專題10 書(shū)面表達(dá)20篇-2023中考英語(yǔ)逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（江蘇專用）

2023江蘇省中考英語(yǔ)逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞第一期專題10書(shū)面表達(dá)20篇1．（2022·江蘇徐州·二模）“雙減”工作之一是減輕學(xué)生過(guò)重的作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)，控制中小學(xué)生的書(shū)面作業(yè)總量，合理布置不同類型的作業(yè)。為此，某英文雜志社正在開(kāi)展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇征文，講述自身經(jīng)歷，提出合理建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.做過(guò)的最有創(chuàng)意的英語(yǔ)作業(yè)(內(nèi)容、收獲……);2.1-2條有創(chuàng)意的英語(yǔ)作業(yè)建議(形式、理由……);要求：1.90詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等。MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkcanmakeusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Lastwintervacation,ourteacheraskedustodesignaposterabouttheSpringFestival.Thatwasmyfavouritehomework.Ittookmeaboutthreehourstofinishit.Itnotonlyhelpedmegoovertheknowledgewe’velearned,butalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetowritebookreviews.Itcanhelpustohaveabetterunderstandingofthebook.Besides,wecandosomesurveysonourhobbiesandwritereports.Inthisway,ourEnglishwilldevelopquickly.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭，根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，講述自己做過(guò)的最有創(chuàng)意的一次英語(yǔ)作業(yè)，包括作業(yè)內(nèi)容和自己的收獲；接下來(lái)對(duì)有創(chuàng)意的英語(yǔ)作業(yè)提出自己的幾點(diǎn)建議。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱為主來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。在敘述內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，保證提示內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，行文連貫。2．（2022·江蘇·泰州中學(xué)附屬初中三模）有人如此比喻：散文是海水，詩(shī)是濃縮的咸鹵，格言是結(jié)晶的鹽粒。格言給人們以啟迪、指導(dǎo)、幫助和教誨，幫助人們完成優(yōu)秀人格的自我塑造，順利地度過(guò)人生的荒海。請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝懈裱灾腥芜x一句自己喜愛(ài)的格言，并根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇短文。1、Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行動(dòng)比語(yǔ)言更響亮。2、Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。3、Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗乃成功之母。Tips:1、What’syourunderstandingofthemotto?2、Whydoyoulikeitbest?3、WhoorWhatcomestoyourmoodfirstwhenyoureadit?Why?4、Howdoesitinfluenceyou?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyfavouritemottoisWherethereisawill,thereisaway.Ithinkthatoneofthemostimportantthingstosuccessisafirmresolution.Ifamandoesn’thaveastrongwilltowinthefinalvictory,hewillneversucceedinhislife.WheneverIseethismotto,IthinkofmanymemoriesofmyEnglishstudy.WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.Iwasnotabletounderstandtheteacherinclass,andIcouldn’tmasterthewordsandphrases.ForatimeIwantedtogiveup.Later,ImadearesolutiontoimprovemyEnglish.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass,keptonreadingEnglisheverydayandspokeasmuchaspossible.StepbystepImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Fromthisthing,Ireallyunderstandthismotto.Thereisnothingdifficultintheworld.Ifyoumakeupyourmindtodoit,youwillcertainlyaccomplishyourend.SoIwillnevergiveupeasily.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求任選一句自己喜愛(ài)的格言，并根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇短文。學(xué)生不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，首先引出話題，寫(xiě)出自己喜愛(ài)的格言；第二步，具體闡述如何理解格言、為什么喜歡這個(gè)格言、它能讓你想起的人或事等；第三步，講述這個(gè)格言對(duì)你的影響。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thinkof想起②beabletodosth.能夠做某事③giveup放棄④asmuchaspossible盡可能[高分句型]①Ithinkthatoneofthemostimportantthingstosuccessisafirmresolution.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②Ifamandoesn’thaveastrongwilltowinthefinalvictory,hewillneversucceedinhislife.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）③WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.（When引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）3．（2022·江蘇·無(wú)錫市華莊中學(xué)二模）由賈玲導(dǎo)演及主演的電影《你好，李煥英》是一部充滿溫情的電影，激發(fā)了觀影者對(duì)身邊人感情的共鳴。你觀影之后感觸頗多，發(fā)現(xiàn)許多感恩的人和事，要就此寫(xiě)一份日志。感恩父母悉心照顧、不辭辛勞……感恩老師耐心教導(dǎo)、善于激勵(lì)……感恩同學(xué)合作分享、互相幫助、共同進(jìn)步感想和打算我很幸運(yùn)……（請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，但不得提及自己的姓名相關(guān)信息）要求：1.上面的提示供參考，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要使語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚；2.段落開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；要求寫(xiě)100個(gè)詞左右。TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi,Mom.IttellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears,IhavegainedalotandIdon’twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考例文TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi,Mom.IttellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears,IhavegainedalotandIdon’twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.Theytakecareofmewithoutanycomplaint.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyarealwaystryingtheirbesttomakemeliveabetterlife.Second,I’mthankfultoallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupport.Theyarepatientenoughtospendlotsoftimeexplainingproblemstome.Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.It’sselflessofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.Finally,Ialsofeelverygratefultomyclassmates.Weworktogetherandsharethingswitheachother.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Asaresult,wehavemadegreatprogress.IthinkIamluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.Iwillneverforgetthesehappydaystogether.Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇日志，屬于材料作文寫(xiě)作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章開(kāi)頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，承接短文開(kāi)頭，引出話題；第二步，首先表達(dá)要感謝父母，接著按照要點(diǎn)闡述父母如何照顧和關(guān)愛(ài)我們；其次表達(dá)感謝師長(zhǎng)，結(jié)合具體事例闡述老師們的耐心教導(dǎo)和鼓勵(lì)；接著再表達(dá)對(duì)同學(xué)的感謝，可結(jié)合具體事例闡述同學(xué)間的互幫互助、共同成長(zhǎng)；第三步，抒發(fā)自己的感情及打算并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takecareofmewithoutanycomplaint毫無(wú)怨言地照顧我②bethankfultosbforsth因某事感激某人③beintrouble遇到困難④devoteone’stimetosth把某人的時(shí)間奉獻(xiàn)在某事上[高分句型]①Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②It’sselflessofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.（it作形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語(yǔ)）③Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句）4．（2022·江蘇·鹽城市鹽都區(qū)實(shí)驗(yàn)初中二模）你校舉辦了“中學(xué)生安全教育日”英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽。注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfoodsuchasfruitandvegetableseveryday.It’swisetostayawayfromtoocoldfoodinsummer.Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.Don’tridesidebyside.It’swrongtotouchmobilesontheway.Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.We’dbetternottellothersourtelephonenumber,addressorpasswords,especiallystrangers.Finally,weoughtnottorunaftereachotheratschool.Moreover,whenhavingsports,remembertoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Inaword,safetymustcomefirst.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“給出安全的生活的建議”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“飲食、道路安全、交友，校園安全”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，安全必須是第一位的。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keep...inmind記?、趕tayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離③hadbetter最好④runafter追趕[高分句型]①Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.（It固定句型）②Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）5．（2022·江蘇無(wú)錫·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）人生，總在選擇中不斷前行！選擇讀你喜歡的書(shū)，選擇做你喜歡的事，選擇交你喜歡的朋友……在日常生活中，選擇在所難免。如何在遵從內(nèi)心感受的同時(shí)做出客觀、理性的選擇呢？某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“學(xué)會(huì)選擇”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合圖片信息，從提示中選擇一個(gè)角度，描述你做過(guò)的一個(gè)選擇，并陳述理由及收獲。After-schoolactivitiesFriendsBooksdevelophobbieslooksnoveldosomesportsqualitieshistoryattendtheextraclassinterestssciencefiction…………biography注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息；3.短文必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Thereisnodenyingthatitisimportantforustomakeareasonablechoiceinlife.Ilikedoingsomesports.IamavolleyballfansoIchoosetojointheschoolvolleyballclub,whichisbeneficialtomygrowth.

Inmychildhood,Ifellinlovewithvolleyball.ThenwhenIwasinGrade8,Iwaseagertobeamemberoftheschoolvolleyballclub.However,myparentswantedmetofocustimeandenergyonschoolwork.Ihadalongtalkwiththemcalmly.Afterthat,Itrainedhardwithpersistenceintheclubandlearnedwhatthetruemeaningoftheteamworkwas.Meanwhile,Ireviewedmyschoolworkaslongas?Ifinishedtraining.Tomyjoy,Igotasatisfyingresultinthetest.Allthisshowedthatmychoicewasright.

Needlesstosay,nomatterwhatthechoiceis,ifitisreasonable,justmakeittofollowyourheart.

