專題09 書面表達(dá)-2023年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（上海專用）

2023上海中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞第五期專題09書面表達(dá)一、話題作文1．（2023·上海虹口·統(tǒng)考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）下列是學(xué)校征集的模范學(xué)生的其中四條標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，你最認(rèn)同哪一條？為什么？請舉例說明。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。3.請選擇一條填在橫線上作為標(biāo)題。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文BehonestAsweknow,honestyisveryimportant.Itisoneofpeople’sgoodqualities.PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.ButIthoughtitwasagainsthonesty,soItoldhimnottocopymyhomeworkandIwouldhelphimnexttime.Honestyisquiteanimportantqualitytoaperson.SoIthinkasamodelstudent,hemustbehonest.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：本文首先要選擇其中一條標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，并通過舉例說明，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，表示誠實(shí)是很重要的，并講述為什么誠實(shí)很重要；第二步，通過舉例說明誠實(shí)的重要性；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①oneof……之一②playcomputergames玩電腦游戲[高分句型]①PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.(and連接的并列句)②Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)二、材料作文2．（2023·上海長寧·統(tǒng)考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mysuggestionsforthenewschoolmates”(請根據(jù)下面的提示，以“給新同學(xué)的建議”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)度過了幾年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活，你終將面臨畢業(yè)，而馬上又會有新的同學(xué)即將進(jìn)入你上過的初中。請根據(jù)你的親身體驗(yàn)寫封短信給這些新同學(xué)，給他們提一些學(xué)習(xí)生活方面的建議，如：學(xué)習(xí)方法、參與活動、業(yè)余生活、師生關(guān)系、課后作業(yè)等等。短信的開頭2句已提供。(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名以及其他標(biāo)志性的具體信息，否則不予評分。)MysuggestionsforthenewschoolmatesDearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou.Inyourschoollife,youshouldpreparewellforeachlesson.Inclass,youmustlistentotheteachercarefully.Andyoushouldalwaysbefriendlytoyourclassmatesandteachers.Besides,it’simportantforyoutodoyourhomeworkonyourown.Inyourdailylife,yououghttokeepahealthydiet.Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.Youcantakeactivepartinallkindsofactivities.Andyoushouldlearntomakegooduseofyourtime.Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfulschoollife.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹對新同學(xué)各方面的建議；第二步，結(jié)尾總結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befriendlyto對……友好②allkindsof各種各樣的③preparewellfor準(zhǔn)備好[高分句型]Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.（It固定句型）3．（2023·上海·九年級一模）三人行，必有我?guī)熝?。在我們的成長過程中，一定有這樣一位“老師”，他們的某種品質(zhì)讓我們佩服，他們的某個行為讓我們贊嘆，或者他們說的某句話給予了我們力量……每個人都有長處，如果我們能善于發(fā)現(xiàn)他人的長處，借此來彌補(bǔ)自己的短處，那么我們將變得更加優(yōu)秀。請按以下要求，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容須包含以下要點(diǎn)：1.Whoisyour“teacher”?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?3.Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?要求：1.80~120詞；2.文中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Whenthreearewalkingtogether,Iamsuretofindteachersamongthem.”MybestfriendLucyissucha“teacher”whotaughtmetheimportanceofplanningahead.Lastsummer,LucyandImadeanappointmenttogoclimbingafterfinishingourhomework.ThinkingIstillhaddaystofinishit,Ikeptputtingoffdoingmyhomework.Asaresult,LucyfinisheditaheadoftimewhileIhadtoomuchhomeworktodo.IhadtobreakmypromiseandapologizetoLucy.Althoughshefeltdisappointed,sheexpressedherunderstandingandadvisedmetomakeaplanahead.Insteadofgoingclimbing,shevolunteeredinaparkatlast.Ihavelearnedifweplanaheadandcarryoutourplansaccordingly,westillhaveplentyoftimetogetthingsdoneanddomoremeaningfulthings.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作提示已給出，要圍繞寫作提示進(jìn)行寫作，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，使用提示中所給的諺語“三人行，必有我?guī)熝伞?，交代寫作目的；第二步，介紹自己難忘的經(jīng)歷；第三步，介紹從這次經(jīng)歷收獲了什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①makeanappointment預(yù)約②putoff推遲③breakmypromise違背諾言④plentyof大量的[高分句型]①Asaresult,LucyfinisheditaheadoftimewhileIhadtoomuchhomeworktodo.（while引導(dǎo)的比較狀語從句）②Ihavelearnedifweplanaheadandcarryoutourplansaccordingly,westillhaveplentyoftimetogetthingsdoneanddomoremeaningfulthings.