讀后續(xù)寫OutsidetheBox跳出思維定勢講義-高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫句型回顧：描寫情緒類1

So

情緒adj.wassbthat+從句【例句】So

guiltywasmymomthatsheloweredherheadandmurmured,“Sorry.”

練習(xí)：SosadwasTomthat

tearswelledupinhiseyes.

湯姆傷心得眼淚奪眶而出。2.

Much/Greatlytoone’s

情緒n.,sbdidsth【例句】Beingthecoachofthenewteam,IwasexcitedbecauseIknewweweregoingtowin,but

tomydisappointment

weweredefeated.

練習(xí)：Muchtothefamily’ssurprise,Dennisstucktohispromise!

令家人驚訝的是，丹尼斯信守諾言！3.情緒adj.and情緒adj,sbdidsth【例句】Suddenlysomethinginsidemebegansaying,“Tryit!Tryit!”

Shyandscared,Iwatchedthem,tryingnottolooktooeager.練習(xí)：Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamily.

感覺疲憊和害怕，簡躺在一塊石頭旁邊，想念她的家人。4.

Sbdidsth,adj（短語）【例句】Shestoodthereinshock,

unsureofwhattodonext.

常見的形容詞短語作狀語的詞：unsureof/about,uncertainabout,(un)awareof/that,determinedtodo,lostin,absorbedin…練習(xí)：Heranoutagain,unawarethatIwasfollowinghim.他又跑了出去，不知道我在跟著他。5.

情緒Adj.as

主+謂,sbdidsth【例句】Seeminglyabsentmindedandforgetfulasshewas,sheneverfailedtodemonstratethebeautyoflifetoherchildren,andendoweduswithafunfilledchildhoodandaneverdrainedpassiontoembracelife.

看似心不在焉、健忘的她，卻始終向孩子們展示生活的美好，并賦予我們充滿樂趣的童年和永不枯竭的擁抱生活的熱情。練習(xí)：WeakasJanewas,shepickedupspeedalongthestreamtofindthewayback.

雖然簡很虛弱，但她加快了沿著溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。6.

Withgrowing+情緒n,Sbdidsth【例句】Withgrowingfear,ElliandIpackedupourcampasquicklyaspossible.

隨著恐懼的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我們的營地。練習(xí)：Withgrowinganxiety,Ishoutedatthetopofmylungs,“Help!”

隨著焦慮的增加，我大聲喊道：“救命！7.

Sbdidsth,with/in+抽象名詞with+抽象名詞(care,confidence,ease,patience,pride,eagerness,interest,caution,attention,seriousness,kindness,calmness,determination,anxiety,curiosity,courage,joy,devotion,fear,sadness,satisfaction)

關(guān)心、自信、輕松、耐心、驕傲、渴望、興趣、謹(jǐn)慎、注意、嚴(yán)肅、善良、冷靜、決心、焦慮、好奇心、勇氣、喜悅、奉獻(xiàn)、恐懼、悲傷、滿足in+抽象名詞

(peace,excitement,anger,amazement,relief,confusion,excitement,admiration,puzzlement,shock,secret,anger,terror,horror)

（和平、興奮、憤怒、驚奇、解脫、困惑、興奮、欽佩、困惑、震驚、秘密、憤怒、恐怖、恐怖）【例句】Myfatherdrove

insilence.

我父親默默地開車。練習(xí)：Itookoutthefoldedpaperwithgreatcare,andopenedit.

我小心翼翼地拿出折疊好的紙，打開了它。

Sbsaid(replied/answered...)ina/an+情緒形容詞+voice,“…”【例句】

“Andwhatdoyouwant?”thechemistaskedinanannoyedvoice.

“那你想要什么？”化學(xué)家惱怒地問道。練習(xí)：Susanapologizedtohergrandmotherinaguiltyvoice,“I’msorry.It’smyfault.”

蘇珊用愧疚的聲音向祖母道歉，“對不起。這是我的錯(cuò)。情緒名詞1gavewayto

情緒名詞2【例句】

Ehlerseventuallysucceededincoaxingtheanimaltohim.Nervousnessandfeargavewaytojoy.

埃勒斯最終成功地將這只動(dòng)物哄騙到他身邊。緊張和恐懼讓位于喜悅。練習(xí)：FearfinallygavewaytocourageandIcontinuedtowalkdeepintheforest.

