讀后續(xù)寫+從舊車交易中領(lǐng)悟的求職真諦+講義 高三下學期二模英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癉earJenny,Iamreallysorrytotellyouthatyoudidn’tgetthepositionthistime.Theinterviewershadadiscussionaboutyou.Youhaveaverygoodexperience,butyouarenotqualifiedforthisposition.Thejournalistwewantistocommunicatewithpeoplefromwalksoflife,soyoushouldbemoresociableandmoreenergetic.So,sorry.”Actually,suchwasnotquitenewtoJennyandthiswasthethirdtimethatshehadbeenrejectedforajobpositionafterhergraduationfromuniversityasatopstudent.Overwhelmed(淹沒)withsadness,sheliftedherhandstocoverherface.Herheartwasbrokenwithself-doubtwhethershewasnevergoodenoughtofitinwiththehighlycompetitiveadultworld.Itseemedthattheexcellenceshedisplayedatschoolwasnothingbutillusion.“MaybeIshouldquitapplyingforthatdemandingjob,”Jennywhisperedtoherself.Sensingsomethingwrong,Jenny’sfather,James,saidtohisdaughter,“Congratulationsonyourgraduation,andtimetoenjoyyouryouth.Incelebrationofyournewlife,I’dliketogiveyousomethingspecial.HereisacarthatIacquiredmanyyearsago.ButbeforeIgiveittoyou,takeittotheusedcarlotdowntownandtellthemyouwanttosellitandseehowmuchtheyofferyou.”UnwillingasJennywas,shewenttotheusedcarlotandtheyofferedheronlyonethousanddollarsbecausethecarlookedverywornout.Withthatoffer,shereturnedbacktoherfatherandoutofherexpectation,thistimeherfathertoldhertotakethiscartoapawnshop(當鋪).Confused,Jennywenttothepawnshopwheretheyshouldhaveofferedhertenthousanddollarsasherfather’scarlookedalittlebitoldtothem.“Maybeitisaperfectdeal!”thoughtJenny.Butthen,thefatheradvisedhisdaughtertokeeptryingandgotoacarclubandshowthemthecar.Thedaughtertookthecartotheclub,andthen,breathtakingly,somethingmagichappened.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Peopletherewillinglyofferedonehundredthousanddollarsforthesamecar.Wearingasatisfiedsmile,Jamessaid,“Theyidentifieditasanexpensivecar.”文章大意：Jenny作為一名優(yōu)秀的大學畢業(yè)生，卻接連三次求職被拒，心灰意冷的她對自己產(chǎn)生了懷疑，甚至想要放棄找工作。父親James為了開導她，讓她拿著一輛舊車分別去二手車行、當鋪和汽車俱樂部詢價，二手車行只出價一千美元，當鋪出價一萬美元，而汽車俱樂部的人卻愿意出價十萬美元。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆：Jenny多次求職失敗，對自己失去信心，認為自己不夠好，無法適應競爭激烈的社會，這為父親的開導行為做鋪墊。回應：父親通過讓Jenny賣車的經(jīng)歷，讓她明白事物的價值不能僅從表面判斷，人也是如此，從而鼓勵Jenny重新審視自己，恢復自信，積極面對求職，回應了Jenny之前的消極狀態(tài)和內(nèi)心的困惑。伏筆：父親說要給Jenny一個特別的畢業(yè)禮物，一輛舊車，并讓她去不同地方詢價，引發(fā)讀者好奇，推動故事發(fā)展?