高三英語書面表達(dá)的探討復(fù)習(xí)課程

高三英語書面表達(dá)的探討吳建海高三英語書面表達(dá)的探討影響高考英語書面表達(dá)得分的幾個因素1.語篇信息是否完整2.行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。3.是否使用高級詞匯4.是否巧用精彩句式5.卷面整潔,書寫工整

你校學(xué)生以“高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動”展開了討論。請根據(jù)以下討論結(jié)果，以“whetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting？”為題，寫一篇短文。６５％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為３５％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為１．應(yīng)該春游１．不應(yīng)該春游２．接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利健康２．高考臨近，沒有心情玩３．活動是精神放松，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)３．春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí)AppreciationofagoodcompositionWhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.

Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.

Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.beclosetoenergeticfeellikegoingaffordfixtheirattentiononheatedfreshTheoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2

表示觀點(diǎn)對比類寫作套語A.總起:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.B.表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)一:…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…

C.表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)之間的銜接:However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,everycoinhastwosides.Differentfromthose….,…peoplethink….Ontheotherhand,…peoplethink….D.結(jié)尾常用套語:Inmyopinion/Personally,…AsfarasI’mconcerned,…Inshort/inbrief/inaword,…

表列舉說明的關(guān)聯(lián)詞:Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…Finally/Lastbutnotleast/,....表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse…

A、運(yùn)用高級詞匯或短語B、增加形容詞或副詞C、靈活運(yùn)用各種句型

亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥1)Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.

高級詞匯：

Owingto/Becauseof/Asaresultof+N.Asaresultofthegoodweather,wehadacomfortablejourney.2)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.

高級詞匯：comeupwithAllofasudden,agoodideaflashedintomymind.3)Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.高級詞匯：Provetobe/turnouttobeTheplanturnedouttobeafailure.4)Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.高級詞匯：WithoutanydifficultyYouwillhavenodifficultyinfindingmyhouse.B.增加形容詞或副詞在我們的校園里有一個小池塘。Thereisalovelypondinourbeautifulcampus.C.靈活運(yùn)用各種句型1.活用it句型It常用句型：Itisthefirst/second…timethat…Itis(high)timethat…Itissaid/reported/well-knownthat…Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.sb.feel/find/make/think/considerit+adj.+todoWhenitcomestosth.我們到了采取措施保護(hù)環(huán)境的時(shí)候．我認(rèn)為舉行英語比賽很有意義．２.從句

李宇春在超級女生比賽中獲得第一，這令她的歌迷們很興奮．LiYuchunwonthefirstintheSuperGirlCompetition,whichmadeherfansexcited.３.倒裝句型我們只有通過努力才能獲得成功．

Onlybyworkinghardcanweachievesuccess.

直到他回來我才睡覺。

NotuntilmyfathercamebackdidIgotobed.４.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型

直到他回來我才睡覺。ItwasnotuntilmyfathercamebackthatIwenttobed.

就在他抬頭看時(shí)，一個不明的物體在天空掠過。Anunknownobjectwasflyingacrosstheskyjustwhenhelookedup.Itwaswhenhelookedupthatanunknownobjectwasflyingacrossthesky.５.with結(jié)構(gòu)有那么多的人支持超女比賽，這個活動很成功。

WithsomanypeoplesupportingtheSuperGirlCompetition,itenjoyedagreatsuccess.６.分詞短語30%同學(xué)不贊同這一看法，認(rèn)為孩子不應(yīng)當(dāng)…。30%ofmyclassmatesdisagreewithit,sayingchildrenshouldn’t….知道了這點(diǎn)，他們會越來越努力學(xué)習(xí)。Knowingthis,they’llstudyharderandharder.Challengeyourself

我校學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場有關(guān)學(xué)生可否帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的討論，根據(jù)下表中的提示寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為１.帶手機(jī)便于與同學(xué)聯(lián)系２．便于與家人聯(lián)系３．是一種娛樂方式１．破壞學(xué)習(xí)氣氛２．浪費(fèi)過多時(shí)間和金錢３．考試時(shí)會發(fā)短信作弊

Thestudentsofourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentscangotoschoolwithmobilephones.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.

Somestudentsthinkthatstudentshavemobilephonesatschool,becausemobilephoneswillenablestudentstostayin

touchwiththeirfriendsandfamilywherever

they

are.Besides,themobilephoneisawaytohavefun.

Asacoinhastwosides,themobilephones,whileprovidingconvenience,causetroubletoo.Inclassrooms,theuntimely

ringingofphonesinterruptslecturesanddestroysthe

atmosphereofstudy.Andsomestudentsmayspendtoomuchtimeandmoneyonphonecallsandsendingmessages.What’sworse,sometimesstudentsmightusephonemessagestocheatduringexams.Homework:

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