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）4．（2023·上?！ぞ拍昙壱荒＃┠愕膶W(xué)校正在開展主題為“Themostbeautifulvolunteer”的征文活動，請寫一篇文章介紹一位志愿者，以及她/他的事跡。文章內(nèi)容可以包含以下幾個問題：1.Whoishe/she?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?(Whatdoeshe/shedo?)3.Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheMostBeautifulVolunteerLiHongisapolitegirl.Sheisbothkindandpatient.Sheisahelpfulvolunteer.Atschool,sheisalwaysreadytohelpteachersandclassmates.Atweekends,shetakespartinalotofactivities.Sheoftendoessomecleaninginthestreet.Besides,shegoestothelibrarytohelpcarrybooks.Also,shelooksafteroldpeopleinthenursinghome.WeallthinkLiHongissuchanexcellentgirlthatweshouldlearnfromher.We’dliketorecommendherforTheMostBeautifulVolunteer.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中對這位志愿者的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“寫一篇文章介紹一位志愿者，以及她/他的事跡”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“品質(zhì)、所做的事、對她的評價等”幾個方面重點(diǎn)介紹這位志愿者的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)“我們想推薦她成為最美志愿者”的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bereadytodosth.樂意做某事；②takepartin參加；③lookafter照顧；④nursinghome養(yǎng)老院。[高分句型]①WeallthinkLiLeiissuchanexcellentboythatweshouldlearnfromhim.（such...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）②Manyvolunteerscometothelibrariestodotheserviceafterwork.(動詞不定式作目的狀語)5．（2023·上?！ぞ拍昙壱荒＃┟總€人在人生旅途中總會遇到過困難，遭受挫折。在你遇到的那些困難和挫折時，是否也有那么一個人曾經(jīng)啟發(fā)你、引領(lǐng)你笑著面對困境，努力戰(zhàn)勝困難。請根據(jù)表格提示內(nèi)容，選擇其中一個對象（老師，同學(xué)，父母或者其他人）寫出你們之間的故事。Whatdifficultiesyoumetfailtheexam,loseconfidence,feellonely…Whohelpedyouteachers/friends/parents/strangers...Howdidhe/shehelpyouencouraged,offersuggestions…Whathaveyoulearnedbepositive,brave,confident...要求：1.包含所有要點(diǎn)，不逐字翻譯，圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.書寫規(guī)范、工整，條理清晰；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地名、和校名等；4.詞數(shù)：100左右。首句供參考：Lookingbacktomypastlife,I’llneverforget…___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Lookingbacktomypastlife,I’llneverforgetmyfriendTomwhoalwaysencouragesmewhenIwanttogiveup.Onedayonahotafternoon,weweregoingtohaveaPEtest,whichIwasnotgoodatit.Whentheteststarted,Iwasalreadyoutofenergy.SoIranmuchmoreslowlythanmyclassmates.Justatthemoment,IheardTomsaid,“Comeon!Youcandoit.Neverquit.”SuddenlyIfeltthewarmthfromthebottomofmyheart.Istartedtotrymybesttofollowhim.Atlast,Ipassedthetest.WithoutTom’sencouragement,Iwouldn’tdoitsuccessfully.AndIalsolearnedthatkeepworkinghardandneverquit.Doubtlessly,you’llsucceed.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)；注意行文連貫、條理清晰，無語法使用錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題；第二步，圍繞要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹，具體包括遇到的困難、他/她是如何幫助你等方面；第三步，闡述自己從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)習(xí)的東西。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lookbackto回顧②giveup放棄③begoodat擅長④tryone’sbesttodosth.盡某人最大努力做某事[高分句型]①I’llneverforgetmyfriendTomwhoalwaysencouragesmewhenIwanttogiveup.（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②weweregoingtohaveaPEtest,whichIwasnotgoodatit.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）③AndIalsolearnedthatkeepworkinghardandneverquit.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）6．（2023·上?！そy(tǒng)考一模）中國的茶是世界上最受歡迎的飲品之一，假如你叫李華，你的學(xué)校正在舉行用英語講好中國故事的比賽，請圍繞茶的歷史、種類、加工、飲茶、益處等方面，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，以“ChineseTeaCulture”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順；2.短文應(yīng)包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐字翻譯；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【答案】例文ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld.Chinesepeoplehavelikeddrinkingteasinceancienttimes.Teahasahistoryofover4000yearssincetheChinesebegantogrowanddrinktea.TherearemanykindsofteainChina,suchasgreentea,blacktea,oolongteaandsoon.LongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.Peopleuseteapotsorteacupstodrinktea.Theyaremadeofceramics.Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文；②時態(tài)：本文采用“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，具體闡述茶的歷史、種類、加工等；第二步，闡述喝茶的好處；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①manykindsoftea很多種茶②andsoon等等③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.