；貞涸谄嚲銟凡康玫礁邇r，使故事達到高潮，揭示了父親的意圖，即讓Jenny明白看似普通的事物可能有隱藏的價值，就像她自己一樣，看似求職不順，但實際有未被發(fā)掘的潛力，增強了故事的趣味性和教育意義。伏筆：Jenny對父親的要求雖不情愿，但還是照做，體現(xiàn)她對父親的信任，也為她能從賣車過程中獲得感悟奠定基礎(chǔ)。回應：Jenny在經(jīng)歷不同報價后，開始思考其中的原因，進而領(lǐng)悟父親的用心，完成了從困惑到理解的心理轉(zhuǎn)變，豐富了情感線和故事線，使故事更加完整。伏筆：汽車在不同地方的報價差異巨大，形成懸念，吸引讀者繼續(xù)閱讀。回應：汽車俱樂部的人識別出車的真正價值，出價高昂，解開了懸念，同時也類比Jenny的情況，暗示她也像這輛車一樣，在合適的地方（崗位）會展現(xiàn)出真正的價值，深化了故事的內(nèi)涵。伏筆：父親一直引導Jenny去賣車，卻沒有直接說明原因，保持神秘，為故事的轉(zhuǎn)折和主旨的揭示埋下伏筆?；貞鹤詈蟾赣H點明車是昂貴的，讓Jenny明白他的良苦用心，完成了故事的主旨升華，即每個人都有獨特的價值，不要因暫時的挫折而否定自己，要找到適合自己的“平臺”來展現(xiàn)價值。續(xù)寫要點情感線：第一段：Jenny起初對汽車俱樂部給出的高價感到震驚和疑惑，不明白為什么同一輛車會有如此大的價格差異，心中充滿了好奇和驚訝，同時也隱隱感覺到父親的用意，開始對自己之前的求職失敗有了新的思考，情緒逐漸從低落轉(zhuǎn)向積極探索。第二段：Jenny聽到父親的話后，恍然大悟，心中涌起一股感動和感激之情，為父親的良苦用心所折服，同時也重新找回了自信和勇氣，對未來的求職充滿了希望和期待，完成了從自我懷疑到堅定自信的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線：第一段：Jenny簡直不敢相信自己的耳朵，她瞪大了眼睛看著那些愿意出價十萬美元的人，心中滿是疑惑。她仔細詢問他們?yōu)槭裁丛敢獬鲞@么高的價格，那些人告訴她，這雖然是一輛舊車，但卻是一款經(jīng)典車型，而且保存得相對較好，具有很高的收藏價值和改裝潛力。Jenny若有所思地回到家，將事情的經(jīng)過告訴了父親。第二段：父親微笑著看著Jenny，語重心長地說：“他們識別出它是一輛昂貴的車，就像你一樣，親愛的。你在那些面試官眼中可能只是一個普通的求職者，但實際上你有著獨特的才能和潛力，只是還沒有找到真正欣賞你的地方。不要因為幾次拒絕就放棄，繼續(xù)尋找，你一定會找到屬于自己的舞臺?！盝enny聽后，眼中閃爍著淚光，她緊緊地抱住父親，心中暗暗發(fā)誓，一定要振作起來，重新出發(fā)。主旨升華句Justasthecar'struevaluewashiddenbeneathitswornexterior,ourworthoftenliesbeneaththesurface,waitingtobediscoveredintherightcircumstances.（正如那輛車真正的價值隱藏在其破舊的外表之下，我們的價值也常常潛藏在表面之下，等待在合適的情境中被發(fā)現(xiàn)。）Weshouldneverjudgeourcapabilitiesbytherejectionsweface,forlikeararegeminapileofstones,ourtruepotentialmightbeoverlookeduntilwefindthediscerningeyethatcanseeourbrilliance.（我們絕不應因所面臨的拒絕來評判自己的能力，因為就像一堆石頭中的一顆罕見寶石，我們真正的潛力可能會被忽視，直到我們找到那雙能看到我們閃光點的敏銳眼睛。）Thejourneytofindingourplaceintheworldislikesellingthatoldcar;itmaytakemultipleattemptsanddifferentperspectives,butoncewefindtherightfit,ourvaluewillshinethrough,illuminatingthepathtoourtruepurpose.（在世界上找到自己位置的旅程就像賣那輛舊車；可能需要多次嘗試和不同的視角，但一旦我們找到合適的歸屬，我們的價值就會閃耀出來，照亮通往我們真正目標的道路。）Inthefaceofsetbacks,rememberthatthevalueofaperson,likethatofavintagecar,isnotalwaysapparentatfirstglance.Itisthroughperseveranceandthesearchfortherightenvironmentthatweunlockourhiddenworthandachieveourdreams.（在挫折面前，記住人的價值，就像一輛老爺車的價值，乍一看并不總是顯而易見的。正是通過堅持不懈和尋找合適的環(huán)境，我們才能發(fā)掘出自己隱藏的價值，實現(xiàn)夢想。）Don'tlettheworld'sinitiallowoffersonyourpotentialdiscourageyou.Keepsearching,keepbelieving,fortherewillalwaysbeaplacewhereyouruniquequalitiesarerecognizedandcherished,justastheoldcarfounditstruevalueintherighthands.