讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+臺(tái)球桌上結(jié)下的患難真情：Harris+與+Redhead+的傳奇友誼之路+講義 高三上學(xué)期1月期末英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。JamesHarrisJr.ofGlenBurnie,Maryland,andRussRedheadofLancaster,Pennsylvania,firstmetaboutadecadeagoatTheBankShotBar&GrillinMaryland,wheretheywereplayingagainsteachotherinanAmericanPoolplayersAssociationtournament.Atthetime,thetwowerecompetingforthetopprize,anall-expensespaidtriptoLasVegas,allowingthewinnertocompetefurtherinthetournamentforabiggerreward.AfterlosingtoHarris,RedheadwasupsetandtookhisfrustrationtoFacebook,criticizingHarrisinapostatthetime.However,mutual(共有的)friendswhohadseenthepostlaterdefendedHarrisinthecommentsection,urgingRedheadtoeventuallytakethepostdownandapologizetoHarris.“AndthenIlearnedovertimethatHarrisisactuallyareallygoodguy,”Redhead,42,toldthemedia,“And,youknow,wewenttoothertournamentstogether,wewouldbetonpeopletogetherandstufflikethat...sowereallystartedtobondfromthere.”O(jiān)vertheyears,thatbondgrew,andthetwoendedupspendingmoretimewitheachotherandsharingtheirpassionforpoolcompetitions.In2020,Harris,whohadbeensufferingfromkidney(腎)disease,wastoldhehadcompletekidneyfailure.HesaidthemedicalstaffattheUniversityofMarylandMedicalCenterimmediatelywheeledhimintosurgerysotheycouldgethimondialysis(透析).“Ididn’tknowdialysismeansyourkidneysarenolongerworking.Sothatmeansyouneedatransplant—buttheydon’tspringallthatonyouatonce,”recalledHarris,now54,whowaslaterplacedontheUMMCtransplantwaitinglist,withtheunderstandingthathemightwaityearsforamatchingdonorkidney,accordingtothehospital.Harris’wifeDenisevolunteeredtobecomehiskidneydonorandwentthroughthetestingprocess.Butitturnedoutthatshewasamismatch.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Shethensharedherhusband’sstoryinapooltournamentgroup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Luckily,testsshowedthatRedheadwasaperfectmatchforhisformerpoolopponent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：JamesHarrisJr.和RussRedhead十年前在臺(tái)球錦標(biāo)賽相識(shí)，當(dāng)時(shí)Redhead輸后在臉書(shū)吐槽Harris，后經(jīng)朋友勸解兩人冰釋前嫌，關(guān)系漸密。2020年，Harris患腎衰竭需腎移植，妻子配型失敗，無(wú)奈之下她在臺(tái)球錦標(biāo)賽群組分享丈夫遭遇。幸運(yùn)的是，Redhead配型成功，故事展現(xiàn)兩人從對(duì)手到摯友，在患難中見(jiàn)真情的轉(zhuǎn)變。故事山分析：開(kāi)場(chǎng)：介紹Harris和Redhead在臺(tái)球錦標(biāo)賽初次相遇，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈，為故事起頭，引發(fā)讀者對(duì)兩人后續(xù)關(guān)系的好奇。上升：Redhead輸后網(wǎng)上吐槽Harris，矛盾出現(xiàn)，使情節(jié)緊張，隨后兩人因朋友勸解關(guān)系緩和，一起參賽、互動(dòng)增多，情感升溫。轉(zhuǎn)折：Harris患腎衰竭，生命面臨危機(jī)，家庭陷入困境，情節(jié)急轉(zhuǎn)直下，揪起讀者心弦。下降：妻子配型失敗，希望破滅，Harris處境愈發(fā)艱難，營(yíng)造沉重氛圍。結(jié)局：妻子在群組求助，Redhead配型成功，為故事帶來(lái)轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，走向溫暖結(jié)局，讓讀者感受人性光輝。伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：兩人初遇是臺(tái)球錦標(biāo)賽對(duì)手，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈，“competingforthetopprize”?；貞?yīng)：后續(xù)Harris患病，Redhead不計(jì)前嫌、挺身而出，從對(duì)手變?yōu)榫让魅耍纬甚r明反差，突出友情珍貴。伏筆：Redhead輸后臉書(shū)吐槽，后又道歉與Harris交好，“criticizingHarrisinapost...eventuallytakethepostdownandapologize”。回應(yīng)：為他后來(lái)自愿捐腎鋪墊，表明他真心認(rèn)可Harris，性格從狹隘抱怨變得豁達(dá)善良。伏筆：多年來(lái)兩人因臺(tái)球結(jié)下深厚情誼，“bondgrew...sharingtheirpassionforpoolcompetitions”?；貞?yīng)：使Redhead捐腎順理成章，友情在危難時(shí)刻經(jīng)住考驗(yàn)，深化情感力量。伏筆：Harris患病后醫(yī)院告知病情嚴(yán)重性及漫長(zhǎng)等待腎源過(guò)程，“mightwaityearsforamatchingdonorkidney”?；貞?yīng)：突顯Redhead捐腎的及時(shí)性與難得，對(duì)比出希望的來(lái)之不易，強(qiáng)化故事張力。伏筆：妻子主動(dòng)配型展現(xiàn)夫妻情深，“Harris’wifeDenisevolunteeredtobecomehiskidneydonor”?