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專(zhuān)題03主題分類(lèi)要掌握寫(xiě)作片刻不停留主題訓(xùn)練敘事憶舊名師點(diǎn)撥：這個(gè)主題訓(xùn)練是以記敘文為主的練習(xí)，也是初中學(xué)生必須掌握的寫(xiě)作文體之一。要寫(xiě)好此類(lèi)主題，學(xué)生要學(xué)會(huì)做一個(gè)有心人，注意平時(shí)身邊發(fā)生的小事（如：愛(ài)心捐款活動(dòng)、志愿者活動(dòng)等），從一個(gè)小的切入口來(lái)，清楚描述事情，從而悟出道理。=1\*ROMANI主題詞匯anunforgettableexperience（一次難忘的經(jīng)歷），havealotofmemories（有很多回憶）,beinagoodmood,learn…from..,lookforwardtodoing,beproudof,inorderto,cometrue,dosb.afavor,givesb.ahand,helpsb.withsth.,withthehelpofsb.,takegoodcareofsb.,makeone'slifehappyandfulloflaughter（使某人的生活快樂(lè)并充滿笑聲）=2\*ROMANII常用句型Themore...,themore......isthebestwayto......inorderto...Itiscommonknowledgethat...Ioncehadanexperience...Itisthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife.Iamsurethat...Memoryisakindoftreasure.…playsanimportantroleinourdailylife.Everyoneknows,"...'Weshoulddo...soastodo...=3\*ROMANIII模擬試題Themostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorya.Whathappenedtoyou?b.Whenandwheredidithappen?c.Whyisitunforgettable?要點(diǎn)分析：可以寫(xiě)寫(xiě)你的經(jīng)歷（時(shí)間、人物、事件、結(jié)果）和你的感受。仔細(xì)審題，確定時(shí)態(tài)（一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主），確定需要用的詞組和句型。為什么難忘？從你的經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了什么（詳寫(xiě)）?切記不要偏題（如：不是“難忘的”而寫(xiě)成其他的感受）。寫(xiě)作思路I)你的經(jīng)歷（whenwhere,who,what,how...)Ioncehadanexperience...Itisthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylite...Threeyearsago,myparentsandIflewtoJapan.MyclassmatesandIhadabirthdaypartyinMarchthisyear.ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothepark,LastsummerIwenttovisitmyunclebyair.Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytraining.Oneday,Inoticedamanwasstealingawoman'spurseonabus.WewenttoDisneyland.Itisanamazingamusementpark.WegotupearlyinthemorningandwewereallveryexcitedbecausemyfamilyandIwenttothecountrysidetohaveapicnic.TherearealotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan'tforget.WhenIwastenyearsold,Itravelledbyplanewithmyparents.Asweallknow,everyonehassomethingspecialinhislife.IthinkIwillneverforgetmy14thbirthdaybecauseonthatdaymyparentsgavememyfirstbirthdaypartyinahotel.Ithinkmychildhoodwaswonderful,anditmademeknow:"Tobepatient.”Itwasahappychildhoodthatwastilledwithknowledgeandrelaxation.WhenIopenthebookwhichisfullofphotos,IalwayslookbackonwhenIwassmall.It'sreallythemostvaluabletimethatIhave.Iwillneverforgetit.II)你的感受Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.Thereweremanyinterestingthingsandmanyfamouscartooncharacters.Ihadawonderfultimeinit.Onthatday,IbegantofeelthatIhavethedutyformylife.AndImustbestronger.