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中考作文之經(jīng)歷感受型作文教學(xué)目標(biāo)審題準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全01詞匯豐富，短語多樣02語法正確，句式多變結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，書寫工整0304空白！瞎寫！抄寫閱讀！No！No！No！Weneedhelpthem！題目回顧PPT下載http:///xiazai/學(xué)校英語專欄以“Practicemakesperfect”

為題，向中學(xué)生開展征文活動(dòng)，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對該諺語的理解；2.你生活中的一個(gè)事例（例如：運(yùn)動(dòng)，樂器，家務(wù)，學(xué)習(xí)等方面）；3.你的感悟。主題:Practicemakesperfect

Whatdoesitmean?熟能生巧Practicing/Workinghardbecomebetteratsomethinghelpsyou題目回顧PPT下載http:///xiazai/學(xué)校英語專欄以“Practicemakesperfect”

為題，向中學(xué)生開展征文活動(dòng)，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對該諺語的理解；2.你生活中的一個(gè)事例（例如：運(yùn)動(dòng)，樂器，家務(wù)，學(xué)習(xí)等方面）；3.你的感悟。

要點(diǎn)：理解舉例子感悟文體：記敘+議論題目回顧注意：1.詞數(shù)100短文開頭已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容需涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean.

人稱：時(shí)態(tài)：第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般過去式為主審好題定方向?qū)彆r(shí)態(tài)審人稱審文體審主題01020304列要點(diǎn)05互評互鑒StructureLinkingwordsExpressionsPairwork佳作賞析佳作賞析Haveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean

thatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.Forexample,ifyouareaviolinlearner,youcanonlymakeprogressbypracticingplayingitoverandoveragain.Butit’snotjustrepeatingwhatyoudidlasttimebuttofindyourweaknessandgetridofit.Throughlotsofpractice,youcannotonlyplaythesongfluentlybutalsogainmuchexperienceonplayingit.Inmyeyes,thissayingissuitableforeverythingwedoinourlives.Whateveryourgoalis,youcanneverachieveitwithoutpractice.實(shí)例說明理解（續(xù)寫完整）感悟總結(jié)Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）?Howaboutyours?Tip1:wecanmakethearticleclearbydividingitintoseveralparagraphs.佳作鑒賞Haveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.Forexample,ifyouareaviolinlearner,youcanonlymakeprogressbypracticingplayingitoverandoveragain.Butit’snotjustrepeatingwhatyoudidlasttimebuttofindyourweaknessandgetridofit.Throughlotsofpractice,youcannotonlyplaythesongfluentlybutalsogainmuchexperienceonplayingit.Inmyeyes,thissayingissuitableforeverythingwedoinourlives.Whateveryourgoalis,youcanneverachieveitwithoutpractice.Linkingwords(連接詞)orphrases？Howaboutyours?Tip1:wecanmakethearticleclearbydividingitintoseveralparagraphs.Tip2:wecanmakethearticleclearbyusingthelinkingwords.佳作鑒賞Haveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.Forexample,ifyouareaviolinlearner,youcanonlymakeprogressbypracticingplayingitoverandoveragain.Butit’snotjustrepeatingwhatyoudidlasttimebuttofindyourweaknessandgetridofit.Throughlotsofpractice,youcannotonlyplaythesongfluentlybutalsogainmuchexperienceonplayingit.Inmyeyes,thissayingissuitableforeverythingwedoinourlives.Whateveryourgoalis,youcanneverachieveitwithoutpractice.Expressions?If條件狀語從句倒裝句賓語從句定語從句狀語從句Howaboutyours?Tip3:wecanmakethearticlebetterbyusingdifferentphrasesandsentencepatterns.

句型分析Imeanthatonlythroughpracticecanyoudoyourthingsperfectly.析成分：本句是由only引導(dǎo)的；only放于句首時(shí)，句子要用倒裝語序；句意：我的意思是只有通過練習(xí)，你才能做好你的事情。Imeanthemoreyoupractice,thebetteryouwillbe.---2024王梓睿、李梓杳、崔逸晨Imeanwe

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asmuchaspossible.---2023楊紫涵Imeanyoushouldspendmoretimepracticingonethingthatisvaluableandimportant.---2023張煦哲Imeanifyoutryyourbesttopracticesomething,youcandoitwell.---2024梁思然Asthesayinggoes,“useitorloseit.”---2023高靖航、石亞兵糾錯(cuò)實(shí)踐Aslongasyoupracticemore,youwill/canbesuccessful.主語+謂語合適的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞Correctionpractice糾錯(cuò)實(shí)踐Aslongaswetrytodoit,keeptryingandpracticemore,wecanmakeitperfect.謂語動(dòng)詞合適的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞Correctionpractice糾錯(cuò)實(shí)踐WhenIwaseight,myhandwritingwasreallybad.時(shí)態(tài)一致Correctionpractice句子提升Imean.youshouldnevergiveupandkeeppracticing.Imeanifyounevergiveupandkeeppracticing,youwillsucceedintheend.Otherexpressions:Imeanyouwillneversucceedunlessyounevergiveupandkeeppracticing.SentenceimprovementGroupDiscussionFourstudentsinagroup.Findtheshinypointsandmistakesinothermembers'articles.Ifthereareshinypoints,learnandimproveyourselves.Iftherearemistakes,correctandimprovethem.

After6mins,sharethemwithus.互幫互助師生共評Sharingmoment句子提升spendtime/moneydoingsth.點(diǎn)撥：花費(fèi)時(shí)間/金錢做某事仿寫：我花費(fèi)更多的時(shí)間和精力練習(xí)彈鋼琴。Ispent

moretimeandenergypracticingplayingthepiano.ittakessbtime/moneytodosthIttookme

moretimeandenergytopracticeplayingthepiano.Sentenceimprovement句子提升Whatameaningfuldaytomakesomethingoutofrecyclingmaterials！用回收材料做點(diǎn)東西，是多么有意義的一天??！仿寫：持續(xù)練習(xí)是多么重要?。owimportantitistokeeppracticing!Sentenceimprovement句子提升Continuingtoworkhardisnecessaryforyoutoachieveacademicsuccess.繼續(xù)努力是你取得學(xué)業(yè)成功的必要條件。仿寫：Keepingpracticingisnecessaryforustoimproveourselves.Itis+adj+forsb.todosthInorderto...持續(xù)練習(xí)是我們提升自我的必要條件。Itisnecessaryforustokeeppracticingtoachieveourdreams.Itisnecessaryforustokeeppracticingifwewanttoachieveourdreams.Inordertoachieveourdreams,itisnecessaryforustokeeppracticing.從句？Sentenceimprovement真題演練(2022北京改編)某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“提升效率”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假定你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)或生活中是如何提升效率的以及取得了什么效果。提示：(1)Howdoyouincreaseyoureffici