讀后續(xù)寫+社區(qū)花園保護的故事+講義 高三下學期3月一模英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AftergettinguplateonasleepySunday,IsawmydadatthekitchentablereadingtheSundayeditionofthelocalnewspaper.Imadeaquicksandwichandsatdownnexttohim,askinghimwhatwasnew.Heturnedtomeinlowspiritsandsaidthecouncilwasplanningtoteardownthecommunitygardennearby.Hementionedthatheusedtoworkonitwithhisdad,sotheplacehadsomechildhoodmemoriesforhim.Hethenputdownthepaper,walkedovertotheclosetandafterabitofhunting,pulledoutathick,blackbookInside,therewereseveraloldphotos.Afterthumbingthroughafewpages,mydadfoundtheoneofhimandhisdadtogetheratthecommunitygarden,justashehadsaid“Wow,yourcheeksweresuperrosybackthen!”Isaid,astonished.Withnothingplannedfortheafternoon,mydadandIdecidedtotakeatripovertothecommunitygardentoseehowitwasdoingthesedays.Notgood,asitturnedout.Sodacans,cigaretteendsandothergarbagespreadeverywhere.Potsofsoilwerestillthere,butthefewplantsthatremainedwereeitherdeadordying.Welookedateachotherandknewwhatwehadtodo.Aftergatheringsometoolsandgarbagebags,wewentstraighttocleanuptheplace.Iphonedsomeofmyschoolfriends,andsoonahalf-dozenpeoplewerecollectinggarbageandsweepingpaths.Someonehadevenbroughtbagsoffreshseedsandsoilalongwithnewflowers,soweuprootedtheolddeadplantsandflowersandplantednewones.Afterafewhours,thecommunitygardenlookedtotallytransformed.Despiteourhardwork,therewasstillthematterofthecomingcouncilvote.Wecreatedaplan:totakephotosofthegardenandspreadthenewsaboutthevote.Usingthephotos,wewouldthencollectsignatures(簽名)toshowcontinuedlocalinterestandthenpresentthemtothecouncil.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ultimately,wewerepleasedtoseeoureffortspaidoff.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________社區(qū)花園保護故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點（兩段）?第一段續(xù)寫要點：?前往委員會：詳細描繪前往委員會時的情景，如天氣狀況、同行人員的神態(tài)和交談內(nèi)容，體現(xiàn)大家緊張又滿懷期待的心情。描述進入委員會會議室時的環(huán)境，燈光的亮度、桌椅的擺放，以及會議室里的氛圍。?展示過程：著重刻畫向委員會成員展示簽名和照片的動作，雙手遞上的姿態(tài)、成員們接過時的表情。描述成員們查看照片時的細節(jié)，如仔細端詳照片的神情、相互交流的低語。對于提問環(huán)節(jié)，具體闡述成員們提出的問題，如花園維護的具體計劃、資金來源等，以及主角等人的回答，展現(xiàn)大家對花園的深入思考和規(guī)劃。?第二段續(xù)寫要點：?努力成功：生動描寫得知委員會決定保留花園時，主角和同伴們的反應，歡呼、擁抱、激動流淚等動作和表情。闡述委員會決定撥款進一步改善花園的具體措施，如修建新的小徑、增設休息長椅等。?社區(qū)影響：詳細描述消息在社區(qū)傳播的方式，如社區(qū)公告欄張貼、居民間口口相傳?？坍嫺嗑用褡栽竻⑴c維護花園的場景，大家分工合作、共同勞動的畫面。突出花園在社區(qū)中的新變化，成為居民休閑娛樂、增進感情的場所，展現(xiàn)社區(qū)凝聚力的提升。?情感線?第一段情感線：前往委員會時，主角和同伴們內(nèi)心充滿緊張，擔心努力得不到認可。進入會議室后，緊張感加劇，同時又懷揣著一絲期待。在展示簽名和照片過程中，隨著委員會成員的反應，情緒逐漸波動，看到成員們驚訝和認可的表情時，燃起希望，面對問題時又保持冷靜和堅定。?第二段情感線：得知花園得以保留時，主角和同伴們的情感瞬間爆發(fā)，從緊張擔憂轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)闃O度喜悅和自豪。看到社區(qū)居民積極參與維護花園，感受到社區(qū)的溫暖和團結(jié)，內(nèi)心充滿成就感，對花園的未來和社區(qū)的發(fā)展充滿希望，對自己在保護花園過程中所扮演的角色感到無比驕傲。?故事線?主角在周日起床后，從父親口中得知委員會計劃拆除社區(qū)花園，父親提及花園承載著他的童年回憶。?父親拿出一本舊相冊，里面有他和祖父在社區(qū)花園的照片，主角和父親決定前往花園查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)花園破敗不堪，垃圾遍地。?主角和父親決定清理花園，主角打電話召集學校朋友幫忙，大家一起清理垃圾、種植新植物，使花園煥然一新。?為阻止花園被拆除，主角等人制定計劃，拍攝花園照片，收集簽名，準備向委員會展示，以表明社區(qū)對花園的關(guān)注和保護意愿。?主角和同伴們帶著簽名來到委員會，向成員們展示照片并回答問題，努力爭取保留花園。?委員會決定保留花園并撥款改善，消息在社區(qū)傳播，更多居民自愿參與維護，花園成為社區(qū)居民交流和增進感情的重要場所。?主旨升華句?Thisheart-warmingstoryofthecommunitygardenvividlydemonstratesthatwithdeterminationandcollectiveaction,wecanpreservenotonlyaphysicalspacebutalsothepreciousmemoriesandcommunityspirititembodies.（這個關(guān)于社區(qū)花園的溫馨故事生動地表明，憑借決心和集體行動，我們不僅能夠保護一個物理空間，還能守護它所承載的珍貴記憶和社區(qū)精神。）?Throughtheirunwaveringeffortstosavethecommunitygarden,thecharactersinthisstoryshowthatthepowerofloveforone'scommunityandthecouragetofightforwhatisrightcanovercomeanyobstacle.（通過故事中人物堅定不移地拯救社區(qū)花園的努力，展示了對社區(qū)的熱愛以及為正義而戰(zhàn)的勇氣能夠克服任何障礙的力量。）