2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+生日寄思：薩達(dá)娜的異鄉(xiāng)情愁+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)生日寄思：薩達(dá)娜的異鄉(xiāng)情愁1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文SadhanahadbeenlivingwithMr.andMrs.Acharyaforoversixmonthsnow.Theywerearetiredcouplewhohadtakenherinasapayingguestwhileshepursuedherfirstyearofengineeringcollegeinabrandnewcity.Despitebeingawayfromherownfamilyforthefirsttimeever,theAcharyashadmadeherfeelathomewiththeirwarmthandkindness.Mr.Acharya,aretiredeconomist,hadbeenparticularlyhelpfulwithherstudies.Heoftenreviewedhernotes,offeredadviceandpatientlyexplainedcomplexconceptstoher.Hisfriendlynatureandmentoringmadeheracademicjourneysmootherandmoreenjoyable.Buttodaywasdifferent.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Itwasherbirthdayandbeingsofarawayfromherfamilymadeherfeelverylow.ThecaretheAcharyasshoweredherwithwascomforting,butshefeltavoid(空白)onlyherbelovedfamilymemberscouldfillonherspecialday.Shesatquietlyinthelivingroom,whereMr.AcharyawasengagedinabookandMrs.Acharyawasbusyinthekitchen.“Imissmyfamilysomuchtoday,”Sadhanasaidsoftly,hervoicefilledwithsadness.Mrs.Acharyalookedupfromhercooking,hereyesfullofunderstanding.“Weknowit’stough,dear.Beingawayfromfamilyonspecialdayscanbereallyhard.”5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Sadhanamanagedasmallsmile.“I’msogratefulforyourcompany.You’vereallymademefeelathome.”Mrs.Acharyapattedherheadkindlyandservedthemdinner.Themealwasdelicious,butshejustcouldn’thelpbutfeelgloomy.Shetriedtofocusontheconversationandenjoythefood,butherthoughtskeptdriftingbacktoherfamily.Shethoughtabouthow,everyyearonherbirthday,hermothercookedherfavouritemealandherfathertookheronalovelylongdriveandtreatedhertoherfavouritemangoicecream.Afterdinner,Mrs.Acharya,withamysterioussmile,said,“Mydear,stopbeingupset.Comewithme!”6段首句Paragraph1：Filledwithcuriosity,SadhanafollowedMrs.Acharya.Paragraph2：Mr.Acharyacamein,holdingabottleoffreshlymademangojuice.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9文章講述了薩達(dá)娜來(lái)到新城市上大學(xué)，在退休的阿查里亞夫婦家借住已超半年。阿查里亞夫婦的溫暖善良讓她有了家的感覺(jué)，尤其是退休經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家的阿查里亞先生還常輔導(dǎo)她學(xué)業(yè)。然而在生日這天，盡管阿查里亞夫婦關(guān)懷備至，薩達(dá)娜仍因遠(yuǎn)離家人而心情低落，懷念起往昔生日時(shí)父母為她做的一切。晚餐時(shí)，盡管飯菜可口，她依舊沉浸在對(duì)家人的思念中。晚飯后，阿查里亞夫人帶著神秘微笑讓她跟自己走，留下懸念，引發(fā)讀者對(duì)后續(xù)情節(jié)的好奇，不知阿查里亞夫人要做什么來(lái)驅(qū)散薩達(dá)娜的愁緒，故事圍繞著薩達(dá)娜在異鄉(xiāng)生日的孤獨(dú)與溫暖展開(kāi)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Filledwithcuriosity,SadhanafollowedMrs.Acharya.滿(mǎn)懷著好奇，薩達(dá)娜跟在阿查里亞夫人身后。她們穿過(guò)略顯昏暗的走廊，薩達(dá)娜的心跳微微加速，不知道即將迎來(lái)什么。不一會(huì)兒，她們來(lái)到了一個(gè)房間門(mén)口，阿查里亞夫人輕輕推開(kāi)房門(mén)，屋內(nèi)沒(méi)有開(kāi)燈，但借著微弱的月光，薩達(dá)娜隱約看到桌上好像擺放著什么東西。當(dāng)阿查里亞夫人打開(kāi)燈的瞬間，薩達(dá)娜驚呆了，只見(jiàn)桌上放著一個(gè)插著蠟燭的小蛋糕，周?chē)€點(diǎn)綴著一些彩色的氣球，墻壁上掛著一張大大的自制賀卡，上面寫(xiě)著“生日快樂(lè)，薩達(dá)娜！”?？吹竭@一幕，薩達(dá)娜的眼眶濕潤(rùn)了，心中涌起一股暖流，之前因思念家人而產(chǎn)生的陰霾也消散了許多。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Mr.Acharyacamein,holdingabottleoffreshlymademangojuice.就在這時(shí)，阿查里亞先生走了進(jìn)來(lái)，手里拿著一瓶剛剛榨好的芒果汁。他笑著對(duì)薩達(dá)娜說(shuō)：“孩子，我們知道你最喜歡芒果味的東西，雖然這比不上你家人給你的，但這是我們的一點(diǎn)心意?！