2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：從廚藝小白到參賽蛻變之旅+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從廚藝小白到參賽蛻變之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenMr.Bruin,ourteacher,announcedacompetitiontoendourkitchenskillsunit,whereparticipantsmustcookwithoutrecipes,usingonlytheingredients(原料)providedbythejudges,Irecalledwhatalwayshappenedinmyfamily.Mymomknewhowtomakesevenmeals.Shekeptallsevenrecipesinapinkbinder(活頁(yè)夾),eachonelabelledwithadayoftheweek.OnMondayswasMeatloaf(烘肉卷).AndithadbeenTunaTuesdaysandSpaghettiSaturdaysfor,like,myentirelife.Ihatedit.Oh,notonlyI,butalsomyyoungerbrother,Georgie.“Noteverymealhastostartwiththesameletterasadayoftheweek.Andallofittastesawful,”Icomplainedatthediningtable.“Yeah!Meatloaf'sawful,”repeatedGeorgie..Mymom'seyesflashed.ButatleastIhadsomeoneatmyback.4續(xù)寫原文MythoughtwasinterruptedbythewordsofTania,mybestfriend.“I'mtotallygoingtowin,”sheannounced.“I'vegottalentinmygenes.”Itwastrue.Tania'sdadwasthebestcookever.Ithoughtaboutmygenes.Ididn'tknowmuchaboutthem.So,ifIwantedtowin,Ineededpractice.Tonight,Iwasmakingsupper.5續(xù)寫原文Myattempt,unfortunately,provedafailure.Icombinedchocolatechips,marshmallows,carrots,potatoes,andkidneybeansinapot,whichturnedoutaburntmess,muchtomyowndisappointment.Georgieevencheeredwhenmymomofferedtheremainingmeatloafasamoreappealingoption.AsIwaspouringitintothegarbagecan,Mrs.Benny,myneighbor,spottedme.“What'sthat?”sheasked.“Supper,”Isaid.“Goodtoknow,”saidMrs.Benny.“It'sniceofyoutohelpyourmother,evenifitdidn'tworkout.Yourmomworkshard.”“Actually,Iwasjustpracticingforacookingcompetitionatschool.Wehavetocomeupwithourownrecipesforit.ButI'malostcause.”Mrs.Bennylookedthoughtful,“Whydon'tyoucomeovertomyplace?I'llofferyousomehelp.”6段首句Paragraph1:ThenextdayIwasstandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,surroundedbyredtomatoesandrowsofgreens.Paragraph2：WhenIgothomewithtwocontainersoftomatojam,mymomwaslyingonthesofa,awetclothonherforehead.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9老師宣布廚藝單元有一場(chǎng)無(wú)食譜烹飪比賽，原料由評(píng)委提供?！拔摇毕肫饗寢屩粫?huì)做七道菜，且味道不佳，自己和弟弟都不喜歡。好友塔尼亞稱有家族廚藝基因能奪冠，“我”決定練習(xí)。然而首次嘗試卻失敗了，把各種原料混合煮成一團(tuán)焦糊。鄰居本尼夫人看到后，邀請(qǐng)“我”去她家?guī)兔毩?xí)廚藝。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ThenextdayIwasstandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,surroundedbyredtomatoesandrowsofgreens.第二天，我站在本尼夫人的花園里，四周環(huán)繞著紅彤彤的西紅柿和一排排翠綠的蔬菜。本尼夫人熱情地穿梭在菜畦間，一邊向我介紹各種蔬菜的特點(diǎn)，一邊講解如何根據(jù)它們的特性來(lái)搭配食材。她摘下一顆飽滿的西紅柿，放在我手心，說(shuō)：“西紅柿是很多菜肴的好搭檔，酸甜的味道能為菜品增添豐富層次。”接著，我們又挑選了鮮嫩的羅勒葉和紫皮洋蔥?；氐綇N房，本尼夫人系上圍裙，開(kāi)始手把手教我制作番茄果醬。她耐心地指導(dǎo)我控制火候，不停地?cái)嚢?，適時(shí)加入適量的糖和香料。在她的悉心指導(dǎo)下，鍋里的食材逐漸融合，散發(fā)出誘人的香氣。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2WhenIgothomewithtwocontainersoftomatojam,mymomwaslyingonthesofa,awetclothonherforehead.