讀后續(xù)寫+喵聲之謎：卡莉解開干草棚的秘密+講義 高三上學(xué)期第二次月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。SweatdrippedfromCallie’sfaceasshehelpedherbigbrotherBriggsloadhaybales(捆)ontothemachine.Themachinemadeloudnoisewhileitcarriedthebalesuptothehayloft(干草棚),whereCallie’sdadpiledthemup.AllwasquietwhenCalliewentinsidetofeedthehorses.Butasshefilledthewaterbucket,shethoughtsheheardafaintmeow(貓叫聲)fromthehayloft.Sheclimbedthestepstotheloftandlistened.Thesoundseemedtobecomingfrombehindthebales.SherantogetherdadandBriggs.Briggscockedhishead,“It’scomingfromoutside”,hedetermined.“Justabirdinatree.”Callie’sdadagreed.“Probablyamockingbirdoracatbird,”hesaid.“Howdoyouknowforsure?”Calliesaid.“Iguesswe’vejustgotbetterearsthanyou,”Briggsjoked.ButCalliewasn’tconvinced.Shecheckedthehayloftagainaftersupper.“Areyoustuckinthere,kitty?”shesaid,pressinganeartothebales.“Meow!”cameasadcry.Callieracedbacktothehouse.“Ihearditagain,Dad!Willyoupleaselistenoncemore?”“It’sokay,Callie,”herdadsaid,comfortingher.“I’llgoandtakealook.”Afewminuteslater,hepokedhisheadintoCallie’sroom.“TheonlythingIheardouttherewasamockingbird,”hesaid.“Soyoucanstopworrying.”“OK,Dad,”Calliesaid.Butshewokeinthenightthinkingaboutwhatshe’dheard.Whatifakittenwastrappedbehindthebales?Shelayonherback,wonderingwhattodo.Finally,shechangedintojeansandasweatshirt,andthenwalkedquietlyintoBriggs’sroom.“Ineedyourflashlight(手電筒).”shewhispered.“Huh?”Briggswasconfused.“Ineedittofindthekitten,”Callieexplained.“I’llbecareful”Briggshuffed.“Youaresostubborn!”“You’rethebest,”Calliesaid.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThankstoBriggs’shelp,thelastheavybalewasmoved,revealingatiny,frightenedkitten.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Callie在農(nóng)場幫忙干活時聽到干草棚傳來貓叫聲，可爸爸和Briggs都認(rèn)為是鳥叫聲。Callie始終堅(jiān)信有小貓被困，晚上她決定去尋找，向Briggs借手電筒后再次前往干草棚。故事山分析：開場：Callie勞作時聽到疑似貓叫，家人卻不以為意。上升：Callie多次聽到叫聲，家人均否定，她仍不放棄并決定夜探干草棚。高潮：未確定，需續(xù)寫揭示是否真有小貓及后續(xù)情況。下降：無結(jié)局：未完成，待續(xù)寫。五處伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：Callie多次聽到貓叫聲且堅(jiān)信有小貓被困。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫中真的找到小貓。伏筆：家人判斷是鳥叫且否定Callie的想法。回應(yīng)：可寫找到小貓后家人的反應(yīng)及對Callie的認(rèn)可。伏筆：Callie向Briggs借手電筒。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫中Briggs可能會來幫忙或在后續(xù)有相關(guān)情節(jié)體現(xiàn)他對手電筒用途的關(guān)心。伏筆：干草棚里有干草堆?；貞?yīng)：小貓被困在干草堆后，搬開草堆才能發(fā)現(xiàn)小貓。伏筆：Callie擔(dān)心小貓安危，晚上難以入眠?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫中可描述找到小貓時Callie的欣慰與喜悅。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：Callie拿著手電筒在干草棚仔細(xì)尋找，描述她尋找的過程，如搬開一些小的干草捆，四處查看等，但未找到小貓，此時可能遇到一些困難，如手電筒光線不足或干草棚內(nèi)有其他阻礙。第二段：Briggs來幫忙，搬開最后一個重草捆發(fā)現(xiàn)小貓，描寫小貓的狀態(tài)以及Callie和Briggs的反應(yīng)，如Callie的心疼、Briggs的驚訝與愧疚，最后可寫他們帶小貓回屋并告知家人。情感線：Callie從最初的疑惑、不被理解的委屈，到堅(jiān)持尋找時的堅(jiān)定，再到找到小貓時的喜悅與欣慰，還有對小貓的憐愛。Briggs從最初的不以為意、些許不耐煩到看到小貓后的驚訝與愧疚。故事線：Callie拿著手電筒進(jìn)入干草棚開始尋找小貓。她在干草棚內(nèi)仔細(xì)傾聽聲音來源，挪動小干草捆。遇到困難，如光線不夠亮或干草棚內(nèi)環(huán)境復(fù)雜。Briggs來到干草棚幫忙。他們合力搬開最后重草捆發(fā)現(xiàn)小貓。他們帶小貓回屋并向家人說明情況。主旨升華句：Persistencealwayspaysoff,leadingustothetruthandkindness.（堅(jiān)持總會有回報(bào)，引領(lǐng)我們走向真相與善良。）Truecompassionmakesuslistentothefaintestcriesandtakeaction.（真正的同情心使我們能聽到最微弱的呼喊并付諸行動。）Don'tletothers'doubtsdimyourdeterminationtodotherightthing.（不要讓他人的懷疑磨滅你做正確之事的決心。）Inthepursuitofhelpingtheweak,ourownheartsarealsowarmed.（在幫助弱者的過程中，我們自己的內(nèi)心也會被溫暖。）Sometimes,thesmallestvoicecanleadtothegreatestdiscoveryoflove.（有時，最微弱的聲音能帶來最偉大的愛的發(fā)現(xiàn)。）寫作示范一：Paragraph1:

Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft.Thebeamoflightcutthroughthedarknessassheclimbedthesteps.Shestartedmovingthesmallerbales,onebyone,herheartpounding.Shecalledsoftly,“Here,kitty,kitty.”Butallsheheardwastherustlingofthehay.Theflashlight'slightseemedtofadeinthevastnessoftheloft.Shepushedon,determinednottogiveup,evenassweatbeadedonherforehead.Paragraph2:

ThankstoBriggs’shelp,thelastheavybalewasmoved,revealingatiny,frightenedkitten.Itsfurwasmattedanditcoweredinthecorner.Callie'sheartmeltedinstantly.Shescoopeditupgently,whisperingsoothingwords.BriggslookedatthekitteninamazementandthenatCalliewithahintofguilt.“I'msorryIdidn'tbelieveyou,”hesaid.Calliejustsmiled.Theycarriedthekittenbacktothehouse,andwhentheytoldtheirdad,hewasbothsurprisedandproudofCallie'sperseverance.寫作示范二：Paragraph1:

Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft.Onceinside,sheshonethelightaround,theshadowsdancingonthewalls.Shesearchedcarefully,herearsstrainingforthemeow.Shegotonherkneesandpeeredunderthebales,buttherewasnosignofthekitten.Thehayloftwasfilledwiththesmellofdriedgrassandthefaintechoofherownmovements.Shebegantofeelabitdiscouragedbutkeptgoing.Paragraph2:

ThankstoBriggs’shelp,thelastheavybalewasmoved,revealingatiny,frightenedkitten.Itblinkeditsbigeyesinthesuddenlight.Calliegaspedwithdelightandcarefullypickeditup.Thekittennuzzledintoherpalm.Briggschuckled,“Well,youwereright.”Calliehuggedthekittencloseandsaid,“Let'sgetyoucleanedupandsomefood.”Theytookthekitteninside,andCallie'sdadwasastonished.Heapologizedfornotbelievingher,andCalliesaiditdidn'tmatter.Now,allthatmatteredwastakingcareofthelittlerescuedlife.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft.Herheartpoundedasshequietlyenteredandaimedtheflashlighttowardsthehayloft.Callieclimbedupthestepsandthencrawledtowardsthehaybalestowhereshe’dheardthecry.“Areyouinthere?”shecalled.Andthereitwasagain-afaint,desperatemeowbehindthebales!Determinedtofindthesource,shebegantomovethehaybales,which,however,weretooheavyforhertolift.Justwhenshewasataloss,she