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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Therewasasmallvillageintheheartofabigjungle.Surroundedbythemagnificentmountainsandintheshadeofgreentrees,thevillagerswereusedtotheirroboticdailytasks.Noneofthemhadtheimaginationorthewilltotrysomethingnew,exceptforonegirlnamedHannah.Hannahwasoneofthefewpeopleinthevillagewhocouldreadandwrite.Shewasanadventurousspiritwithanimaginationfarbeyondhertime.Shelovedtoexploreandwouldspendhoursinthewoodslookingfornewthings.Oneafternoon,whileexploring,shecameuponanabandonedcottage.EventhoughHannah'smotherhadstrictlywarnedhernottogowanderinginabandonedplaces,hercuriositygotthebestofher.Shetip-toedslowlytothedoorandslowlyopeneditandshewasleftastonished.InfrontofHannahwasaroomfullofbooks!Thebookswerecoveredindust,buttheysparkledinthesunlight,justwaitingtobeexplored.Hannah'sexcitementwasvisibleonherfaceasshejumpedupanddownwithjoy!ItwasbreathtakingforHannahassherealizedthatshehadfoundahiddentreasure.Sheknewinherheartthatshedesiredtoreadallofthemsoshequicklygottowork.Shedustedthebooks,theshelves,andwhatwasleftofthefurniture.Hannahbroomed,swept,anddustedalldaylonguntilsherealizedthatitwasdarkandshehadtogobacktoherhome.Butshecouldn'tleavewithoutreadingatleastonebook,soHannahpickedtwobooksanddecidedtoreadthematherhome.ShemetherfriendsonthewayhomewhowerefascinatedbywhatHannahwascarrying.Inherexcitement,Hannahsharedeverythingwithherfriends.Shewasthinkingthatherfriendswillshareherexcitementbutinstead,shejustheardaroaroflaughters!Hannahwasconfusedbythisreactionfirst,butthensherealizedthattheyreallyneedthehelpfrombooksforchange.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式作答。Soshedidnotgiveuponthebooksinthecottage._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sheknewitwouldbeadifficultjourney,butshewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一個(gè)被叢林環(huán)繞、村民生活機(jī)械且缺乏創(chuàng)新的小村莊里,充滿冒險(xiǎn)精神且能讀寫的女孩漢娜,不顧母親的警告,在探索叢林時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)滿是灰塵書籍的廢棄小屋,這讓她興奮不已。她打掃干凈后帶了兩本書回家,途中向朋友們分享卻遭到嘲笑,然而這反而讓她意識到書籍對改變村莊的重要性,故事續(xù)寫將圍繞漢娜如何借助這些書籍改變村莊,突出知識的力量和漢娜的堅(jiān)持與智慧。故事分析伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:村莊被描述為處于叢林中心,村民們習(xí)慣機(jī)械的日常任務(wù)且缺乏嘗試新事物的意愿,這為漢娜的獨(dú)特性格和她后續(xù)發(fā)現(xiàn)書籍后的一系列行為做了背景鋪墊,凸顯她的與眾不同以及村莊對新事物的潛在需求。
回應(yīng):漢娜發(fā)現(xiàn)書籍后如獲至寶,與村民的麻木形成對比,她積極的行動(dòng)和改變村莊的決心,引發(fā)了與村民之間的矛盾與和解,推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展,展現(xiàn)了個(gè)體對群體的影響以及知識帶來的沖擊。伏筆:漢娜的母親警告她不要去廢棄的地方,這增加了她發(fā)現(xiàn)書籍這一情節(jié)的戲劇性和神秘感,同時(shí)也暗示了村莊中可能存在的未知和被忽視的事物,以及探索這些事物可能面臨的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)和挑戰(zhàn)。