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.Howfrighteningandunforgettabletheexperiencewas!Inevertookaplanebefore,soIwastooexcitedtofallasleepthewholenight.It'sreallyanimportantdaytomeandI’llbekindtomyparentsallthetime.Everyonehasadifferentchildhood.Itmaybewonderful,excitingorhard.Ihaveanunforgettablechildhood.Childhoodisamemorywithoutpressure,competitionandhypocrisy(虛偽).Friendssharecommoninterests.Itisshownthattwopeoplebecomefriendseasilywhentheyhavesomecommoninterests.Forexample,twofriendsmaybeinlovewiththesamesports,studyinginthesameschoolorlivinginthesameneighborhood.Friendsmakesacrifices.Friendsmakesacrificesforeachother.Friendsneverrunawayfromdifficulties.Itisalwaysshownthattruefriendsalwaysstandupfortheirfriendsintimesofdifficulties.Understanding:Friendsunderstandeachotherwithoutevensayingaword.Asinglesmilecanbrightenupthefacesofallthefriends.范文評(píng)講：原文稿WhenIwasaGradeTwopupil,IlikedplayingthefirecrackerverymuchduringtheSpringFestival.Butasayoungboy,Ididn'tknowhowtoplayitsafely.Anaccidenthappened.Oncethefirecrackerwaslit,andmyfaceandfingerswereinjuredbythefire.Itwasnotveryserious,butIstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.Iwastakengoodcareofbymyparentsandnurses.Therefore,youcanhardlyknowthatbylookingatmyfaceandfingers.Itwasasadandunforgettableexperienceinmylife.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifIcouldn'tknowthatitissafe.Ilearnsafetyfirst.點(diǎn)評(píng)與評(píng)分這是一篇敘事性的文章，在這篇文章中，作者選擇了一件小事，從過(guò)年玩炮竹受傷，明白了“安全第一”的道理。事情很小，但選材很新，意義很深刻。以小見(jiàn)大，正是這篇文章的成功之處。按中考作文20分計(jì)算，屬于第二~第一檔的文章，可得16~17分，需改進(jìn)之處：Itwasnotveryserious,butIstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.因?yàn)閍bsent是形容詞，所以應(yīng)與be動(dòng)詞搭配在一起使用，wasabsent.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifIcouldn'tknowthatitissafe.這句話中安全是要“確保”的，所以把know改為makesure更合理。?修改稿WhenIwasaGradeTwopupil,IlikedplayingthefirecrackerverymuchduringtheSpringFestival.Butasayoungboy,Ididn'tknowhowtoplayitsafely.Anaccidenthappened.Oncethefirecrackerwaslit,andmyfaceandfingerswereinjuredbythefire.Itwasnotveryserious,butIwasstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.Iwastakengoodcareofbymyparentsandnurses.Therefore,youcanhardlyknowthatbylookingatmyfaceandfingers.Itwasasadandunforgettableexperienceinmylife.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifIcouldn'tmakesurethatitissafe.Ilearnsafetyfirst.范文選登：1.WhenIwastwelve,myclassmatesandIhadafootballmatchinthepark.Allofuswereinterestedinit.Westartedthematchatnineo'clock.Althoughwelostthismatch,wewerestillveryhappy.Afterthematch,wewereverytired,sowewenttotheKFCtohavearest.Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.2.Threeyearsago,myparentsandIflewtoJapan.Isawitfromtheplane.Oh,itisabeautifulisland.TherewewenttoDisneyland.Itisanamazingamusementpark.Thereweremanyinterestingthingsandmanyfamouscartooncharacters.Ihadawonderfultimeinit.ThenwewenttoaJapaneserestaurant.Allthefoodwasdelicious.Wehadagoodmeal!Thatismyunforgettableexperience.3.LastSundaywasmybirthday.Mybirthdayisalwaysasweetexperienceformeeveryyear.Sowasthisone.WegotupearlyinthemorningandwewereallveryexcitedbecausemyfamilyandIwenttothecountryside.tohaveapicnic.Afterthatmyfatherdroveustothebeach.Thereweregoodviewsandthewindblewgently.Itwasverycomfortable.Atnightwewentbackhome.AndMumcookednoodlescalledLongLifeNoodlesforme.Itwasverydelicious.