高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：狗狗相伴開啟彼此新生之旅

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)狗狗相伴，開啟彼此新生之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文SadnesshitmewhenIrealizedthat4p.m.hadgoneunnoticed.Everyday,afewminutesbeforethehour,mycutedog,Jake,wouldstareatme,pushingmetogethisdinner.NowJakeisgone,andthedisappearanceofthecomfortingpacehebroughttomydaysislikeaminute-by-minutereminderofmyloss.FriendscomfortmebytellingmeIsavedhim.Butarescueorganizationdidthat.BythetimeImethim,hehadalreadybeensaved,justnotsettled.TherealstoryisthatJakesavedme.BeforeJake,Iwaslivinginatotalmess,addictedmadlytovideogames.Ilostinterestinanyschoolworkandskippedclassesalot.ElectronicdeviceswerewhatIcaredaboutmost.Myparentsweredeeplyconcernedaboutmebutit’strickytohandleastubbornteenager,takingthewrongway.Shortlyafterwards,Idroppedoutofschool.4續(xù)寫原文Itfeltsogoodattheverybeginning.Ilockedmyselfinsidemybedroom,lostinviolentgamesandlosingtrackoftimeandmeals.Fightswithparentsoccurredfrequently.Ithoughtmylifewouldbethatforever,butoneday,withoutanytrace,thosegamescouldn’tinterestmeanymore.Isankintoadeepsorrow,feelingeverythinginmylifewasblankandmeaningless.Thatlifelessnessswallowedmewhole.Iwasconsumedwithboredomandemptiness.Iwasseparatedfromtheworldbyasheetofdirtyglass.Meoninside,everythingandeveryoneelseontheother.Iavoidedsocializing.Irarelyreachedout.Iassumedtheworstinpeopleandfiguredtheysawtheworstinme.Myparentswereanxiousandappointedatherapistforme.5續(xù)寫原文That’swhenIfirstmetJake.IwaswaitingforatrafficlightwhenIspottedanadoptioneventandthenJake,withhisbigeyesdrooping(低垂),inwhichIsawhispain,justashesawmine.Icouldtellhiseyesglitteredwhenapproached.Afterlivingawholeirresponsiblelife,Idecidedtoberesponsibleforsomething.6段首句Paragraph1：Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.Paragraph2：Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9作者因狗狗杰克的離去而悲傷，回憶起相識前自己沉迷游戲、輟學(xué)、生活混亂，父母憂心忡忡。偶遇領(lǐng)養(yǎng)活動時，作者看到杰克眼中的痛苦，決定收養(yǎng)它。從此，杰克開啟新生活，同時作者也因它發(fā)生巨大改變，重新回歸學(xué)校，積極社交，找回生活的意義。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.我毫不猶豫地收養(yǎng)了它，就此開啟了它生命的新篇章。我?guī)е芸嘶氐郊?，一路上它乖乖地跟在我身邊。到家后，我為它精心布置了一個溫暖的小窩，還準(zhǔn)備了各種美味的狗糧和有趣的玩具。每天清晨，陽光灑進(jìn)房間，我會帶著杰克去小區(qū)的花園散步，它總是興奮地在草地上奔跑、玩耍。遇到其他狗狗時，一開始它還有些害怕，但在我的鼓勵下，它漸漸變得勇敢起來，和小伙伴們愉快地嬉戲。傍晚，我們會一起坐在院子里，看著夕陽西下，杰克會靠在我的腳邊，享受這寧靜的時光。它的眼神不再是最初的哀傷，而是充滿了對新生活的期待和快樂。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.杰克，也見證了我身上巨大的改變。有了杰克的陪伴，我不再沉迷于虛擬的游戲世界。我重新回到了學(xué)校，每天認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，積極參加各種活動。課堂上，我專注聽講，課后主動完成作業(yè)，成績逐漸提高。我還結(jié)交了許多志同道合的朋友，我們經(jīng)常一起帶著狗狗出去玩。杰克就像我的社交名片，讓我更容易與他人交流。我不再是那個孤僻、叛逆的少年，而是變得開朗、自信。我學(xué)會了承擔(dān)責(zé)任，明白了生活的意義。杰克的存在，讓我找到了前進(jìn)的動力，我的生活變得充實(shí)而美好。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.IbroughtJakehome,andduringthejourney,hefollowedmeobediently.Oncewearrived,Icarefullyarrangedawarmlittlenestforhim,alongwithavarietyofdeliciousdogfoodandinterestingtoys.Everymorning,asthesunlightstreamedintotheroom,IwouldtakeJakeforawalkinthecommunitygarden.Hewouldrunandplayonthegrassexcitedly.Whenmeetingotherdogs,atfirst,hewasabitscared.However,withmyencouragement,hegraduallybecamebraveandplayedhappilywithhislittlecompanions.Intheevening,wewouldsitintheyardtogether,watchingthesunset.Jakewouldleanagainstmyfeet,enjoyingthepeacefulmoment.Hiseyes,nolongersadasbefore,werefilledwithanticipationandjoyforthenewlife.14范文呈現(xiàn)Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.WithJake'scompany,Inolongerindulgedinthevirtualgamingworld.Ireturnedtoschool,whereIstudiedhardeverydayandactivelyparticipatedinvariousactivities.Inclass,Ilistenedattentively,andafterclass,Itooktheinitiativetofinishmyhomework,andmygradesgraduallyimproved.Ialsomademanylike-mindedfriends.Weoftenwentoutwithourdogstogether.Jakewaslikemysocialcard,makingiteasierformetocommunicatewithothers.Iwasnolongerthewithdrawnandrebelliousteenager.Instead,Ibecamecheerfulandconfident.Ilearnedtotakeresponsibilityandunderstoodthemeaningoflife.Jake'spresencegavemethemotivationtomoveforward,andmylifebecamefulfillingandwonderful.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Iadoptedhimwithouthesitation,thusopeninganewchapterofhislife.BringingJakehome,heobedientlytrailedmealltheway.Uponarrival,Imeticulouslyarrangedacozylittledenforhim,stockedwithanarrayofscrumptiousdogfoodandengagingtoys.Eachmorning,assunlightfilteredintotheroom,I'dleadJaketothecommunitygardenforastroll.There,he'dfroliconthegrasswithunbridledexcitement.Encounteringotherdogsinitiallymadehimtimid,yetwithmyencouragement,hegraduallyovercamehisfearandmingledmerrilywithhisfurrypeers.Intheevenings,we'dsettleintheyard,watchingthesunsetasJakenestledcontentedlybymyfeet,hiseyesnowbrimmingwithhopeandjoyforhisnew-foundlife,afarcryfromthesorrowtheyonceheld.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Jake,too,witnessedgreatchangesinme.WithJakebymyside,Ibidfarewelltothevirtualgamingabyss.Iresumedmyschoollife,whereIimmersedmyselfinstudiesdailyandactivelyengagedindiverseactivities.Inclass,Ihungoneveryword,andpost-class,Iproactivelycompletedassign