九年級下冊 英語 第二單元《Lesson 5 Writing》課件

Unit2

Cultureshock

Lesson5Writing

九年級下冊—上海教育出版社—英語—第二單元教學(xué)目標(biāo)

LearningObjectives通過這節(jié)課學(xué)習(xí)，你將會：1.掌握感謝郵件的格式；2.學(xué)習(xí)“表達(dá)感謝”的相關(guān)詞匯與句式結(jié)構(gòu)；3.

學(xué)習(xí)通過“增加細(xì)節(jié)”來表達(dá)真情實感Pre-writingHaveyouexperiencedcultureshock？Whohelpedyouovercomeit?Whatcanyoudotoshowyourgratitude(感謝)tothem?Doyouoftenjustsay“Thankyou”?Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou!IwenttoAustraliaandworkedasavoluntaryteachertwoyearsago.LikeBradLi,Istayedinahostfamily

andexperiencedcultureshock.Ifailedtounderstandthelocalcultureatfirst.Ididn'tgetusedtothefood.Ifeltlonely.Ididn'tunderstandtheEnglishidioms.Iwasmisunderstoodbyothers.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou!Luckily,theyhelpedmealotandtreatedmelikepartoftheirfamily!Iwasdeeplymovedbywhattheyhaddoneforme.Theexperiencewasreallyexcitingandvaluableforme!Feelingverygrateful,Ididsomethingtoshowmygratitude.gave

themahugcookedthemamealboughtthemsomeflowerssentthemsomepresentswrotethemathank-youemailHereismythank-youemailtomyhostfamilyinAustralia.DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLouBradhadasimilarexperiencelikeme.HostfamilyCultureshockGreatmemoriesConclusionHostfamilyCultureshockGreatmemoriesConclusionthelanguagethefoodtheschoolstayedina

smallvillagewereverykindorganizedmanyactivitiesplayedinthesnow,playedbaseballatHalloween,dressedasHarryPotteratThanksgiving,abigdinnerexcitingvaluableHehadagoodrelationshipwithhishostfamily.GreetingNames

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familyClosingYour

nameHowareyou?BodyWhile-writingImagineyouareBrad.Youaregoingtowriteathank-youemailtotheHurstfamily(P28).

Step1Writetheoutlineofthethank-youemail.【劃重點】Para.1問候，感謝Para.2回顧，收獲Para.3分享，邀請

Step1Writetheoutlineofthethank-youemail.Howareyou?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ienjoyedplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.IexperiencedthecultureshockintheUS.

IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.IwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitmeinChinasoon.

Step1Writetheoutlineofthethank-youemail.Step2Learnaboutthewritingskills.Whichexpressionisbetter?1.Thanksforyourdress.2.Ireallylikethebrightyellow

dressyouboughtmeyesterday!Thankyousomuch!Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2.Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Thanksforthedinnertonight!____________________________________________________________________________________________Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2.Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Thanksforthedinnertonight!____________________________________________________________________________________________Perfectdinner!Iliketheroastedchickenandthefreshvegetablesbest.

Youareamasterchef!Thanksforthedinnertonight!通過具體例子roastedchicken和thefreshvegetables來說明為什么個人覺得是perfectdinner，加上amasterchef的評價就很好表達(dá)感激之情。Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihadagoodtimeyesterday.____________________________________________________________________________________________Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2.Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihadagoodtimeyesterday.____________________________________________________________________________________________除了舉例，形容詞wonderful和副詞happily的使用也很生動。wonderful也可以用fantastic,marvelous等近義詞代替，happily可以用cheerfully代替。Whatawonderfulday!Wewentouttobreathethefreshairandlaughedhappilytogether.

Ihadagoodtimeyesterday.Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihopeyoucanvisitmyhometown,Beijing.____________________________________________________________________________________________Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2.Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihopeyoucanvisitmyhometown,Beijing.____________________________________________________________________________________________例子theForbiddenCity和

theGreatWall可以讓對方了解北京的名勝古跡，加上個人評價amazing會讓對方產(chǎn)生好感。Ihopeyoucanvisitmyhometown,Beijing.Therearesomanyplacesofinteresthere,liketheForbiddenCityandtheGreatWall.Theyareamazing!Howareyou?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ienjoyedplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.IexperiencedthecultureshockintheUS.

IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.IwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitmeinChinasoon.Step2Learnaboutthewritingskills.1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).原句：Howareyou?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.修改：Howtimeflies!IhavebeenbacktoChinaforamonth.Imissyousomuch!Howareyouthesedays?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ireallyappreciateit.原句：Ienjoyedplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.IexperiencedthecultureshockintheUS.修改：Ihavemanysweetmemorieswithyou,likeplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.Thetasteofthedeliciousdisheswassogreat!ThoughIexperiencedthecultureshock,suchasthelanguage,thefoodandtheschool,youalwaysgavemecourage.Thankstotheactivitiesyouorganized,Ifeltmorerelaxed.1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2.Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).原句：IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.IwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitmeinChinasoon.

修改：IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.Theyweresocuriousaboutmystay.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitsomeplacesofinterestaroundmycity.I’msureChinesecultureisanothergreatexperienceforyou!Can’twaittoseeyousoon!1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2.Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).Step3Writethefinalthank-youemail.Pleaseaddyourownideas!請加入自己的想法，完善作文SamplewritingDearMrandMrsHurst,Howtimeflies!IhavebeenbacktoChinaforamonth.Imissyousomuch!Howareyouthesedays?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ireallyappreciateit.Ihavemanysweetmemorieswithyou,likeplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.Thetasteofthedeliciousdisheswassogreat!ThoughIexperiencedthecultureshock,suchasthelanguage,thefoodandtheschool,youalwaysgavemecourage.Thankstotheactivitiesyouorganized,Ifeltmorerelaxed.IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.Theyweresocuriousaboutmystay.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitsomeplacesofinterestaroundmycity.I’msureChinesecultureisanothergreatexperienceforyou!Can’twaittoseeyousoon!YoursBradExtensionIamnotsatisfiedwiththeemail.Canyouhelpmeimproveit?DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLouPost-writing

WordBank:關(guān)于文化沖擊的詞匯文化沖擊和……不一樣在某種程度上感覺孤獨適應(yīng)未能理解讓自己被他人理解被誤解cultureshockbedifferentfromtoacertaindegreefeellonelygetusedtofailtounderstandmakeoneselfunderstoodbemisunderstoodby...Post-writing

WordBank:如何表達(dá)感謝Level1：It’ssokindofyou.

Youarethebest/greatest.Youaresoamazing/fantastic!

Thankyouforyourhelp./Thankyouforhelpingme.Iwanttosaythankyoufromthebottomofmyheart.Level2：Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Iamtrulygratefultoyouforyourhelp.

I'dliketoexpressmygratitudetoyou.Icouldn’thavedoneitwithoutyou!You’reoneinamillion.

你真是萬里挑一。Ican’tthankyouenough.感激不盡。Post-writing

WordBank:如何表達(dá)感謝Summary1.Theformatofathank-youemail.2.Twowritingskills:1)Expressauthenticfeelings(真情實感).2)Addmoredetails(細(xì)節(jié)).3.Someusefulexpressionsofshowinggratitude.Itisimportanttoshowgratitudewhenwereceivehelp.Homework1.Polish(潤色)yourthank-youemail/Rewritethefinalthank-youemail.2.Finishtheextensionexercise(選做).Thankyou！Unit2

CultureshockLesson5Writing(答疑)九年級下冊—上海教育出版社—英語—第二單元DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLou拓展練習(xí)講解DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLou拓展練習(xí)講解DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?It’salongtimesincewemeteachother.ThetimeinAustraliahasbecomepartofmysweetmemories.Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Tohelpmeovercomethecultureshock,youplannedsomanyactivities,suchashavingapicnicbytheseaandvisitingyourneighbours.

Itwasalsoverykindofyoutoinvitemetoyourfamilyparty!

Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.Myfriendsareamazedatmyexperience.IhopeyoucanalsovisitGuangzhou.Youwillenjoylotsofdeliciousfoodshere.TheCBDofGuangzhouiswonderful!Youwillloveit!WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLou寫作中的易錯點--詞性Iwasdeeplymovedbyyour________(kind)and________(friend).Youwillfindthe________(charming)ofthecultureofChina.Youhavegreat_________(interest)inChineseculture.Youare_________(interest)inChinesecul