人教版英語(yǔ)八年級(jí)上冊(cè) Unit 10 　Section B (3a-)學(xué)案

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime!SectionB(3a-SelfCheck)寫作素養(yǎng)進(jìn)階【主題分析——指明方向】主題:本單元寫作情境屬于“人與社會(huì)”主題范疇中的“社會(huì)服務(wù)與人際溝通”,涉及子主題“交流與合作、團(tuán)隊(duì)精神”。內(nèi)容:描述生活中遇到的問(wèn)題和煩惱,并根據(jù)問(wèn)題和煩惱提出合理化的建議。要求:能正確使用if條件從句做出假設(shè),并用should等情態(tài)動(dòng)詞給出合理化建議。【典例研磨——示范引領(lǐng)】假如你是李華,你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)“大家來(lái)幫忙”欄目收到一位叫Grace的同學(xué)的來(lái)信,信中她訴說(shuō)了自己的兩個(gè)煩惱:1.刷短視頻上癮;2.總是熬夜,導(dǎo)致上課犯困。你作為該報(bào)實(shí)習(xí)小編輯,請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,幫助她解決煩惱。Step1三定審題1.定人稱:介紹對(duì)方的煩惱以及給對(duì)方建議時(shí)用第二人稱;介紹自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用第一人稱。2.定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3.定核心:針對(duì)他人的煩惱提出建議。Step2謀篇布局Step3遣詞造句推敲詞匯:1.對(duì)……瘋狂becrazyabout

2.最好 hadbetter

3.參加 takepartin

4.熬夜 stayup

5.一……就…… assoonas

基礎(chǔ)句式:1.我愿意給你一些建議。I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.2.你的第一個(gè)問(wèn)題是你對(duì)看短視頻上癮。Thefirstproblemisthatyouarecrazyaboutwatchingshortvideos.3.對(duì)人們來(lái)說(shuō)通過(guò)看它們(短視頻)來(lái)放松很正常。It’snormalforpeopletorelaxbywatchingthem.4.對(duì)它們上癮就不好了。It’snotgoodtobecrazyaboutthem.5.你可以多參加戶外活動(dòng)。Youcantakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.6.如果你熬夜是為了完成作業(yè),我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該回到家先做作業(yè)。Ifyoustayuptofinishyourhomework,Ithinkyoushoulddoyourhomeworkfirstwhenyougethome.7.閱讀可以使你放松。Readingcanmakeyourelaxed.8.閱讀可以幫你睡得更好。Readingcanhelpyousleepbetter.升級(jí)句式:1.將基礎(chǔ)句式3和4用連詞but升級(jí)It’snormalforpeopletorelaxbywatchingthembutit’snotgoodtobecrazyaboutthem.2.將基礎(chǔ)句式5用hadbetter升級(jí)You’dbettertakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.3.將基礎(chǔ)句式6用assoonas升級(jí)Ifyoustayuptofinishyourhomework,Ithinkyoushoulddoyourhomeworkassoonasyougethome.4.將基礎(chǔ)句式7和8合并Readingcanmakeyourelaxedandhelpyousleepbetter.Step4潤(rùn)色成篇Hi,GraceI’velearnedaboutyourproblems.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.①Yourfirstproblemisthatyouarecrazyabout②watchingshortvideos.①用wouldlike句式引出愿意提些建議。續(xù)表It’snormalforpeopletorelaxbywatchingthem.Butit’snotgoodtobecrazyaboutit③.Whynot④setyourscreentimelimitsforyourself?Andyou’dbetter⑤takepartinmoreoutdooractivities.Thesecondproblemisthatyoualwaysstayup.Ifyoustayuptofinishyourhomework,Ithinkyoushoulddoyourhomeworkassoonasyougethome.Ifyoustayuptoplaygames,Iadvisethatyoushouldreadbeforebedtime.Readingcanmakeyourelaxedandhelpyousleepbetter.Ihopemyadvicewouldbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua②用becrazyabout來(lái)表達(dá)對(duì)某事上癮。③靈活運(yùn)用it作形式主語(yǔ)的句式,彰顯深厚功底。④用Whynot...?句式提出建議,語(yǔ)言地道。⑤運(yùn)用you’dbetter提出建議,句式富于變化。【實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫作——遷移創(chuàng)新】李磊是一名八年級(jí)學(xué)生,他沉迷于玩電腦游戲,并因此影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)。作為李磊的好朋友,你打算怎么幫助他呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示,寫一篇短文。要求:70詞左右。(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。提示:giveup,wastetime,beinterestedin,haveagreattimeDearLiLei,Thanksforyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.________________________________________________________________________