?Thesuccessfulpreservationofthecommunitygardenservesasapowerfulreminderthateverysmallstepwetaketowardsprotectingourenvironmentandheritagecanleadtosignificantpositivechangesinourlivesandcommunities.（社區(qū)花園的成功保留有力地提醒我們，我們?yōu)楸Ｗo環(huán)境和遺產(chǎn)所邁出的每一小步都能給我們的生活和社區(qū)帶來重大的積極變化。）?Thisnarrativeaboutthecommunitygardenhighlightstheimportanceofintergenerationalconnectionsandhowtheycaninspireustotakeactiontosafeguardtheplacesthatholdmeaningforourfamiliesandcommunities.（這個關(guān)于社區(qū)花園的故事突出了代際聯(lián)系的重要性，以及它們?nèi)绾渭钗覀儾扇⌒袆樱Ｗo對我們的家庭和社區(qū)具有重要意義的地方。）?Thetransformationofthecommunitygardenfromaneglectedspacetoathrivingcenterofcommunitylifeshowsthatwhenacommunitycomestogetherwithasharedvision,theycancreateabrighterandmoreharmoniousfutureforall.（社區(qū)花園從一個被忽視的空間轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橐粋€繁榮的社區(qū)生活中心，表明當一個社區(qū)懷著共同的愿景團結(jié)起來時，他們能夠為所有人創(chuàng)造一個更光明、更和諧的未來。）?寫作示范一?第一段續(xù)寫?Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,butanervousshiverrandownmyspineasweapproachedthecouncilbuilding.MyfriendsandIexchangednervousglances,ourhandstightlyclutchingthestackofsignaturesandthecarefullyselectedphotos.Asweenteredthecouncilchamber,theairwasthickwithanticipation.Westeppedforward,ourheartspounding,andpresentedthematerialstothecouncilmembers.Theireyesscannedthephotos,andsomeofthemletoutsoftgaspsofsurpriseattheremarkabletransformationofthegarden.Onememberraisedaneyebrowandasked,"Howdoyouplantoensurethelong-termmaintenanceofthegarden?"Wequicklylaunchedintoourwell-thought-outplans,emphasizingourcommitmenttothecommunityandthegarden.?第二段續(xù)寫?Ultimately,wewerepleasedtoseeoureffortspaidoff.Thecouncilannouncedthattheyhaddecidedtosparethecommunitygardenfromdemolitionandwouldallocateagenerousamountoffundsforitsfurtherdevelopment.Thenewsspreadlikewildfireintheneighborhood.Peoplewereoverjoyed,andmanymorevolunteeredtojointhegarden-maintenanceteam.Theonce-desolategardennowbustledwithactivity.Neighborsofallagesgathered,sharinglaughterandgardeningknowledge.Webuiltnewflowerbeds,installedbeautifulbenches,andplantedmoretrees.Lookingback,Ifeltadeepsenseofpride.Wehadnotonlysavedthegardenbutalsostrengthenedthebondswithinourcommunity,creatingaplacethatwouldbecherishedforgenerationstocome.?寫作示范二?第一段續(xù)寫?Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.Darkcloudsloomedinthesky,mirroringournervousmoodaswemadeourwaytothecouncil.Insidethechamber,thefluorescentlightsflickered,addingtothetenseatmosphere.Wewalkeduptothecouncilmembers,ourhandsshakingslightlyaswehandedoverthephotosandsignatures.Themembersleanedforward,theirexpressionsamixofcuriosityandsurprise.Onecouncilorfrownedandquestioned,"Whatiftherearedisputesamongthevolunteersregardingthegarden'smanagement?"Wecalmlyexplainedourproposedsystemofcommunicationandcooperation.Theirnodsofunderstandinggaveusaglimmerofhope.?第二段續(xù)寫?Ultimately,wewerepleasedtoseeoureffortspaidoff.Thecouncil'sdecisiontosavethegardenandinvestinitsimprovementwasmetwithcheersfromthecommunity.Wordspreadrapidlythroughsocialmediaandlocalnewsletters.Moreandmoreresidentsjoinedthecause,andweekendswerefilledwiththesoundofgardeningtoolsandfriendlyconversations.Thegardenunderwentacompletemakeover,withcolorfulflower-filledpathsandacommunity-builtgreenhouse.Itbecameasymbolofunityandresilience.Reflectingonourjourney,Irealizedthatouractionshadnotonlysavedaphysicalspacebutalsokindledaspiritofcommunitypridethatwouldcontinuetogrowandthrive.?參考答案Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.Inthemeetingroom,wemetseveralcouncilmemberswhocaredaboutthecommunitygarden.Wepresentedourcaseforthegarden,alongwiththesignatures,andshowedthephotosofthegardenbeforeandafterourclean-up,highlightingthepositivechangeswe’dmade.The