高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+400+米賽波折Tommy+終奪魁

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)400米賽波折，Tommy終奪魁1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasasunnyFridayafternoon.Myassignmentwastorecordthe400-meterraceinthesportsmeet.Allthestudentsinourclassweresittinganxiouslyexceptone,atallhandsomeboynamedTommywhowasconsideredtheonemostlikelytowintherace.Even,unlikeothercompetitors,hewasquiterelaxed,standingbesidethetrackandstretchinghimself.“Tommy!Ibetyou’llwin.”Iyelledathim.“Justwaitandsee!”Abigsmilespreadacrosshisface.“MayIhaveyourattention,please?Alltheathletesarerequestedtoproceedtotheregistrationoffice.”Agentlevoicecaughtourattention.“Tommy,yourshowtime!”Ishoutedandgavehimathumb-up.Then,Isawalltheathleteswenttoregister,preparingforthegame.Soontheywereallonthestartingline.Takingthebestrecordinglocation,Iraisedmysmartphone,readytoshoot.4續(xù)寫原文Withtheloudsoundofthestartinggun,allthecompetitorsthrewthemselvesforwardsfromthestartinglinelikearrows.Tommyquicklytooktheleadwithhisexcellentexplosivepowerfromlong-termtraining.Buttherewasoneproblemforme-Ihadtospareeveryefforttocontrolmyexcitementinordertokeepmyshootingpicturestable.“Comeon,Tommy!”Still,Icouldhearthecheersofourclassmateshigherandhigher.ItseemedthatTommyhadheardthepowerfulshoutsandbecamefullofstrength.Hekeptadjustinghisbreath,maintainingasteadyrhythm,andapproachingthefinishlinestepbystep.Finally,withthecheersoftheaudience,Tommycrossedthefinishlinealmostatthesametimewiththesecond-placefinisher.HowIwishIcouldrushtohimandgivehimabigbearhug!ButIcouldnot.Ihadtofinishrecordingthewholerace,soIwaiteduntilthelastcompetitorcrossedthefinishline.Suddenly,Inoticedtherewasanunusualnoisefromthecrowd.5段首句Paragraph1：Tommywasrankedsecondonthescoreboard.Paragraph2：ThejudgeadmittedtheerrorandannouncedTommywastherealchampion.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了陽光明媚的周五下午，“我”負(fù)責(zé)記錄校運會400米比賽。同學(xué)們都為參賽的Tommy緊張，而他卻很放松。比賽時，Tommy憑借出色爆發(fā)力領(lǐng)先，在同學(xué)們的加油聲中沖向終點。然而，他和第二名幾乎同時撞線，成績公布時Tommy被列為第二。就在大家失望之際，裁判承認(rèn)失誤，宣布Tommy才是真正的冠軍，同學(xué)們歡呼雀躍，共同慶祝他的勝利。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Tommywasrankedsecondonthescoreboard.當(dāng)看到計分板上Tommy被列為第二名時，整個班級瞬間陷入了一片死寂，緊接著爆發(fā)出一陣嘈雜的議論聲。同學(xué)們紛紛圍聚在一起，臉上滿是震驚與疑惑。有的同學(xué)瞪大了眼睛，死死地盯著計分板，嘴里不停地嘟囔著：“這怎么可能，Tommy明明跑得那么快！”有的則皺著眉頭，滿臉的難以置信。Tommy站在一旁，盡管嘴角仍掛著一絲淡淡的微笑，展現(xiàn)出他良好的體育精神，但我從他微微低垂的眼神中，看出了他內(nèi)心的失落。我深知他為了這場比賽付出了多少努力，無數(shù)個日夜的刻苦訓(xùn)練，就是為了能在賽場上取得好成績。此刻，我滿心都是對他的心疼與惋惜。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThejudgeadmittedtheerrorandannouncedTommywastherealchampion.當(dāng)裁判鄭重地承認(rèn)了計分的失誤，并宣布Tommy才是這場比賽真正的冠軍時，整個世界仿佛都沸騰了起來。原本還沉浸在失落中的同學(xué)們，瞬間爆發(fā)出震耳欲聾的歡呼聲。大家像是被點燃的火焰，紛紛朝著Tommy飛奔而去。一時間，Tommy被熱情的同學(xué)們緊緊地包圍在中間，一雙雙充滿喜悅與祝賀的手不停地拍打著他的肩膀。Tommy的臉上綻放出了燦爛無比的笑容，那笑容如同春日里盛開的花朵，充滿了生機(jī)與活力。我也迫不及待地沖上前去，給了他一個結(jié)結(jié)實實的擁抱，這是我一直期待著能給他的擁抱。隨后，興奮的同學(xué)們齊心協(xié)力將Tommy高高地舉了起來，大家簇?fù)碇瑖@著跑道歡呼雀躍地奔跑著。午后的陽光灑在他們身上，仿佛也在為Tommy的勝利而喝彩，整個場景充滿了歡樂與榮耀。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Tommywasrankedsecondonthescoreboard.Atthesightofthis,ourclassmateswerestruckwithdisbelief.Theygatheredaroundinahurry,theireyeswideopen,murmuringamongthemselves.“Howcouldthisbe?Tommyransofast!”someexclaimed.Othersjustshooktheirheadsinconfusion.Tommy,thoughclearlydisappointed,maintainedafaintsmile,showinghisremarkablesportsmanship.ButIcouldtellfromhisslightlydowncasteyesthathewasdeeplysadinside.Iknewalltoowellhowmuchefforthehadputintothisrace.Countlessdaysandnightsofhardtrainingwereallforthisverymoment.Now,Icouldn'thelpbutfeeladeepsenseofpityforhim.13范文呈現(xiàn)ThejudgeadmittedtheerrorandannouncedTommywastherealchampion.Instantly,thewholeclassexplodedintowildcheers.EveryonerushedtowardsTommylikeaswarmofexcitedbees.Innotime,Tommywassurroundedbyhisclassmates,whowerepattinghimonthebackandofferingtheirsincerecongratulations.Tommy'sfacelitupwithanenormoussmile,asmilethatcouldlightupthewholeworld.Irushedforwardandgavehimthelong-awaitedbearhug.Then,theexcitedclassmatesliftedTommyuphigh,carryinghimaroundthetrack,cheeringandcelebrating.Theafternoonsunshonebrightlydownonthem,asifit,too,wascelebratingTommy'swell-deservedvictory.Thewholescenewasfilledwithjoyandpride.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Tommywasrankedsecondonthescoreboard.Theinstanttheresultwasannounced,ourclassmates,eyeswidewithshock,werethrownintochaos.Theyrushedtowardsthescoreboard,someexclaiming,"Howcouldthisbe?Tommywasleadingalltheway!"whileothersshooktheirheadsinutterdisbelief.Tommy,thoughvisiblydisappointed,managedafaintsmile,atestamenttohisremarkablesportsmanship.However,havingwitnessedhisarduoustrainingovercountlessdaysandnights,Icouldtellfromhisdowncasteyesthathewasheartbrokeninside.Itwastrulydishearteningtoseehiminsuchastateafterallhishardwork.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThejudgeadmittedtheerrorandannouncedTommywastherealchampion.Nosoonerhadthewordsbeenspokenthantheentireclasseruptedintodeafeningcheers.Everyone,drivenbyexcitement,surgedto