回應(yīng):漢娜違背母親的警告,體現(xiàn)了她的勇敢和好奇心,為后續(xù)她堅(jiān)持利用書籍改變村莊的行為奠定了性格基礎(chǔ),使故事的發(fā)展更加合乎邏輯且富有張力。伏筆:漢娜是村里少數(shù)能讀寫的人之一,這為她能夠理解和利用書籍中的知識提供了前提,也使她成為村莊改變的關(guān)鍵人物。
回應(yīng):她在發(fā)現(xiàn)書籍后,憑借自己的讀寫能力深入學(xué)習(xí)并計(jì)劃將知識分享給村民,充分發(fā)揮了自己的優(yōu)勢,回應(yīng)了前文對她能力的設(shè)定,體現(xiàn)了知識在特定情境下的重要性和價(jià)值,突出了個(gè)人能力與責(zé)任的關(guān)聯(lián)。伏筆:漢娜看到滿屋子書籍時(shí)的興奮和喜悅,表現(xiàn)出她對知識的渴望和熱愛,這為她后續(xù)克服困難堅(jiān)持傳播知識的行為提供了內(nèi)在動(dòng)力。
回應(yīng):面對朋友們的嘲笑,她沒有放棄,反而更加堅(jiān)定了改變村莊的想法,持續(xù)展現(xiàn)她對書籍的執(zhí)著,呼應(yīng)了她最初的情感反應(yīng),使故事的情感線索連貫且深入,突出了信念的力量。伏筆:漢娜在回家路上向朋友分享書籍時(shí)遭到嘲笑,這一負(fù)面反應(yīng)為她后續(xù)的行動(dòng)設(shè)置了障礙,同時(shí)也引發(fā)了她對村莊現(xiàn)狀的深刻反思,促使她思考如何更有效地讓村民接受知識,從而推動(dòng)故事向解決問題、實(shí)現(xiàn)改變的方向發(fā)展。
回應(yīng):她通過成立閱讀小組、耐心講解等方式,逐漸改變了村民的態(tài)度,克服了這一障礙,實(shí)現(xiàn)了從被嘲笑到被認(rèn)可的轉(zhuǎn)變,完成了故事的情節(jié)起伏,突出了堅(jiān)持和智慧在實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)過程中的作用。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):第一段:Soshedidnotgiveuponthebooksinthecottage.Everyday,Hannahwouldsneakawaytothecottageanddevourtheknowledgewithinthebooks.Shelearnedabouthistory,science,andart.Shethendecidedtousethisknowledgetomakeadifferenceinthevillage.Shestartedbyorganizingsmallgatheringswhereshewouldshareinterestingfactsandstoriesshehadread.Atfirst,onlyafewcuriouschildrenwouldattend,butgradually,moreandmorevillagersbecameinterested.第二段:Sheknewitwouldbeadifficultjourney,butshewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone.Hannahbegantoholdregularreadingsessionsunderthebigtreeinthecenterofthevillage.Sheencouragedthevillagerstoaskquestionsandsharetheirthoughts.Astimepassed,thevillagers'eyeswereopenedtonewpossibilities.Theystartedtothinkaboutimprovingtheirfarmingmethods,beautifyingthevillage,andevenlearningnewskills.Theoncestagnantvillagewasslowlytransformedbythepowerofknowledge,allbecauseofHannah'sdeterminationandthebooksshehaddiscovered.情感線:起初,漢娜對探索充滿熱情和好奇;發(fā)現(xiàn)書籍時(shí)極度興奮;被朋友嘲笑后有些失落但很快堅(jiān)定決心;在傳播知識過程中充滿希望和耐心;隨著村民逐漸接受,她感到欣慰和自豪,情感變化細(xì)膩地展現(xiàn)了她的心路歷程,突出了堅(jiān)持與愛的力量,使故事充滿溫情與正能量。故事線:村莊位于叢林中,村民生活機(jī)械,漢娜與眾不同。漢娜違反母親警告,發(fā)現(xiàn)廢棄小屋中的書籍。她打掃并帶書回家,途中向朋友分享遭嘲笑。漢娜堅(jiān)持利用書籍知識,組織小型聚會(huì)分享。成立村莊閱讀小組,吸引更多村民參與。續(xù)寫部分,村莊因知識傳播發(fā)生積極改變。主旨升華句:Knowledgeisthekeythatunlocksthedoortoprogress,andthosewhodaretoseekitaretheoneswholeadthewaytoabetterfuture.(知識是開啟進(jìn)步之門的鑰匙,那些敢于追求它的人是引領(lǐng)走向更美好未來的人。)Inthefaceofignoranceandresistance,thepowerofone'spassionforknowledgecansparkafireofchangethatwillilluminatethedarkestcornersofsociety.(面對無知和阻力,一個(gè)人對知識的熱情力量可以點(diǎn)燃變革之火,照亮社會(huì)最黑暗的角落。)Asinglediscovery,whenfueledbydeterminationandadesiretoshare,hasthepotentialtotransformanentirecommunityandrewriteitsdestiny.