讀后續(xù)寫：父親善意幫助他人成功購買馬戲票 講義-高考英語備考寫作專項

讀后續(xù)寫：父親善意幫助他人成功購買馬戲票講義閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短forthecircus.Finally,therewasonlyonefamilybetweenThisfamilymadeabigprobablyundertheageoftwelve.YoucouldtelltTheirclotheswerenotexpensive,buttheywereclean.Thechilwell-behaved,allofthemstandinginline,two-by-twobehindtheirparents,holdinghighlightoftheiryounglives.Thefatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldbe.Themotherwasholdingherhusband'shand,lookingupthatright."Theticketladyaskedthefatherhowmanyticketshewanted.Heproudlyresponded,"PleaseletmebuyeightTheticketladygavetheprice.Theman'swHowwashesupposedtoturnaroundandtellhis1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.ThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutany主旨大意本文圍繞作者青少年時期和父親排隊買馬戲票時，遇到一家因錢不夠無法買票的家庭展開。作者家境同樣不寬裕，但父親用巧妙的方式給予幫助，展現(xiàn)了人與人之間善良與溫暖的美好品質(zhì)，以及這種行為對作者價值觀產(chǎn)生的深遠影響。1."Thisfamilymadeabigimpressiononme."暗示這家人后續(xù)會在故事中扮演重要角色，引發(fā)讀者對這家人故事走向的好奇。2."Themandidn'thaveenoughmoney."為父親的幫助行為埋下伏筆，推動情節(jié)發(fā)展，讓讀者期待事情的解決方式。情節(jié)發(fā)展故事從作者和父親排隊買馬戲票，看到前面一家充滿期待卻因錢不夠而陷入困境開始。接著父親的善良舉動成為情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折，幫助這家人買到票，最后以作者和父親回家路上的交流，深化主題，展現(xiàn)善良行為對作者的影響結(jié)束。續(xù)寫要點第一段：細(xì)致描寫父親掉落20美元鈔票的動作，以及那家人發(fā)現(xiàn)錢時的神態(tài)、動作和語言反應(yīng)。重點刻畫父親如何巧妙地讓這家人相信錢是他們的，以及這家人收到錢后的感激之情，如語言表達、面部表情等。第二段：著重描寫作者和父親回家路上的對話，父親對作者的教育內(nèi)容，以及作者內(nèi)心的感受和想法變化。體現(xiàn)出這件事對作者價值觀的塑造，如對善良、無私奉獻主題句1.Myfather'ssimp2.Themomentthemanpickedupthebill,hissurpriseandrelief,and3.Aswedroveawayfrfather'swordsofwisdomaboutkindness.5.Thememoryofthatremindingmetobekindandhelpfulinevery范文一Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20bill"Sir,Ithinkyoudroppeddisbelief.Hestaredatthebill,thenatface."Thankyousomuch,kindsir!Youhavenoideahowmuchthisexclaimed,hisvoicetremblingtickets.Thechildrencheeredandjumped,andthewholefamilyrushedintotheThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanygraduallyunderstoodthetruevalueofkindness.Fromthenon,Ialwaystrytobeaonthe+身體部位，表示觸碰某人某個部位。3.“Theirhappinessisfarmo1.wrenching:/'rent?in/,adj.3.exclaim:/ik'skleim/,v.呼喊；驚叫；大聲說出5.giver:/'giv?(r)/,n.Mydad,withouthesitation,puthishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billandletitdroptotheground.Hecasuallysaidtotheman,"Ipocket."Themanlookeddownatthebifirst,probablythinkingitwastoogoodtobetrue.Butconvincedhim.“Thankyokids,"hesaid,hiseyesglisteningwithgratituandthefamilyenteredthecircus,theirfacesbeaThatdaymyfatherandIwentbacktoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.Inthecar,myfathersaid,"Remember,son,kindnessisthemostatruegift.Sincethen,I'vealwaysbeeninsp高級句式歸納1.“Whilewaitinginlinetobuyticketsforthecircus..”現(xiàn)在分詞作時間狀語，省略了主語和be動詞，使句子更簡潔。2."Hecasuallysaidto引語和賓語從句結(jié)合，使對話更生動。3.“Hiswordshithome,andIunderstoodthathe語從句，that引導(dǎo)的從句作understood的賓語。生詞列表1.anticipation:/?n,tisi'pe