高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+超市外的車鑰匙風(fēng)波與暖心救助+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)超市外的車鑰匙風(fēng)波與暖心救助1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwassupposedtobeanormaltriptothesupermarket.Mysonwaslittle,anditwasgettingclosetonoon,soIwasrushingtomycartryingtoavoidameltdown(融化).Thesunwasstreamingthroughthelargewindows,castingawarmglowonthefruitsandvegetables,andforamoment,Ifeltasenseofcontentmentinthesimpleactoffinishingthegroceryshoppingwithmychild.IrememberfeelingasenseofaccomplishmentasIgothimintothecarwithoutanytears.ThenIwenttostartthecar.However,Isuddenlyrealizedmykeysweregone.Afterafewminutesofcheckingaround,IrealizedthatImusthavelockedtheminthetrunk(后備箱)withmybag.AwaveofanxietywashedovermeasIstaredblanklyatthecar,theonceinvitingsupermarketnowabackdroptomygrowingpanic.4續(xù)寫原文Iwasn’tsurewhattodo,soItookmysonoutofhiscarseatandwentbackinsidethestorewithallmygroceries.IhadtousetheirphonetocallmyhusbandforthesparekeybecausemyphonewasinthebagIhadlockedinthetrunk.Aftermultiplecallsandmessageswithnoanswer,Iwasgettingupset.Mysonwastiredandgettingfussy(愛哭的).Iwasexhaustedfromasleeplessnightthatallmomsgothroughwhentheirkidsareteething.Whenhewentintofull-oncrying,Ifeltthetearscomedownmyface,too.Anemployeeatthestoretappedmeontheshoulderandaskedmetocomewithher.Iwaspanickedforamoment,thinkingthatIwasgoingtobeblamedandthrownintothestorageareatokeepusquiet.Theemployee—whosenameIwouldlaterfindoutwasKelly—tookme,tomysurprise,totheStarbuckscafethatwasinsidethestore.SheaskedmeifIdrankcoffee.Isaidyes.5段首句Paragraph1：Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.Paragraph2：Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了一位帶著年幼孩子的母親在超市購物后準(zhǔn)備回家，臨近中午，她匆忙將孩子安置好后卻發(fā)現(xiàn)車鑰匙不見了，一番尋找后確定鑰匙連同包一起被鎖在了后備箱。她只好帶著孩子和所有的雜貨返回超市，想用超市電話聯(lián)系丈夫拿備用鑰匙，然而多次聯(lián)系無果。孩子又累又鬧，母親也疲憊不堪，幾乎絕望之時，超市員工凱利出現(xiàn)，將她帶到店內(nèi)的星巴克咖啡館，并詢問她是否喝咖啡，為這個窘迫的局面帶來了一絲溫暖與轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，讓這位母親在困境中感受到了陌生人的善意。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.、接著，凱利快步走到柜臺前，不一會兒，便雙手捧著一杯咖啡向我走來。她輕輕將咖啡遞到我面前，眼神中滿是關(guān)切與善意，說道：“喝杯咖啡，放松一下吧，看起來你今天不太順利?！蔽医舆^咖啡，熱氣騰騰的咖啡杯暖著我的手心，那絲絲縷縷上升的熱氣，仿佛也溫暖了我疲憊的心。我輕輕抿了一口，苦澀中帶著一絲甘甜，心情也隨之稍微舒緩了一些。凱利在旁邊的座位上坐下，和我聊起天來，她溫柔的話語如同春日里的微風(fēng)，輕輕拂去我心頭的焦慮。她講述著自己初為人母時的手忙腳亂，那些曾經(jīng)的艱辛與不易，讓我深感共鳴。在她的陪伴下，孩子也漸漸停止了哭鬧，開始好奇地打量著周圍的一切，原本壓抑的氛圍漸漸有了一絲輕松的氣息。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.時間一分一秒地過去，就在我?guī)缀跻艞壍却臅r候，門口突然出現(xiàn)了丈夫熟悉的身影。我激動地站起身來，凱利也跟著起身，臉上露出欣慰的笑容。丈夫匆匆走到我們身邊，先是關(guān)切地看了看我和孩子，然后對凱利連聲道謝。凱利笑著擺擺手，說這只是她力所能及的小事。我向丈夫簡單說明了情況，丈夫從口袋里拿出備用鑰匙，我們一起向停車場走去。一路上，我心中滿是對凱利的感激，這次經(jīng)歷讓我深刻感受到了陌生人的善意是如此珍貴?；氐郊液螅乙廊痪镁貌荒芡鼞褎P利的幫助，我決定以后也要像她一樣，在他人遇到困難時伸出援手，將這份溫暖傳遞下去。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.Shepresentedthesteamingcupofcoffeewithasympatheticsmileandmurmured,"Ithoughtyoucouldusethis.Takeamomenttorelax."Igratefullyacceptedit,thericharomaofthecoffeeinstantlysoothingmyfrayednerves.AsItookasip,thewarmliquidseemedtoseepintomyverybeing,providingamuch-neededrespite.Kellythensatbesidemeandinitiatedaconversation.Shesharedsomeofherownparentingtales,herwordsflowinglikeagentlestream,graduallywashingawaymyanxiety.Myson,nowsomewhatpacified,begantolookaroundthecaféwithwide-eyedwonder.Theatmosphere,whichhadbeenthickwithtension,nowseemedtolighten,ifonlyalittle.13范文呈現(xiàn)Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.RelieffloodedovermeasIsawhimenterthecafé.Iquicklystoodup,andKellyfollowedsuit,asmileofsatisfactiononherface.Myhusbandhurriedover,hiseyesfilledwithconcernforus.HethankedKellyprofusely,andshesimplyshruggeditoff,sayingitwasnobigdeal.Ibrieflyexplainedthesituationtohim,andheretrievedthesparekeyfromhispocket.Aswewalkedtowardstheparkinglot,myheartswelledwithgratitudeforKelly.Thisencounterhadtaughtmethepowerofkindnessfromastranger.Oncewegothome,Icouldn'tstopthinkingaboutKelly'sactofkindness.Iresolvedtopayitforwardandbethereforothersintheirtimeofneed,justasshehadbeenforme.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenshewalkedovertothecounterandcamebackwithoneforme.Withasmileaswarmasthesun,shehandedmethecoffee,whoserichfragranceinstantlyfilledmynostrils,calmingmyrestlessheart.ItwasatthatmomentthatItrulyfeltaglimmerofcomfortinthisotherwisechaoticsituation.Sittingbesideme,Kellysharedherownexperiencesofmotherhood,herwordsflowinglikeagentlebrook,whichgraduallywashedawaymyanxiety.Myson,nowquieteddown,waslookingaroundthecaféwitheyesfullofcuriosity,makingtheoncetenseatmospheresomewhatrelaxed.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withherhelp,myhusbandfinallyarrived.NeverhadIbeensorelievedaswhenIsawhisfigureappearingattheentranceofthecafé.Standinguphurriedly,IsawKellyalsorise,asenseofsatisfactiongleaminginhereyes.Myhusband,whoseconcernforuswaspalpable,thankedKellyprofusely.Itwasherkindnessthathadbeenabeamoflightinmydarkmoment.Aftergettingthesparekey,wewalkedtowardstheparkinglot.OnlythendidIrealizehowpreciousthekindnessofastran