高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：為妹奔跑：湯姆的鞋之征程

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)為妹奔跑：湯姆的鞋之征程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Tomandhisyoungersister,Jane,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks(緊盯著他們).Oneday,TomtookJane’sshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasn’tuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.4續(xù)寫原文JaneagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareTom’srunningshoes.Jane’sschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoTom.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Tomoftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.Tomheardaboutalong-distanceracethatwouldbeheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.5續(xù)寫原文Thedayofracearrived.Tomhadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofJaneandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,anotherrunnercollided(碰撞)withTomfrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.6段首句Paragraph1：Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragraph2：Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9湯姆和妹妹簡家境貧寒，母親生病，父親難找工作，還面臨房租壓力。湯姆弄丟簡的鞋后，兩人只能共用他的跑鞋。為給簡贏雙新鞋，湯姆決定參加長跑比賽，因?yàn)槿泉?jiǎng)是新鞋。比賽當(dāng)天，他起初狀態(tài)不錯(cuò)，但中途體力不支，后來還被撞倒。然而，他一心想著對妹妹的承諾，努力追趕。最后他帶著獎(jiǎng)品新鞋開心回家，體現(xiàn)了他對妹妹的關(guān)愛。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.湯姆抬頭看到其他男孩飛速向前沖去。他心中一陣慌亂，妹妹期待的眼神在他腦海中一閃而過，那是他絕不能辜負(fù)的。他咬著牙，雙手撐地，不顧膝蓋和手掌的擦傷，猛地站起身來。雙腿的疼痛如潮水般涌來，但他深吸一口氣，緊追不舍。他的眼神中透露出無比的堅(jiān)定，每一步都踏得用力而堅(jiān)決。汗水濕透了他的衣衫，順著臉頰不斷滑落。他超過了一個(gè)又一個(gè)選手，距離前三名越來越近。此時(shí)，他的體力已接近極限，但他憑借著頑強(qiáng)的意志，依然在奮力拼搏。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.滿心歡喜的湯姆一刻也沒耽擱，踏上了回家的路。一路上，他緊緊抱著那雙新鞋，仿佛抱著世間最珍貴的寶貝。他想象著妹妹看到新鞋時(shí)驚喜的模樣，嘴角不自覺地上揚(yáng)。到家后，他迫不及待地沖進(jìn)家門，大喊著妹妹的名字。簡從屋里跑出來，看到湯姆手中的新鞋，眼中閃爍著激動(dòng)的淚花。她接過鞋子，輕輕地?fù)崦樕下冻隽藸N爛的笑容。湯姆看著妹妹開心的樣子，心中所有的疲憊都煙消云散。一家人圍過來，雖然生活依舊艱難，但此刻，幸福的氣息彌漫在整個(gè)房間。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Tomlookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Panicfilledhisheartashethoughtofhissister'sdisappointedfaceifhefailed.Withouthesitation,hequicklygotupfromtheground,ignoringthepaininhiskneesandhands.Hegrittedhisteethandpushedhimselfforwardwithallhismight.Hislegswereaching,andhewasbreathingheavily,butherefusedtogiveup.Witheverystep,hewasgettingclosertotherunnersinfrontofhim.Hepassedonerunnerafteranother,hiseyesfixedonthetopthreepositions.Despitehisexhaustion,hesummonedallhisstrengthandkeptrunning.14范文呈現(xiàn)Filledwithpleasure,Tomwalkedhomewithoutanydelay.Heheldthenewpairofshoestightlyinhisarms,asiftheywerethemostprecioustreasureintheworld.Hecouldn'twaittoseethejoyonhissister'sfacewhenshesawtheshoes.Whenhearrivedhome,herushedintothehouseandcalledouthissister'sname.Janecameoutoftheroomandhereyeswidenedwithexcitementwhenshesawthenewshoes.ShetooktheshoesfromTom'shandsandstrokedthemgently,herfacebeamingwithhappiness.Tomlookedathissister'sdelightedexpressionandfeltallhistirednessfadeaway.Theirparentscameover,andalthoughlifewasstilltough,theroomwasfilledwiththewarmthofhappiness.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Tomlookedup,onlytobeholdtheotherboysdashingforward.Panicsurgedwithinhim,forheenvisionedhissister'screstfallenvisageshouldhefallshort.Withouttheslightesthesitation,hesprangtohisfeet,heedlessofthepaininhiskneesandpalms.Grittinghisteeth,hepropelledhimselfforwardwitheveryounceofhisstrength.Hislegsthrobbedpainfully,andhisbreathcameinraggedgasps,yethewasadamantinhisrefusaltoyield.Witheachstride,heclosedinontherunnersahead.Onebyone,heovertookthem,hisgazeintentlyfixedonthetopthreespots.Despitebeingonthevergeofcollapse,hesummonedeverylastbitofhisenergyandpressedon.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Filledwithsheerdelight,Tomhastenedhomewithoutamoment'sdelay.Clutchingthenewpairofshoestightly,asiftheywerethemostpricelessoftreasures,hecouldscarcelycontainhiseagernesstowitnessthejoyilluminatinghissister'sfaceuponseeingthem.Uponreachinghome,heburstintothehouse,shoutinghissister'sname.Janeemergedfromtheroom,andhereyeswidenedinexcitementatthesightofthenewshoes.TakingthemfromTom'shands,shecaressedthemtenderly,herfaceradiatinghappiness.Tom,observinghissister'sela