高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：為救女童小伙開啟健康蛻變之旅

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)為救女童，小伙開啟健康蛻變之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Kevin,ayoungmaninhistwenties,gothomefromwork.Heopenedthefridgeandgrabbedonebottleofdrinkfromdozensofvariouscaffeinateddrinks.Likesomeotheryoungpeople,Kevinwasinapatternofunhealthyliving.Heoftenstayeduplate,accompaniedwithlate-nightsnackslikeicecreamandpizza.Herushedthroughhisdaywithskippingbreakfastoreatingonthego.Hewasfeedingprimarilyonhigh-fat,high-caloriefoodslikefastfood,sugarysnacks,andcaffeinateddrinks.Whenbackfromwork,Kevinspentmostofhisfreetimesittingonthesofa,browsingsmartphonescreen,rarelyengaginginphysicalactivity,whichcausedhimoverweight.4續(xù)寫原文Oneevening,ashescrolledthroughhisphoneonthesofaasusual,apieceofnewscaughthiseye.Itwasabouta5-year-oldgirlnamedMelody,whowasbattlingleukemia(白血病)andindesperateneedofabonemarrow(骨髓)transplant.ThestorytuggedatKevin’sheartstrings,andhefeltasuddenurgetohelp.Thenextday,hewenttothehospitalandaskedforgettingtestedforbonemarrowcompatibility(相容).Tohisdelight,thetestresultsshowedthathewasaperfectmatchforMelody.Excitementfilledhisheartashepreparedforthedonationprocess.However,duringhisfollowingmedicalcheck-ups,Kevinwasinformedthathehadfattyliver(脂肪肝),meaningthathewasunqualifiedtobeasuitabledonoratpresentunlesshisconditionimproved.5續(xù)寫原文ThethoughtoflittleMelodylyinginahospitalbed,waitingforalife-savingtransplant,droveKevinintoaction.Heresolvedtomakesignificantchangestohislifestyletoimprovehishealthandbecomeasuitabledonor.Hebeganbyadoptingastrictexerciseplan,incorporatingdailyrunsintohisroutine.Hisdietunderwentatransformationaswell,withhealthierfoodchoicesreplacinghispreviousones.Healsomadeaconsciousefforttogetmoresleepandreducehisscreentime.6段首句Paragraph1：Daybyday,Kevin’scommitmenttohisnewlifestylebegantoshowresults.Paragraph2：TheexperiencesignificantlyimpactedKevin.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9二十多歲的凱文生活方式不健康，常熬夜、吃垃圾食品、缺乏運動，導(dǎo)致超重。一天，他看到5歲患白血病女孩梅洛迪急需骨髓移植的新聞，決定去配型。結(jié)果顯示他與梅洛迪配型成功，但體檢發(fā)現(xiàn)他有脂肪肝，不適合捐贈。為了幫助梅洛迪，凱文決心改變生活方式，開始嚴(yán)格鍛煉、調(diào)整飲食、保證睡眠。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Daybyday,Kevin’scommitmenttohisnewlifestylebegantoshowresults.日復(fù)一日，凱文對新生活方式的堅持開始有了成效。每天清晨，他迎著朝陽出門跑步，起初沒跑幾步就氣喘吁吁，雙腿像灌了鉛般沉重。但隨著時間推移，他的耐力逐漸增強，能輕松跑完更遠(yuǎn)的距離。在飲食方面，他徹底告別了高油高糖的垃圾食品，取而代之的是新鮮蔬菜、水果和富含蛋白質(zhì)的食物。每次面對美食誘惑，他都會想起病床上等待救助的梅洛迪，從而堅定地選擇健康食物。一段時間后，體重秤上的數(shù)字不斷下降，鏡子里的自己身材愈發(fā)緊致。去醫(yī)院復(fù)查時，醫(yī)生驚喜地告訴他，脂肪肝狀況明顯改善。凱文欣喜若狂，更加堅定了自己的決心。終于，經(jīng)過幾個月的不懈努力，醫(yī)生宣布他的身體狀況適合進行骨髓捐贈。凱文毫不猶豫地踏上了捐贈之路，滿心期待能為梅洛迪帶來生的希望。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：TheexperiencesignificantlyimpactedKevin.這次經(jīng)歷對凱文產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)影響。他不僅拯救了梅洛迪的生命，也徹底改變了自己的人生軌跡。他深刻認(rèn)識到健康生活的重要性，意識到自己的點滴行動不僅關(guān)乎自身，還能對他人產(chǎn)生重大影響。捐贈結(jié)束后，他并沒有松懈，而是繼續(xù)保持健康的生活習(xí)慣。他主動向身邊的朋友和家人分享自己的經(jīng)歷，鼓勵他們也重視健康。凱文還積極參與社區(qū)的健康宣傳活動，用自己的故事激勵更多人改變不良生活方式。通過這次經(jīng)歷，凱文找到了人生的新目標(biāo)，明白了只要堅持做出積極改變，就能創(chuàng)造美好未來，無論是對自己還是對需要幫助的人。