2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：為買專輯從勞動到理解的成長+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)為買專輯，從勞動到理解的成長1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IwassixteenyearsoldandIlovedmusicverymuch.Iwasdyingtobuyanalbumbymyfavouriteband.However,thepocketmoneymyparentsgavemewasjustenoughtogetby.Ididn’thaveanyextramoneytobuythealbum(音樂專輯),whichmademedisappointed.Luckily,Ifoundthatthereweremanyopportunitiesforpart-timeworkinmyneighbourhood.Thereweresomanyoldpeoplewhoneededhelp.So,inordertobuythealbumIwanted,Idecidedtofindapart-timejobtoearnmoney.4續(xù)寫原文IchosetheoldestpersonIknew,Mrs.Hudson,whowasovereightyyearsold,andcouldnottendhergardenanymore.Shehadflowers,agrasslawn,andsometomatoplants.Iknockedonherdoor,tryingtobuildupenoughcouragetoaskherforwork.Fortunately,sheansweredthatsheindeedneededhelpinhergarden.Thatwasareallyhotsummerday.Myfirstjobwastopulloutweeds.Igotdownonmykneesandbegantopullthemoutonebyone.Thetaskwastiringandboring,andIsoonbecamereallytired.However,thinkingofthealbumIwanted,Igatheredallmyenergyandkeptmoving.5續(xù)寫原文“IfonlyIhadaportableelectricfan(便攜式電風(fēng)扇)!”Isaidtomyself,wipingthesweatfrommyface.Afterseveralhoursofhardwork,Iwaspaidtendollars.ItwaslessthanIthought,butitwasenoughforthealbum.Aftergettingthattendollars,Icouldn’twaittogotothesupermarkettobuymyfavouritealbum.IbelieveditwouldbeamemorablemomentwhenIwasabletobuywhatIlikedthroughmyefforts.Onthewaytothesupermarket,IwassingingasongexcitedlywhenIhappenedtoseemymotherwhowasworkingontheoppositesideoftheroad.Actually,Ihadneverseenhowsheworkedbefore;Ijustknewshewasasaleswoman.6段首句Paragraph1：Mymotherwashandingoutleaflets(傳單)topassers-by.Paragraph2：Icontinuedmakingmywaytothesupermarket.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了16歲熱愛音樂的“我”渴望購買心儀樂隊的專輯，卻因零花錢不足而失望。發(fā)現(xiàn)社區(qū)有許多兼職機(jī)會后，“我”決定通過勞動賺錢?！拔摇边x擇幫助年邁的哈德森夫人打理花園，在炎熱的夏日拔草，雖疲憊但為了專輯堅持下來，最終獲得10美元報酬。在去超市買專輯途中，“我”偶遇正在發(fā)傳單的母親，此前從未見過母親工作場景的“我”，內(nèi)心受到觸動。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Mymotherwashandingoutleaflets(傳單)topassers-by.母親正忙著給路人發(fā)放傳單。熾熱的陽光毫無保留地灑在她身上，她的額頭布滿了汗珠，可她顧不上擦拭，仍熱情地向每一位路過的人遞出傳單。有的人接過傳單，禮貌地微笑回應(yīng)；也有人直接擺擺手，匆匆走過。但母親始終保持著微笑，沒有一絲抱怨?？粗赣H那略顯疲憊卻又努力的身影，我心中一陣刺痛。原來，母親每天就是這樣辛苦工作，為家庭默默付出。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2Icontinuedmakingmywaytothesupermarket.我繼續(xù)朝著超市走去。此刻，我的腳步不再輕快，心情也變得沉重起來。我不斷回想著母親工作的畫面，那十美元在我口袋里仿佛有千斤重。當(dāng)我站在超市專輯貨架前時，我猶豫了。最終，我決定不買專輯了。我想把這錢省下來給母親，讓她能買些喜歡的東西，或是休息一天。我知道，比起一張專輯，母親的付出更值得我珍惜。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Mymotherwashandingoutleafletstopassers-by.Theblazingsunwasshiningdirectlyonher,andbeadsofsweatwerecoveringherforehead.However,shedidn'thavetimetowipethemoff.Shestillgreetedeverypasser-bywithenthusiasm,handingoutleaflets.Somepeopletooktheleafletswithapolitesmile,whileothersjustwavedtheirhandsandwalkedawayinahurry.Butmymotherkeptsmilingallthetime,withoutanycomplaint.Watchingmymother'stiredyethard-workingfigure,Ifeltasharppaininmyheart.Itturnedoutthatthiswashowmymotherworkedeveryday,makingsilentcontributionstoourfamily.14范文呈現(xiàn)Icontinuedmakingmywaytothesupermarket.Atthismoment,mystepswerenolongerlight,andmymoodbecameheavy.Ikeptthinkingaboutthesceneofmymotherworking.Thetendollarsinmypocketseemedtoweighathousandpounds.WhenIstoodinfrontofthealbumshelfinthesupermarket,Ihesitated.Finally,Idecidednottobuythealbum.Iwantedtosavethemoneyformymother,sothatshecouldbuysomethingshelikedortakeadayoff.Iknewthatcomparedwithanalbum,mymother'seffortsweremoreworthyofmycherishing.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Mymotherwashandingoutleafletstopassers-by.Theswelteringsunbeatdownrelentlessly,castingasheenofsweatacrossherforehead,yetshescarcelynoticed.Withunwaveringenthusiasm,sheextendedleafletstoeachpasser-by,awarmsmilegracingherfeatures.Someacceptedwithapolitenod,whileothersdismissedherwithawave,hasteningontheirway.Undeterred,mymothermaintainedhercomposure,neverutteringawordofcomplaint.Witnessingherfatiguedyetresoluteform,apangofguiltpiercedmyheart.Itdawnedonmethatthiswasthedailygrindsheendured,toilingawayinsilenceforourfamily'swell-being.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Icontinuedmakingmywaytothesupermarket.Gonewasthespringinmystep,replacedbyaheavy-footedtrudge,mirroringthesombermoodthathadsettledoverme.Imagesofmymother'sarduouslaborreplayedinmymind,andtheten-dollarbillinmypocketseemedtobearaninsurmountableweight.Standingbeforethealbumshelf,Iwavered.Afteramoment'sreflection,Imademydecision:forgothealbum.Instead,Iresolvedtosavethemoneyformymother,envisioningherdelightassheindulgedinalong-awaitedtreatorsimplytookawell