Onlyinthiswaycanitbringoutthebestinyou.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，描述自己做過(guò)的一個(gè)選擇，并陳述理由及收獲，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。6．（2022·江蘇·蘇州市金閶實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)校一模）2022年伊始，全國(guó)多地疫情頻發(fā)，在抗疫期間，每天都會(huì)涌現(xiàn)出許多令我們感動(dòng)的人和事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1.你覺(jué)得最令你感動(dòng)的人是誰(shuí)；2.你為什么覺(jué)得他/她最讓你感動(dòng)；3.你最想對(duì)他/她說(shuō)的話。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名，校名等信息；照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分。參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒肺炎（NCP）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ThefightagainstNCPhaslastedforseveralweeks.Duringthefight,doctorsandnursesarerealheroes—theytriedtheirbesttoprotectusandtheyfoughtforus.Myauntwhoisadoctor,movedmealot.Forthepastyears,myauntwasjustanordinaryrelativetome.ButthedecisionshemadeonApril3rdchangedmythoughtcompletely—sheaskedtogotoShanghaitohelpthepatientsthere.Thoughherdaughterisonlythreeyearsold,shestilldecidedtoleaveforShanghai.Forher,itisthethingthatshemustdo.Iwasreallymoved.IwanttotellmyauntthatIamproudofherandIhopeshecankeephealthyandcomebacksafely.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇作文介紹令你感動(dòng)的人和事情。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文在描述令你感動(dòng)的事情時(shí)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描述令你感動(dòng)的人以及你想對(duì)她/他說(shuō)的話使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作可分為三段式，第一段介紹最令你感動(dòng)的人；第二段敘述為什么這個(gè)人最讓你感動(dòng)；最后一段表達(dá)你想對(duì)她/他說(shuō)的話。行文確保語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。7．（2022·江蘇·射陽(yáng)縣第四中學(xué)一模）同學(xué)們，回想這三年的初中生活，你一定感慨萬(wàn)千。在初中畢業(yè)典禮上，學(xué)校將舉行“感恩教育儀式”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)為該活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)述這三年來(lái)要感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和未來(lái)打算。注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。SayingthankstoyouHowtimeflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIcametothesecondaryschool.Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavegainedalotandgrownalot.Imustsaythankstomanypeoplewhohavehelpedme.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：SayingthankstoyouHowtimeflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIcametothesecondaryschool.Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavegainedalotandgrownalot.Imustsaythankstomanypeoplewhohavehelpedme.First,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.TheyprovideeverythingIneedforme.Theytakegoodcareofmewithoutanycomplaint.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyarealwaystryingtheirbesttomakemeliveabetterlife.Second,I’mthankfultoallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupport.Theyarepatientenoughtospendslotsoftimeexplainingproblemstome.Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.It’sunselfishofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.Finally,Ialsofeelgratefultomyfriendsandclassmates.Weworktogetherandsharehappinessandworrieswitheachother.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Asaresult,wehavemadegreatprogress.IthinkI’mluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.Iwillneverforgetthesehappydays.Iamgoingtodobetterinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)題干提示，感恩父母、老師、朋友和同學(xué)，并談?wù)勛约何磥?lái)的打算。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可按照“總分總”的結(jié)構(gòu)，首先點(diǎn)明要感謝那些曾幫助過(guò)自己的人，然后分段表達(dá)自己對(duì)父母、老師、朋友和同學(xué)的感激之情，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)和闡述未來(lái)的打算。注意行文連貫、條理清晰、無(wú)拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。8．（2022·江蘇·連云港市新海實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)三模）自從國(guó)家出臺(tái)“雙減”政策后，一時(shí)間，學(xué)生和家長(zhǎng)對(duì)即將到來(lái)的輕松學(xué)業(yè)又高興又焦慮。請(qǐng)結(jié)合表格信息，以“Howcanwegetusedtothenewpolicy?”為題，就實(shí)施“雙減”政策后你如何規(guī)劃自己的學(xué)習(xí)和課余生活寫(xiě)一篇文章。注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右；（2）短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。過(guò)去現(xiàn)在作業(yè)時(shí)間2~3小時(shí)少于1.5小時(shí)興趣時(shí)間大約0.5小時(shí)1~2小時(shí)如何規(guī)劃1.課前充分預(yù)習(xí)，上課認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講……2.課后及時(shí)問(wèn)同學(xué)老師解決問(wèn)題……3.利用課余時(shí)間發(fā)展興趣愛(ài)好……4.