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.Whatanunforgettableexperience!4.There'realotofmemoriesinmymindwhichIwillneverforget.ItwasMonday,andtheweatherwasalittlehot.Afterhavingsomanylessons,Iwentoutofthemaingateofschoolwithmyfriends.Ilookedaroundtofindmyfather'scar,butIfailed.What'smuchworse,IforgottotakemycellphonesoIcouldn'tcallmyparents.Unfortunately,Ididn'tknowthatwhileIwaswaitingformyfatheranxiously,myfatherwaswaitingwithworry.Atlast,Icouldn'tbearitandtookataxitogethomeandmyfatherdrovehomealone.Howunforgettabletheexperiencewas!Fromthisexperience,IlearnthatIshallbecareful.IfIamcareless,Iwillgetmyselfintotrouble.?相關(guān)主題A______(happy/bad/special)memoryA(n)_______(lucky/unforgettable/...)experience/dayThemomentIwaspraisedby_______a.Whopraisedyou?b.Whenandwhywereyoupraised?c.Howdidyoufeel?d.Whatdidyouthinkofatthatmoment?ThemostexcitingmomentWhathappenedthatday?Whywasitveryexciting?Howdidyoufeel?Mypresentdays/AdiaryMychildhoodAdayI’llneverforgetLovearoundus(2examples)ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysAvisitto_______AdayinspringThegooddeedsaroundme.,ThecomingweekendI________ThefirstexperienceI________Thatdaywe________Iwillneverforget________Whowillyouneverforget?b.Whatwillyouneverforget?c.Whywillyouneverforget?主題訓(xùn)練解決問(wèn)題名師點(diǎn)撥：這個(gè)主題訓(xùn)練包括學(xué)生作業(yè)量問(wèn)題，如何看待考試和測(cè)驗(yàn)，以及如何與父母進(jìn)行溝通這幾個(gè)方面。有效地解決這些擺在學(xué)生面前的現(xiàn)實(shí)問(wèn)題，將會(huì)對(duì)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活起到積極作用。=1\*ROMANI主題詞匯Homeworkandexams:makefulluseoftime(利用時(shí)間),thebestwayofchecking,takeiteasy（放松些）,somuchhomeworktodo,complainaboutsth.,encouragesb.todosth.,givesomeadvicecommunication:happiness,sadness,feelings,communication,expect,smile,trouble,discuss,argue,getonwellwithsb./sth.,generationgap(代溝),takegoodcareof,playtogether,haveatalkwithsb.,quarrelwithsb.(與某人爭(zhēng)吵),helpeachother,listentosb.patiently=2\*ROMANII常用句型Romewasn'tbuiltinaday.Iusedtohavethesameproblems,butIhavesolvedthem.Ithinkyoumustbepatienttofacealltheproblems.Youshouldbelievethattheharderyouwork,themoreyouearn.Weshouldimproveourselvestosolvetheseproblems."Nopains,nogains!"There'snosuccesswithouthardwork.Themoreyoucomplain,theworseyoufeel.Ihopewecanunderstandeachother.It'snecessarytounderstandeachother.Asthesayinggoes,"Parentsaresunlightinthedark."Althoughwesometimesquarrelwitheachother,yetwegetonwelllater.Weshouldgetonwellwithourparents.Parentscannotonlyhelpyou,butalsobringyouhappiness.Everybodyneedsparentstotalkwithandgetconfidencefrom.Don'targue,butdiscuss.Weneedtolearnhowtotakecareofourparents.=3\*ROMANIII模擬試題________inmyeyesa.Whatdoyouthinkof________?b.Whydoyouthinkso?(Givetworeasons.)c.Whatisyoursuggestionabout________?要點(diǎn)分析：本題寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括三個(gè)部分：你對(duì)……的看法、原因及你的建議。第二點(diǎn)或第三點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)展開(kāi)，注意詞組和句子的運(yùn)用。