高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+膽小狗狗內(nèi)西的失蹤與找尋之旅

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)膽小狗狗內(nèi)西的失蹤與找尋之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Whenitcomestobeingbrave,mydogNessieisnoprizewinner.Sheletsthecateatbeforeher.She’sneveroncebarkedatthepostman.Squirrelshavetakenoverherbackyardbecauseshedaresnotchasethemupatree.LoudnoisesarewhatscaresNessiemost.Shetrembleswheneveratruckbackfires.Shegoesnutsduringthunderstorms.Andshe’sterrifiedoffireworks.KnowingthatNessiehatesfirecracker-crazydays,mysonJamesandhiswifeNataliearealwayscarefultokeephersafeinsidethehousedduringthosemoments.4續(xù)寫原文Butoneyear,assumingthatthefireworksseasonwasover,theyleftheroutsideinthefencedbackyardwhentheywenttodinnerwithfriends.Bigmistake.Theyreturnedhometofindspentbottlerocketslitteringthestreetbesidetheirhouse.Nessie,whowasn’twearinghercollarandIDtag,wasgone.Theirblackdoghaddisappearedintotheblacknight.Itwouldtakeamiracletobringherhome.Jamescalledhisdadandmebeforesunrisethenextmorningtotellusthesadnews.“Canyoucomehelpuslookforher?”heasked.Ofcoursewecould.5續(xù)寫原文Onfoot,bybicycleandbycar,wesearchedtheareainanever-wideningcircle.Wetalkedtofriends.Wetalkedtostrangers.WehungpostersontelephonepolesandplacedaLOSTDOGadinthenewspaper.Nessie’spicturewaspostedandsharedcountlesstimesonsocialmedia.WecheckeddailywiththekindpeopleattheanimalsheltertoseeifadogmatchingNessie’sdescriptionhadbeenturnedin.EverytimeJamesreceivedaphonecallfromsomeonesayingthey’dspottedascared-lookingblackdogwithnocollar,wefollowedthelead.Buttherewasstillnohope.Dayspassed.AndNessiedidnotcomehome.6段首句Paragraph1：MorethanaweekafterNessiewentmissing,James’sphonerangagain.Paragraph2：Asweapproachedthecaller’shouse,alittledogappeared.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了杰里米是個(gè)懂事的男孩，他日常會幫忙做家務(wù)、照顧家人，最喜歡喂家里的貓弗萊奇。一天晚餐時(shí)，妹妹的玩偶丟了，杰里米幫忙找回，可晚上準(zhǔn)備睡覺時(shí)卻發(fā)現(xiàn)弗萊奇不見了，后門還開著，他焦急地四處尋找無果。后來他向媽媽求助，兩人找遍各處也沒找到。第二天黎明，杰里米下樓打開后門，驚喜地發(fā)現(xiàn)弗萊奇回來了，原來它只是出去經(jīng)歷了一場小冒險(xiǎn)，一家人又恢復(fù)了往日的平靜，杰里米也明白了不要輕易放棄希望。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：MorethanaweekafterNessiewentmissing,James’sphonerangagain.內(nèi)西失蹤一周多后，詹姆斯的電話又響了。對方是一位女士，聲音帶著一絲急切，稱在她家附近看到一只黑色小狗，行為很是驚慌，與我們描述的內(nèi)西極為相似。詹姆斯瞬間激動起來，詳細(xì)詢問了地址后，我們立刻驅(qū)車前往。一路上，大家都心懷忐忑，既期待是內(nèi)西，又害怕再次失望。車窗外的景色不斷后退，而我們的心卻早已飛到了目的地，默默祈禱著這次能有好消息。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Asweapproachedthecaller’shouse,alittledogappeared.當(dāng)我們靠近打電話者的房子時(shí)，一只小狗從屋后跑了出來。它渾身臟兮兮的，毛發(fā)有些凌亂，眼神中滿是驚恐與迷茫。詹姆斯一眼就認(rèn)出這正是內(nèi)西，他激動地呼喊著它的名字沖了過去。內(nèi)西聽到熟悉的聲音，先是一愣，隨即像箭一般飛奔到詹姆斯的懷里，不停地顫抖著，似乎在訴說著這些天的遭遇。我們圍了過去，看到內(nèi)西平安歸來，心中滿是喜悅與欣慰，這場漫長的尋狗之旅終于畫上了圓滿的句號。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)MorethanaweekafterNessiewentmissing,James’sphonerangagain.Itwasaladywhosevoicecarriedatingeofurgency.Sheclaimedtohavespottedablackpuppybehavinginapanicnearherplace,whichboreastrikingresemblancetoourNessie.Instantly,Jameswasgalvanizedintoactionand,aftergettingtheaddressindetail,weimmediatelysetoffbycar.Alltheway,ourheartswerefilledwithtrepidation.WhilewewereeagerforittobeNessie,wewerealsoafraidofanotherdisappointment.Thesceneryoutsidethecarwindowkeptreceding,butourheartshadalreadyflowntothedestination,silentlyprayingforgoodnews.14范文呈現(xiàn)Asweapproachedthecaller’shouse,alittledogemergedfrombehindthehouse.Itwasdirtyallover,withitsfurindisarrayanditseyesfulloffearandconfusion.JamesrecognizedataglancethatitwasindeedNessie.Withanexclamationofexcitement,herushedover,shoutingNessie'sname.Hearingthefamiliarvoice,NessiefrozeforamomentandthendartedintoJames’sarmslikeanarrow,tremblingincessantly,asifrecountingitsexperiencesduringthesedays.Wegatheredaround,andourheartswerefilledwithjoyandrelieftoseeNessiereturnsafely.Thislongandarduoussearchforthedogfinallycametoahappyending.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)MorethanaweekafterNessiewentmissing,James’sphonerangonceagain.Itwasawomanwhosevoicewastingedwithpalpableurgency.Shereportedhavingcaughtsightofablackcanine,behavinginaskittishmannernotfarfromherabode,remarkablysimilartoourdearNessie.Immediately,Jamessprangintoaction,procuringthepreciseaddressposthaste.Withoutdelay,weembarkedonourjourney,ourheartsaflutterwithamélangeofanticipationandapprehension.Thepassingsceneryoutsidethevehicleseemedbutablurasourmindswereconsumedwiththoughtsoftheimpendingreunion,prayingferventlyforafavorableoutcome.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aswenearedthecaller’sresidence,adiminutivedogmadeitsappearance.Coveredingrimeandwithfuraskew,itseyesbetrayedasenseofbewildermentandfear.Inaheartbeat,JamesrecognizedittobeNessie.Withacryofelation,hehastenedtowardsit,bellowinghername.Atthesoundofthefamiliarcall,NessiehesitatedbrieflybeforehurtlingintoJames’sembrace,quiveringuncontrollably,asifnarratingthetrialsandtribulationsofhersojourn.Weclusteredaround,ourhearts