；貞?yīng)：激勵(lì)Redhead行動(dòng)，側(cè)面反映Harris身邊人的關(guān)愛(ài)，多元烘托溫暖氛圍。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：第一段：續(xù)寫(xiě)群組成員看到分享后的反應(yīng)，如紛紛表示同情、提供幫助建議，有人幫忙轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)擴(kuò)散，引出Redhead得知消息，重點(diǎn)描繪他內(nèi)心觸動(dòng)，回憶與Harris的過(guò)往，堅(jiān)定捐腎決心。第二段：描述Redhead決定捐腎后，與Harris及家人交流場(chǎng)景，雙方激動(dòng)落淚，展現(xiàn)感恩與無(wú)私，再寫(xiě)手術(shù)順利，術(shù)后兩人情誼升華，可提及康復(fù)后重回臺(tái)球桌，象征重生與希望。情感線：開(kāi)篇兩人是競(jìng)爭(zhēng)關(guān)系，Redhead有嫉妒、怨恨；后冰釋前嫌轉(zhuǎn)為友情，一起暢享臺(tái)球時(shí)光，溫馨融洽；Harris患病后，家人焦慮、無(wú)助，Redhead知情后內(nèi)心觸動(dòng)，從猶豫到堅(jiān)定，最終以無(wú)私大愛(ài)捐腎，術(shù)后兩人情誼達(dá)巔峰，生死與共，讓讀者體會(huì)人性從狹隘到博愛(ài)的轉(zhuǎn)變，感受情誼偉大。故事線：Harris和Redhead在錦標(biāo)賽初遇競(jìng)爭(zhēng)。Redhead輸后網(wǎng)上吐槽又道歉，兩人交好。多年來(lái)一起參加臺(tái)球活動(dòng)，情誼日深。Harris患腎衰竭，妻子配型失敗。妻子在群組求助。Redhead配型成功，捐腎救助Harris。主旨升華句：Truefriendshiptranscendscompetitionandresentment,shiningbrightestinthedarkesthoursofneed.（真正的友誼超越競(jìng)爭(zhēng)與怨恨，在最黑暗的困境中閃耀光芒。）Inthefaceofadversity,thebondswe'veforgedcanbecomethelifelinethatsavesus.（面對(duì)逆境，我們建立的情誼能成為拯救我們的生命線。）Sometimes,themostunexpectedpeopleturnouttobeourgreatestheroes,teachingusthevalueofforgivenessandkindness.（有時(shí)，最意想不到的人會(huì)成為我們最偉大的英雄，教會(huì)我們寬恕與善良的價(jià)值。）Afriendinneedisafriendindeed,andtheirselflessactcanrewritethecourseofourlives.（患難見(jiàn)真情，朋友的無(wú)私之舉能改寫(xiě)我們的人生軌跡。）Life'schallengestestnotonlyourstrengthbutalsothedepthofourrelationships,revealingthetrueessenceofhumanity.（生活的挑戰(zhàn)不僅考驗(yàn)我們的力量，還考驗(yàn)人際關(guān)系的深度，揭示人性的真諦。）寫(xiě)作示范兩篇：第一篇：Shethensharedherhusband’sstoryinapooltournamentgroup.Thepostimmediatelycaughttheattentionofmanymembers.Messagesofsympathyandoffersofsupportfloodedin.Somesharedtheirownexperienceswithsimilarhardships,whileotherspromisedtospreadtheword.Redhead,whohappenedtobescrollingthroughthegroup,wasstunned.Memoriesoftheirpastcompetitions,thelaughterandthegrowingfriendshipflashedbeforehiseyes.Heknewhecouldn'tstandby.Withouthesitation,hereachedouttoDenise,sayinghewantedtogettested.Hisheartwaspounding,buthisresolvewasunshakable.Luckily,testsshowedthatRedheadwasaperfectmatchforhisformerpoolopponent.WhenHarrisheardthenews,tearswelledupinhiseyes.Redheadwenttothehospital,whereheandHarrisembracedtightly.“You'resavingmylife,man,”Harrischokedout.Redheadjustsmiledandsaid,“We'rebrothers,remember?”Thesurgerywentsmoothly,andafterrecovery,theyreturnedtothepooltabletogether,strongerthanever.Theirfriendshiphadnotonlywithstoodthetestoftimebutalsotheultimatetestoflifeanddeath.第二篇：Shethensharedherhusband’sstoryinapooltournamentgroup.Soon,thegroupwasabuzzwithactivity.Peopleweresharingthepost,taggingfriends,andleavingwordsofencouragement.AfewlocalplayersevenofferedtoorganizeacharityeventtoraisefundsforHarris'smedicalexpenses.Redheadsawthepostandwasdeeplymoved.HethoughtbacktothetimeswhenHarrishadbeenthereforhim,cheeringhimonduringtoughmatches.Hefeltacalling.Hecontactedthehospitalrightawaytoarrangeforthetesting.Ashewaitedfortheresults,hismindwasfilledwithhopeanddetermination.Luckily,testsshowedthatRedheadwasaperfectmatchforhisformerpoolopponent.ThemomentHarrisgotthecall,hewasspeechless.RedheadwalkedintoHarris'shospitalroom,andthetwomenlookedateachother,aworldofemotionsintheireyes.“Thankyou,”Harriswhispered.Redheadnodded,“It'swhatfriendsdo.”Afterthesuccessfultransplant,theybecameinseparable.Theyoftentoldtheirstorytoothers,inspiringeveryonewiththepoweroffriendshipandselflesslove.【答案】Shethensharedherhusband’sstoryinapooltournamentgroup.Soon,RedheadsawthepostandimmediatelyhadatalkwithDeniseonthephone,learningmoredetailsaboutHarris’situ