2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：雨中的啟迪：從困境走向希望之路+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習雨中的啟迪：從困境走向希望之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文20yearsago,myfatherdiedofanaccidentresultedfromdrinking,leavingmysickmotherandtwoyoungerbrothersalone.Atthattime,Iwasinaseniorhighschool.Aftermyfather’sfuneral,thewholefamilywasinaworseconditionthanever.Astheeldestson,Ihadnochoicebuttoquitschoolandworkinafactory.Lifewentonwithoutanywonder.Idarednottoaskformore,justhopingtobringuptwoyoungerbrothers.However,thatwasnotaneasything,forIcouldn’taffordtheirtuitionevenifIworkedfromdaytonightwithoutstopping,andmuchworse,Ihadtotakemysickmotherintoaccount.Thepresentmiserymademewanttohaveanothertry,butitseemedimpractical,forIcouldn’tlosethisjobanymore.4續(xù)寫原文Athreadofhopesparkledinthosegloomydayssuddenly.ItwasarainyduskwhenIputmyselfintherainandwalkedinthestreet.Suddenlytherainstopped!Tomybewilderment(困惑),Iraisedmyhead,andfoundthat“thesky”wasinfactadarkblueumbrella.ThenIheardadeepvoice.“Whynotrunwithoutanumbrella?”Amiddle-agedmanwithonelegoncrutchsaidtome,“Ifyourun,youwouldgetlessdrenched.”5續(xù)寫原文Ishookmyhead,butafterasecondIthought:Right,whynotrunwithoutanumbrella?Hiswordsshockedmedeeply.Withoutmyfather,couldIonlybeaslavetothefate,andmydreaminchildhoodonlyanillusion?Lifeislikethis.Whenyouareinrainydaysinyourlife,ifyoucouldn’tfindawaytopreventyoufrombeingdrenchedearlier,youwouldhavebeenoverwhelmedbyit,butifyoudecidetogetridofit,you’lldiscoverthattherainydayslastnotsolongasyouimagined.6段首句Paragraph1：Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.Paragraph2：Then,Idecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析920年前，父親因酒后事故離世，留下患病母親和兩個弟弟，身為長子的“我”無奈輟學去工廠打工。生活艱難，“我”雖想改變卻又不敢辭職。一個雨夜，一位獨腿中年男子撐傘與“我”交談，他的話和自身經歷，給身處困境的“我”帶來了希望與勇氣，“我”決定做出改變。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.在雨中一同前行時，他向我講述了自己的故事。曾經，他是一名前途光明的運動員，卻因一場意外失去了一條腿。但他沒有被這巨大的不幸打倒，反而憑借著頑強的意志，努力重新開始生活。他白手起家，創(chuàng)辦了一家小公司，創(chuàng)業(yè)過程中遭遇了無數的艱難險阻。資金短缺、客戶流失、市場競爭激烈，每一個問題都像一座大山橫在他面前。然而，他憑借著不屈不撓的精神，一次次地克服困難，最終取得了成功。他的經歷深深地震撼了我，讓我在黑暗中看到了一絲曙光。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Then,Idecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.聽完他的故事后，我毅然決定重返校園，同時在學習之余賺錢養(yǎng)家。我利用課余時間四處尋找兼職工作，發(fā)傳單、做家教、在餐廳打工，只要能賺錢，再苦再累我都愿意做。在學校里，我爭分奪秒地學習，不放過任何一個知識點。雖然生活十分艱辛，但我始終牢記著他的話，從未有過放棄的念頭。漸漸地，情況開始有所好轉。我不僅能夠負擔起弟弟們的學費，還能給母親買藥治病。最終，我考上了一所理想的大學。多年后，我成為了一名成功的專業(yè)人士，而那個雨夜與他的相遇，永遠改變了我的人生軌跡，我對此心懷無盡的感激。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Whilewalkingtogetherintherain,hetoldmehisstory.Hehadbeenapromisingathletebeforeanaccidentdeprivedhimofhishealthyleg.However,hedidn'tallowthismisfortunetobeathim.Instead,heusedhisstrongwilltostartlifeanew.Heestablishedasmallbusinessfromnothing.Duringtheprocess,heencounterednumerousdifficulties.Therewereshortagesoffunds,lossesofcustomers,andfiercemarketcompetition.Eachproblemwaslikeahugemountainstandinginhisway.Nevertheless,withhisindomitablespirit,heovercamethesedifficultiesonebyoneandfinallyachievedsuccess.Hisstorydeeplyshockedmeandgavemeaglimmerofhopeinthedarkness.14范文呈現Afterhearinghisstory,Iresolutelydecidedtoreturntoschoolandearnmoneytosupportmyfamilywhilestudying.Ilookedforpart-timejobsduringmybreaks.Ihandedoutflyers,gaveprivatelessons,andworkedinrestaurants.Iwaswillingtodoanyjob,nomatterhowhardortiringitwas,aslongasitcouldbringinmoney.Atschool,Imadethemostofeveryminutetostudy,notmissinganyknowledgepoints.Althoughlifewasextremelytough,Ialwaysrememberedhiswordsandneverhadthethoughtofgivingup.Gradually,thingsstartedtochangeforthebetter.Icouldaffordmybrothers'tuitionandbuymedicineformymother.Eventually,Iwasadmittedtoanidealuniversity.Yearslater,Ibecameasuccessfulprofessional.Andthatencounterwithhimonthatrainynighthadforeverchangedthecourseofmylife,forwhichIwasextremelygrateful.15升級版范文呈現Whiletraversingtherain-soakedstreetssidebyside,heunfoldedhislife'snarrative.Onceapromisingathlete,anaccidenthadbrutallysnatchedawayhishealthyleg.However,farfrombeingvanquishedbythismisfortune,hesummonedhisindomitablewilltoembarkonanewlifejourney.Fromthegroundup,helaunchedasmallbusinessventure,onlytobemetwithalitanyofchallenges.Financialconstraints,clientdefections,andcut-throatmarketcompetition—eachobstacleloomedlikeaninsurmountablemountain.Nevertheless,withunwaveringdeterminationandgrit,hesurmountedthesehurdlesonebyone,ultimatelyachievingresoundingsuccess.Hisstorystruckadeepchordwithinme,castingaglimmerofhopeintotheabyssofmydespair.16升級版范文呈現Havingabsorbedhisstory,Imadearesolutedecisiontoreturntothehallowedhallsoflearningwhilesimultaneouslyshoulderingthefinancialburdenofmyfamily.Duringbreaks,Iscouredthecityforpart-timeemploymentopportunities.Whetheritwasdistributingflyersonstreetcorners,tutoringstudentsintheirhomes,ortoilingawayinrestaurants,Iwasundeterredbythearduousnessortedium.Atschool,Iimmersedmyselfinmystudies,seizingeveryfleetingmomenttomasterknowledge.Despitetheover