專題25 書面表達(dá)之?dāng)⑹旅鑼戭悾ㄖR(shí)梳理＋專題過(guò)關(guān)）-2022-2023學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（外研版）（解析版）

專題25書面表達(dá)之?dāng)⑹旅鑼戭?022-2023學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（外研版）【知識(shí)梳理】敘事描寫類的書面表達(dá)是以敘述和描寫為主要表達(dá)方式，以寫人、敘事和經(jīng)歷、寫物、繪景等為主要內(nèi)容的文體：這一類的書面表達(dá)動(dòng)詞使用率最高，且富于變化，用得最多的是動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，其他各種時(shí)態(tài)為輔。合理使用豐富多彩的動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)是這類書面表達(dá)的首要語(yǔ)言特征。人物類書面表達(dá)如果是對(duì)人的性格、外貌等敘述常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，如果通過(guò)事件來(lái)刻畫人物的性格，那么就要用過(guò)去時(shí)。寫好這類書面表達(dá)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚寫好書面表達(dá)，首先要頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚，明確文章要求寫什么。要對(duì)所寫的事件或人物進(jìn)行分析，弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展一直到結(jié)束的整個(gè)過(guò)程，然后再收集選取素材。這些素材都要圍繞五個(gè)＂W＂和一個(gè)＂H＂來(lái)展開，分別是why,what,when,where,who及how。2.突出中心，詳略得當(dāng)在文章的框架確定后，對(duì)支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的一步。選材要注意取舍，應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的需要出發(fā)，分清主次，定好詳略。詳寫細(xì)述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié)，略寫或粗述那些非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。面面俱到反而會(huì)使情節(jié)羅列化，使人不得要領(lǐng)。這一點(diǎn)是寫好記敘文要解決的一個(gè)基本問(wèn)題，也需要一定的技巧。3.用活語(yǔ)言，準(zhǔn)確生動(dòng)記敘文要用具體的事件和生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言對(duì)人、事、物加以敘述。一篇好的敘事描寫類書面表達(dá)的語(yǔ)言既要準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)，又要表現(xiàn)力強(qiáng)，這樣才能把人、事物描寫得具體生動(dòng)。1.

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人物類書面表達(dá)主要通過(guò)刻畫人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表現(xiàn)主題，模版如下：開門見(jiàn)山，引出要介紹的人物開門見(jiàn)山，引出要介紹的人物正文（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物……）感想IwillneverforgetmyEnglishteacher…Sheisabeautifulwoman…Itwas…o’clock,Idid…in…Irealizethat…敘事和經(jīng)歷類書面表達(dá)通過(guò)敘述事件的起因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果表現(xiàn)主題。寫景狀物類書面表達(dá)通過(guò)對(duì)事物和景點(diǎn)的描述表現(xiàn)主題。文章宜采用總—分—總的結(jié)構(gòu)或總—分的結(jié)構(gòu)，模版如下：介紹景觀介紹景觀介紹旅行經(jīng)歷總結(jié)旅行感受…isoneofthemostbeautifulsceneryspots.Ivolunteeredaguidetointroduce…ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy.【專題過(guò)關(guān)】A（2022·山東煙臺(tái)·七年級(jí)期末）暑假期間，你跟隨父母一起去農(nóng)村看望你爺爺奶奶了。你在那里做了什么有意義的事情？最讓你難忘的是什么？你的感受是什么？你從中感悟到了什么？要求：1、考生不必拘泥于所給提示，完全可以自由發(fā)揮，但文章結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確；2、行文流暢，語(yǔ)言通順、地道且有邏輯；適當(dāng)用上比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)，以及并列句和主從復(fù)合句。3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與學(xué)校名稱。4、詞數(shù)在80以上。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Duringthesummervacation,myparentsandIwenttothecountrysidetovisitmygrandparents.Westayedthereforseveraldays,andIhadagoodtime.Onthefirstday,Ihelpedmygrandparentsfeedthechickens,milkedthecowanddrankthefreshmilk.Whatinterestedmeintheafternoonwasridingthehorse.Itwasreallyexciting.Thenextday,myuncletookmetogoswimmingintheriver.ThatwasthemostinterestingthingIdi?there.AlthoughIwastiredafterswimming.Ifelthappyandexcited.Ithinkit’snecessarytovisitmygrandparentsbecauseIcanlearnalotfromthepeoplethereandIcanenjoytheloveofmybigfamily.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：題干中給了寫作方向，考生可結(jié)合題干列出寫作要點(diǎn)，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹暑期去農(nóng)村看望爺爺奶奶，玩得很開心；第二步，具體列舉有意義的事、難忘的事等；第三步，抒發(fā)自己的感受和感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveagoodtime玩得愉快②milkthecow擠牛奶③goswimming去游泳[高分句型]①Whatinterestedmeintheafternoonwasridingthehorse.（主語(yǔ)從句）②ThatwasthemostinterestingthingIdi?there.（形容詞最高級(jí)；省略that的定語(yǔ)從句）③AlthoughIwastiredafterswimming.Ifelthappyandexcited.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）B（2022·江蘇南通·七年級(jí)期末）進(jìn)入初中已經(jīng)有一個(gè)學(xué)期了，陽(yáng)光中學(xué)現(xiàn)要求學(xué)生對(duì)自己做一個(gè)公正、客觀的評(píng)價(jià)。假如你是李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇自我評(píng)價(jià)的英語(yǔ)短文。基本情況 擅長(zhǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，最喜歡排球； 愛(ài)好讀書，……(原因自擬)；生活習(xí)慣 健康生活，很少…… 喜歡穿運(yùn)動(dòng)服飾，……(原因自擬)；個(gè)性品質(zhì) 樂(lè)于助人，能幫助貧困地區(qū)的孩子；展望未來(lái) 新學(xué)期，希望……要求：1.須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2.具體內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；3.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I’mLiMingfromClass3,Grade7.Ilearnalotthisterm.Ilovemyschoollifeverymuch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nextterm,Iwill_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】I’mLiMingfromClass3,Grade7.Ilearnalotthisterm.Ilovemyschoollifeverymuch.Iamgoodatsports,andmyfavouritesportisvolleyball.Ioftenplayitattheweekend.Ialsolovereadingbecausereadinghelpsmelearnalot.Iseldomeatsnacksorsweetfood.Ilikewearingsportsclothesbecausetheyarecomfortable.Theyarepopularwithyoungpeople.Iamahelpfulboy.Ioftenraisemoneytohelpthechildreninpoorareas.Nextterm,Iwilldomoresports.IhopeIcanbehealthier.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給表格提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，整體說(shuō)明自己的個(gè)人基本情況；第二步，介紹自己的生活習(xí)慣以及個(gè)性品質(zhì)；第三步，最后展望未來(lái)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)②lovedoingsth喜歡做某事③bepopularwith受……歡迎[高分句型]①Ialsolovereadingbecausereadinghelpsmelearnalot.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ioftenraisemoneytohelpthechildreninpoorareas.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)從句）C（2022·江蘇揚(yáng)州·七年級(jí)期末）歲月不居，時(shí)節(jié)如流。告別2021，我們迎來(lái)了全新的2022。即將來(lái)臨的寒假生活你有何打算呢？陽(yáng)光中學(xué)英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部計(jì)劃在三月舉辦時(shí)裝秀，Kitty準(zhǔn)備為自己設(shè)計(jì)時(shí)裝并登臺(tái)展示。假如你是Millie,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題和要求完成一篇英語(yǔ)短文，給出你的建議和想法。1.Howdoyoueathealthily?(give2—3examples)2.Whatsportdoyoudo?(give1—2examples)3.Whatclothesdoyoudesign?(give2—3examples)要求：（1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；

