讀后續(xù)寫練習+出國夢遇阻夢中驚醒后親情和解 高三上學期英語一輪復習專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習出國夢遇阻，夢中驚醒后親情和解1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文“Daddy,Ihavesomethingtotellyou.IwantedtoaskyourpermissiontogotoAmerica.”Ididn’tfinishmyspeechasheshouted,“No!”“Butwhy?What…”,Ireplied.“Ifthisallisaboutmoney,thenyoumaynotworry,Igotascholarship…”Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Ifeltawarmtearrunningdownmycheek.IthoughttherewouldbenoproblembecausehealwaysknewhowmuchIdreamtaboutstudyingabroad.Iwassoangryandsaid:“ButwhydoIhavetoaskyourpermission?Iamalready18andI’mnotakidanymore.Youcan’ttellmewhatisrightandwhatiswrong.”4續(xù)寫原文Ishutthedoorsohardthatitstaggered.Iwassodisappointedthatalltheseyearshecouldn’tseewhatIwasdoing.Thetearswereflowingontheirown.Irealizedhowmuchmylovefordadwas,however,Ijustcouldnotstayatmyhometownanymore.Ilefthomeandmyeyeswerefullofangerandtears.Ididn’tknowwhattodoandwhattoexpect,butIdecidedtogofarawayfromhomeandstartcreatingmydreamlife.Itookabusandwenttotheairport.Iclosedmyeyesandfeltthatsomethingwaswrong.EverythingwassosilentwhensuddenlyIheardmyphoneringing.Itwasanursefromthelocalhospital:5續(xù)寫原文“Hello!AreyouthedaughterofKuat?”,sheasked.“Yourdadhashadaheartattackandhe’sinacomanow.Thesituation’sserious.Wewantyou…”Iwasn’tlisteningtoheranymore.TearswereflowingandIstartedtochokewhenallofasuddenIheardaman’svoiceandopenedmyeyes.Irealizedthatitwasanightmare.6段首句Paragraph1：Istartedsearchingformyphoneandwantedtohearmydad’svoice.Paragraph2：“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9主人公滿心期待地向父親提出想去美國留學，還表示已有獎學金。可父親卻堅決反對，主人公憤怒地指責父親，覺得父親不理解自己多年來的夢想。她負氣離家前往機場，途中卻接到醫(yī)院電話，稱父親心臟病發(fā)作昏迷，情況危急。就在她悲痛欲絕時，卻發(fā)現這只是一場噩夢。經歷這場夢，她對父親的情感有了新的感悟，也為后續(xù)與父親的交流埋下伏筆。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Istartedsearchingformyphoneandwantedtohearmydad’svoice.從噩夢中驚醒的“我”，內心慌亂不已，雙手不受控制地在包里翻找手機，急切地想聽到父親的聲音。找到手機后，手抖得厲害，差點連號碼都撥錯。電話接通的那一刻，“我”的淚水再次奪眶而出，帶著哭腔喊出“爸爸”。父親被“我”的反應弄得一頭霧水，“我”趕緊向他講述噩夢的經過，聲音因激動而顫抖，每一個字都飽含著對父親深深的擔憂與害怕失去的恐懼。在講述過程中，“我”不斷抽噎，腦海中不斷浮現夢中父親的樣子，情緒久久無法平復。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.電話那頭，父親沉默片刻后，緩緩開口，聲音里帶著一絲愧疚與溫柔，“寶貝，爸爸之前不同意你出國，是害怕你走得太遠，會漸漸忘記家，忘記爸爸”。聽到這話，“我”愣住了，沒想到父親拒絕背后藏著這樣的擔憂。“我”連忙向父親解釋，去美國留學是為了實現夢想，可無論走多遠，對他的愛永遠不會變。兩人在電話里推心置腹地交流，父親終于理解了“我”，還承諾會全力支持“我”。經過這場風波，“我”和父親的心更近了，“我”也有了勇氣和信心，去擁抱充滿未知的未來。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Wakingupfromthenightmare,Iwasinastateofpanic.MyhandswereshakingsoviolentlythatIcouldhardlysearchformyphoneinmybag.ThemomentIgotit,Idialedmydad'snumberwithouttheslightesthesitation.Everyringofthephoneseemedtostretchintoanendlesswait.Whenhefinallyanswered,Iburstintotearsandcriedout,"Dad!"inasobbingvoice.Confused,helistenedpatientlyasIrecountedthenightmare.Iwassoemotionalthatmywordswereinterruptedbyfrequentsobs.AsIspoke,theterrifyingimagesofmydadinthedreamkeptflashingthroughmymind,makingitimpossibleformetocalmdown.14范文呈現Afterabriefsilence,mydadsaidgentlyoverthephone,hisvoicetingedwithabitofguilt,"Honey,thereasonIdidn'tallowyoutogoabroadwasthatIwasafraidyou'dbesofarawaythatyoumightgraduallyforgetabouthomeandme."Iwasstunneduponhearingthis.IimmediatelyexplainedtohimthatstudyingintheUSwastopursuemydreams,butnomatterhowfarIwent,myloveforhimwouldneverfade.Wehadaheart-to-heartconversationonthephone.Eventually,heunderstoodmeandpromisedtosupportmewholeheartedly.Afterthisincident,ourrelationshipbecameevencloser.Ifeltmorecourageousandconfidenttoembracethefuturefullofuncertainties.15升級版范文呈現Thatafternoon,Winstonreturnedtothebarbershop,hopingtofindoutthetruth.Itwasthebarberwho,uponseeingWinstonenter,turnedredwithembarrassment.Winston,withadeterminedlookonhisface,askedthebarberwhathadhappened.Thebarberexplainedthatduetoasuddenpowerglitch,theclippersmalfunctioned,resultinginthisunexpectedhaircut.Notonlydidthebarberapologizesincerely,buthealsoofferedtofixitforfreerightaway.Underthebarber'sskilledhands,Winston'shairwastransformedintoafashionablestyle.Finally,Winstonleftthebarbershop,readytoembracehisnewlifewithabigsmile.16升級版范文呈現“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.”hesaidsoftly.Stunnedintosilenceforamoment,Ihadneverfathomedsuchareason.Swiftly,Iassuredhimthatmyloveforhimwasunshakable,andstudyingabroadwasaboutchasingmydreams,notaboutseveringtieswithhim.Whatfollowedwasaprofoundconversation,duringwhichhecametounderstandmyaspirations.Promisinghisfu