時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作思路：=1\*ROMANI)針對(duì)alotofhomework的解決方法Itiscommontohavealotofhomeworkatourage.Asasecondaryschoolstudent,it'snecessaryforustodoalotofhomework.Ithinkalotofhomeworkisn'tveryfrightening.Nomatterhowmuchhomeworkthereis,youshouldfinishitbyyourself.Perhapsyoudon'tknowhowtouseyourtimeproperly.Youshouldmakefulluseoftimeatschoolandnotspendtoomuchtimeonrelaxing.Youcandothehomeworkassoonastheclassisover.IalsohavealotofhomeworkwhichIdon'twanttodo.Butweshoulddoitbecauseit'sourdutyandit'sveryhelpfulanduseful.Youmustbepatientwithhomework.Althoughthereisalotofhomework,youstillneedtodoitcarefully.Youshouldknowthatthemorehomeworkyoudo,thebettermarksyouwillget.Doyouwanttorealizeyourambition?Ifyoudo,finishyourhomeworkcarefully.=2\*ROMANII)針對(duì)toomanyexams的解決方法Anexamcanprovehowhardyouwork.Throughexams,weknowmoreaboutourselves.Mid-termexamsarejustthemiddle,nottheend.Youstillhavetimetoimprove,andtomakeprogress.Inaddition,examsarethebestwayofcheckingwhetherwestudywellandunderstandwell.Youknowwhatyouarepooratbyexams.Youshouldacceptexams,andtrytoenjoythem.Examsarethechancetocheckourstudy,sojusttakeiteasy.Andifyoukeepworkinghard,youwon'tbeafraidofitanylonger.Regardexamsasdoinghomeworkandtakeiteasy.Inmyview,havingexamscancheckwhatyouhavelearntandwhetheryouhaveobtainedtheknowledge.Youmaythinkit'sjustakindofexercisethatyoudoeveryday.Asweallknow,wearegoingtofaceoneofthegreatestexamsinourlives.Sohavingmanyexamsisgoodforus.III)針對(duì)getalongwithparents的解決方法Spendtimetogether.InsteadofplayingacomputergameorwatchingTV,youcangooutsidetogetherwithyourparents.Bekind.Youcanmakeyourparentshappyalldaywithahug,acardorajoke.It'salsolovelywhenakidhelpstodosomehouseworkwithoutbeingasked.Showyourcare.Youcanshowyourlovebyrespectingeachother,andbeingcaringandpolite.Shareyourfeelingsandaskforhelp.Tellyourparentsityou'resad.Ifyoudon'tusuallydothis,tryitandyou'llbeglad.Doyourbestatwhateveryoudo.Itmakesthemhappytoseehowyou'returnedintosuchagreatkid.范文評(píng)講：原文稿ExamsinmyeyesAsastudentinChina,examsarealmostthemostimportantthingstome.TheycanshowhowmuchI'velearntfromschoolandwhatprogressI'vemade.Inaddition,IcanfindmydisadvantagesfromexamsandthenIcanworkhardertocorrectthemistakes.Soexamshelpusunderstandourlessons,buttoomanyofthembringusalotofpressure.Somestudentsevengettoonervoustofallasleepatnightbeforeexams.That'sterrible.Therevisionbeforeexamsalsohelpmefacethemeasily.Moreimportantly,agoodrestrefreshesmymemorysometimes.Weshouldn'tstayuplateatnighttogooverourlessons.Thatwillbeharmfultoourhealth.Examsarenotasfrighteningassomepeopleimagine.Justtakeiteasy,andmaybetheresultwillbecomeasurprise.點(diǎn)評(píng)與評(píng)分作者在整篇文章中用較為成熟的想法和流暢的語(yǔ)句表達(dá)了他對(duì)“考試、測(cè)驗(yàn)制度”的真實(shí)看法。文章觀點(diǎn)鮮明、理由充分。按中考作文20分計(jì)算，屬于第二檔~第一檔的文章，可得15~17分，需改進(jìn)之處：1.Inaddition…mistakes這個(gè)句子可用when句型，更為簡(jiǎn)潔，避免重復(fù)使用Ican。2.第一段中的理由和建議可作適當(dāng)調(diào)整，側(cè)重點(diǎn)應(yīng)與作者觀點(diǎn)一致。3.文章可適當(dāng)刪減，使語(yǔ)言更加精煉，結(jié)尾應(yīng)加上總結(jié)詞。