讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+爆胎困境遇援手雨中前行暖人心+講義 高二上學(xué)期9月月考英語(yǔ)試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Joanexcitedlypackedherbagsforherupcomingtripwithherfamily.TheyweregoingtodrivefromNewYorktoVirginiatovisitrelatives.Shecouldnotwait.Shehadmissedplayingwithhercousinsandtalkingtoherauntanduncle.Afterallofthesuitcaseshadbeenloadedintothecar,Joan’sdadlookedtoJoanandhermother.“Iseveryonereadyforourroadtrip?”Theybothgrinned(露齒而笑)andnodded.Itwasgoingtobequitealongjourney,andwithinacoupleofhoursJoanhadalreadybeguntofeeltired.Shebegantonodoffwhenshenoticedthatthecarbegantoveer(突然變向)tothesideoftheroad.Joan’sfathergotoutandwalkedaroundthecar.Hescratchedhishead,lookingconfused.Then,hegaveagreatsigh.Hepokedhisheadthroughthepassengersidewindow.“Wehaveaflattire,”hesaidtoJoan’smom.“Usethesparetireinthetrunk.ThenwecanreplaceitwhenwereachVirginia,”shesuggested.Joan’sfatherlookeddownathisfeetsheepishly(羞怯地).“I...haven’thadthesparetirereplacedsincethelasttimewehadaflat.”Hermotherseemedfrustrated(沮喪),buttriedtoremainpositive.“Maybewecancallaservice,”shesuggested.Butaquickglanceattheircellphonestoldthemthattherewasnoreceptioninthearea.Joanlookedathermotherinthefrontseat,andherfatherstillstaringblankly(茫然地)attheflattireoutside.Bothofthemlookedconcerned.Joanbegantogetworried.Noothercarshadpassedbyinawhileanditseemedliketheywerefarawayfromatowncenter.Joanlookedoutthewindow,wonderingiftheywouldhavetosleepinthecaroriftherewasanywaytheycouldpossiblyfindsomeonetohelpthem.WouldtheyevermaketheirwaytoVirginia?Herrelativeswouldsurelybeworriedaboutthem.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Joansawcloudsintheskyanditbegantorain._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意?Joan滿心期待地和家人開(kāi)啟從紐約到弗吉尼亞探親的公路之旅。途中，Joan感到疲憊犯困時(shí)，車子突然偏向路邊。父親下車查看后發(fā)現(xiàn)車胎爆了，可自從上次爆胎后，他一直沒(méi)更換備用輪胎。母親提議打電話叫救援服務(wù)，但他們所處區(qū)域手機(jī)沒(méi)有信號(hào)。Joan開(kāi)始擔(dān)心，周圍許久沒(méi)有車輛經(jīng)過(guò)，他們似乎遠(yuǎn)離城鎮(zhèn)中心，不知道是否要在車?yán)镞^(guò)夜，也不確定能否找到人幫忙，更擔(dān)心無(wú)法按時(shí)到達(dá)弗吉尼亞，讓親戚們擔(dān)憂。?故事山分析?開(kāi)頭：Joan一家滿懷期待踏上公路旅行，Joan憧憬與親戚相聚。?發(fā)展：車行駛途中車胎爆了，且沒(méi)有可用的備用輪胎，手機(jī)還沒(méi)信號(hào)，一家人陷入困境。?高潮（續(xù)寫(xiě)部分）：一輛車的出現(xiàn)帶來(lái)希望，后續(xù)又遭遇下雨，如何應(yīng)對(duì)成為關(guān)鍵。?結(jié)尾（推測(cè)）：一家人成功解決問(wèn)題，繼續(xù)踏上旅程，到達(dá)弗吉尼亞與親戚團(tuán)聚，經(jīng)歷此次事件收獲成長(zhǎng)。?伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)?Joan的期待：原文中Joan迫不及待與親戚相聚，在續(xù)寫(xiě)中可回應(yīng)為Joan期待能盡快解決車胎問(wèn)題，不耽誤與親戚見(jiàn)面，如“Joan’sheartachedatthethoughtofdisappointinghercousins.Sheprayedthattheapproachingcarcouldofferasolution.”?父親未更換備用輪胎：這一伏筆在續(xù)寫(xiě)中可回應(yīng)為若路過(guò)車輛無(wú)法直接幫忙換胎，可能會(huì)提及去尋找新的備用輪胎，如“Thedriveroftheapproachingcaralsodidn'thaveasuitablespare,butheknewanearbygaragewheretheycouldgetone.”?手機(jī)無(wú)信號(hào)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中可回應(yīng)為在向路過(guò)車輛求助時(shí)，強(qiáng)調(diào)手機(jī)信號(hào)問(wèn)題導(dǎo)致無(wú)法提前聯(lián)系救援，如“Heexplainedthattheyhadbeentryingtocallforhelp,butthelackofreceptionmadeitimpossible.”?許久無(wú)車經(jīng)過(guò)：路過(guò)車輛的出現(xiàn)打破這一困境，在續(xù)寫(xiě)中可描述為這是他們?cè)S久等來(lái)的唯一希望，如“Joan’seyeslitupwithhopeasthecar,thefirstoneinalongwhile,cameintoview.”