作文 18 湖南卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文05湖南卷2021年真題在線榜樣，就是那些閃耀著奮進(jìn)之光的人，他們?yōu)槲覀冎敢较?。在你的成長過程中，一定有很多值得你學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣，比如袁隆平、鐘南山、老師、親人、朋友……假如你是李華，學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)將舉辦“ThepersonIadmire”的演講比賽，請你根據(jù)要點提示或做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫一篇介紹自己的榜樣的演講稿。要點提示：Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?Whatishe/shelike?Whydoyouadmirehim/her?參考詞匯：欽佩admire鼓勵encourage挑戰(zhàn)challenge成功succeed樹立好榜樣setagoodexample實現(xiàn)我的夢想achievemydream要求：1.詞數(shù)在80詞左右，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透漏考生真實身份的任何信息。Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.ThepersonIadmiremostis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening.考題解析【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和問題，寫出自己最敬佩的人是誰以及為什么值得你敬佩等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要與已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾融合起來，用第一人稱和第三人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。滿分范文Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.ThepersonIadmiremostismymother.She

isinherforties.Sheisagreatmotherandagooddoctor.WhenIhavetroublesinmystudy.Shealwayslistenstomyproblemspatiently.Andsheadvises

mehowtosolvethemandencouragesmetochallengetheseproblems.AndIalwayssucceedinsolvingthem.Asadoctor,sheoftensaysshecan’tbetoocareful.Shesetsagoodexampleformystudy.She

oftenworksextrahours.Shehasdevotedmostofhertimetoherwork.SoI

thinksheisnotonlyagoodmotherbutalsoagooddoctor.I

hopeIcanbeapersonlikeher.I’msureIcanachievemydreamoneday.Ialsohopeshewillpaymoreattentiontoher

ownhealth.She’dbetterhavemoretimetorelaxherself.That’sall.Thanksforlistening.2020年真題在線新冠疫情爆發(fā)后，無數(shù)醫(yī)務(wù)工作者和科學(xué)家努力挽救了大量生命，這使人們對職業(yè)的理解有了新的認(rèn)識。假定你是李華，你要參加學(xué)校舉行的以“MyDreamJob”為題的英文演講，請你寫一篇演講稿，包括以下內(nèi)容：（1）介紹你的個性和愛好；（2）分享你的夢想職業(yè)及理由；（3）說明你的目標(biāo)達(dá)成途徑與期望。注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，寫作時要按著演講稿的格式寫。在寫作時開頭應(yīng)介紹我夢想的職業(yè)；第二段敘述選擇這個職業(yè)的理由；第三段說明我的目標(biāo)如何達(dá)成以及我的期望；最后結(jié)尾表示感謝。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，用一般將來時介紹我的目標(biāo)達(dá)成途徑與期望；介紹我的職業(yè)夢想時，原因應(yīng)介紹細(xì)致；并且我的個性、愛好、目標(biāo)達(dá)成途徑等需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。滿分范文MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone,Ifeelhonoredtodeliveraspeechheresharingmydreamwithyou.Ihopetobeadoctorinthefuture.ThemainreasonisthatIgetalotofpositiveenergyfromthedoctors,whohaveworkedhardtosavepeople’slivesduringtheCOVID-19outbreak.Medicineplaysanincreasingimportantroleinthedevelopmentofsociety.Therefore,morequalifieddoctorsareingreatdemand.What’smore,I’mpatientandenjoylookingafterothers,whichisdefinitelyhelpfulinthemedicalcareer.Toachievemydream,Iwillworkhardtoenteragoodmedicaluniversitytoequipmyselfwithrelevantknowledgesuchasmedicine,medicaltheoryandnursingskills.IbelieveIwillmakeagooddoctorthroughefforts.Thankyouforlistening.2019年真題在線"讀萬卷書，行萬里路"，研學(xué)旅行現(xiàn)在受到教育主管部門和學(xué)校的高度重視，也深受學(xué)生和家長的歡迎．假如你們學(xué)校的英文網(wǎng)站就研學(xué)旅行中需要注意的事項發(fā)帖，征集建議．請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文，進(jìn)行跟帖回復(fù)．1．要點：2．要求（1）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名等；（2）語言要通順，表達(dá)要正確；（3）要求包含所有要點提示，為了行文需要，可適當(dāng)拓展和增加要點；（4）詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞．3．參考詞匯：在危險中in

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advice．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】本文是材料作文，也是話題作文，話題是“讀萬卷書，行萬里路”，根據(jù)表格中列舉的要點，談?wù)撗袑W(xué)旅行應(yīng)注意的問題。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文使用的時態(tài)主要有一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。高分句型一：Eatingthefoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth.吃變質(zhì)的食物對健康有害。本句運用了定語從句thefoodthatgoesbad，另外Eatingthefood動名詞作主語。高分句型二：Second,it'simportantforustofollowthetrafficrules.其次，遵守交通規(guī)則對我們來說很重要?！癐tis+adj+forsbtodosth”這個句型中it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正主語。滿分范文Nowstudytripsarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithparentsandstudents.Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwe'rehavingastudytrip?Here'smyadvice.First,wearesupposedtoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingthefoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth.Weshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruitinsteadofjunkfood.Second,it'simportantforustofollowthetrafficrules.Wemustn'tgoacrossthe