（不要讓世界最初對你潛力的低評價使你氣餒。繼續(xù)尋找，繼續(xù)相信，因為總會有一個地方，你的獨特品質(zhì)會被認可和珍視，就像那輛舊車在合適的人手中找到了真正的價值。）寫作示范第一篇Peopletherewillinglyofferedonehundredthousanddollarsforthesamecar.Jennywasastonished.Shestaredatthepeopleindisbelief,hermindracingtounderstandthevastdifferenceinprice.Asshelistenedtotheirexplanationsaboutthecar'srarityandpotential,sherealizedthatthevalueofsomethingwasnotalwaysobviousatfirstglance.Returninghome,shesharedherconfusionwithherfather,eagertohearhisthoughts.Wearingasatisfiedsmile,Jamessaid,“Theyidentifieditasanexpensivecar.”HelookedatJennywithkindeyesandcontinued,“Justlikethiscar,youhavequalitiesandpotentialthatarenoteasilyseen.Youmayhavebeenrejectedafewtimes,butthatdoesn'tmeanyou'renotvaluable.Youneedtofindtherightplace,therightpeoplewhowillrecognizeyourtrueworth.Don'tgiveuponyourself,mydear.Yourjourneyhasjustbegun.”Jennyfeltanewfoundsenseofhopeanddetermination.Sheunderstoodthathervaluewasnotdeterminedbytherejectionsshehadfaced,butbyheruniqueabilitiesthatwerewaitingtobediscovered.Fromthatmomenton,shewasreadytofacethejobsearchwithapositiveattitude,knowingthatherperfectopportunitywasoutthere.第二篇Peopletherewillinglyofferedonehundredthousanddollarsforthesamecar.Jenny'sjawdropped.Shewascompletelytakenabackbytheoffer.Shequestionedtheclubmembers,tryingtomakesenseofitall.Theypointedouttheuniquefeaturesandthehistorybehindthecarmodel,whichmadeithighlysoughtafterintheircommunity.Jennylefttheclub,herheadfilledwiththoughtsabouthowsomethingshehadunderestimatedcouldbesovaluabletoothers.Wearingasatisfiedsmile,Jamessaid,“Theyidentifieditasanexpensivecar.”HethenplacedagentlehandonJenny'sshoulder.“Jenny,youarelikethiscar.Youhavesomuchtooffer,butyouneedtobeintherightenvironmentwhereyourtalentscanberecognizedandappreciated.Don'tletafewsetbacksdefineyou.Youarecapableofachievinggreatthings.Eachrejectionisjustastepclosertofindingtheplacewhereyoutrulybelong.”Jenny'seyeswelledupwithtears.Shehuggedherfathertightly,feelingarenewedsenseofself-worth.Shedecidedthatshewouldnolongerdoubtherselfandwouldactivelyseekoutopportunitiesthatwouldallowhertoshine.Withadeterminedheart,sheembarkedonanewchapterofherlife,readytoembracewhatevercameherway.【答案】

Peopletherewillinglyofferedonehundredthousanddollarsforthesamecar.Shocked，Jennycouldn'tbelievewhatwashappeninginfrontofher.Ideasandquestionscametomind，sosheaskedherse