……It’sreallyawonderfulnewsthatthepolicyof“double-lighteningtheburden”hasbeencarriedout.However,westudentshavetodealwiththenewchallengeofmakingthebestofourtimeafterschool.Howcanwegetusedtothenewpolicy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifwecangetusedtothenewpolicywell,wewillenjoyahappierschoollifeandgrowuphealthily.【答案】例文：It’sreallyawonderfulnewsthatthepolicyof“double-lighteningtheburden”hasbeencarriedout.However,westudentshavetodealwiththenewchallengeofmakingthebestofourtimeafterschool.Howcanwegetusedtothenewpolicy?IhavesomeideaswhichIwanttosharewithyou.Inthepast,wehadtospendtwotothreehoursdoingourhomework,soweonlyhadalittletimeforourhobbies.Afterthenewpolicy,wehavelesshomeworkandmorefreetimetodosomeafter-schoolactivities.Ithinkthoughhobbiesareveryimportanttous,weneedtokeepabalancebetweenourschoolworkandhobbies.Afterall,schoolworkisfirst.Wecanprepareforourlessonsandlistentotheteacherscarefully.Wecanalsotakenotes.Ifwehavesomeproblems,wecanaskclassmatesandteachersforhelp.Afterfinishingourschoolwork,wecandowhatwelike,suchassinging.Playingchessandplayingfootball.Takingexercisingisgoodforourhealth.Ihopeeveryonecansolvetheproblemsuccessfully.Ifwecangetusedtothenewpolicywell,wewillenjoyahappierschoollifeandgrowuphealthily.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Howcanwegetusedtothenewpolicy?”為題，從對(duì)比實(shí)施“雙減”政策前后的作業(yè)時(shí)間和興趣時(shí)間，及如何規(guī)劃學(xué)習(xí)和課余生活這三個(gè)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)著手寫(xiě)作。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，注意銜接。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱為主進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作；時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主?？刹捎萌问竭M(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，第一段引出主題；第二段對(duì)比過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在的作業(yè)時(shí)間和興趣時(shí)間；第三段寫(xiě)如何規(guī)劃學(xué)習(xí)和課余生活。保證行文連貫，條理清晰。9．（2022·江蘇·蘇州工業(yè)園區(qū)東延路實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校模擬預(yù)測(cè)）本屆冬奧會(huì)是科技的盛會(huì)，各種高科技頻繁亮相，無(wú)論是智慧餐廳還是“獵豹”攝像機(jī)，讓外國(guó)媒體大呼驚艷。不僅如此，科技給我們的生活也帶來(lái)了巨變。假如你是九年級(jí)一班學(xué)生王華，學(xué)校正在舉辦科技節(jié)，你應(yīng)邀參加以“科技改變生活”為主題的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹身邊的科技及其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.句子及篇章準(zhǔn)確、連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)：80~100詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及其它任何個(gè)人相關(guān)信息。Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【答案】例文Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.Thesmartphonebringsbothconvenienceandpleasuretoourlife.Wecanshoponline,watchmovies,andhavevideochatsthroughit.Asfortherobot,itcanhelpuswithhousework,helpourchildrenwiththeirhomeworkandsoon.Itsavesusalotoftimeandenergy.Thehigh-speedtrainhasgreatlyimprovedourtravelspeed.Ittravelsathighspeed.It’sveryfastandcomfortable.Theelectriccarhasalsochangedourlife.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsoprotecttheenvironmenttoagreatextent.Itisconvenientandgreen.Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，以“科技改變生活”為主題，寫(xiě)一篇作文介紹身邊的科技及其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)思維導(dǎo)圖的提示全部要涵蓋在內(nèi)，可以從四個(gè)方面介紹身邊的科技：智能手機(jī)、機(jī)器人、電動(dòng)汽車以及高鐵。針對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文確保語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。10．（2022·江蘇無(wú)錫·二模）為增強(qiáng)安全意識(shí)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將開(kāi)展“Howtoprotectourselves”的討論，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考。HowtoprotectourselvesAtschoolgetalongwithourclassmates;…Inpublicneverrunaftereachother;…OntheInternetprotectourpersonalinformation;………注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須自擬，要求觀點(diǎn)明確、語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，短文標(biāo)題、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.短文必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。HowtoprotectourselvesThereislotsofpossibledangeraroundus.It’simportantforustolearnhowtoprotectourselves.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dangerisneverasfarawayaswethink.Takegoodcareofourselvesatalltimes!【答案】Onepossibleversion:HowtoprotectourselvesThereislotsofpossibledangeraroundus.It’simportantforustolearnhowtoprotectourselves.Firstofall,it’snecessaryforustogetalongwellwithourclassmates.Neverforgetyourteachers.Askthemforhelpwhilemeetinganydangeratschool.Second,notdoingsomethingdangerousinpublicisalsoimportant.Remembernottorunafterorcrowdwitheachother,especiallynotpushpastothers.Third,becarefultomakefriendsonline.Don’tgiveanypersonalinformationtoothers.Nevermeete-friendsalone.Letyourparentsgowithyouifyouhaveto.Lastbutnotleast,wemustfollowthetrafficrulesoutsideanddon’tcarrytoomuchmoneywithus.Dangerisneverasfarawayaswethink.Takegoodcareofourselvesatalltimes!