高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+七歲女孩善舉傳遞溫暖大愛

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)七歲女孩善舉，傳遞溫暖大愛1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文JackieOelfke,aretiredbankmanager.paysgreatattentiontodevelopingchildren’sindependentfinancialawarenessfromanearlyage.Sheboughtapiggybank(存錢罐)foreverychild.Sheevenpassedonthegoodtraditiontohergranddaughter.SunshineOelfke.WhenSunshinewasjustborn,JackieOelfkeboughtheralargepiggybank.Theyusedthepiggybankasatoy.Later,whenSunshinegrewolder,theywouldpouroutcoinsandplaygames.Whentheyhadsmallchange,theytookthecoinsbackandputtheminthemoneystoragetank.enjoyingittirelessly.Whattheylackisnotmoney,butagoodhabit.Thelittlegirlhasalwaysbelievedinthisconcept:evenifyouarerich,youshouldbecarefulwithyourmoney.4續(xù)寫原文Twoweeksago,the7-year-oldgirlemptiedherpiggybankontothelivingroomfloorafterschoolandimmediatelystartedcounting.Jackiethoughtshewasplayingasshecarefullylinedupthecoins.butthenshesawthegirlputthecoinsintoaplasticbagandplaceitinherbackpack.Hermindwassobusilyengagedthatshedidnotalwaysknowwhenshewassilent.“Thatarousedmycuriosity,”Jackiesaid.“Nobodymesseswiththepiggybank.”AfterobservingSunshineatworkforafewminuteslonger.Jackiedecidedtofindoutwhythelittlegirlbrokeintohersavings.“Whatareyoudoingwiththatmoney?”Jackieaskedhergranddaughterwithasmile.5續(xù)寫原文“I’mtakingittoschool.”Sunshinerepliedwithoutlooking.Sheseemedtostrugglebeforetalkingtohergrandma.Thelittlegirlfinallystatedtherealreasonwhysheneededthemoney.“I’mgoingtotakeitformilkmoney.MyfriendLayladoesn’tgetmilk—hermumdoesn’thavemilkmoneyandIdo.”Asaspecialguest,JackieoncewenttoparticipateinactivitiesorganizedatSunshine’sschool.Sunshine’steacher,RitaHausher,toldherthatmanystudentsinherclasscamefrompoorfamilies,andsherememberedhavingLayla.Atthattime,shehadtheideaofhelpingthem,butshedidn’tknowhowtodoitmoreappropriately.6段首句Paragraph1：Jackie’sheartmelted(融化)atSunshine’swords.Paragraph2：Jackiepostedatearfulvideoonlinetoexplainhergranddaughter’splan.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了退休銀行經(jīng)理Jackie注重培養(yǎng)孩子理財意識，孫女Sunshine從小就有存錢罐。兩周前，7歲的Sunshine放學(xué)后清點(diǎn)存錢罐，打算用這筆錢給沒牛奶喝的朋友Layla買牛奶，原因是Layla媽媽沒錢買牛奶。Jackie得知后深受觸動，她曾參加學(xué)?；顒?，知曉班里有很多貧困家庭孩子。之后，Jackie決定支持孫女，還將此事拍成視頻發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Jackie’sheartmelted(融化)atSunshine’swords.聽到Sunshine的話，Jackie的心都化了。她怎么也沒想到，小小年紀(jì)的孫女竟如此善良、無私?？粗鳶unshine堅定的眼神，Jackie仿佛看到了一顆閃耀的愛心。她一把將Sunshine摟在懷里，眼眶濕潤地說：“寶貝，你做得太對了，奶奶全力支持你?！彪S后，Jackie告訴Sunshine，明天她們一起去學(xué)校，一定要確保Layla和其他沒牛奶喝的同學(xué)都能喝到牛奶。當(dāng)晚，祖孫倆坐在客廳地板上，再次仔細(xì)清點(diǎn)存錢罐里的錢，一筆一筆記錄，商量著怎樣用這些錢讓更多孩子受益，還制定了詳細(xì)的送奶計劃，滿心期待著第二天的到來。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Jackiepostedatearfulvideoonlinetoexplainhergranddaughter’splan.Jackie將一段飽含熱淚的視頻發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上，詳細(xì)講述了孫女的暖心計劃。在視頻中，她繪聲繪色地描述了Sunshine發(fā)現(xiàn)Layla困境后的種種舉動，希望借此能喚醒更多人的愛心。沒想到，視頻一經(jīng)發(fā)布，迅速在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上傳播開來。來自各地的人們都被Sunshine的善良所打動，紛紛慷慨解囊。捐款如潮水般涌來，Jackie和Sunshine在老師的協(xié)助下，成功為學(xué)校有需要的孩子設(shè)立了專項基金。從那以后，每天課間，孩子們都能開心地喝到營養(yǎng)的牛奶。Sunshine一個小小的善舉，像一顆愛心火種，點(diǎn)燃了整個社會的溫暖與關(guān)愛。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Jackie’sheartmeltedatSunshine’swords.Shewassodeeplytouchedbyhergranddaughter'skindnessandselflessnessthathereyesfilledwithtears.Gazingatthedeterminedlittlegirl,Jackiecouldn'thelpbutfeelasurgeofpride.ShepulledSunshineintoherarmsandsaidtenderly,“Darling,you'resokind-hearted.Grandmawillsupportyouwholeheartedly.”Then,JackieinformedSunshinethattheywouldgotoschooltogetherthenextday.TheyweredeterminedtoensurethatLaylaandotherkidslackingmilkmoneycouldfinallygetthemilktheydeserved.Thatnight,theysatontheliving-roomfloor,carefullycountingthemoneyagain.Astheycounted,theydiscussedhowtomakethebestuseofthemoney,makingadetailedplantobringwarmthtothoseinneed.14范文呈現(xiàn)Jackiepostedatearfulvideoonlinetoexplainhergranddaughter’splan.Inthevideo,shevividlydescribedhowSunshine,withherpureheart,decidedtohelpLayla.Shehopedthatthisstorycouldinspiremorepeopletoshowtheirlove.Amazingly,thevideowentviralinnotime.Peoplefromdifferentpartsofthecountry,deeplymovedbySunshine'scompassion,startedtodonatemoney.Thedonationskeptpouringin.Withthehelpoftheteacher,JackieandSunshineestablishedaspecialfundforthekidsinneedatschool.Fromthenon,everychildintheclasscouldenjoyaglassofmilkeveryday.Sunshine'ssmallactofkindnesshadsparkedahugewaveofloveandkindnessthroughoutthecommunity.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Jackie’sheartmeltedatSunshine’swords.Sodeeplywasshetouchedbyhergranddaughter'skindnessandselflessnessthathereyeswelledupwithtears.Lookingatthedeterminedlittlegirl,Jackiefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofpride.PullingSunshineintoherarms,shesaidtenderly,“Darling,you'reincrediblykind-hearted.Grandmawillsupportyouwholeheartedly.”Then,sheinformedSunshinethattheywouldgotoschooltogetherthenextday,determinedtoensurethatLaylaandotherkidslackingmilkmoneycouldgetthemilktheydeserved.Thatnight,sittingontheliving-roomfloor,theycarefullycountedthemoneyagain,discussinghowtomakethebestuseofitandmakingadetailedplantobringwarmthtothoseinneed.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Jackiepostedatearfulvideoonlinetoexplainhergranddaughter’splan.Inthevideo,shevividlydescribedhowSunshine,withherpureheart,d