恐懼終于讓位于勇氣，我繼續(xù)在森林深處行走。10.

Asenseof+情緒n/Afeelingof+情緒n/Awaveof+情緒nflooded(over/through)/sweptoversb【例句】Awaveof

happiness

floodedme.

一股幸福的浪潮涌上心頭。練習(xí)：Awaveofrelieffloodedthroughher.

一股如釋重負(fù)的浪潮涌上心頭。續(xù)寫實(shí)戰(zhàn)OutsidetheBox跳出思維定勢TheHarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirselfmadecostumes(裝扮)andawinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.“DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?"Aliceasked."I'mgoingasachocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek.”“Yeah,Ihaveacostume,”saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaitedforhisdadtopickhimup.“Butit'sboring.”“Why?Whatisit?”Aliceasked.“MaxMagthesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo.”Jordanshookhishead.“That'stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.”Hewavedtohisdad,whohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.Jordanrolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan(小貨車).“Maybeyoushouldgoassomethingelse.”“ThecontestisFridaynight.”Jordansighed.“It'stoolatetochangecostumes.”“Jordan,youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems."Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolatebarcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet.HekeptthinkingaboutAlice'swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismumhandlingwithsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadein.MomsmiledatJordan,pointingatthedesk,“Whatdoyouthink?”Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"It'sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume.第一：初步分析，在文中圈出關(guān)鍵詞，找出五要素：WhenwhenJordanwaspreparingfortheHarvestfestcontestWhereintheschool,athomeWho主要人物:Jordan;次要人物:Alice;Mom;Dad;principal;Danny,TomandlzzyWhatJordanwasthinkingabouthiscostumehardWhyHewantedtowinthecontest第二：文本分析，在文中劃出關(guān)鍵句，找出文章主題：本文的主題語境是人與自我.材料中揭示主題的關(guān)鍵句是Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.可以引申到第三：概括文章大意，找出文章伏筆和鋪墊文章大意：記敘文。文章講述的是主人公Jordan準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校周五舉辦的豐收節(jié)裝扮比賽，他很想贏得比賽，同時(shí)也很喜歡超級英雄這個(gè)人物，但是他現(xiàn)在的裝扮太普通了，完全不可能勝出，這時(shí)，Alice講述自己的巧克力塊裝扮的材料來源，鼓勵(lì)他要積極跳出思維定勢，發(fā)掘日常用品的潛藏功能，及時(shí)更改裝扮?？嗫嗨妓鞯腏ordan回到家，發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽剛剛拼裝好新桌子，上面是包裝桌子配件的碩大的空紙箱空紙箱是否會(huì)給他靈感，讓他產(chǎn)生讓人驚喜的創(chuàng)意制作呢?他最后是否會(huì)贏得比賽呢?文章的鋪墊和伏筆：情節(jié)構(gòu)思：Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"It'sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Jordantoldhisideatomum2.Hefinishedthenewdesignwithhismum’shelp3.Jordan’sfeelingPara2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume.1.Jordan’sactionandfeeling2.theaudience’sreaction3.Jordan’svictoryandhisfeeling下水文文章邏輯：八步曲句型多樣：無靈主語，動(dòng)詞鏈，倒裝，時(shí)間狀語，固定句型，固定短語，出彩的形容詞副詞Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Hearingwhathesaid,momaskedwithapuzzledlook,“Whatdoyoumean?”Jordanexplainedthewholethingtomom.Momclappedherhandsinexcitementandreplied,“Let’sdoitnow!”Theycutaholeonthetopofthebox,fixeditonthewheelchairanddecorateditwiththeMaxMagcostume.（動(dòng)作描寫）Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,theyweretooexhaustedtomoveaninch.ThewheelchairnowlookedlikeamovingMaxMagcar.AglimmerofhopesparklinginJordan’seyes,hecouldn’thelpimaginingstandingonthestage（情緒描寫）.SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.Studentstookturnstoshowtheirselfmadecostumes.TherewereseveralMaxMags,andinfrontofJordanwasAlice’schocolatebar（伏筆照應(yīng)）.SoonitwastimeforJordantostandonthestage.WithhisoutstandingMaxMagcar,everyone’seyeswerefixedonhim.ExcitementgavewaytoanxietyasJordansensedthepletesilence.Suddenly,thunderousapplauseburstoutfromtheaudience.Jordanwasnodoubtthewinner!Thoughhewassittingintheboxnow,hereallythoughtoutsidethebox!（主題呼應(yīng)）研究范文1Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Seeingthepuzzledlookonhismum’sface（神態(tài)描寫）,Jordanquicklytoldherthedesignofhisnewcostume—MaxMagonhiscar.Shesmiledandgavehimathumbsup.“Notimetowait!Let’sgetstarted!”exclaimedhisdadwhojustwentin.Fortwonights,theycut,pasted,foldedandunfoldedthebox;theydrewonitandcoloredittomakeitlooklikearealcar;andtheygluedtheoldMaxMagcostumeontoit.（動(dòng)作描寫）Whenthenewcostumewasfinallyready,Jordantrieditonseveraltimesandcontinuedtomakenecessarychangesuntilsatisfied.SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.Whenhewheeledhimselfintotheparty,heimmediatelyspottedthethreeMaxMags.Whentheysawhim,theycouldn’tbelieveit.“MaxMagandhiscar?That’sawesome!”Danny’seyeslitup.“Thewheelsofyourchairarejustperfect!”saidTom.“Youevenhavetheheadlights!It’ssocool.”Izzypointedtothefront.Jordanbeamed.“Thanks!”Whenitwastimetoannouncethewinner,Jordanheldhisbreath.“Thewinnerofthisyear’sHarvestfestcostumecontestisJordanEastman!”,theprincipalcriedindelight.（伏筆照應(yīng)）Everyoneclapped.“See?Youjustneededtobecreative!”Aliceyelled.“Youmeanthinkoutsidethebox!”（主題呼應(yīng)）Jordanpattedtheflamingred(火紅的)carattachedtohischair,withaniconic(偶像的,標(biāo)志性的)MaxMagsmile.范文2Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”