（2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

（3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Hi,I’mMillie.Howtimeflies!Thewinterholidayiscoming!Iamsoexcitedtotellyousomeofmyideastobeamodelandadesigner._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi,I’mMillie.Howtimeflies!Thewinterholidayiscoming!Iamsoexcitedtotellyousomeofmyideastobeamodelandadesigner.Firstofall,eathealthily.Keepingfitisveryimportantforamodel,soyou’dbettereatlessfatandsugar.Andhaveabalanceddiet.Youcanhavesomefruitandvegetableseveryday.Secondly,dosomesports.Yogaisagoodchoice.Itcanmakeyourbodymoreflexible.Youcanalsokeeprunningeveryday,becauserunningcanexerciseyourmuscle.Atlast,designsuitableclothes.Theclothesshouldsuityouperfectly,includingsize,colourandstyle.Ithinkafashionabledresscandrawpeople’sattention.Justbeconfident.Ibelieveyoucanhaveanamazingshowonthestage.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作主題已給出，寫作時(shí)注意包含所有提示信息，并根據(jù)主題展開說(shuō)明，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明主題；第二步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容具體描寫提出的建議和想法；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)對(duì)Kitty的祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keepfit保持身材②hadbetter最好③drawone’sattention吸引某人注意力[高分句型]①Keepingfitisveryimportantforamodel,soyou’dbettereatlessfatandsugar.（并列句）②Youcanalsokeeprunningeveryday,becauserunningcanexerciseyourmuscle.（原因狀語(yǔ)從句）③Ibelieveyoucanhaveanamazingshowonthestage.（賓語(yǔ)從句）D（2022·福建福州·七年級(jí)期末）汪曾祺老先生的“家人閑坐，燈火可親”，讓我們感受到和家人一起敘敘家常是一件幸福的事。假如你是王濤，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片和提示向你的筆友Jane介紹你幸福的家庭。Jobs:teacher,…Eatinghabits（飲食習(xí)慣）：hamburgers,…Hobbies（喜好）：readbooks,flykites,…Others…注意事項(xiàng)：1）必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)拓展；2）意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3）請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名；4）詞數(shù)70左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearJane,How’severythinggoing?I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyfamily.Look,thisisaphotoofmyfamily.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangTao【答案】DearJane,How’severythinggoing?I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyfamily.Look,thisisaphotoofmyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Thetallmaninawhiteshirtismyfather.Heisadoctor.Helikeseatingvegetablesandreadingbooks.Mymotherhaslongblackhair.SheisaChineseteacherinaprimaryschool.Shelikeseatingfruits.Andherhobbyisplayingthepiano.Theboyismyme.I’mahighschoolstudent.Ilikeeatinghamburgersandflyingkites.Thegirlwithshortblackhairismysister.Herfavoritefoodisfish.Becauseeatingfishmakeshersmart.Shelikesplayingtheviolinbest.Wehavedifferenteatinghabitsandhobbies,butwe’reahappyfamily.Ilovemyfamily!Yours,WangTao【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中對(duì)人物的介紹，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“簡(jiǎn)單介紹幸福的家庭”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“職業(yè)、飲食習(xí)慣、喜好等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)對(duì)家庭的愛(ài)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①nextto挨著②makesmesmart讓我聰明[高分句型]Wehavedifferenteatinghabitsandhobbies,butwe’reahappyfamily.（but連接并列句）E（2022·上海楊浦·七年級(jí)期末）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“A/An________trip”（寫一篇名為“一次……的旅行”的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60字，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占空格。）Thefollowingquestionsareforreference:Whenandwheredidyougoonatrip?Whatdidyoudothere?Whatdidyouthinkofthetrip?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________