2025屆高考英語復(fù)習讀后續(xù)寫練習+遛狗風波：家庭合作的成長故事+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習遛狗風波：家庭合作的成長故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasakid,myparentsandIlivedneartheforest.Theyoftentoldmethatourfamilywasateamthatneededtoworktogetherforthehouseholdtofunctionsmoothly.Therewasalwaysanabundanceofworktodo—cooking,cleaning,andwalkingdogs.Ivolunteeredtowalkourdog,Max,whohadbeenadoptedonemonthbefore.Ineverdaredletthisgiantdogoffthelead(牽狗繩),justincasehetookoff.Onemorning,wewerewalkingalongintheforestwhenMaxstartedpullingonthelead.Atfirst,Iwasabletoholdondespitethewetgroundfromarecentshower.ButthemoreItriedtostophimpulling,themoreitturnedintoatugofwar.Andthankstotheslipperyground,Ilost.Pullinghislead,Maxshotofflikeabullet,leavingmescreamingbehind.Ichasedhimbutlostmyfootingandfellface-firstintosomemud.Istumbled(踉蹌)tomyfeet,butlookingahead,Ifoundhimrunningbacktowardsme.Ithoughthewasgoingtostopandgivemehis“Sorry”look.Butinstead,thedogshotpastmeandreturnedafterawhile.4續(xù)寫原文Assoonaswegothome,mymotherimmediatelyattendedtoMaxwithawarmtowelandadoggytreat.Ithoughtseeingmestumblingandcoveredinmud,Iwouldalsogetawarmcupofteaandamotherlykiss.Instead,Igotaveryloudlectureaboutlettingthedoglooseintheforest.Ifeltfrustrated.Itwasn’tfairthatshedidn’tunderstandhowdifficultitwastocontrolMax.Ifoughtback,“Stoplecturingme!Whyiseverythingmyfault?”Withthesewords,Istormedintomybedroomandslammedthedoorshut.Intheevening,IheardmymothercallMaxandtakehimout.Itwasn’tlongbeforeIheardmymotherscreamingandthedooropeningagain.5段首句Paragraph1：Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Paragraph2:Dadsteppedin,suggestingthatweworktogethertotrainMax.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了小時候，“我”和父母住在森林附近，“我”負責遛狗。一次在森林里，狗狗Max突然掙脫牽引繩狂奔，“我”摔倒在泥里，回家后媽媽不僅沒安慰“我”，反而大聲指責。“我”委屈地回房。晚上，媽媽帶Max出去，傳來尖叫。通過這次經(jīng)歷，“我”和媽媽互相理解，在爸爸提議下，全家一起訓(xùn)練Max，明白了家庭合作的重要性。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Iwalkedoutofmyroom.我走出房間，眼前的景象讓我驚呆了。媽媽渾身沾滿了泥，頭發(fā)凌亂，狼狽不堪，就像我上午那般。Max耷拉著尾巴，畏畏縮縮地站在一旁，仿佛知道自己闖了大禍。我和媽媽對視了一眼，她眼中的愧疚與無奈清晰可見。媽媽先開了口：“寶貝，我現(xiàn)在才知道控制Max有多難，早上不該沖你發(fā)火，對不起。”我眼眶一熱，心里的委屈瞬間消散，忙說道：“媽媽，我也有錯，不該跟您頂嘴，還跑回房間。”在這一刻，我們的誤會徹底解開。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Dadsteppedin,suggestingthatweworktogethertotrainMax.爸爸見此情形，適時提出一起訓(xùn)練Max的建議。我們一致贊同。從那以后，每天放學后，我們都會來到后院。爸爸耐心地向我們演示正確牽狗繩的方法，講解訓(xùn)練技巧。我和媽媽則輪流按照爸爸教的方法，帶著Max進行練習。一開始，Max還是會有些調(diào)皮，但隨著訓(xùn)練的深入，它逐漸變得聽話起來。在這個過程中，我們不僅拉近了和Max的距離，更深刻體會到了家庭合作的力量。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Whatgreetedmewasashockingsight.Mymomwascoveredinmudfromheadtotoe,herhairamess,justlikeIwasinthemorning.Maxstoodbesideherwithhistailbetweenhislegs,lookingextremelyguilty.MymomandIlockedeyes,andIcouldseetheguiltandhelplessnessinhereyes.Shespokefirst,“Honey,InowrealizehowdifficultitwastocontrolMax.Ishouldn'thaveyelledatyouthismorning.I'msorry.”Myeyeswelledup,andthegrievanceinmyheartvanishedinstantly.Iquicklyreplied,“Mom,Iwaswrongtoo.Ishouldn'thavetalkedbacktoyouandruntomyroom.”Atthatmoment,ourmisunderstandingwascompletelyclearedup.13范文呈現(xiàn)DadsawthissituationandtimelysuggestedthatweworktogethertotrainMax.Weallagreed.Fromthenon,everydayafterschool,wewouldgatherinthebackyard.Dadpatientlydemonstratedthecorrectwayofhandlingthedogleashandexplainedtrainingskills.MymomandItookturnspracticingwithMaxaccordingtowhatDadtaught.Atfirst,Maxwasstillabitnaughty,butasthetrainingwenton,hegraduallybecamemoreobedient.Inthisprocess,notonlydidwegetclosertoMax,butwealsodeeplyfeltthepoweroffamilycooperation.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Iwalkedoutofmyroom.Whatmetmyeyeswasadisheveledmom,mud-splatteredfromheadtotoe,herhairindisarray,mirroringmyearlierstate.Max,withtailtuckedbetweenhislegs,cowerednearby,clearlyawareofhismisdeed.Oureyesmet,andinhers,Idiscernedguiltandregret.“Honey,”shebegan,“I'vecometounderstandhowchallengingitwastomanageMax.Iwaswrongtoscoldyouthismorning.Forgiveme.”Touched,Ireplied,“Mom,I'msorrytoo.Ishouldn'thavestormedoff.”Withthat,ourriftdissolved.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Dadsteppedin,proposingwejointlytrainMax.Wereadilyagreed.Post-schooldaily,we'dassembleinthebackyard.Dadmeticulouslydemonstratedproperleash-handling,sharingtraininginsights.MomandI,takingturns,appliedhisteachings.Initially,Maxresisted,butasdayspassed,hegrewmorecompliant.Thise