修改稿AsastudentinChina,examsarealmostthemostimportantthingstome.TheycanshowhowmuchI'velearntfromschoolandwhatprogressI'vemade.Inaddition,whenIfindmydisadvantagesfromexams,Icanworkhardertocorrectthemistakesintime.Frommypointofview,therevisionsbeforeexamsalsohelpmefacethemeasily.Moreimportantly,agoodrestrefreshesmymemorysometimes.Stayinguplateatnightwillbeharmfultoourhealth.Tosumup,examsarenotasfrighteningassomepeopleimagine.Justtakeiteasy,andmaybetheresultwillbecomeasurprise.范文選登：Inmyschool,therearetoomanyexams.WhenItakeexams,Iusuallyfeelbored.Somestudentswhofailintheexamsmaynotbeinterestedinstudy.What'smore,ifsomestudentsdon'tpasstheexams,theirparentswillbeangrywiththem.Itmakesthestudentsdepressed.Inmyopinion,examsshouldbeeasierthanbeforesothatmoststudentscanpass.Afterall,it'smoreimportanttomakestudentsconfident.范文鏈接:1．學(xué)校就學(xué)生的作業(yè)量問(wèn)題要求各班開(kāi)展家長(zhǎng)會(huì)進(jìn)行討論，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)要介紹并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。MostparentsAfewparents.reviewwhatstudentshavelearnt.developstudents'minds.stopstudentsplayingcomputergames.….takealotoftime.cannothaveagoodrest.cannotdothethingsstudentslike.…Lastweekourclasshadaparents'meeting.Atthemeeting,alltheparentstalkedaboutwhetherdoingalotofhomeworkwasusefulornot.Manyparentsthoughtthatdoingmuchhomeworkwasuseful.Theythoughtbydoingalotofhomework,thestudentscouldreviewwhattheyhadlearnt.Itwouldalsohelptodevelopthestudents'mindsandstopthemplayingcomputergames.Butafewparentsthoughtthattoomuchhomeworkwasuseless.Becausedoingmuchhomeworktookalotoftime,studentscouldnothaveagoodrest.What'smore,theycouldnotdothethingstheyliked.Inmyopinion,doingasuitableamountofhomeworkisnecessaryandhelpful.2.WhenImetadifficultyIusedtobeaveryfatgirlwhenIwasyoung.Thedailylifewastoughthen.Itwasdifficultformetodressmyself."Imetadifficulty,"Ithought.Tofacethereality,Istoppedeatingunhealthyfoodandhadexerciseeveryday.Itwashardatthebeginning.However,Iwasbraveenoughtodosomesportswhichhelpedmeloseweight..Noweverythingisdifferent.I'mnotworriedanylonger.IamreallyveryhappyafterIovercomethe"evil".IthinkwhenImeetadifficulty,IshouldworkhardsothatIcanmakemydreamcometrue.3.Howtocommunicatewithyourparentswell?IamaGrade9student.Ihaveaveryhappyfamily.Mymotherisadoctor,andmyfatherisanengineer.Theylovemeverymuch,andIlovethem,too.Butrecentlyweoftenquarrelledwitheachotherformystudy.TheywerenotsatisfiedwithmyEnglishandcomplainedaboutmyplayingcomputergames,soIfeltveryunhappy.Ithinktheydidn'tunderstandme.SoIdecidedtotalkwithmyparentsandtellthemmyfeelings.Ihopewecanunderstandeachother.AsaGrade9student,Iambusywithmystudyinourschool.Everydaywehavealotofhomeworktodo,sowehavenotimetorelax.Weshouldstoptorelaxwhenwefeeltired,otherwisewecan'tfocusonstudying.Aftertalkingwithmyparents,myparentsagreewithme,sonowIgetonwellwiththem.Infact,duringmygrowingup,myparentsnotonlyhelpmewithmystudybutalsobringmehappiness.Ithinkeverybodyneedsparentstotalkwithandgetconfidencefrom.相關(guān)主題How'stherelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren?Exam——Aviewfromjuniorhighstudents.EnglishhomeworkandIWhenImetadifficultyWhatdifficultydidyoumeet?Describehowyoufacedandovercameit.Howdidyoufeelafteryouovercameit?Howtocommunicatewithyourparents?Doyouusuallycommunicatewithyourparents?Why?