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Daybyday,Kevin’scommitmenttohisnewlifestylebegantoshowresults.Everymorning,hewouldgooutforarunintherisingsun.Atfirst,hewouldbeoutofbreathafterrunningjustafewsteps,andhislegsfeltasheavyaslead.However,astimepassed,hisendurancegraduallyincreased,andhecouldeasilyrunlongerdistances.Intermsofdiet,hecompletelybidfarewelltohigh-fatandhigh-sugarjunkfood.Instead,hechosefreshvegetables,fruits,andprotein-richfoods.Everytimehefacedthetemptationofdeliciousbutunhealthyfood,hewouldthinkoflittleMelodylyinginthehospitalbedwaitingforhelp,andthusfirmlychoosehealthyoptions.Afteraperiodoftime,thenumberonthescalekeptdropping,andhisfigureinthemirrorbecamemoretoned.Whenhewenttothehospitalforareview,thedoctortoldhimpleasantlythathisfattyliverconditionhadimprovedsignificantly.Kevinwasoverjoyedandbecameevenmoredetermined.Finally,aftermonthsofunremittingefforts,thedoctorannouncedthathisphysicalconditionwassuitableforbonemarrowdonation.Withouthesitation,Kevinembarkedonthedonationjourney,eagerlyexpectingtobringhopeoflifetoMelody.14范文呈現(xiàn)TheexperiencesignificantlyimpactedKevin.HenotonlysavedMelody'slifebutalsocompletelychangedhisownlifetrajectory.Hedeeplyrealizedtheimportanceofahealthylifestyleandthathiseverylittleactioncouldhaveasignificantimpactonothers.Afterthedonation,hedidnotslackoff.Instead,hecontinuedtomaintainhealthylivinghabits.Hetooktheinitiativetosharehisexperiencewithhisfriendsandfamilyaroundhim,encouragingthemtoalsoattachimportancetohealth.Kevinalsoactivelyparticipatedincommunityhealthpromotionactivities,inspiringmorepeopletochangetheirunhealthylifestyleswithhisstory.Throughthisexperience,Kevinfoundanewgoalinlife.Heunderstoodthataslongasoneperseveresinmakingpositivechanges,onecancreateabeautifulfuture,bothforoneselfandforthoseinneed.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Dayinanddayout,thefruitsofKevin'sunwaveringdedicationtohisnew-foundlifestylebegantomanifest.Eachdawn,hewouldsetoutforarun,greetedbythewarmglowoftherisingsun.Initially,amerefewstepswouldleavehimgaspingforbreath,hislegsfeelingasiftheywereladenwithlead.Nevertheless,withthepassageoftime,hisstaminasteadilygrew,enablinghimtoeffortlesslycovergreaterdistances.Hisdietaryhabitsunderwentacompleteoverhaulaswell.High-fat,high-sugarjunkfoodwasconsignedtothepast,replacedbyadietrichinfreshvegetables,fruits,andprotein.Whenevertheallureofunhealthyyetdelicioustreatstemptedhim,theimageoflittleMelody,frailandwaitinginthehospitalbed,wouldflashbeforehiseyes,steelinghisresolvetomakehealthierchoices.Asthedaysturnedintoweeksandthenmonths,thenumbersonthescalesteadilydeclined,andhisphysiqueinthemirrorbecameincreasinglytoned.Asubsequentvisittothehospitalbroughtpleasantnews;thedoctorinformedhimthathisfatty-liverconditionhadimprovedremarkably.Overwhelmedwithjoy,Kevinredoubledhisefforts.Finally,aftermonthsofarduousperseverance,hereceivedthelong-awaitedconfirmation:hewasnowfitforbone-marrowdonation.Withoutamoment'shesitation,heembarkedonthislife-givingjourney,filledwiththehopeofbringinganewleaseonlifetoMelody.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThisexperienceleftanindeliblemarkonKevin.Itwasn'tmerelyaboutsavingMelody'slife;itwasaprofoundtransformationofhisownexistence.Hecametorealize,inthemostprofoundway,thesignificanceofleadingahealthylifestyleandho