讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+救助小松鼠見證成長與回歸+課件-2025屆高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)救助小松鼠，見證成長與回歸1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It’samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait—andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother—werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.4續(xù)寫原文Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean(斷奶)him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt.”Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.5續(xù)寫原文Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter(吱吱叫)forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn’tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.6段首句Paragraph1：Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Paragraph2：Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9去年夏天，作者一家在戶外時(shí)，大女兒發(fā)現(xiàn)一只迷路、虛弱又饑餓的小紅松鼠。因當(dāng)?shù)責(zé)o野生動(dòng)物專家，他們決定自行照顧。一家人輪流喂養(yǎng)，取名“斯奎特”，大女兒凱伊特琳承擔(dān)主要責(zé)任。斯奎特逐漸健康強(qiáng)壯，學(xué)會(huì)吃固體食物后被放回野外。它在戶外與凱伊特琳互動(dòng)，開始探索自然。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.一天，在樹林里，斯奎特遇到了一群灰松鼠。起初，斯奎特有些膽怯，它躲在一棵樹后，偷偷觀察著灰松鼠們?；宜墒髠冋跇渖厦β档卮┧?，尋找食物，它們歡快的叫聲吸引著斯奎特。過了一會(huì)兒，一只大膽的灰松鼠發(fā)現(xiàn)了斯奎特，它迅速跳到斯奎特面前，好奇地打量著這個(gè)“外來者”。其他灰松鼠也紛紛圍了過來。斯奎特緊張地蜷縮著身體，但又忍不住好奇地回應(yīng)著它們。慢慢地，灰松鼠們似乎接納了斯奎特，它們一起在樹林間跳躍、嬉戲，斯奎特興奮極了，盡情享受著與同類相處的快樂時(shí)光。凱伊特琳遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)地看著這一幕，心中滿是欣慰。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Onenight,Squirtdidn’tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.一天晚上，斯奎特沒有回到我們家，而且下起了大雨。我們一家人都很擔(dān)心它，不知道它在野外是否能找到避雨的地方。凱伊特琳更是坐立不安，她一直望著窗外，希望能看到斯奎特的身影。雨一直下到第二天清晨才停。凱伊特琳早早地出門，來到斯奎特經(jīng)常出沒的樹林。她輕聲呼喚著斯奎特的名字，心中充滿了擔(dān)憂。突然，她聽到了熟悉的吱吱聲，只見斯奎特從一棵大樹上跳了下來，身上雖然濕漉漉的，但看起來安然無恙。凱伊特琳激動(dòng)地跑過去，輕輕地抱起斯奎特，她知道，斯奎特已經(jīng)真正適應(yīng)了野外生活，盡管心中仍有不舍，但她為斯奎特感到驕傲。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Atfirst,Squirtwasrathertimid.Hidingbehindatree,hepeekedatthegraysquirrels.Thegraysquirrelswerebustlingaboutinthetrees,lookingforfood,andtheircheerfulchirpsattractedSquirt.Afterawhile,aboldgraysquirrelnoticedSquirtandquicklyjumpedinfrontofhim,curiouslysizinghimup.Theothergraysquirrelsgatheredaround.Squirtnervouslyhuddledup,yetcouldn'tresistrespondingoutofcuriosity.Gradually,thegraysquirrelsseemedtoacceptSquirt.Theyjumpedandplayedtogetheramongthetrees.Squirtwasextremelyexcited,fullyenjoyingthejoyofbeingwithhiskind.Kaytlin,watchingfromadistance,wasfilledwithrelief.14范文呈現(xiàn)Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourfamilywasveryworriedabouthim.Wewonderedifhecouldfindaplacetoshelterfromtheraininthewild.Kaytlinwasespeciallyrestless.Shekeptlookingoutofthewindow,hopingtoseeSquirt'sfigure.Theraindidn'tstopuntilthenextmorning.KaytlinwentoutearlyandcametothewoodswhereSquirtoftenappeared.ShesoftlycalledSquirt'sname,filledwithworry.Suddenly,sheheardthefamiliarchirpingsound.Squirtjumpeddownfromabigtree.Althoughhewaswetallover,heseemedtobesafeandsound.KaytlinranoverexcitedlyandgentlypickedupSquirt.SheknewthatSquirthadtrulyadaptedtothewildlife.Despiteherreluctance,shewasproudofSquirt.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,asSquirtwasexploringthetrees,hechanceduponafamilyofgraysquirrels.Initially,Squirt,overcomebytimidity,hidhimselfbehindathicktreetrunk,hisbeadyeyespeekingcautiouslyatthebustlinggroup.Thegraysquirrels,busilyengagedinforagingforfoodamongthebranches,emittedlivelychirpsthatpiquedSquirt'scuriosity.Beforelong,afearlessgraysquirrel,sensingSquirt'spresence,leapednimblyinfrontofhim,itsnosetwitchingasitcuriouslyexaminedthisunfamiliarnewcomer.Innotime,therestofthegroupgatheredaround,formingasemi-circle.Squirt,hisbodytremblingslightly,instinctivelyhuddledintoaball,yethisinquisitivenaturegotthebetterofhim,promptinghimtorespondtentatively.Gradually,theatmosphereeased,andthegraysquirrels,asifhavingreachedaconsensus,welcomedSquirtintotheirmidst.Together,theyembarkedonanexuberantadventure,leapingfrombranchtobranch,theirtailsswayinggracefullyinthewind.Squirt,filledwithunbridledjoy,reveledinthecompanyofhisnew-foundfriends.Kaytlin,observingfromafar,herheartswellingwithrelief,couldn'thelpbutsmileattheheartwarmingscene.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Onestormynight,Squirtfailedtoreturntoourabode,andtherainpoureddownrelentlessly.Ourentirefamilywasseizedbyasenseofdeepconcern.ThoughtsofSquirt,aloneinthewild,strugglingtofindshelterfromthedownpour,hauntedourminds.Kaytlin,inparticular,wasconsumedbyrestlessness.Hourafterhour,sheremainedgluedtothewindow,hereyesscanningthedarkness,desperatelyhopingtocatchaglimpseofSquirt'sfamiliarsilhouette.Theraincontinueditsonslaughtthroughoutthenight,onlyceasingatdaybreak.Withoutdelay,Kaytlinrushedouttothewoods,theveryplacewhereSquirtwasmostlikelytobefound.Asshewalkedalongthefamiliarpath,shecalledoutSquirt'snameinasoft,pleadingvoice,herheartheavywithworry.Suddenly,afaintyetfamiliarchirpingsoundreached