(Givetworeasons.)Howtogetalongwiththemwell?Asuggestiontomy________teacherWhomareyougoingtogivethesuggestionto?Howdoyoulikethissubjectoryourteacher?Andyourreasons.Whatisyoursuggestion?Andtellyourreasons.(Wouldyoushowtworeasons?)Whatresult(s)willyouexpecttogetfromyoursuggestion?主題訓(xùn)練成長(zhǎng)歷程名師點(diǎn)撥：近年來(lái)，中考作文動(dòng)向瞄準(zhǔn)青少年素材的屢見(jiàn)不鮮。此類(lèi)話題談人生、談理想、談成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)、也談青少年在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中遇到的種種問(wèn)題，貼近學(xué)生現(xiàn)實(shí)生活，幫助學(xué)生健康成張，平穩(wěn)度過(guò)青春期，是十分有意義的主題訓(xùn)練。=1\*ROMANI主題詞匯成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷： teenager,graduatefrom,allowsb.todo,askforadvice,one'sbestfriend,becuriousaboutsth.（對(duì)某事好奇），doone'sbest,makeeffortstodosth.（盡力做某事），littlebylittle校園生活： understand,getonwellwithsb．（與某人相處得好），raiseone'shand,takeanactivepartin業(yè)余愛(ài)好： beinterestedin,befondof,enjoydoing,spend...doing,inone'ssparetime學(xué)習(xí)生活： takecourses,putone'sheartinto,passanexam,failanexam,cheatintheexam(拄考試中作弊)，subject, handin（上交），payattentionto,fullofcompetition（充滿競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）人物偶像： genius,respect,thinkhighlyofsb．(高度評(píng)價(jià)某人），lookforwardtodoing學(xué)習(xí)策略： express,explain,confidence,makeasurvey,collectinformation,planaschedule=2\*ROMANII常用句型Toimprovethesituation,Isuggest...Asmiddleschoolstudents,weoughttoberesponsibleforourselves.It'salsoimportanttofindawaytobeinvolvedinsocialactivities.HereIhavetwosuggestions.First...Second...Yourlifetodayistheresultofyourattitudesandchoicesinthepast.Yourlifetomorrowwillbetheresultofyourattitudesandchoicestoday.Sometimesyourbiggestweaknesscanbecomeyourbiggeststrength.Someofthegreatestsuccessstorieshavefollowedawordofencouragement.Fromherconfidence,weknowthat...Weshouldbelieveinourselves.Justkeepontrying.Theprocessoftryingismuchmorevaluablethantheresults.Smileonfailureandsmileonlife.Actually,failureislikeanaughtyboywhoplayswithusonthewaytoourgoals.Ononehand,hewantstotestus.Ontheotherhand,hewantstohelpusbecomebraver.Themorewesmileonfailure,thebraverweshallbe.Growingolderandgrowingup.Growingupdoesn'tneedanytalentorability.Growingupisalwaysfindingtheopportunityforchange.Nevergiveupdreaming.Avolunteer'sworkisverygreatandhelpful.Ilearnresponsibilityandtobepatientfromit.Ihopemoreandmoreyoungpeoplewillbevolunteers.WhenIamfree,Ioftengotothenursinghometodosomethinggood,suchasreadingbooks,washingclothesanddoingsomecleaningfortheold.Everyoneisnotperfecttodoeverything.Weoftengethelpfromothersinourdailylife.Inreturntothehelpfromothers,wemusthelpotherpeopleasoftenaspossible.=3\*ROMANIII模擬試題________isthemostimportantthinginmylifea.Whatisthemostimportantthinginyourlife?(health,happiness,friendship,honesty...)b.Whydoyouthinkso?(Givetworeasons.)c.Whatisyoursuggestion?要點(diǎn)分析在審題時(shí)，學(xué)生要注意“我生命中最重要的東西”，不是單指某一樣?xùn)|西或某一件事，而是通過(guò)事例來(lái)突出某 一項(xiàng)品質(zhì)（如：友誼、自信、助人、誠(chéng)實(shí)、感恩等）。