RealizingMomwasconfused,hequicklyadded,“That’sacooldesk,Mum.ButcanIhavethebigboxforthe

Harvestfestcontest?”Hethenexplainedexcitedlyhowtoturnitintoamobilerefrigerator.“Brilliant!Youwilldefinitelybethesuperherooftheparty,servingpeopletheirfavouritedrinks,”Mumexclaimedwithabroadsmile.Inthefollowingdays,hispriorityafterschoolwasdesigningandmakingthenewcostume,fixingittohiswheelchairandexquisitelymakingadoor.Finally,heevenpreparedsomesoftdrinkstosurprisehisfriends.(92w)

SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostumetohisfriends.

Whenhewheeledhimselfinasamobilerefrigerator,heheardadmiringexclamations,guessingaboutwhoitwouldbe.Jordanfeltanincreasingsenseofprideandsatisfaction.Whenhespottedachocolatebar,hequicklymovedtowardsit,stoppedjustseveralinchesinfrontandquicklyopenedthedoor.“Jordan,it’syou!”Alicecriedout.Jordanpassedherherfavouritedrink.“Thankyou,

Alice.That’sanideaoutsidethebox.”Thatnight,althoughhedidn’twinthebestcostumeawardfromtheprincipal,JordanfeltliketherealMaxMag:hisbodyandsoulwerenolongerconfinedto

thewheelchair.Andhecametorealize:thereishiddenpotentialineverydayitems,andsoitiswith

everyindividual.(120w)范文3

Jordan’seyessparkledastheyfellonthebox,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Awaveofinspirationoverwhelmedhimasherolledovertothebox,eagertocreatesomethinguniquethatwouldfithiswheelchair,makingitstandoutfromtheotherMaxMagcostumes.Afterdiscussingtheoptionswithhismom,theyfinallysettledontransformingthecardboardboxandhiswheelchairintoaspectaculartimemachine,withJordanplayingtheroleofancourageoustimetraveler.Thefollowingdayswitnessedthemabsorbedincutting,painting,andassemblingthecardboardwithducttapeandziptiestoformthetimemachine’scontrolpanelandexterior.Togiveitanenchantingglow,theyattachedLEDlightstothemachine.Wheneverythingwasset,Jordangrinned,hiseyescrinklingwithfulfillmentandexpectation.