當(dāng)我?guī)е鴥晒薹压u回到家時(shí)，媽媽正躺在沙發(fā)上，額頭上敷著一塊濕布。我心中一緊，輕手輕腳地走到沙發(fā)旁。我把一罐果醬放進(jìn)冰箱，然后拿著另一罐來(lái)到媽媽身邊，輕聲說(shuō)：“媽媽，嘗嘗這個(gè)，我和本尼夫人一起做的。”媽媽緩緩坐起身，接過(guò)勺子，挖了一勺果醬放入口中。瞬間，她的眼睛亮了起來(lái)，驚喜地說(shuō)：“太好吃了！寶貝，你真厲害?！甭?tīng)到媽媽的夸贊，我心里滿是歡喜。這一刻，我明白了，只要有人指導(dǎo)并加以練習(xí)，我也能做出美味的食物。我對(duì)即將到來(lái)的烹飪比賽充滿了信心。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextdayIwasstandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,surroundedbyredtomatoesandrowsofgreens.Mrs.Bennywasbustlingaroundthevegetablebeds,introducingthecharacteristicsofeachvegetabletome.Shepickedaplumptomatoandputitinmypalm,saying,"Tomatoesaregreatpartnersformanydishes.Theirsweet-and-sourtastecanaddrichlayerstothefood."Then,wealsoselectedfreshbasilleavesandpurpleonions.Backinthekitchen,Mrs.Bennyputonanapronandstartedteachingmehowtomaketomatojamstepbystep.Shepatientlyguidedmetocontroltheheat,keepstirring,andaddtherightamountofsugarandspicesattherighttime.Underhercarefulguidance,theingredientsinthepotgraduallyblendedtogether,givingoffanattractivearoma.14范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIgothomewithtwocontainersoftomatojam,mymomwaslyingonthesofa,awetclothonherforehead.Iwasworriedandwalkedquietlytothesofa.Iputonecontainerofjaminthefridgeandthentooktheothertomymom.Isaidsoftly,"Mom,trythis.ImadeitwithMrs.Benny."Momslowlysatup,tookaspoon,andputaspoonfulofjamintohermouth.Immediately,hereyeslitupandshesaidinsurprise,"It'sdelicious!Honey,you'reamazing."Hearingmymom'spraise,Ifeltextremelyhappy.Atthismoment,Irealizedthatwithguidanceandpractice,Icouldalsomakedeliciousfood.Iwasfullofconfidenceintheupcomingcookingcompetition.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextdayfoundmestandinginMrs.Benny'sgarden,whereIwasenvelopedbyclustersofredtomatoesandneatrowsofverdantgreens.Mrs.Benny,withenthusiasm,flittedamongthevegetablebeds,expoundingontheuniquetraitsofeachvegetable.Shepluckedaplumptomato,placingitgentlyinmypalm,andremarked,"Tomatoes,aversatileingredient,caninfusedisheswithadelightfulsweet-and-sourflavor,addingdepthandcomplexity."Subsequently,wegatheredfreshbasilleavesandpurpleonions.Returningtothekitchen,Mrs.Bennydonnedanapronandcommencedguidingme,step-by-meticulousstep,intheartofmakingtomatojam.Shepatientlyinstructedmeonheatcontrol,theimportanceofconstantstirring,andthepreciseadditionofsugarandspices.Underherwatchfuleye,theingredientsinthepotmeldedharmoniously,releasinganenticingaroma.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Uponmyarrivalhome,bearingtwocontainersoftomatojam,Ifoundmymomrecliningonthesofa,adampclothrestingonherforehead.ConcernwelledupwithinmeasItiptoedtowardsthesofa.Idepositedonecontainerofjaminthefridgeandthenapproachedmymomwiththeother.