（動名詞作主語）②It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.（主語從句）③Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.（when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）7．（2022春·上海金山·九年級校考一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myviewsononlinestudy”(以“在線學(xué)習(xí)之我見”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格)隨著在線學(xué)習(xí)模式的開啟，你對在線學(xué)習(xí)的態(tài)度是什么？你在線上學(xué)習(xí)的過程中有什么經(jīng)驗(yàn)可以向大家分享？請結(jié)合自己或他人在線學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓@個話題的看法。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyviewsononlinestudyThisspringournewtermdoesn’tcomeontimebecausetheepidemicbrokeout.Wehavetolearnonlineathome.WehavelessonsfromMondaytoFriday.Classesbeginat7:30andendat4:00everyday.WestudyMath,English,Chinese,PhysicsandPE.Duringonlinelearning,therearemanyproblems.Somestudentsthinkthatthiskindoflearningmethodisveryfreshandcanstimulatetheirinterestinlearning.Iftheymeetproblemsinlearning,theycanasktheteacherforhelpintime.Butsomeotherstudentsthinkit’snotgoodbecausetheycan’tconcentrateonlearningandtheycannotstudyascarefullyasinclass.Whentheirparentsgotowork,theyfeellonelyathomealone.Asforme,IlikelearningathomebecauseIneedn’tgetupearly.Ihavemoresleeptime.Iwon’thurrytoschool.ButImissmyschool,myteachersandmyclassmate.Ilookforwardtomeetingthemsoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作中需要回答額問題已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“內(nèi)容提示”中的要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹在家在線學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷；第二步，分享同學(xué)在線學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和看法；第三步，表達(dá)自己對在線學(xué)習(xí)的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①stimulate激發(fā)②concentrateon專心于……[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkthatthiskindoflearningmethodisveryfreshandcanstimulatetheirinterestinlearning.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）②Whentheirparentsgotowork,theyfeellonelyathomealone.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）三、電子郵件8．（2023·上海徐匯·統(tǒng)考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）。假設(shè)你是Joe，你校校報(bào)正在通過郵件評選最受歡迎的一個欄目（section）。備選欄目如下：·Schoolsports·Wordgamesandcrosswordpuzzles·Schoolclubs·BookorFilmreviews·Poemsbystudents請給校報(bào)寫封郵件，談?wù)勀愕倪x擇，并簡要說明理由。注意：1.信中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearEditor,I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.Fromthepointofmyview,myfavoriteoneistheSchoolsports.Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.Firstofall,everyteenagerhashisownsportsidol.Inthiscolumn,wecangetthelatestsportsinformationintime.Secondly,inthiscolumn,wecanoftengetsomesportssuggestions,whichwillhelpstudentstoarrangesportsreasonablyduringschool.Yours,Joe【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求根據(jù)題目要求談?wù)勀阆矚g的欄目及原因。不要遺漏題目中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹校報(bào)正在通過郵件評選最受歡迎的一個欄目的消息；第二步，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g哪個欄目；第三步，談?wù)勀氵x擇這個欄目的理由。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Fromthepointofmyview在我看來②Firstofall首先③helpsbtodosth幫助某人做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.（賓語從句）②Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.（定語從句）四、看圖作文9．（2023·上海楊浦·統(tǒng)考一模）LastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Lookatthepicturesandwriteastoryinatleast80wordsonthetopicLuckyMary(上周五，Mary去了夜市。請根據(jù)圖片提示，以《幸運(yùn)的瑪麗》為題，寫一篇不少于80個單詞的短文)寫作提示及要求：①下列詞匯你在寫作的過程中可能會使用到：dartn.飛鏢，teddybearn.玩具熊，gamestand游戲攤位。②關(guān)注圖片傳遞的信息與圖片之間的關(guān)聯(lián)，適當(dāng)增加對話或內(nèi)心獨(dú)白。③寫作內(nèi)容中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LuckyMaryLastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.Theprizewasateddybear.Marylikedthisteddybearverymuch.Shespenttenyuanplayingwithdarts.Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.Intheend,allthreeofherdartswerehit.Thegamestandownerwassurprised.Marywontheteddybear.Shewenthomewiththeteddybearhappily.How