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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文Itwasacold,sunnyDecemberdaywhenIsetoutforaruninMoab,Utah,withmydogTaz.Ioftenwentfortrainingrunsbymyselfandhaddonethisparticularroutebefore.Aboutanhourintomyrunalongaremotecanyon(峽谷)trail,Ihitapatchofblackiceandthenfell60feetintothecanyon,landingonaledge(巖脊)aboveasheer(陡峭的)drop.Iwasn’tparalyzed,butIwasingreatpain.Tazhadmanagedtofindhiswaybacktome,sotheremustbeawayoutofthecanyon,butIcouldn’tstandorevencrawl.Ishoutedforhelpandwasintentondraggingmyselftothebottomofthecanyon.Everyinchwasaneffort.Ittookmefivehourstogoaquarterofamile.Eventually,itgotsodarkthatIhadtostaywhereIwasforthenight,nexttoapuddleofwater,Atnightthetemperaturedroppedbelowfreezing.Tazstayedwithme,providingsomewarmth.Thenextmorning,Icouldn’tmoveatall.triedtostaypositive.Iwassuresomebodywouldhearmescreamingforhelp.Thesecondnightinthecanyonseemedevenlongerandcolder.Thepuddleturnedtoice,andIhadtocrackthroughittogetwater.Onthethirdday,Ifeltmyselfgrowingweaker,IwasingtotermswiththefactthatImightdie.Inalastditcheffort,IcalledTazoverandtoldhimtogoandgethelp.TaztookoffthroughthecanyonandIlaytherethinkingaboutmyfamilyandfriends.Therewasmorethatwantedfromlife.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Tazreturned,alone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：“我”在猶他州莫阿布的峽谷跑步時，因踩到黑冰墜入峽谷，落在巖脊上受傷無法行動。“我”試圖自救但進展艱難，在峽谷度過寒冷的兩晚后，讓狗Taz去尋求幫助，此時“我”身體已極度虛弱并開始接受可能死亡的現(xiàn)實。伏筆與回應：伏筆：Taz之前能找到回“我”身邊的路，暗示它可能有能力出去求救?；貞篢az確實獨自離開去嘗試尋找救援，但未成功帶回救援人員。伏筆：“我”確定有人會聽到求救聲，與后文長時間無人救援形成對比，突出困境?；貞憾嗳諢o人前來救援，“我”陷入絕望。伏筆：“我”在峽谷的艱難處境，如受傷無法行動、寒冷、缺水等，為后文身體極度虛弱及對死亡的恐懼做鋪墊?；貞旱谌臁拔摇币逊浅Ｌ撊醪⒆龊盟劳鰷蕚洹７P：讓Taz去求救，為后文它回來以及最終救援到來埋下伏筆。回應：Taz回來雖未帶回救援，但它的出現(xiàn)給了“我”希望，最終救援人員也因它而找到“我”。伏筆：提到“我”對家庭和朋友的思念以及對生活還有更多期待，為后文劫后余生的感悟做準備?；貞航?jīng)歷此事后“我”更加珍惜生命與身邊人。續(xù)寫要點：情感線：從Taz獨自回來時的失望與絕望，到獲救出院后的感恩與珍惜，情感經(jīng)歷巨大轉(zhuǎn)變并得到升華。故事線：Taz獨自返回，“我”陷入絕望；后來被救援人員救起送往醫(yī)院，出院后經(jīng)歷三個月輪椅生活，在此期間對生命有了新感悟并感恩所有。主旨升華句：“Inthefaceofadversity,hopeisthelightthatneverextinguishes.”（在逆境面前，希望是永不熄滅的光。）“Eveninthedarkesthour,thebondwithaloyalfriendcanbeasourceofstrength.”（即使在最黑暗的時刻，與忠誠朋友的紐帶也能成為力量的源泉。）“Survivinganeardeathexperiencemakesonecherisheverypreciousmomentoflife.”（經(jīng)歷瀕死體驗讓人珍惜生命的每一個珍貴瞬間。）“Adversityrevealstheresiliencewithinusandthevalueoflife'sblessings.”（逆境揭示了我們內(nèi)心的韌性以及生命恩賜的價值。）“Whenlifepushesustotheedge,itistheloveandhopethatpullusback.”（當生活把我們逼到絕境時，是愛與希望將我們拉回。）寫作示范一：

Tazreturned,alone.MyheartsankasIrealizedhehadn'tfoundanyone.Ifeltawaveofdespairwashoverme.ButTazdidn'tgiveup.Hestayedbymyside,lickingmyfaceasiftoencourageme.Hourslater,Iheardfaintvoices.Tazstartedbarkingfrantically.RescuershadfollowedTaz'stracksandfinallyfoundme.

Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Duringthattime,Ireflectedonmyexperience.IwasgratefultobealiveandtohaveTaz.IrealizedhowpreciouslifeisandhowmuchIhadtakenforgranted.Imadeavowtocherisheverymomentwithmylovedonesandtonevergiveuphope,nomatterhowtoughthesituation.寫作示范二：

Tazreturned,alone.Disappointmenthitmehard.Ithoughtthiswastheend.ButTaz'spresencestillgavemeaglimmerofhope.Hesnuggleduptome,andIheldontohimtightly.Then,miraculously,ahelicopterappearedinthesky.ItturnedoutthatTaz'sbarkinghadalertedsomehikersinthedistance,whocalledforhelp.

Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Iusedthistimetohealbothphysicallyandmentally.Ilearnedthateveninthemostdirecircumstances,thereisalwaysachance.Ibecamemoreappreciativeofthesimplethingsinlifeandtheloyaltyofmyfurryfriend.Thisexperiencetrulytaughtmethevalueofperseveranceandthebeautyoflife.參考答案Tazreturned,alone.Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Thephysicaltherapywastough,butIwasdrivenbythememoryofTaz’sunwaveringloyaltyandmyowndesiretolive.Mylegsslowlyregainedstrength,andIlearnedtowalkagain.Tazwasalwaysbymyside,cheeringmeonwithhiswaggingtailandlovingeyes.Ourbondhaddeepenedthroughadversity,andIowedmylifetohim.Fromthatdayon,Icherishedeverymoment,knowingthatlifewaspreciousandthatlovehadthepowertoconquereventhedarkestvalleys.Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Itwasalongandarduousrecovery,butitalsogavemeampletimetothink.Irealizedhowfragilelifeisandhowasinglemisstepcanchangeeverything.Iwasnolongertakingmydailylifeforgranted.Istartedtoreachoutmoretomyfamilyandfriends,expressingmyloveandgratitude.Ialsobec