注意：提出的建議要圍繞主題來(lái)寫(xiě)，而不能前后脫節(jié)。寫(xiě)作思路：圍繞“友誼”，給出一些建議和保持友誼的秘訣Friendssharehappinesswithus.Inaddition,theykeepusfromsadness.Withoutfriends,wefeellonelyandbored.However,withthemourlifewillbemoreandmorecolourful.Inaword,friendsareourmostpreciouswealthandfriendshipisnecessarytoeveryone.Friendshipislikealeafonthetree.Thoughtheyaresmallandordinary,withoutthemthetreewillbeugly.Friendshipcanmakeourlifemorecolourfulandmeaningful.Friendshipplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Nobodycangetthroughlifewithoutfriendship.I'mluckyenoughtomakemanykindsofactivefriendsaroundme.WheneverIamblue,theycomfortmeandhelpmefindsolutionstomyproblems.Ilikemyfriendsbecausewecanbelieveineachotherandhelpeachother.Wedependonparentsathome,andwerelyonfriendswhenweareout.Iregardhimasmybestfriend.Wealwaysdiscusstogetherandhavemanyactivitiesinoursparetime.范文評(píng)講FriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylifeIfIdon'thavefriendship,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisimportantthinginmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldlonely.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.Makingfriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttootherssothatpeoplecantrustus.What'smore,afriendneverhesitatestogivehisorherloveandcaretous.Let'stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwefindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.點(diǎn)評(píng)和分析作者在整篇文章中，緊緊圍繞友誼是生命中最重要的部分來(lái)描寫(xiě)。從引出主題作者在整篇文章中，緊緊圍繞友誼是生命中最重要的部分來(lái)描寫(xiě)。從引出主題——分析原因——分享方法，層層深入，最后點(diǎn)題。其中，運(yùn)用了When...的排比句恰到好處。按中考作文20分計(jì)算，屬于第二檔的文章，可得16分左右。需改進(jìn)之處。1．SoIthinkfriendshipisimportantthinginmylife．這句話應(yīng)改為oneofthemostImportantthings，表明友誼 是生命中最重要的東西之一，但不是唯一的。要表達(dá)“單獨(dú)居住”，應(yīng)用詞組liveintheworldalone。表示目的的語(yǔ)句，句首用動(dòng)詞不定式Tomakefriendswithpeople...。afriendneverhesitatesto...，在這句話中，寫(xiě)明“一個(gè)真正的（real）朋友”更好。5. Let'stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithso manyfriendsaroundus．并列句中時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。修改稿FriendshipisthemostimportantthinginmylifeIfIdon'thavefriendship,myworldmaybecomecolourless.SoIthinkfriendshipisoneofthemostimportantthingsinmylife.Noonecanliveintheworldalone.Whenweareintrouble,friendscanhelpusovercomethosedifficultiesinlife.Whenwefeelhappy,wehopethereissomeonewhocanshareourhappiness.Tomakefriendswithpeople,weshouldbefrankandhonesttootherssothatpeoplecantrustus.What'smore,arealfriendneverhesitatestogivehisorherloveandcaretous.Let'stryourbesttotreatourfriendssincerely,andwewillfindthatourlifemaybecomecolourfulwithsomanyfriendsaroundus.