?擔(dān)心在車?yán)镞^(guò)夜：續(xù)寫(xiě)中下雨的情節(jié)可與之呼應(yīng)，增加在車?yán)镞^(guò)夜的不適，突出盡快解決問(wèn)題的緊迫性，如“Astherainpoured,Joanshivered,imaginingspendingthenightinthecold,wetcar.”?續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）?第一段：重點(diǎn)描述駛來(lái)車輛的情況，如車上人員、態(tài)度，雙方交流內(nèi)容，是否能直接幫忙解決車胎問(wèn)題，Joan一家的反應(yīng)等。?第二段：圍繞下雨展開(kāi)，描寫(xiě)下雨對(duì)他們處境的影響，如是否會(huì)影響車輛維修，他們?nèi)绾螒?yīng)對(duì)，最終問(wèn)題是否解決，一家人心情變化等。?情感線（150字）?Joan從最初的期待旅行，到車胎爆胎后的擔(dān)憂，看到有車駛來(lái)燃起希望，交流中可能因?qū)Ψ侥芊駧兔Χ?，下雨時(shí)又陷入新的焦慮，隨著問(wèn)題逐步解決，心情逐漸平復(fù)，最后重拾對(duì)旅程的期待。她的父母也經(jīng)歷了從發(fā)現(xiàn)車胎問(wèn)題的沮喪，到向路人求助的急切，面對(duì)困難時(shí)的焦慮，再到問(wèn)題解決后的釋然等一系列情感變化。?故事線Joan一家車胎爆胎后的困境。?駛來(lái)車輛的出現(xiàn)及車上人員情況。?雙方交流及關(guān)于解決車胎問(wèn)題的嘗試。?下雨對(duì)當(dāng)前狀況的影響。?Joan一家如何應(yīng)對(duì)下雨及車胎問(wèn)題。?最終一家人是否成功解決問(wèn)題并繼續(xù)旅程。?主旨升華句ThisunexpectedencountertaughtJoanandherfamilythevalueofhopeandkindnessindifficulttimes.?Thejourney,thoughinterruptedbytheflattire,becameamemorableexperiencethatstrengthenedtheirfamilybond.?Throughthischallenge,Joanlearnedthateveninthefaceofadversity,thereisalwaysaglimmerofhopewaitingtobediscovered.?Theirexperienceontheroadshowedthatwithapositiveattitudeandthewillingnesstoseekhelp,anyobstaclecanbeovercome.?Theincidentservedasareminderthatlife'sunexpectedtwistscanbringbothchallengesandopportunitiesforgrowth.?兩篇寫(xiě)作示范?寫(xiě)作示范一?WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.Herheartleapedwithhope.Thecarpulledupbesidethem,andamiddle-agedmansteppedout.Joan’sfatherquicklyexplainedtheirsituation.Themannoddedsympatheticallyandsaidhehadasparetireinhistrunkthatmightfittheircar.Withhishelp,theystartedchangingthetire.Joanwatched,feelingasenseofrelief.However,astheywerealmostdone,Joansawcloudsintheskyanditbegantorain.Theraindropsquicklyturnedintoadownpour.ThemanandJoan’sfatherstruggledtofinishtighteningtheboltsintherain.Joanandhermotherhuddledinthecar,worried.Butsoon,thejobwasdone.Themanrefusedanypayment,sayinghewasjustgladtohelp.Withawave,theycontinuedtheirjourney,gratefulforthekindnesstheyhadreceived.?寫(xiě)作示范二?WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.Sheimmediatelygotoutofthecar,wavingherhandsfrantically.Thecarstopped,andayoungcoupleemerged.Afterhearingtheirstory,thecoupleofferedtodrivetothenearesttownandcallforatowtruck.Joan’sparentswerehesitantatfirst,worriedaboutbeingleftalone.Butseeingnootheroption,theyagreed.Asthecoupledroveaway,Joansawcloudsintheskyanditbegantorain.Therainmadethesituationevenmoremiserable.Joan’sfamilyhuddledinthecar,coldandwet.Theywaitedanxiously,prayingforthecoupletoreturnsoon.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,theysawthecouple’scarcomingbackwithatowtruck.Theproblemwasfinallysolved,andtheywereontheirwaytoVirginia,feelinggratefulfortheunexpectedkindnessofstrangers.?【答案】WhenJoanlookedoutthewindow,shesawacarapproaching.Shewavedtothedriverandshoutedloudly.Fortunately,thecarstopped,andanoldladygotoutofthecar.Shesaid,“What’sgoingon,dear?”Joanexplainedthewholeaccidentindetail.Theladysaid,“Iwillgohomeandaskmyhusbandtohelpyou.Heisgoodatfixingcars.”Joanlookedattheladyindisbelief,not