandtherainwhippingagainstthewindow,butthekindnessfromthestrangerswarmedupeverysoul.車外,風(fēng)還在呼嘯,雨打在窗戶上,但陌生人的好意溫暖了每個(gè)人。Step2

四句確定框架2.銜接句(第一段最后一句)

Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Hewasrescuedbythetwokindmen.Step2

四句確定框架3.情感句(確定文章走向)

Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.trappedfearhopeanticipationsafehope:Asparkofhopewaskindledinhisheart.anticipation:HisdespairfadedawayandwasreplacedbyanticipationStep2

四句確定框架4.動(dòng)作句(增加文章畫面感)

Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”遞石頭:靠近:砸窗戶:救人:handedbentdownpickedupgraspeddashedtowardsheldtheropetightlystaredatthemworriedlyapproachedwadedintomadehiswayglancedaroundleanedbackhammeredagainst

threwtherockbrokethewindowitcrackedandbrokeandbecomepieceshewasrescuedhewaspulledoutandtakentothedeliveryvehicleStep3

三回扣1.回扣原文細(xì)節(jié)(對(duì)應(yīng)原文內(nèi)容)

天氣:Margarito’smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.

Suddenly,alightningshoneandthesoundoftherainbecameloud.TheheavyrainmadeStevetoodifficulttomove.

環(huán)境:Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.Stevewadedintothemuddycreek.情感:Worriedaboutherson’ssafety."Areyouhomeyet?Everything'sgood?"Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameover.Step2

四句確定框架1.主題句(文章最后一句)2.銜接句(第一段最后一句)3.情感句(確定文章走向)4.動(dòng)作句(增加文章畫面感)

trappedfearhopeanticipationsafehandedapproachedbrokethewindowhewasrescued應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架1.情感句(確定文章走向)2.動(dòng)作句(增加文章畫面感)MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架1.情感句(確定文章走向)2.動(dòng)作句(增加文章畫面感)MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.berescuedthanksrelievedregretedtearedansweredreachedouthispocketpickedupthephonehearingUponhearingcouldn'tcontrolhimselftookadeepbreathcomfort應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.heansweredthephone.應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.heansweredthephone.1.情感句(確定文章走向)berescuedthanksrelieved/nervoustearedmerrymotherconcernedworkersnervous:Withtremblinghands,concerned:Uponhearingtheconcernedvoice./Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameover.teared:hiseyeswereglisteningwithhisheld-backtearsmerry:Stevedissolvedintolaughter,hiseyesgleamedwithmerriment./

Her

eyestwinkled

withmerrimentnervous:Withtremblinghands,concerned:Uponhearingtheconcernedvoice./Hismother'sanxiousvoicecame

over.teared:hiseyeswereglisteningwithhisheld-backtearsmerry:Stevedissolvedintolaughter,hiseyesgleamedwithmerriment./

Her

eyestwinkled

withmerrimenthope:Asparkofhopewaskindledinhisheart.anticipation:Hisdespairfadedawayandwasreplacedbyanticipation環(huán)境描寫:alightningshoneandthesoundoftherainbecameloud應(yīng)用實(shí)踐四句確定框架MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.heansweredthephone.2.動(dòng)作句(增加文章畫面感)answeredreachedouthispocketpickedupthephoneheardUponhearingcouldn'tcontrolhimselftookadeepbreathcomfortreachedintodrewoutansweredexpressapproachedclutchedgazedathuggedtookoutscribbled1.bentdown彎腰2.pickedup撿起3.grasped抓住4.dashedtowards沖5.handedthestone遞石頭6.heldtheropetightly緊緊的抓住石頭7.staredatthemworriedly他擔(dān)心地盯著他們8.wadedintothewater趟進(jìn)水里9.madehiswayto前往10.glancedaround環(huán)顧四周11.leanedback向后傾斜12.hammeredagainst擊打

13.threwtherock扔石頭14.itcrackedandbrokeandbecomepieces它裂了,碎了,變成了碎片15.hewaspulledoutandtakentothedeliveryvehicle他被拉了出來(lái),帶到送貨車上16.reachedintohispocket,drewoutthephoneandansweredthecall把手

溫馨提示

  • 1. 本站所有資源如無(wú)特殊說(shuō)明,都需要本地電腦安裝OFFICE2007和PDF閱讀器。圖紙軟件為CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.壓縮文件請(qǐng)下載最新的WinRAR軟件解壓。
  • 2. 本站的文檔不包含任何第三方提供的附件圖紙等,如果需要附件,請(qǐng)聯(lián)系上傳者。文件的所有權(quán)益歸上傳用戶所有。
  • 3. 本站RAR壓縮包中若帶圖紙,網(wǎng)頁(yè)內(nèi)容里面會(huì)有圖紙預(yù)覽,若沒(méi)有圖紙預(yù)覽就沒(méi)有圖紙。
  • 4. 未經(jīng)權(quán)益所有人同意不得將文件中的內(nèi)容挪作商業(yè)或盈利用途。
  • 5. 人人文庫(kù)網(wǎng)僅提供信息存儲(chǔ)空間,僅對(duì)用戶上傳內(nèi)容的表現(xiàn)方式做保護(hù)處理,對(duì)用戶上傳分享的文檔內(nèi)容本身不做任何修改或編輯,并不能對(duì)任何下載內(nèi)容負(fù)責(zé)。
  • 6. 下載文件中如有侵權(quán)或不適當(dāng)內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)與我們聯(lián)系,我們立即糾正。
  • 7. 本站不保證下載資源的準(zhǔn)確性、安全性和完整性, 同時(shí)也不承擔(dān)用戶因使用這些下載資源對(duì)自己和他人造成任何形式的傷害或損失。

評(píng)論

0/150

提交評(píng)論