范文選登HappinessisthemostimportantthinginmylifeHappinessisimportanttous.Whenwefeelhappy,theworldfeelslikeabetterplace.First,wearingasmilewillmakeusmorecharmingandhelpustowinlotsoffriends.Agoodmoodalwaysgivesushope.Second,rememberlifeisfullofupsanddowns.Wecan’tchangethewaylifeis,butwecandoourbesttobehappy.Third,weshouldalwaysbeconfident.Confidenceishalfsuccess.Whenwesmile,theworldsmileswithus.Let'smakeourworldfullofhappiness.ConfidenceisthemostimportantthinginmylifeTherearealotofimportantthingsinmylife,suchasfriendship,money,familyandtime.ButIthinkthemostimportantthingisconfidence.Confidenceisthefirststeptosuccess.Itmakesyounotafraidotdifficulties.WhenIwasinGradeFour,Imadeaspeechintheschoolhall,andallofthestudentslistenedcarefully.IfIdidn'thaveconfidence,Icouldn'tmakethatspeechsofluently.Confidencemakesmeshinebrightly.Itisthemostimportantthingtome.IndependenceisthemostimportantthinginmylifeAsweallknow,independenceisasymbolofgrowingup.I'mindependentonmystudyandIdon'tneedmyparentstoworryaboutmystudy.Inmyopinion,weshouldlearntodosomethingbyourselvesbecausewecanlearnaboutresponsibilityandgetreadyforbecominganadult.Torealizethisgoal/achievetheaim,weshouldtrytostudybyourselvesandlearntodosomehouseworkasoftenaspossible.Tosumup,wecanbebravetofaceourfuturelifeifwelearntobeindependent.范文鏈接：GrowingupGrowingupisnodoubthardbutunforgettable.Amongalltheseexperiencesthatmademegrowup,thePElessonisthemostunforgettableone.Iusedtobepooratphysicalactivities.Whentheteachertoldustojumphighinthelesson,Ifeltafraidandshyatfirst.ThoughIfixedmyeyesontheteacher'sperformanceandlistenedcarefully,Istillfailedinmyfirstjump.Ialmostwantedtogiveup,buttheteacherencouragedmealot.Withthehelpoftheteacherandmyhardwork,Isucceededatlast.ThisexperiencetaughtmenevertogiveupwhenImeetdifficulties.Igrewupafterthisunforgettablelesson."Nopains,nogains."That'swhatIlearnedfrommyprocessofgrowingup.Wherethereisawill,thereisawayWhenIwasonly5yearsold,myparentsoftentoldmethatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Atthattime,Icouldn'tunderstanditverywell.ButnowIthinkitisveryimportant.Forexample,IpassedthePEtestsuccessfullythoughIwasnotverygoodatsports.IcoulddoitbecauseIbelievedinmyselfandtookanactivepartinit.HereIhavetwosuggestions.First,whenyoumeetsomeseriousproblems,youcantellyourselfthatnoonecanachievetheirgoalwithouteffort.Second,youshouldworkharderandharder.Ibelievethateveryonecansucceedintheirownfieldiftheybelieveinthemselves.相關(guān)主題________isthewaytosuccessInmyleisure/sparetime3.Thetroubleofgrowingupa.Doyouhavegrowingpainsinyourlife?Whatarethey?b.Howdidyougothroughyourpains?(Giveoneortwoexamples.)c.Howhavethesepainshelpedyougrow?4.Ilearntobeindependenta.Haveyoueverlearnttodosomethingindependently?Ifyouhave,whatisit?b.Whatshouldyoudobyyourself?c.Whatkindofthingscanyoudoindependentlyinyourlifeorinyourstudy75.________makesmelearnalot6.Everyoneneedshelp.7.________isthemostimportantthinginmylife8.Weshouldlearnto________.9.I'meagerto________.10.WewillhaveaclassmeetingnextThursday.Thetopicisabout"Self-confidence".1．根據(jù)《中小學(xué)教育懲戒規(guī)則（試行）》第七條，學(xué)生有以下情形老師有權(quán)對(duì)其懲戒。1.不及時(shí)完成作業(yè)，不服從教育；2.擾亂課堂秩序、學(xué)校教學(xué)秩序；3.吸煙喝酒，言行不得體：4.打罵同學(xué)老師。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上條款，結(jié)合自身，談一談作為中學(xué)生的我們應(yīng)該如何去做來(lái)遵守學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度，并選擇一條發(fā)表自己的看法和理由。要求：字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、規(guī)范