Soon,Fridaynightarrived,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.Asheenteredtheschoolinhisextraordinarytimemachine,hisclassmatesweredeeplystruckbythecreativityandmeticulousattentiontodetailinhiscostume.Surroundedbycheersandapplauseofhisclassmates,JordannavigatedhimselfontothestageastheLEDlightssparkled,capturingeveryattentioninthestadium.TheotherMaxMagsuperheroespaledinparisonasJordansharedhisimaginarytimetravelingadventures.Hearingthis,theprincipalandthejudgescouldn’thelpbutapplaudhisinnovation,securinghimthefirstprize.Atthatmoment,JordanrealizedthatAlice’swordshadnotonlyinspiredhimtocreatearemarkablecostumebutalsoremindedhimofthetremendouspotentialwithinhimandthepowerofthinkingoutsidethebox.精彩片段學(xué)習(xí)積累Murmuringtohimself,herolledovertothebox,grabbeditandaskedeagerly,“Mum,canIhavethisemptybox?”///Hisfacelitupasafantasticideaflashedthroughhismindhecouldcreatesomethinguniquethatwouldfithiswheelchair,makingitstandoutfromtheotherMaxMagcostumes.LearningaboutJordan’sstrugglewiththecostume,mumdelightedlyofferedahand.Afterconsiderablediscussion,theyfinallysettledontransformingtheboxandthewheelchairintoatimemachineMaxMagtravelledin.Thefollowinghourswitnessedthemoccupyingthemselvesincutting,paintingandassemblingthecardboardwithtapeandstrings.TheyevenattachedLEDlightstoit.Excited,heaskedhismumifhecouldusetheboxforhiscostume.Afterbrainstormingideas,theydecidedtotransformtheboxintoaracecar,withJordan’swheelchairservingasthebase.Theypaintedtheboxbrightred,putstickersofMaxMagonitandaddedtwoflyingwingscutoutofthecardboard.Jordanwasthrilledathiscreation,convincedthatnooneelsewouldhaveacostumelikehis.Everythingacplished,Jordanappreciatedhisnewcostumewithsatisfaction,hiseyesglitteringwithexpectation.Asheseatedhimselfinhisnewcostume,hecouldn’thelpbutfeelasenseofprideandexcitement.Asherolledintotheschoolgym,Jordanwasgreetedwithgaspsofadmirationfromeveryone.EventheotherMaxMagswereimpressedbyhiscreativityanduniquecostume.7Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,finallycamehisturn.ItcameasnosurprisethatJordan’sracecarbecameahitandhewaschosenasthewinner.8.Alicedashedtowardhim,yelling,“Congratulations!Yousee?Youthinkoutsidetheboxnow!”Jordannoddedinagreementandgrinned.///EveryonecheeredasJordanrolleduptoreceivehisprize,whofeltproudofhimselfforthinkingoutsidetheboxandcreatingsomethingamazingfromeverydaymaterials.9.Whenhewonthebestcostumeawardfromtheprincipal,JordanfeltliketherealMaxMag:hisbodyandsoulwerenolongerconfined(限制,受困于)tothewheelchair.Yes,thereishiddenpotentialineverydayitems,andsoitiswitheveryindividual.

作業(yè)：續(xù)寫語法填空ThinkOutsidetheBoxTheHarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirselfmadecostumes(裝扮)andawinnerwouldbe_____1_____(choose)bytheprincipal.“DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?”Aliceasked.“I’mgoing__2__achocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek.”“Yeah,Ihaveacostume,”saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaited___3__hisdadtopickhimup.“Butit’sboring.”“Why?Whatisit?"Aliceasked.“MaxMagthesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo.”Jordan____4____(shake)hishead.“That’stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.”Hewavedtohisdadwhohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.Jordanrolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan(小貨車).“Maybeyoushouldgoassomethingelse.”“ThecontestisFridaynight.”Jordansighed,“It’s____5___latetochangecostumes.”"Jordan,youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.”Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolatebarcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet.HekeptthinkingaboutAlice’swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There’shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismum_____6____(handle)withsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadein.MomsmiledatJordan,_____7____(point)atthedesk,“Whatdoyouthink?”Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled.“It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."______8____(realize)Momwas_____9_