(一個(gè)單一的發(fā)現(xiàn),當(dāng)被決心和分享的欲望所推動(dòng)時(shí),有可能改變整個(gè)社區(qū)并改寫其命運(yùn)。)Thejourneyofspreadingknowledgeisnotalwayseasy,butitisthemostrewarding,asitenrichesthelivesofothersandcreatesarippleeffectofenlightenment.(傳播知識的旅程并不總是容易的,但卻是最有回報(bào)的,因?yàn)樗S富了他人的生活并產(chǎn)生了啟蒙的漣漪效應(yīng)。)Trueprogressbeginswithanopenmindandaheartwillingtoembracetheunknown,foritisinthepursuitofknowledgethatwefindthetruemeaningofgrowthanddevelopment.(真正的進(jìn)步始于開放的心態(tài)和愿意擁抱未知的心靈,因?yàn)檎窃谧非笾R的過程中,我們找到了成長和發(fā)展的真正意義。)寫作示范第一篇
Soshedidnotgiveuponthebooksinthecottage.Hannahreturnedtothecottagedayafterday,immersingherselfinthewisdomofthepages.Shereadaboutarchitectureandgottheideatobuildasmalllibraryinthevillage.Withthehelpofafewwillinghands,shecollectedwoodandstones.Thevillagerswatchedwithcuriosityassheworkedtirelessly.Shealsofoundbooksonmedicineandstartedteachingbasicfirstaidtothechildren.Slowly,thevillagersbegantoseethevalueinwhatshewasdoing.Sheknewitwouldbeadifficultjourney,butshewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone.Hannahorganizedavillagefairtoshowcasetheknowledgeshehadlearned.Thereweredisplaysofnewfarmingtechniques,artworksinspiredbythebooks,andareadingcornerforeveryonetoenjoy.Thefairwasahugesuccess,andthevillagerswerenoweagertolearnmore.Hannah'seffortshadpaidoff.Theoncedullvillagewasnowbuzzingwithactivityandathirstforknowledge.Shehadproventhatwithdeterminationandthepowerofbooks,anythingwaspossible.Thevillagewasonitswaytoanewandbrighterfuture,allthankstoHannah'sunwaveringspirit.第二篇
Soshedidnotgiveuponthebooksinthecottage.Eachvisit,Hannahwouldcarefullyselectafewbookstotakebacktothevillage.Shestartedastorytellingsessionintheevenings,whereshewouldnarratethetalesfromthebooks.Thevillagerswereinitiallyskepticalbutweresooncaptivatedbythemagicalworldsshedescribed.Hannahalsofoundbooksonhandicraftsandtaughtthewomenhowtomakebeautifulornaments.Thenewskillsbroughtasenseofprideandaccomplishmenttothevillage.Sheknewitwouldbeadifficultjourney,butshewantedtosharethe“gold”witheveryone.Hannahsetupalendingsystemforthebooks,allowingeveryonetohaveachancetoread.Sheencouragedthevillagerstoformstudygroupstodiscusswhattheyhadlearned.Asthemonthspassed,thevillagesawpositivechanges.Thefieldsweremoreproductive,thehousesweredecoratedwithhandmadecrafts,andthechildrenweremorecuriousandeagertolearn.Hannah'sloveforbookshadnotonlytransformedthevillagebuthadalsounitedthepeople.Theynowworkedtogethertobuildabetterlife,inspiredbytheknowledgethathadoncebeenhiddenawayinanabandonedcottage.范文Soshedidnotgiveuponthebooksinthecottage.Shewenthomeandallnightlong,shereadtheadventuroustaleshid
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