彼_達(dá)娜激動(dòng)得說(shuō)不出話(huà)來(lái)，只是一個(gè)勁兒地點(diǎn)頭致謝。阿查里亞先生將芒果汁放在桌上，然后和阿查里亞夫人一起走到薩達(dá)娜身邊，輕輕拍了拍她的肩膀。三個(gè)人圍坐在蛋糕前，阿查里亞夫婦為薩達(dá)娜唱起了生日歌，歌聲雖然沒(méi)有那么動(dòng)聽(tīng)，但卻充滿(mǎn)了真摯的情感。在這一刻，薩達(dá)娜感受到了一種別樣的家的溫暖，她吹滅蠟燭，默默許下心愿，希望這份珍貴的情誼能夠一直延續(xù)下去，也希望遠(yuǎn)方的家人能夠放心，自己在這個(gè)陌生的城市里并不孤單。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Filledwithcuriosity,SadhanafollowedMrs.Acharya.Herheartwaspoundingwithanticipationastheymadetheirwaythroughthedimlylitcorridor.Witheachstep,thesenseofmysterygrewstronger.Soon,theyarrivedatthedoorofaroom.Mrs.Acharyapusheditopengently.Theroomwasinitiallyshroudedindarkness,butbythefaintmoonlightseepingthroughthewindow,Sadhanacouldvaguelymakeoutsomethingonthetable.AsMrs.Acharyaflickedonthelight,Sadhanawastakenaback.There,onthetable,satasmallcakewithlitcandles,surroundedbycolorfulballoons.Onthewallhungalargehandmadegreetingcardthatread"HappyBirthday,Sadhana!"TearswelledupinSadhana'seyes,andawarmcurrentsurgedthroughherheart,dissipatingmuchofthegloomthathadlingeredduetoherlongingforherfamily.14范文呈現(xiàn)Justthen,Mr.Acharyacamein,holdingabottleoffreshlymademangojuice.HesmiledatSadhanaandsaid,"Mydear,weknowyoulovemango-flavoredthingsthemost.Althoughitcan'tcomparetowhatyourfamilywouldgiveyou,it'sourlittletokenoflove."Sadhanawassooverwhelmedthatshecouldbarelyutterawordandjustnoddedgratefully.Mr.AcharyaplacedthemangojuiceonthetableandthenwalkedovertoSadhanawithMrs.Acharya,pattinghergentlyontheshoulder.Thethreeofthemgatheredaroundthecake,andtheAcharyasbegantosingthebirthdaysong.Theirvoices,thoughnotparticularlymelodious,werefilledwithsincereaffection.Atthatmoment,Sadhanafeltauniquekindofwarmthofhome.Sheblewoutthecandlesandsilentlymadeawish,hopingthatthispreciousfriendshipwouldendureandthatherfamilyfarawaywouldknowthatshewasnotaloneinthisstrangecity.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Filledwithburningcuriosity,SadhanatrailedbehindMrs.Acharya,herheartthumpingwildlyinherchest.Astheytraversedthesomewhatgloomycorridor,theairseemedthickwithanticipation.Itwasnotlongbeforetheyreachedthethresholdofaroom.Mrs.Acharya,withagentlepush,swungthedooropen.There,inthecenteroftheroom,bathedinthesoftglowofthemoonlightfilteringthroughthewindow,wasasightthatmadeSadhana'sbreathhitch.Onthetable,adaintycakeadornedwithflickeringcandlessat,encircledbyakaleidoscopeofcolorfulballoons.Andbehold,onthewallhungameticulouslycraftedgreetingcardthatproclaimed"HappyBirthday,Sadhana!"Tears,likeglisteningpearls,welledupinhereyes,herheartswellingwithawarmththatbegantochaseawaytheshadowsofhomesickness.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)HardlyhadsherecoveredfromthesurprisewheninwalkedMr.Acharya,clutchingabottleoffreshlysqueezedmangojuice."Mydear,"hebeamed,"itisourearnestwishthatthismeagerofferingmightbringyouamodicumofjoy,forwearewellawareofyourfondnessforallthingsmango."Overwhelmedbytheirkindness,Sadhanacouldscarcelyfindhervoice,onlymanagingaseriesofgratefulnods.Mr.Acharya,withatendergesture,placedthejuiceonthetableandjoinedMrs.AcharyabySadhana'sside,bestowingareassuringpatonhershoulder.There,beneaththewarm,goldenlig