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇提綱類作文，以“Howtoprotectourselves”為題參照表格中要點(diǎn)信息進(jìn)行分析。寫(xiě)作時(shí)需包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以第一、二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意分段敘述，第一段開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，引入話題；第二段介紹如何從三個(gè)方面保護(hù)自己，可以多采用祈使句句式；第三段原文已給出；保證文章條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順。11．（2022·江蘇連云港·二模）假如你是李華，你班最近上了一節(jié)主題班會(huì)課，同學(xué)們圍繞“線上學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)”展開(kāi)了熱烈討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。優(yōu)點(diǎn)（Advantages）缺點(diǎn)（Disadvantages）1．提供各種線上課程，開(kāi)啟新世界；2．節(jié)省時(shí)間，幫助學(xué)習(xí)新技能；1.一些人放棄休息時(shí)間玩游戲，對(duì)眼睛有害；2.一些人學(xué)習(xí)不認(rèn)真，導(dǎo)致在學(xué)業(yè)上落后于別人；1．你的觀點(diǎn)：……2．理由：……（不少于1條）注意：1．文章必須包括所給要點(diǎn)提示，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充信息；2．語(yǔ)句通順，行文連貫；詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己姓名等信息。Ourclassdiscussedaboutwhetherit’sgoodforstudentstostudyonlineathome.Herearetwodifferentgroupsofideas.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ourclassdiscussedwhetherit’sgoodforstudentstostudyonlineathome.Herearetwodifferentgroupsofideasaboutit.Somestudentsthinkitprovidesdifferentkindsofonlinecoursesandopensanewworldtothem.Italsosavestimeandhelpsthemlearnnewskills.However,otherstudentsholdthatitsdisadvantagesarealsoquiteclear.Forexample,somestudentsgiveuptheirsparetimetoplaycomputergames,whichharmstheireyes,andothersdon’tstudyhardandhavefallenbehindothersintheirschoolwork.Ithinkstudyingonlineisagoodchoice,becausewearesuretomakegreatprocessinthisnewwayoflearningifwetrytokeepabalancebetweenonlinestudyandplaying.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容提示已給出，考生要注意不要遺漏內(nèi)容提示中的信息，并可以在內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加豐滿。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步：陳述線上學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第二步：陳述線上學(xué)習(xí)的缺點(diǎn)；第三步：闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，并給出適當(dāng)?shù)睦碛?。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①differentkindsof不同種類的②fallbehind落后于③makegreatprocess取得巨大的進(jìn)步[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkitprovidesdifferentkindsofonlinecoursesandopensanewworldtothem.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②However,otherstudentsholdthatitsdisadvantagesarealsoquiteclear.（運(yùn)用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞）③Forexample,somestudentsgiveuptheirsparetimetoplaycomputergames.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）12．（2022·江蘇宿遷·二模）中國(guó)女足在亞洲杯決賽上克服一切困難，再次獲得金牌。在我們的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，我們也會(huì)遇到各種各樣的困難，如學(xué)習(xí)、運(yùn)動(dòng)和人際關(guān)系等方面。假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生Simon，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勥@三個(gè)方面的困難并給出解決方法。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名等信息。Grade9studentsarefacingmanyproblemsinourdailylives.Wehavealotofhomeworkeveryday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Grade9studentsarefacingmanyproblemsinourdailylives.Wehavealotofhomeworkeveryday.Sometimeswefailintheexam.Wecanmakealistofthehomeworkandplanthedaycarefully.Weshouldpayattentiontolisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassandworkhard.Somestudentsdon’tlikesports.Someofthemaretoolazytodosports.Someofthemarenotgoodatit.Ifyouhavethisproblem,weshouldchangeourmind.Sportisgoodforourhealth.What’smore,exercisecanmakeusfeelconfident.Wecanchoosethesportwelike.Somestudentshavefewfriends.Theycannotgetalongwellwithothers.Ithinkweshouldbefriendlytoothers.Thenwecanshareourhappinessandsadnesswithourfriends.Andwewillhavealotofclosefriends.Ihopeeveryonecangrowhappilyinourlives.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是說(shuō)明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息，從學(xué)習(xí)、運(yùn)動(dòng)和人際關(guān)系三個(gè)方面談?wù)劷鉀Q方法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹學(xué)習(xí)方面的困難；第二步，介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)方面的問(wèn)題；第三步，介紹人際關(guān)系方面的問(wèn)題；第四步，表達(dá)自己的希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①failintheexam考試不及格②makealist列清單③pay