讀后續(xù)寫+藏不住的愛：小狗+Shadow+的到來+講義 高二上學期1月期末英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。JosieandIwantedadogmorethananythingelseontheearth.Wewishedforoneeverytimewethrewcoinsinafountainorwatchedtheeveningstardropbehindthetrees.However,ourmotherbelievedthatwewerestilltoothoughtlesstotakeonthetaskofraisingapet.Shehadwitnessedourforgetfulnessonhouseholdchoresandgettingintosmallconflicts.Inhereyes,theseweresignsthatwelackedthenecessaryresponsibility.Onesummernight,aswesattogetherontheroof,Josiesawsomething.Shepointeddowntowardadarkshadow,“What’sthat?”Foroneastonishingsecond,JosieandIstaredateachother.Thenwerusheddownontothedoorway.Thereinouryardstoodablackdog.Josiemadealittlekissingnoiseandheldoutherhand.Thedogcametousslowly,takingafewstepsforward,thenastepback,notsurewhethertotrustus.ShewassoskinnythatIcouldjustfeeleverybone,andhercoatwasmessy.“We’regoingtohaveadog!”Myinsidewasfullofexcitement,justlikebeforeChristmasorourbirthday.“What’sagoodname?”saidJosie.Theperfectnamewroteitselfinmymind,“Shadow!”Thenextday,wepiledtogetherallthepocketmoneywehadtobuyallkindsofdogfoodsandhiditinvariousplacesbecausewewereafraidMomwouldn’tapprovethatifsheknewwewerefeedingahomelessdog.Thatnight,afterourparentswereasleep,wesilentlyslippeddownstairstofeedShadow.Wecarefullypouredthedogfoodintothebowl,tryingtomakeaslittlenoiseaspossible.Shadow,whohadbeenwaitingeagerlybyourside,wagged(搖晃)hertail.Asweplacedthebowlonthefloor,acreaking(吱吱的)soundfilledthehouse.Suddenly,thekitchenlightwasswitchedon,illuminatingtheroomandrevealingourshockedfaces.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按所給格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Momdecidedtogiveusachancetoprovewecouldberesponsibleowners.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Josie和“我”極度渴望擁有一只狗，但母親認為我們做事粗心、缺乏責任感，不允許養(yǎng)狗。一個夏夜，姐妹倆在院子里發(fā)現(xiàn)一只瘦骨嶙峋、毛發(fā)雜亂的流浪黑狗，她們興奮不已，給它取名Shadow。第二天，兩人湊齊零花錢買狗糧，趁父母睡著后偷偷下樓喂食。然而，喂食時發(fā)出的聲響驚動了母親，母親突然開燈，發(fā)現(xiàn)了她們的秘密行動。故事山分析開端：Josie和“我”渴望養(yǎng)狗，母親因我們的表現(xiàn)拒絕。發(fā)展：姐妹倆發(fā)現(xiàn)流浪狗Shadow，給它取名字，并用零花錢買狗糧。高潮：夜晚偷偷喂食時被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)。結局（待續(xù)寫）：母親的態(tài)度轉變，姐妹倆證明自己能照顧好狗。伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應母親認為我們缺乏責任感：續(xù)寫中母親決定給姐妹倆機會證明，她們通過照顧狗的行動來回應這一點，如按時喂食、帶狗散步等。我們扔硬幣許愿和看星星許愿養(yǎng)狗：暗示對狗的極度渴望，在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)為努力爭取養(yǎng)狗的機會，不輕易放棄。狗很瘦且毛發(fā)雜亂：續(xù)寫中姐妹倆會精心照顧它，讓它變得健康、漂亮，體現(xiàn)照顧的成果。我們藏狗糧：表明害怕母親反對，續(xù)寫中母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后態(tài)度的轉變形成對比。偷偷下樓喂食發(fā)出聲響：導致被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)，推動故事發(fā)展，續(xù)寫中圍繞母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后的反應展開。續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：重點描寫母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后的反應，如驚訝、生氣，姐妹倆的緊張、害怕，以及母親的質問和姐妹倆的解釋。第二段：描述母親決定給機會后，姐妹倆如何照顧狗，展示責任感，包括制定照顧計劃、學習養(yǎng)狗知識等，最后得到母親認可。情感線起初，姐妹倆對狗極度渴望，發(fā)現(xiàn)Shadow時興奮不已。藏狗糧、偷偷喂食時緊張又期待。被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后驚慌失措。母親給機會后，充滿希望，努力照顧狗的過程中逐漸培養(yǎng)起責任感，最終得到母親認可，收獲成就感和喜悅。故事線姐妹渴望養(yǎng)狗，母親拒絕。發(fā)現(xiàn)流浪狗Shadow，取名并買糧。夜晚偷偷喂食被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)。母親質問，姐妹解釋。母親給機會，姐妹制定照顧計劃。姐妹努力照顧狗，得到母親認可。主旨升華句（英文）Responsibilityisnotjustaword;it'sthekeytowinningtrustandachievingourdreams.ThroughtakingcareofShadow,welearnedthatwithresponsibilitycomesthejoyofnurturingandtherewardoflove.OurjourneywithShadowtaughtusthateverysmallefforttowardsresponsibilitycanleadtogreatchangesinourlives.TheloveforShadownotonlymadeusstriveforresponsibilitybutalsodeepenedthebondbetweenusandourfamily.Intheprocessofprovingourselvesresponsibledogowners,wegrewupandunderstoodthetruemeaningofcommitment.寫作示范一Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.Hereyebrowsknittedtogether,andhervoicewasfirmassheasked,"Whatareyoutwodoing?"JosieandIexchangednervousglances,ourhandsshakingslightly.Istammeredoutanexplanation,tellingherhowmuchwelovedShadowandhowwejustwantedtotakecareofher.Momlistenedquietly,herexpressionsofteningabit.Momdecidedtogiveusachancetoprovewecouldberesponsibleowners.Weimmediatelymadeadetailedschedule.Everymorning,wetookturnstowalkShadow,andafterschool,wewouldgroomhercarefully.Wealsoreadbooksaboutdogcaretolearnhowtokeepherhealthy.Slowlybutsurely,Shadowgrewstrongerandmoreenergetic.Momwatchedoureffortswithasmile,andweknewthatourhardworkhadpaidoff.寫作示范二Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.Hereyeswidenedinshock,andforamoment,thekitchenwasfilledwithanawkwardsilence.Josie'sfaceturnedred,andIloweredmyhead,waitingforherscolding.Butinsteadofgettingangry,Momaskedgentlywhywehadhiddenthisfromher.Wepouredoutourhearts,expressingourdeeploveforShadow.Momdecidedtogiveusachancetoprovewecouldberesponsibleowners.Wewereoverjoyedanddeterminedtodowell.WesetupasmallcornerforShadow,completewithasoftbedandtoys.Westartedsavingmoremoneytobuybetterdogfoodandeventookhertothevetforregularcheck-ups.Astimepassed,Shadowbecameanimportantpartofourfamily,andMom'sapprovalmadeoureffortsallthemoreworthwhile.【答案】Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.Hereyeswidenedasshesawthescenebeforeher.Foramoment,therewassilence,onlywiththecreakingsoundstilllingeringintheair.Stammering,wetriedtoexplaintoher.WetoldherabouthowwefoundShadowandourlonging